How to evaluate the novel The Sword Comes?

"The Sword Comes" written by the war drama warlord is very common to read.

1, writing a sword feels a bit anticlimactic, and the beginning is amazing. The foreshadowing of all kinds of big names and the image portrayal of everyone are impressive. In the mid-term, the book Jane Lake becomes meaningful. Speaking of which, the story has been told for a long time, and I just barely read it.

2, to the Great Wall War, the city is broken, and the battlefield in the world is awesome. The imaginary big scene is not at all, it is always so bad. The war in the world is written like a running account, one chapter is opened by a new character, and it is thrown away when it is used up. Inexplicable, inexplicable, readers will feel very confused, and no one will forget.

3. The biggest failure is the feeling with Ann. I fell in love inexplicably and didn't describe too much space. When this person is more suitable, it is best to show milk. He and Chen Ping-an have deeper feelings. They feel that they are trying to promote the plot and increase the emotional drama.

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Personal data:

1, Chen Pingan: master of stories, now a disciple of Wen Sheng. Born in Julie Cave, one of 36 small caves. Both parents are surnamed Chen. When Chen Ping An was 5 years old, someone let his father know the secret of the town and broke the porcelain, the core memorial of Chen Ping An's life. Both parents died of self-biting.

2. Qi Jingchun: Before the town, he was the owner of Cliff Academy. Send Chen Ping-a square seal of "Chen Shiyi", "meditation", "mountain seal" and "watermark".

3. Ruan Xiu: Ruan Qiong's daughter, the reincarnation of Vulcan, one of the five great gods in ancient heaven. You can see something about others, which shows their fate and cause and effect.