How to write a storm composition

Which family won't have an "uproar"? Which "storm" subsided without any twists and turns? However, in my mind, twists and turns are like a brand, which is deeply imprinted in my mind.

Mom, the "hostess" of this story, is a strong and hardworking peasant woman. The hero of this story, Dad, is an ordinary farmer with feudal consciousness and "market" in his mind. There are two "little guys" at home-my brother and I.

This is where the story begins. At that dinner, the family ate happily around the table, and sometimes they gave a hearty laugh-everyone was putting on a "dragon gate array" and the topic turned to "who's in charge". Dad said, "Now, men are the masters of the country. For example, the chairman and members of the Political Bureau are all men. " "Since men and women are equal, so are we women. How can you men be the masters of the country? " Mom said. "Mom is right, now it is equality between men and women!" I am arguing with my brother who has studied legal knowledge. "How do you know this! The head of my family has not changed for many years, hum! You are so young now, how dare you' make a mistake'! " Dad puts on airs to be a father. Just like that, his eyes were wide open, his hands rested on his hips and his beard was upturned. It's like an instructor reprimanding his little soldier! Not to be outdone, mother did not listen to him and simply went to another room. In this way, a storm rises!

The next day, a "miracle" appeared! How should parents make up? I talked to my brother before! Oh, it turned out that after Dad got angry, he sat alone in the room bored and casually opened a composition on the table, which was written by his brother. When he saw his brother criticizing him in an article, he blushed ... so he took the initiative to apologize to his mother and a storm subsided.

When you hear this story, maybe you will think it is not surprising. However, I don't know how many such things have happened in our great country! Doesn't this mean that the working people in our country are gradually getting rid of the shackles of feudal consciousness and going their own way? May our new social fashion continue to develop!

Writing about housework is a common topic, because home is a warm harbor, and everyone grew up at home, so this topic is no stranger to students. But it is difficult to write new ideas on such a familiar topic, because there are too many things to write, and it is difficult to jump out of the original circle. I have seen many exercises about family life, which can be summarized into two aspects: one is how to write how warm your home is, how to warm yourself and how to love your home; Second, there is a contradiction at home. How can I help solve this storm? Finally, they made up, and the family was full of laughter. However, our little author did not extend these two methods, but opened his mind and tried to find the material from a new angle with new ideas, so that the less novel material wrote new ideas and gave readers unexpected feelings.

At the beginning of the article, I asked the question directly, "Which family won't have an uproar? Which storm subsided without twists and turns? " The two rhetorical questions lead to the topic of family unrest, which makes readers understand that the little author is also writing about family unrest. This is a very common material, but the little author immediately turns to "However, in my heart, the twists and turns are deeply imprinted in my mind." Why is the usual turmoil unusual? Why is this storm deeply imprinted in my mind? This series of questions arouses readers' doubts and attracts readers to look down, which is the beauty at the beginning of this article. Then, the author briefly introduced his family and their respective characteristics, which are the kindling of family turmoil: mother is a strong and hardworking peasant woman; Dad is an ordinary farmer with feudal consciousness and market in his mind; Two little ones, my brother and I, readers not only know the composition of this family, but also sow the seeds of the storm because of the strength of my mother and my father's feudal consciousness. The careful and appropriate arrangement of materials is another feature of this exercise. For materials that are closely related to the center, you must write in detail. For materials that are not closely related to the center, but do not explain or understand to the readers, you must write briefly, so that the article is detailed and ups and downs.

Then, practice writing a story about the storm, and arrange it according to the cause, process and result. Here, the young author first wrote about the harmonious atmosphere at home in order to form a strong contrast with the storm. "Happy to eat around the table, and sometimes with hearty laughter", it can be seen that the family relationship is harmonious. Unexpectedly, the topic suddenly turned to the topic of "who is in charge", which was full of twists and turns. Because my father has feudal ideas and thinks that men are the masters of the country, this also leads to the evidence that president and members of the Political Bureau are all men and his mother is a strong person. How can she show weakness and point out the present? Why do men have to be masters of their own affairs? The younger brother stood on the mother's side and said that "men and women are equal now" from a legal point of view. Unexpectedly, these statements angered my father because, especially my brother, he dared to criticize my father. In his view, he just "committed the crime of rebellion" and he was very angry. Look, the little author's wonderful role description "eyes wide open, hands akimbo, beard upturned, looks like an instructor." How lifelike, how vivid, why is dad like this? The above has been paved-because dad's feudal thoughts are at work. Not to be outdone, mother went straight into another room. In this way, a storm set off. At this time, the little author changed the writing style of most students and did not put himself in the perspective of reconciling people. Instead, he wrote directly, "The next day, a miracle appeared and my parents made up. "Why is a miracle? Because every time, "I" and my brother hug each other and make up, but why should we change the normal state this time? This is the strange reason and the strange structure of this article. Then, the little author unveiled the mystery: "It turns out that after Dad was angry, he was bored and turned to the composition on the desk. This is written by my brother. Seeing his brother criticizing him in his composition, he blushed, so he took the initiative to ask his mother to apologize, and a storm subsided. "Write something unexpected. Especially at the end, the little author sees the big picture from a small place, from family to society to the country. The article wrote: "I don't know how many such things have happened in our great country! Doesn't this mean that the working people in our country are gradually getting rid of the shackles of feudal consciousness and going their own way? May our new social fashion continue to carry forward. " In other words, it points out the main idea and gives the novel "Small Family Storm" a new connotation. This article starts with the little things in life, but it designs twists and turns everywhere, which makes the article constantly ups and downs, and makes the reader's feelings ups and downs with the progress and ups and downs of the article. This is a clever arrangement of this article. After reading this exercise, we have the following enlightenment:

1. According to the needs of the center, skillfully arrange the structure of the article, try to design twists and turns and contradictions to make the article ups and downs. When a small author writes that it causes twists and turns, it is unexpected and makes the article attractive to read.

Try to change the angle and let the old materials write new meanings. The materials selected by the author of this paper are quite common. However, it has led to the new fashion of society and the working people are getting rid of the shackles of feudal consciousness. This new theme makes the material glow with new ideas.

My home is like a lake. If you throw a small stone into it, it will cause microwaves.

"Did you listen to me ..." Look-mother's lion roar is ringing in the room again. This is the eleventh reunion of the battle between mom and dad. Hey-my poor ears! The family storm has begun again!

"It seems that I really want to cut off the computer network! Otherwise, you ... "Mom rested on her hips and bombarded Dad at the computer desk. And the other party? Dad was indifferent and continued typing on the keyboard as if he didn't hear a word. Mom froze for a while, turned to go, but seemed to remember something and turned to Dad.

Hard cannot be soft. If the bomb can't be dropped, attack on foot.

My mother began to scold my father with a runny nose and tears, saying that he was an adult and had control. Why is he still like a child? He can't sit in front of the computer all day, and he has no time to spend with her and her children. Mom! You're talking to my heart! I hid in my room and observed the situation through the door. Now dad stopped, stood up, turned off the computer, and strode out! "Wait ... want to go away? ! No way! This must be made clear today. " Mother rushed up and the eagle guarded the door like a chicken. The atmosphere is getting more and more dignified and the smell of gunpowder is getting stronger and stronger. Both of them are deadlocked, and this scene is almost a life-and-death struggle. Not good, not good! Looks like it's time for me to play!

I rushed out of the room and looked straight at my father. "Dad, you have always been a good example for my daughter. However, today you are really wrong. " Dad gave up the idea of going out, sat in the chair, looked at my mother and me, and turned away. A good chance to turn things around! "Dad, you won't be an adult addicted to the Internet, will you? You should spend more time with mom and me. " I said softly. The audience was silent. After a century, my father finally made up his mind and nodded. "I promise it won't happen again."

"hmm!" I smiled happily and looked at my mother. She smiled with relief.

The sunshine outside the window seems brighter, the sky is bluer and the air is fresher.

Yes, although there will be some small waves, it won't be long before it will be calm again. Mom and dad and I will always hold hands like this.

"A wave is not flat, and a wave starts again." I can guess the meaning of this sentence. -inscription

Just a week ago, my grandparents came to my house for dinner. That day, I witnessed an unprecedented family storm.

"search and find"

As the Spring Festival is approaching, inviting guests to dinner during the Spring Festival has become a big problem and the central topic of family dinners.

At the end of March, Uncle menstruation, who is far away from Australia, will go to Shanghai to visit relatives. Grandma has been preparing for this for half a year. Yes, now she has started to arrange parties for relatives, aunts and uncles.

"I think this party will have at least 12 tables, and it will be very big. In addition to high-end hotels, where else? " Grandma's subtext is to go to a fancy hotel and have a ostentatious party.

"What are you going to do in a high-end hotel? A restaurant that eats home-cooked dishes will do! " Grandpa's words obviously poured cold water on grandma who loves to show off.

"Actually, you can go a little higher, and the dishes are mainly home-cooked dishes." Mom seems to have compromised to avoid conflict. But I know she wants to have a cheap and beautiful party without losing face, because she did it this time.

"Watching the fire from the other bank"

The three of them wrangled with each other, and I quarreled for nearly half an hour, from the grade of the hotel to the price, from the price to the location, and finally to the dishes. Dad and I had to resign. I can't help thinking of The Life of Three Women. It seems that "the waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves before", and two women and one man can make a play.

"adjournment discussion"

After a heated debate for half an hour, they chose "adjournment for discussion". At this time, my father and I returned to the dinner table, and the family was quiet for a while. However, grandma unconsciously brought us into the original topic. The three men started a tense "debate" again.

This is really a wave of family storms!

This family storm is unprecedented, and the hope is unparalleled. Because everyone has good intentions, why can't we talk calmly? -P.S.

"One person and two."

This is an inspiring language > & ltKO. Hearing this news, my heart trembled inexplicably, as if it were for me. I agree with this sentence.

There are two kinds, one is positive and the other is negative.

Like me, my soul seems to be divided into two souls and gives me two contradictory views. They fought until victory. For no reason, they have been quiet, quiet, contradictory, depressed and confused. ...

Suddenly, I think today is the last day of the holiday.

I really don't want to go to school to see the teacher nervous, homework so tight and then under great pressure. I feel like I can't afford a good one. If he doesn't go to school, forget all the troubles at home, use his brain, think about these problems and face those strange eyes, I can't stand the prejudice of others and hate those students who pretend to be silent with no expression. Can it be a teacher's favorite victory? Well, I'm not dismissive. They now seem to be able to compete for a place in the future society? This is a question worth thinking about. In short, school is easy! "

"No, I'm fine. I am an ambitious person. I must not be influenced by external factors, whether it is people, things or things ... We will have the rest of the exams soon. This is the semester to prove my textbook knowledge, and it also determines my dream in the distance. I want to narrow the distance, we must start now! At school, the learning atmosphere is better. Everyone * * * study together, * * * progress together, the direction of dreams! Remember your oath not to interfere in other people's affairs. Maybe it has also learned a way not to care about other people's opinions. Dante said, go your own way and let others talk! This conversation has nothing to do with me. Important efforts, efforts, efforts!

Two souls are constantly arguing. Although the plot broke the peace, it did not lead to war. Neck and neck, I didn't know to listen, and then I was silent. ...

These two paragraphs after the prize! "

"No, make a decision now, don't be indecisive!" They began to quarrel, too, and I didn't know what to do.

I may complain when I finally walk into the campus in a daze, but fortunately, my goal is the same!

Opening the door of the class mailbox, Hadron's face suddenly darkened.

There was a letter lying inside, and a big hole was torn off in the corner of the letter, revealing white writing paper.

Hadron can't remember how many times this stamp was stolen. Ten times? Fifteen times? Anyway, every time Hadron receives a letter, a good letter always smiles at him with a crooked mouth.

Who changed, also won't be indifferent, hadron frown, seriously study countermeasures.

Catch a thief? Hadron shook his head gently as he flashed an idea. They all belong to the same school ... Take a step back. Hadron bought a small lock and jingled the lock on the mailbox while everyone was taking a lunch break. Is this ok? Hadron mused happily.

Hadron's face soon darkened again.

The "cruel" facts prove that Hadron's response to these enthusiastic stamp collectors is too polite. I don't know which stamp collector Kong Yiji pried open the lock, which may be a warning to Hadron. This time, the whole letter was gone.

"good! I told you to pry! " Hadron thought hard and immediately responded: a big copper lock appeared on the small mailbox. "You can't cure you if you don't believe me!" Hadron fiddled with the heavy lock and felt a little safer.

Unfortunately, he was wrong again. When he saw the broken mailbox, he realized it immediately.

When encountering this annoying thing, Hadron's reaction has begun to become helpless.

Just say that the enemy will block and have the means to cover. There was nothing. It doesn't seem to solve the problem that things from life will echo in my heart.

Hadron's letter was no longer sent to school, but I went to the post office to get it myself.

Of course, Hadron has to do more than that. A letter was sent to the headmaster, detailing his embarrassment.

In Hadron's view, "luck" is not bad. Soon there was an echo from the school, and the mailbox in the message room was replaced by a strong small iron box, and the management of letters was improved a lot. To everyone's delight, stamps have never been lost.

The stamp storm has now subsided, and its reverberation is still in Hadron's heart.

The trend of new skirts

"Look, how beautiful this skirt is!" Yes, look, there is gold lace on it! "How beautiful!" I was filled with joy after listening to the envious admiration of my classmates.

After school, I went home with some friends. On the way, several female students saw my new skirt and were envious. Naturally, I am very happy. I ran forward happily. Like a dancing China. Suddenly, a basin of water fell from the upstairs of the family building, and then two eggs fell and hit me right on the head. Water runs down my hair to my new skirt, and besides, it smells terrible. In this way, my new skirt became dirty and smelly in the blink of an eye, and I panicked. I was very angry and said, "Who threw water under it without looking at it!" " "There was a sharp laugh from upstairs, and then a fat woman lowered her head and shouted," What's the matter? What do you care if I splash water? "I was so angry that I thought," How can such a person not accompany others, but pour water on others? On the contrary, he cursed. I said, "Then you shouldn't throw water from upstairs! Where's my skirt? " "What a good service!" She roared. Who let you die? Get out! "I was so angry that I had nothing to say. It was really a scholar who met a soldier-I'm not sure. I left helplessly, my heart ached When I got home, my mother looked at me as a "soaked chicken" and said simply, "I knew this would happen." Don't wear new clothes in the future! "My heart is sour, angry and sad. Angry for that woman's irrationality, sad for my beautiful skirt, alas-

I always remember this incident, because it taught me to be a polite boy and what is tolerance and morality.

A little storm I experienced.

I made a friend when I was in the sixth grade. I call her "skinny" because she is thin. ?

That "thin man" is so weak that he can run 50 meters out of breath. But she was generous and left everything to me. ?

One day after school, I invited her to my home and showed her one of my most cherished stamps. "how about it? Good-looking? " I showed her with tweezers. "Oh, how beautiful!" She stretched out her bamboo-like hands and held them in her palm. "Be careful! Don't get dirty, you know, only 50 pieces have been sent nationwide! " I shook my head and said proudly. "If only I had one." She said to herself.

"Bring it, don't put it down!" I grabbed the stamp and cleverly put it in the drawer. In the evening, when I was looking for a book, I suddenly found that the stamps were missing. How did this happen? I obviously put it in the drawer today. Did "skinny" do it? Damn it! The next day, I found her and said sharply, "Do you think you have my stamps?" . If you want it, just say it! Why are you stealing chickens and dogs? I think you are honest. This time, I know you are a hypocrite! Liar! Thief! "My words aimed at her like a machine gun.

She was at a loss by my words and just shouted to me again and again, "No! No ... "But I wouldn't let her go and insisted. This made her poor oral expression skills so angry that her lips trembled and she could not speak. Her wrinkled face turned red with excitement, and at last she began to cry. I thought she didn't want to return it, so she turned and ran away, never paying attention to her again.

One day in the summer vacation, I was helping my mother with housework. She suddenly came to me and said, "If I really took that stamp, please give it to me. I know you will. " . Let's be friends again! Looking at her sincere eyes, I smiled and said, "You should have admitted it earlier, but I don't care." She lowered her head and turned red and white. After listening to me, she wanted to say more, but my mother was calling me, so I said, "Go ahead, I have something to do." She nodded, turned and walked slowly.

I came to my mother and asked, "What is this?" Mother reached out and handed me a stamp and said, "Isn't this the stamp you found the other day?" It's under the table. "What? My eyes widened in surprise. Suddenly, I understood everything. ?

I grabbed the stamp that caused the storm with my hand and ran to her home with reverence and shame.

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Genre narration

The theme can be written that menstruation is pregnant, and the whole family is very happy and kind to her. When her aunt gave birth to a baby and found it was a girl, the whole family was divided into two factions. Menstruation suddenly turned cold and wanted to abort the baby girl. Another school, including uncles, thinks that boys and girls are the same and are more considerate to their aunts. The two factions argued fiercely and even struck a table. Finally, everyone unified their understanding and gave birth to boys and girls.

The action description of the idea is interspersed in the full text, and the key points can be shown in the debate.

One Sunday afternoon, my father and I went swimming in the swimming pool. When I came to the swimming pool, I couldn't wait to jump into the water and swim freely.

The swimming pool is really big, with a water depth of about 2 meters. I said to my father, "Dad, I want to go swimming in the deepest place. When I put my hand out of the water, it means that my breathing is almost unbearable. Will you pull me up? " Dad said, "Well, be careful." At first, my father was very cooperative, but at last, when I reached out, no one paid any attention to me. At that time, I couldn't hold back, and the water kept drilling into my nose and mouth. At this time, I thought: the common sense teacher said that water has good toughness. So I tried to sink, but because the swimming pool was too deep, I fell into a trap and got deeper and deeper. ?

I have a feeling of fear in my heart. Will I ... when I think about it, I will struggle desperately in the water and try to get myself out of the water.

Just then, I don't know who gently helped me from the water to the shore. I opened my eyes and saw that it was dad! Suddenly, my nose was sour and tears flowed down like a broken pearl. I shouted, "Dad, why are you ignoring me?" ! Just now, I almost ... almost ... "Dad said quickly," I'm sorry, I'm sorry. I forgot that you were in the water just now, so I chatted with my old classmates, so ... "

After this storm, I deeply realized how fragile life is, and I will cherish my life more in the future.

When I was in the second grade, my father assigned me a composition-looking up information and writing a composition. I thought my parents' homework could be fooled, so I ran to my room and closed the door. I opened an essay and exam on my desk, and I came across an article entitled "The Elephant's Guest Star" with an attractive title, so I opened that page and read it carefully. Ha ha! You can muddle through this time! Dad doesn't know anyway. I picked up a pencil and scribbled it in my notebook. I finished writing a table. Isn't it early? I played computer in the house again. ...

I took my composition to my father and waited for his judgment. My father was very happy when he saw it. That night he bought me toys and invited me to eat McDonald's. Dad also praised my progress! My heart is full of joy.

But happiness won't last long. One day, my father was reading a composition and a test paper. "Li! Come here! " Dad called, and I thought it was a good thing, so I ran over happily. Dad said, "What's the matter? Is someone else writing exactly like you? " I was shocked to see my father's posture, so I confessed. My father said to me earnestly, "son, don't think that the homework assigned by my parents is not homework." You have to support your parents when you grow up! " Don't cut corners so early. I have to take the college entrance examination when I grow up. At that time, ten people were sitting in a classroom for an exam. How did you copy it? Therefore, if you don't do well in any school in the future, you can only pick up junk. At that time, not only could we not feed ourselves, we could not find food ourselves, and we needed our parents to feed us. Go write another one. "

I have to go back to my room to write a composition. It took me more than an hour to finish a long composition. I'm so happy. I will never cut corners again. I will study harder. I will try my best to get good grades every day!

As the saying goes, the teacher is not at school and the students are in chaos.

In the afternoon, the teacher of my class left us some homework because he was going to have a meeting on the first floor, and left in a hurry.

At first, students can consciously abide by classroom discipline. Ten minutes later, some students began to whisper. Suddenly, I don't know who let out a scream and gave this slightly noisy class a deafening sound. Then there were many strange noises, such as dogs barking, chickens crowing, cats crowing, and … all kinds of "animals" came to my class. The sound of this animal is enough to embarrass students who want to study.

The monitor Huang Yanxuan had to intervene, but these naughty male students simply ignored him. You see, Zhou Yujie, the "Interrupt King", used his "nonsense Dafa" to roll up "foaming at the mouth" and swept his territory, and no one was spared. Looking at GuanJingHua and Zhou Yujie beside him echoed each other. It is precisely because of their mutual echo that we nicknamed him "nonsense two immortals" When we heard the name, we knew for sure that they were "smelly"! Really, if you teach yourself again, you will certainly hear his "second immortal" voice. Headquarters hall, rang rang again. ……

For this farce, some people started booing, but soon most of the students did their homework again. Coupled with the joint intervention of the class Committee, the farce ended hastily.

The next day, looking at these students who stood in front of the teacher because of their mistakes, I thought, don't get carried away because of temporary happiness.

Little things happen in our class every day. Maybe they are nothing special, but they are closely related to my life.

Among them, the most interesting thing is the "38th parallel" storm. It was the first day of school, and I was assigned to the first row of the second group, sitting with Liang. In the first class, her foot slipped over. I saw her "invade" my territory, so I hit back at her severely, and she hit back not to be outdone. We fought fiercely until class was over, and she said, "Stop fighting". Then he drew a "38th parallel" with a pencil and said, "No one is allowed to cross this line, or he will climb three times like a dog!" Since then, the two of us have been on tenterhooks all day, afraid of our bad luck, and even raised our hands to speak carefully in class, for fear of disaster. This tension lasted for several weeks.

One day when I was doing my class homework, I accidentally crossed the line. Alas! What bad luck I really hate this "38th parallel". Who can blame this? Students should help each other, not tit for tat. Since then, I have always helped her when she is in trouble, such as lending her a pen, a ruler, an eraser and so on.

One afternoon, I packed my things and prepared to leave. She stopped me and said to me, "Let's tear down the 38th parallel!" I agreed with a logical conclusion, so I removed the "38th parallel" and my worries with an eraser, and we turned our enemies into friends.

The "38th parallel" storm has passed. Our hearts will also communicate. I hope all my classmates help each other, trust each other and understand each other. I hope all the students who quarrel will stop quarreling and care for each other, so that our class will be full of laughter!

Which family won't have an "uproar"? Which storm subsided without twists and turns? However, in my heart, twists and turns are like a brand, which is deeply imprinted in my mind. ?

Mom, the "hostess" of this story, is a strong and hardworking peasant woman. The hero of this story, Dad, is an ordinary farmer with feudal consciousness and "market" in his mind. There are two "little guys" at home-my brother and I?

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