The significance of red double-circle segmentation in the composition of the second volume of grade six

The first part (1) describes the "Red May" essay contest held by our school.

The second (2~6) make-up exam, writing "I" was officially published and became a writer.

The third part (7) writes that I must thank my teacher for becoming a writer.

original text

Red double circles in composition

It was May of 1972, and I clearly remember that day. That time, the school held the "Red May" essay contest.

I submitted a manuscript, and the title of my composition is Make-up Exam, which is a very long composition. My Chinese teacher is also the head teacher. He always gives high marks to my compositions.

One morning, when I was working on the playground, someone ran up to me and told me, "This article was published in a newspaper column. It's yours and it's full of double circles. " I am very excited and want to see it at once, but I am very reserved and don't want to show my impatience in front of my classmates.

Until noon, when there was no one on campus, I slipped past like a thief and stood alone in front of the newspaper column, enjoying my double-circle composition. I counted my heartbeat from beginning to end and made 98 red double circles. This is the evaluation given to me by my Chinese teacher.

The composition with double circles was posted in the newspaper column for a long time. One day, comrades from the county cultural center passed by here, occasionally saw it, took it off and took it away. Soon, my composition was published in the county-run journal. County-run publications were sent to Yangzhou, selected by regional publications and published for the second time. After several twists and turns, in the second year, Make-up Examination was published in the official journal of a publishing house in Shanghai.

I had already jumped the queue in the countryside. My father encouraged me to say, since there is one, why can't there be two? I thought so, too, so I continued to "toss" and later published many novels and became a writer.

If there were no 98 red double circles in the composition, would there be me today? There are countless tracks on the road of life, and it is accidental and inevitable to choose one of them.

I will always thank my teacher, the newspaper column of my alma mater and the red double circle hanging on my life tree.

Extended data

The author of "Red Double Circle in Composition" is Huang Beijia. The essay "Make-up Examination" mentioned in the article is her masterpiece. Because of the success of this composition, it gave the author confidence and strength. Since then, she has published literary works one after another and finally became a famous writer. Therefore, the composition "Make-up Examination" can be said to be a milestone in her growth. The teacher's 98 red double circle opened the door to her literary creation.

Main idea

This paper praises the teacher's leading role in the author's life from the red double circle in an essay and expresses the author's gratitude to the teacher.

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