How to choose the author's point of view in the seventh grade junior high school composition courseware

One of the seventh grade composition training

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[Teaching objectives]

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Understand the role of character appearance and expression description.

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Learn to describe the appearance and behavior of characters.

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Master the methods of describing the appearance and expression of characters to reflect their personalities.

[Teaching Focus]

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Understand the role of character appearance and expression description.

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Learn to describe the appearance and behavior of characters.

[Teaching difficulties]

Use the methods of character appearance description and expression description to reflect the character.

[Teaching time]

The second class hour

teaching process

First, import:

The world is infinite. Walking in the street, people hurried by, and different fresh faces were like flowers.

Like a valve,

Flash in front of us

So how to freeze colorful faces,

Into an eternal moment? painter

We can paint with pigments, photographers can shoot with cameras, and all we can do is paint with pens in our hands.

As the saying goes:

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It is difficult to draw a tiger but a man.

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That is to say, whether painting people or tigers, it is best to draw the shapes of tigers and people.

Simple,

But it is not easy to draw the inner spirit of tigers and people.

So,

How can we portray the characters vividly?

What will we learn in this lesson?

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Three aspects of character description

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Will tell you some feasible methods.

Blackboard writing: A description of a character's appearance and behavior.

Secondly, introduce the related concepts of character appearance and expression description.

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What is the description of a character's appearance and behavior?

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What role does the description of characters' appearance and manners play in the article?

Third, the description of the appearance and behavior of the characters.

Introduction: observation and thinking;

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What do you think is the identity of the old man in the photo? Why do you think so?

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What are the advantages of photographers' intentional disposal of characters' bodies and clothes?

This link is mainly to stimulate students' interest in learning and exert their imagination.

The first aspect: grasp the characteristics.

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The appearance is very different and keeps changing. Therefore, when we describe characters, we should choose the one that best reflects the character.

Character identity and personality characteristics,

Capture the instantaneous picture that can best express the inner feelings and personality characteristics of the characters.

Don't cover everything.

Here you are.

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Teachers can combine with their grandmothers,

Explain Lu Xun's physical characteristics.

(These two texts capture the thoughts of grandma and Luxun respectively.

What characteristics do you write? )

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The teacher gave an example.

The guest is a man, over 500 years old, thin and white, with few wrinkles on his face, but deep, especially on his forehead and eyes.

Knife carving. A head of black and white hair, but the sideburns are all white, which is very conspicuous.

Comments: It's a little older, but it looks like a knife. It can be seen that his face is full of vicissitudes.

The second aspect: make good use of metaphor.

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Among many rhetorical devices, metaphor is a wonderful flower in the rhetorical garden. Clever and accurate metaphors will make you

Words with colorful wings,

Self-awareness ―― The author of the seventh grade composition training series 1 training objectives 1. Correct self-awareness, self-expression and self-confidence. 2. Reflect on your growth process, discover and appreciate the value of life, and cherish life. 3. Enhance mutual understanding between students and integrate into the collective family. Title requirements 1. Concentrate, express your personality clearly and concisely, and try to write something new. 2. Choose the right angle to express yourself, or highlight the characteristics of one aspect of the individual, or introduce yourself from multiple angles. 3. The style is not limited, mainly narrative, supplemented by lyrical and argumentative expressions. 4. Express yourself with real life experiences and unique ideas. Writing Guidance Topic 1: Write an article about me, introduce yourself, and highlight the characteristics of "I". ③ No less than 600 words. Tip 1: This is a self-introduction article, mainly about people. People's personalities vary widely. How to show and introduce yourself to others, we must grasp the main characteristics of our personality, highlight one or several aspects of our personality through several specific and typical examples, and strive to write a three-dimensional and personalized self. Writing should focus on one's own life experiences and achievements at different stages, and write one's own style, but not everything. You can write my appearance: beautiful me, ugly me, fat me, thin me? I can write my personality and characteristics: naughty me, delicate me, greedy me, enthusiastic me, stubborn me, simple and honest me, honest me, proud me, crying me, laughing me, making a fool of myself, sleeping late, careless me, active me? Can I write my heart: my dream, my desire, my pursuit, my happiness, my troubles, my regrets, my tears, my grievances, my tears and my regrets? I can write about my hobbies: I like reading, painting, listening to music, singing, playing football, writing, writing poems and planting flowers? You can write my story: I was in trouble, I made a fool of myself, I was beaten, I did an absurd thing, I had an adventure, and so on. You can draw materials directly from your own life and start with daily life, such as school life, family life or other occasions where friends communicate. You should choose those typical examples that can best show your personality characteristics and best reflect your personality characteristics. Look at me carefully, analyze me mercilessly, describe me realistically and evaluate me objectively. Tip 2: writing methods should be varied, and materials can be organized in chronological order to highlight their own growth process; You can intercept typical events in different eras by means of fragment combination to highlight your progress in thought, knowledge and understanding. You can also write yourself into a contradictory collection by reverse conception, such as I am not me, which is not only novel in conception, but also innovative in consciousness. -1- tip 3: to write this kind of composition well, you can start from the following aspects: 1 Select materials. Choosing materials is the first step in writing. Only by choosing excellent materials can we successfully show ourselves. To select materials, we must first open our minds. We can carefully recall the bits and pieces of life and carefully analyze all aspects of life. For example, we can write our own nicknames or our own hobbies; You can write your own learning attitude or your own lifestyle; You can write your own joys and sorrows, and you can also write your own pursuits and secrets; You can write about the growth experience of "I" and analyze its advantages and disadvantages; You can write "I" at home, or you can write "I" in the eyes of the teacher; Can you write the real me or the ideal me? With the material, you need to carefully screen it. When screening, we should repeatedly compare the advantages and disadvantages of various materials, and choose those materials that are informative, fresh, vivid and interesting, and can highlight the personality characteristics of "I". After careful consideration and comparison, we will find the best writing material. 2. Innovative ideas. With good materials, the composition is only half the battle. Writing should be eye-catching and innovative. We can innovate ideas from the perspective of "cutting in, writing style and writing method" From the point of view, you can grasp one of your main features from a single angle to express your image, or you can draw your self-portrait from a whole angle; You can show your personality from a positive perspective, and you can also show your strengths from a side perspective; Can you describe all aspects of yourself statically or write about your development and changes dynamically? In terms of thinking, we can show the image of "I" on different occasions with sub-lenses, and we can also string up the bits and pieces of "I" life with a string of beads; You can "lay out" and list your own characteristics vividly one by one, or you can show them vertically and tell the story of "I" in different periods; You can use a diary to record the words and deeds of "I"; Can I also express the essence of "I" in the form of confession and archives? In writing, you can use the word jingwei to represent "I"; You can also introduce "I" in two or three people; You can express "I" through dreams; You can also use others and other things to express "I"; Can we praise "I" by combining praise and criticism, or ridicule "I" by combining Zhuang and Harmony? There are many angles, many ideas and many writing methods. Only by choosing the best angle, thinking and writing method according to your own characteristics and specialties can you show yourself most appropriately. 3. Vivid description. The image of "I" is distinct, and "I" has left a deep impression on readers. To create a good image, we need to describe "I" vividly. To describe vividly, we need to grasp our own characteristics first. For example, we can describe the image of "I" by grasping the characteristics of "I" such as appearance, language, action, psychology and living habits. Secondly, the focus of the description should be determined according to the center of the article. For example, to write about my hobbies, I should describe my actions in detail, write my wishes, and describe my psychology in detail. Vivid description, but also flexible use of various description methods, highlighting the image of "I". For example, writing "my autobiography" can describe a person's words and deeds positively to show his personality characteristics, and can improve his self-image with the help of others' evaluation of "I"; You can make a brief sketch of your ugliness, and you can describe your "beauty" in detail? -2-4. Personality expression. The expression of true feelings will narrow the distance between the author and the reader, and the expression of personality will attract the reader's attention. When expressing ourselves, we can choose appropriate expressions and words to express ourselves according to our own personality and specialties. People who are good at narration can tell their own interesting stories; People who are good at describing can describe their wonderful life fragments; People who are good at expressing their feelings can express their wishes; People who are good at imagination can show their talents in their own imagination of the future; If you are humorous, you can tease yourself with funny language; If you are simple and honest, can you introduce yourself honestly? If you find a personalized expression, you can describe yourself successfully. If we do the above, our "I" will be vivid and colorful. Related materials 1. Everyone should realize their importance, and you should also realize that the most important person in this world is yourself. (Maxwell Morse) 2. People often say that this person or that person has not found himself. But the ego will not be discovered by anyone, it should be created (Thomas Sass). 3. Everyone has a unique self and a unique self, only in different proportions. (Lawrence) 4. You should believe that you are a strong person in life. 5. Everyone is an engineer with his own personality (France). What ennobles people is their character. (Lawrence) (Hugo) People who are really full of qi and blood are neither interested in seeking attention nor afraid of enduring the cold shoulder. My self-portrait, "There is a big me between heaven and earth, oh, a big me?" Alas! Don't blame me for changing the lyrics, because I am fat! If people are fat, will they still be "ego"? Everyone has a love of beauty. Of course I'm upset about being fat, so I secretly made up my mind to lose weight. So I pay special attention to the words such as "the secret of losing weight" in the miscellaneous notes, memorize them first, and then sweat like rain according to the "secret", but after three days of heat, I lose interest. I still have a glorious history of losing weight. I heard that eating less can make me slim, which makes me a treasure. I chose a "auspicious day" and began to implement the great "dieting and losing weight" plan. I can usually eat two and a half bowls of rice for one meal. In order to make myself slim, I try to eat only half a bowl of rice, and I feel hungry at the end of the day. I really can't stand it before going to bed. When you see something you can eat, you rush into the kitchen and stuff it in your mouth. I'm hungry! -3- But everyone says I'm cute. Whenever I hear this sentence, my heart is secretly proud, but the expression on my face is painful. When I get home, I naturally can't wait to stand in front of the mirror and look at myself in the mirror and appreciate myself from the side and front. Look, I have bushy eyebrows, big eyes and short hair. "Well, it's beautiful, not bad!" I evaluate myself like this. Look, my vanity is so strong! I grew up in a country surrounded by mountains, and naturally there are many interesting things like stealing pears in Dongshan in summer and picking flowers in Xishan in spring. At that time, I was crazy and wild, and I am still "a leopard cannot change his spots." When I grow up and read more books, I like the quiet girls in the books and think they are cute. So I deliberately imitated them in words and deeds, trying to transform myself into a quiet girl who "smiles without showing her teeth", so whenever I have something, I study in front of the mirror: the extent to which my lips bend when I laugh-only two and a half teeth in the upper row are exposed, which looks very quiet. However, it is really difficult for my research results to last for two seconds. When it comes to pride, I will stagger my laughter and open my mouth with a "haha" strange smile. Alas! I am really a crazy girl who is difficult to reform! Don't think I am a happy person just because I like to laugh. I like to laugh and cry. When my mother felt sorry for my sister, I hid in my room and cried as if I had been wronged. If you read those sad literary works, you will burst into tears. Once, I saw Goethe's Young Werther, ah! Those tears are like "a light rain in March, endless." I often think about many things with my chin in my hand. If you think too much, you will inevitably feel a little melancholy and melancholy. Whenever this happens, I try to shake my short hair and squeeze out a free and easy smile. Sometimes, on a whim, I will run to the mountain alone, pick up a small stone, frighten the birds living in the tree, snap my fingers proudly, or find some Yellow River and Forgotten Years and put them under my eyes to have a lively "eagle catching chicken". I also have the spirit of "A Q". After all, there is no river in the world that I can't cross. Why am I moping all day? I grow up day by day and my interests change day by day. The only constant interest is reading. I am not only interested in books, but also "obsessed". When I have a book in my hand, I won't close my eyes until I see my eyelids sink, no matter the darkness. I feel that I have been drunk by a book. When reading a book, I hope to have snacks such as melon seeds and peanuts, which is euphemistically called: "My eyes are full and my mouth is full." This is me-a girl who never sings "ego", loves to cry and laugh, and sadness comes and goes quickly. [Example Comments] It is said that this article is well conceived, and I think you should also agree. You see, when the author talks about his "glorious history of losing weight" easily, he can skillfully express his personality of crying, laughing, playing and loving beauty. If you look at it again, the author describes in detail the positive aspects of my love of beauty and reading, and briefly describes the negative aspects of my love of playing and jealousy, which not only outlines my self-image completely, but also highlights the cuteness of "I" There are also the lyrics, proverbs quoted at the beginning of the article and the relaxed and humorous language in the article, which are all worthy of -4- applause! My reading life "where can I find the pleasure of reading?" Count the plum blossoms. " I don't know where these two poems came from, but I always remember them because I often feel the pleasure of reading. [Always mention the full text first. Strange to say, I have loved reading since I was a child. [The word "special" highlights the meaning of the problem. ] This is probably influenced by my father! You can also write directly here that you love reading. My father is a Chinese teacher in middle school. He likes collecting books and reading. [To specifically describe dad's reading and book collection, highlight the word "influence". ] When I was three or four years old, my father taught me to recite ancient poems, such as "Is there frost on the bright thread at the foot of my bed?" Looking up, I found that it was moonlight and sank again. I suddenly remembered Li Bai's Home. Read Du Mu's Cold Mountain is Far Away, and there are people in the depths of white clouds. Stop and sit in the maple grove late, and the frost leaves are red in February. "Although I can't feel the poet's feelings, I think reciting poems is a very interesting thing. 【 "Although? But? " This one-sided complex sentence further highlights the word "interesting". Let's play the word "interesting" again here. Sometimes my father reads me story books. As I get older, I know more and more words and read more and more books. I have read 100 poems of Tang and Song Dynasties, Water Margin, Journey to the West and China Children's Encyclopedia. I read a lot of books, and I seem to be growing up. [This paragraph writes that I am influenced by my father. Since childhood, I like reciting poems, listening to stories and reading books, telling stories and being close to my interests. If we can combine a detail in The Water Margin or the writer The Journey to the West here and talk about what aroused our imagination, the article will be vivid. An educator once said, "A person who doesn't like reading and the company of books is really poor and lonely. "This statement has some truth. 1996, I went to Suzhou with my father to attend a middle school Chinese seminar and stayed at the Arc de Triomphe Hotel. Dad has a meeting, and I always feel bored in the hotel room. So I asked my father to take me to the bookstore at noon. What a coincidence! I found a book "Selected Ancient Stories of China" on the shelf. It is as thick as a brick. My father bought it for me. I am so excited. If we can describe the spine and cover of the book after it is found, we can highlight the word "love" more vividly. Back at Triumph Hotel, I read eagerly. [Declare one thing here and apply a full stop. When you are tired, go to the garden downstairs to see the huge leaves of lotus in the lotus pond and the fish swimming freely in the clear water. Five days later, after reading the book, I transferred the word "I" here, and the language was more fluent. ] I feel very fulfilled. In the beginning, the words of educators came from the opposite side, while reading by yourself came from the front. If you have reading experience and a book as your companion, you will be full of spirit and emotion. Last summer vacation, my father and I read a book about grandpa Qian Zhongshu. Father reads "Written on the Edge of Qian Zhongshu" and I read "Biography of Qian Zhongshu". In my impression, Grandpa Qian loves reading, has a good memory and is very knowledgeable. You cannot father each have his own fun, but they both enjoy reading. Books not only increase my knowledge, but also improve my writing level. Reading can enrich my language and enhance my language expression ability. China's writing is colorful, and China's language is beautiful. If the milk of these words and languages nourishes my mind and temperament, I should read more books. [Write your own rational understanding of reading. Without such a rational understanding, it is impossible to deeply appreciate the fun of reading. The first sentence is a turning point, connecting the preceding with the following. The writing level is constantly improving, but the little author doesn't write like this, so he can't play a role in summarizing this paragraph. This sentence should be moved to the beginning of the next paragraph. ] I remember the book "Student Composition Gallery", which made me never tire of reading. There are many sentences and good words in it. ["A lot of good words" should be changed to "a lot of good words". ] When I was writing a composition, I jumped out of my mind one by one to improve my composition level. When I was in the fourth grade, I wrote an article "I love the mountains and rivers of my motherland", which was published in "Care for the Next Generation Weekly". The editor also wrote an "editor's note" praising my article for its good language. 1999 in the first half of the year, in order to commemorate the centenary of Mr. Zhu Ziqing's birth, I read some Zhu Ziqing's essays and some stories published in newspapers and magazines. I admire Mr. Zhu's personality very much, and wrote Mr. Zhu Ziqing in My Mind, which was published in the eighth issue of Chinese World. All this is due to my reading hobby! [This paragraph focuses on the role of writing and reading. Love reading has improved my language literacy and writing ability. This article by by going up one flight of stairs. The first sentence means to write about the improvement of one's language level. You should generally write about how you have improved your language level after reading it. It is not appropriate to write only one book. I like reading not only literature books, but also books that introduce scientific knowledge. Connect the front and the bottom with a transitional sentence. My father bought me a set of Golden Apple Library published by Jiangsu Education Publishing House. This "golden apple" really suits my taste. " "Asteroid Dialogue" and "Stars in Space are so lively" let me know about celestial bodies and feel that the universe is no longer mysterious. "Multimedia Wave" and "Topic Brought by Dolly the Cloned Sheep" opened my eyes. I remember the editor of "The Golden Apples" said: "Strong curiosity and thirst for knowledge are extremely precious human nature. Our ancestors have been concerned for a long time: how high the sky is and why do stones fall when thrown up? "These words inspired me to think positively and explore the secrets of the universe. [I also like reading science and technology books in this paragraph. It is better to spread the wings of imagination here and describe your own thinking about nature or imagination of the universe. There is an old reading children's song that says: "Spring is sleepy and autumn is short, and summer is sleepy, so wait for the next year. "This is about children suffering from reading, but I find pleasure in reading." Where to find the pleasure of reading, count plum blossoms. "[Quote ancient poems and take care of them from beginning to end. [Comment] This article talks about the fun of reading. First, write that I recited poems when I was a child, listened to stories, read books, and constantly expanded my experience. Then I described two things I studied: one was reading Selected Stories in Suzhou, and the other was reading Qian Zhongshu. The former is written in great detail, while the latter is written slightly with descriptions in the middle. The writing style is not only vivid, but also full of emotion, which highlights the fun of reading. Write and read in a paragraph. " I like reading not only literature books, but also books that introduce scientific knowledge. "I also moved to another level, writing books on science that I also like to read, which reflects the broad interests of young readers. Finally, by contrast, the word "le" is tightly tied and highlights the center. The deficiency of this paper is that it does not involve school life. From -6 primary school to junior high school, learning and reading in the classroom is a life that cannot be ignored. We should write about the fun of reading in classroom Chinese class first, and then about reading life after class, which can better reflect the significance of the problem.