Writing a composition with images of ancient poems

1. Write an 800-word composition about the image of China's poems. When the bright five-star red flag rose slowly from the east with the first red sun, I stood up, and I was proud that I was from China.

(Straight to the point, the article starts with a fierce attitude) I am proud, I come from China. There is nothing wrong with the sentence underlined by the teacher, but it is inconsistent if you use "you" after it.

Change the underlined sentence to China, I am proud of you! In this way, the following "you" has a clear direction. 5,000 years of civilization has brewed today's state of etiquette and formed a great Chinese nation.

You have witnessed the formation of every human civilization, and Tang poetry and Song poetry have watered every Chinese descendant. The vicissitudes of time will never kill your spirit, and the passage of time will never hide your light.

China people's blood is like a raging river, and you will always be a strong man standing in the forest of nations. Here, fill in this sentence: I am proud, I come from China! ) The following two sections are also modified in this way. )

I am proud, I come from China. From the four great inventions in ancient times to the departure of Shenzhou VII today, you have been using your wisdom to create those brilliant moments. From the successful Olympic bid to hosting the Olympic Games, you have been using your own efforts to achieve those dazzling miracles.

Self-confidence, hard work and courage have always been your motto, and higher, faster and stronger is always your goal. In the crowd, you will always be the hardest cultivator, harvesting the sweetest fruit with sweat.

I am proud, I come from China. Every Chinese descendant is hand in hand, facing difficulties and obstacles together.

The earthquake shocked the hearts of all people in China: beautiful homes were ruthlessly destroyed, innocent lives disappeared gently, but originally happy people were destroyed by this sudden disaster. However, the Chinese nation will never be defeated because of this setback.

The people of the whole country unite. A pair of hands put their love into the donation box, and batches of donations were rushed to the disaster area. One caring person went to the disaster area to visit the affected people.

They proved to the world with their own actions that the spirit of unity of the Chinese nation can overcome all disasters. Disaster is merciless, and there is love in the world.

This article is characterized by the use of parallelism sentences and paragraphs, which is very good and can be turned into an excellent speech. Looking back on yesterday, looking forward to today, looking forward to tomorrow.

I'm proud that I'm from China. (This is a good ending, summing up the review of yesterday, looking at today, and asking questions, echoing from beginning to end, very good.

The only regret is that the materials are familiar to everyone and the freshness is not strong. However, it is still in place in terms of momentum and language use.

Commendable. )。

2. Write an 800-word composition about the image of China's poems. When the bright five-star red flag rose slowly from the east with the first red sun, I stood up and I was proud that I came from China. (Straight to the point, the beginning of the article is very imposing)

I am proud, I come from China. There is nothing wrong with the sentence underlined by the teacher, but it is inconsistent if you use "you" after it. Change the underlined sentence to China, I am proud of you! In this way, the following "you" has a clear direction. 5,000 years of civilization has brewed today's state of etiquette and formed a great Chinese nation. You have witnessed the formation of every human civilization, and Tang poetry and Song poetry have watered every Chinese descendant. The vicissitudes of time will never kill your spirit, and the passage of time will never hide your light. China people's blood is like a raging river, and you will always be a strong man standing in the forest of nations. Here, fill in this sentence: I am proud, I come from China! ) The following two sections are also modified in this way. )

I am proud, I come from China. From the four great inventions in ancient times to the departure of Shenzhou VII today, you have been using your wisdom to create those brilliant moments. From the successful Olympic bid to hosting the Olympic Games, you have been using your own efforts to achieve those dazzling miracles. Self-confidence, hard work and courage have always been your motto, and higher, faster and stronger is always your goal. In the crowd, you will always be the hardest cultivator, harvesting the sweetest fruit with sweat.

I am proud, I come from China. Every Chinese descendant is hand in hand, facing difficulties and obstacles together. The earthquake shocked the hearts of all people in China: beautiful homes were ruthlessly destroyed, innocent lives disappeared gently, but originally happy people were destroyed by this sudden disaster. However, the Chinese nation will never be defeated because of this setback. The people of the whole country unite. A pair of hands put their love into the donation box, and batches of donations were rushed to the disaster area. One caring person went to the disaster area to visit the affected people. They proved to the world with their own actions that the spirit of unity of the Chinese nation can overcome all disasters. Disaster is merciless, and there is love in the world. This article is characterized by the use of parallelism sentences and paragraphs, which is very good and can be turned into an excellent speech. )

Looking back on yesterday, looking forward to today and tomorrow. I'm proud that I'm from China. (This is a good ending, summing up the review of yesterday, looking at today, and asking questions, echoing from beginning to end, very good. The only regret is that the materials are familiar to everyone and the freshness is not strong. However, it is still in place in terms of momentum and language use. Commendable. )

3. Award: the image composition of ancient poetry, urgently asking literary experts to save the image of ancient poetry, including the image of people and the image of things.

So, what is image? In short, the poet creates an image by adding subjective meaning to objective things. In the creation and development of ancient poetry, the subjective feelings contained in some things gradually solidified to express specific scenes and meanings.

In the college entrance examination, some images appear repeatedly. In this paper, the author uses a short poem to summarize the images that often appear in the college entrance examination to help candidates remember, so as to better answer the question of poetry appreciation: pine, plum, bamboo and chrysanthemum are noble and clean, and geese are sent home by the bright moon.

The cuckoo partridge cries sadly, and the buttonwood leaves fall sadly. When I left the pavilion, Liu Yiyi emerged from the water, and sadness spread.

Crows and swallows rise and fall, and plants are still moving. 1, "Song Meizhu Chrysanthemum" is noble: Song Meizhu Chrysanthemum is the embodiment of noble character and not afraid of evil. The ancients often used these four images to express noble sentiments.

There is a saying in Serina Liu's "Give it to a Brother": "If you don't suffer from cold, pine and cypress are sexual." Wang Ji's "Zhu Yong" said: "Cold in old age is different, different from ordinary vegetation."

Yuan Zhen's poem "Chrysanthemum" has a cloud: "It's not that chrysanthemum is favored among flowers, but that this flower has no flowers." There are also many poems about Mei, such as "It is not snow from a distance, because there is a delicate fragrance."

"Scattered into mud and ground into dust, only the fragrance remains." In 2004, I visited Su Shi's red plum in Beijing, showing the noble character that red plum is not afraid of the cold and does not compete with peaches and apricots for spring.

2. Sending a "wild goose" with the moon in the sky often arouses the homesickness of wanderers and arouses the poet's longing for the future. For example, in Li Bai's Silent Night Thinking, I looked up and found that it was moonlight and sank back. I suddenly remembered my home, Du Fu's Moonlight Remembers My Brothers. He knew that the dew would be frost tonight and the moonlight at home was so bright! And Su Shi's "People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs" all express the poet's feelings. Wild geese are a kind of migratory birds, and ancient poems are often written in the homesickness of foreign travelers when they see wild geese flying south.

In 2004, the poem published in the language volume of Hubei College Entrance Examination was Wang Wan's "The next berth on the North Fort Mountain". The last two sentences of this poem say, "I can finally send my emissary? Geese, return to Luoyang. "

Only when a poet wanders can he return to his hometown. Even the poets on the boat are not clear, so we have to hope that the geese in the north will send books for themselves in the spring. The image of returning geese shows the author's homesickness.

3. "Du Fu" and "Partridge" cried Du Fu, also known as Devil Poetry and Tu Yu Poetry. In ancient mythology, Du Yu, the king of Shu (that is, Wang Di), lived in seclusion in the mountains after giving way to his courtiers, and his soul turned into Du Fu after his death, calling Du Fu's cry "It is better to go home", so Du Fu in ancient poetry became a symbol of desolation and desolation. In 2004, Yan's "Partridge Sky" was the title of two volumes of poetry appreciation: Partridge Sky, Yan Shilitai leaning against the green, cuckoo singing in the depths of a hundred flowers.

Talking to pedestrians diligently is not like a songbird flying for the second time. Sleep in a dream, when it clears up that day.

It's better to return than to return. Is it true that the end of the world has not returned, and it is impossible to strive for a return date?

Question: Why does the author use this word to describe the cuckoo's cry? The answer to this question should start with the cuckoo's cry, and the word also mentions "the sound is not as good as going home", which expresses the author's homesickness outside drifting. The image of "partridge" in ancient poems often reveals sadness.

For example, Li Bai's "Visit to the Ancient in Vietnam": "Maids in the Palace are full of spring palaces, but now they are only flying partridges." 4. The leaves of Wu Tong are sad. As the old saying goes: "rather critical", Wu Tong leaves the roots.

Writing sad autumn with phoenix tree is a common technique used by the ancients. In 2004, the appreciation of Fujian poetry was titled Autumn Night, in which the image of "phoenix tree" was written: the night was long and sleepless, the autumn wind was clear, and the candle flowers were cut diligently for three nights.

The bed is cold and full of phoenix trees, and the moon is bright where phoenix trees are missing. In this poem, the cool bed, the moon shadow and the phoenix tree create a lonely artistic conception.

5. "Changting" and "Liu" In classical poems of other times, Liu is often associated with divorce. "Picking Wei" in the Book of Songs wrote: "I have been there, Liu Yiyi; I think about it today, it's raining. " The swaying figure of weak willows can best convey the feelings of relatives and friends when they leave.

In addition, "Liu" and "Liu" are also homophones. Pavilion is the place where the ancients bid farewell, so it is also an image that often appears in farewell poems.

Liu Yong's "Yulinling" wrote these two images at the same time, which are "chilling and sorrowful, coming late for a long time." And "Where to wake up tonight, Yang Liuan Xiaofeng is dying."

6. Out of the water, convey sadness. Falling flowers make people feel pity and sadness, and the running water is noisy or soothing, which is the most worrying thing. Therefore, out of the water is often used to express sadness in ancient poems. For example, Li Yu's "Yu Meiren": "When the spring flowers and the autumn moon will end, how much is known about the past", "How much sorrow can there be, just like a river flowing eastward"; Another example is Li Qingzhao's "A Plum": "Flowers come from Shui Piao, one kind of acacia, two places of leisure."

7. "Crow" and "swallow" are ups and downs. Crows often appear in graves and other places and are usually regarded as ominous. Poets often use the image of "crow" to render the declining atmosphere. Swallow, because of its attachment to the old nest, has become the sustenance of classical poetry to express the changes of current events and express the feelings of historical rise and fall.

There are many college entrance examination questions with the image of "crow", such as: In 2006, Hubei volume "Danyang sent Wei to join the army", In the evening, Jiangnan looked at Jiangbei, and Western Western jackdaw flew all over the water, and in 2006, Jiangsu volume "Partridge Sky" and "Mountain meets water, water is bright, and forest remnants meet crows". In 2007, Zhejiang introduced a comparative appreciation topic, namely "Wuyi Xiang" by Liu Yuxi, "Man Moon Circle" by Wu Ji and "Mountain Slope Sheep" by Yuan Dynasty. Swallow, the three works all express a deep sense of ups and downs through the image of swallow.

8. "Vegetation" is still changing. The vegetation is evergreen, but the personnel are quietly changing. Ancient poetry often uses "vegetation" to express the emotion of things being transformed and sigh over the rise and fall of history.

For example, Yangzhou is slow, and the wheat is green ten miles after the spring breeze. In 2007, the appreciation topic of Hubei scroll poem Crossing the Qing Palace in China also used the image of a tree: "The jade tree has ascended to heaven, and only the tree can stay in the Forbidden City forever."

Hanging a sparse tree without a month/Missing a person's early quietness/Who saw a lonely person hanging a sparse tree without a month/Vaguely lonely shadow/Who woke up but turned around and hated no one/Who picked up all the cold branches and refused to live/Lonely sandbar cold primary school students' composition: reading guide for ancient poetry appreciation composition (reproduced) 9 125296 19 hanging a sparse tree without a month/.

Writing roses in poetic images is a favor to love.

The bud is tightly wrapped and throbbing.

Lou gave a bright smile.

Rinse with red dots

When love is married.

It's easy to fall into the maze of besieged city, don't let it.

Love turned into velvet.

The fallen flower was buried, but it was gone.

Who moved the blue enchantress?

Ask her how you became my pet.

You are slightly angry and angry and corrupt in my heart.

Why are you so clever but not sensible?

Blue flowers will sting trust.

Who will be indifferent because the old man is budding?

Emotional cracks explore the doorway of the heart window

Tried to fill it, but it was empty.

I don't understand.

Blue is the magnanimity depicted by the night.

Blue is as inclusive as the sea.

Friendship lurking in love.

It also ignites feelings.

When love is married.

It's easy to fall into the maze of besieged city, don't let it.

Love turned into velvet.

The fallen flower was buried, but it was gone.

Who moved the blue enchantress?

Ask her how you became my pet.

You are slightly angry and angry and corrupt in my heart.

Why are you so clever but not sensible?

Blue flowers will sting trust.

Who will be indifferent because the old man is budding?

A scar that cannot be removed by closing the wound.

The gap between thawing has been deserted.

Still don't understand.

Who moved the blue enchantress?

Ask her how you became my pet.

You are slightly angry and angry and corrupt in my heart.

Why are you so smart and don't you understand?

Blue flowers will sting trust.

Who will be indifferent because the old man is budding?

Explore the doorway of the window of the soul through the cracks of emotion

Tried to save it, but it was gone.

Blue old dreams make memories dusty.

Who will send happiness to an old man because he is budding?

Ignorance affects sensitive nerves.

Your behavior makes me unable to relax.

Tangled pain

5. How to write a paper on the image of ancient poetry: After the poet's tempering, the words and sentences of ancient poetry are particularly refined and rich, integrating scenery, feelings and events to create a unique and moving artistic conception. So what is the artistic conception of poetry? It refers to the concrete life scenes and pictures depicted in the poem, as well as the thoughts, feelings and profound significance contained in the scenes and pictures. Learning ancient poetry, only by grasping the artistic conception of taste and savoring it carefully, can ancient poetry be difficult to understand deeply. In order to understand the poet's feelings and learn elegant aesthetic taste from the artistic conception of ancient poetry, we must accurately grasp the images of ancient poetry, so that the objective images of poetry can naturally be transformed into subjective feelings and achieve better results.

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Keywords: ancient poetry; Image; Artistic conception of artistic works

China Library Classification Number: G622 Document Identification Number: B Document Number:1002-7661(2013) 34-280-01.

China culture has a long history and is profound. Ancient poetry is the treasure of China culture and occupies an extremely important position in the history of China literature development. The ancient poetry selected into the primary school Chinese textbooks is a wonderful work among the splendid cultural treasures of the Chinese nation, which is refreshing to read, opens the mind, has a long aftertaste and gives people a beautiful edification.

The image in ancient poetry is the unity of emotion and scenery, and it is the carrier of the poet's emotion. When learning and appreciating ancient poetry, only in the process of understanding the meaning of images can we grasp the content of poetry, perceive the poet's emotions, enter the artistic conception of poetry and understand the theme of poetry. And some images contain established aesthetic habits. How to grasp the correct meaning of images in poetry, I have summed up some experiences in my teaching practice for more than 20 years.

First, the natural image class

1, the moon (the waning moon, the bright moon, the new moon, the jade plate, and the Chanjuan): It is a sign of homesickness in the poet's works, conveying feelings of leaving sorrow and hate, loneliness and homesickness.

2. Sunset (sunset, sunset, sunset): Most of them reveal desolation, loss and gloom.

3, running water: more is to convey the sadness and sorrow that life is short and fate is impermanent.

4, smoke, frost: more expressions of sadness, melancholy, bitterness and other feelings.

5. Wind: Spring breeze-open-minded, cheerful and full of hope.

East wind-represents spring and beauty.

West wind-melancholy, wandering homesick.

North wind-depression, sadness and parting.

Second, the plant image class

1, Liu Yang: To convey more feelings of parting and nostalgia.

2, falling flowers (falling red, residual red): more to say that youth is fleeting, life is impermanent sigh and sorrow.

3. Pine, bamboo, plum and chrysanthemum: how noble, loyal and unyielding.

4. Indus and plantain: convey the bitterness of the fleeting time and life experience.

Third, animal images.

1, crow, cicada, ape, cuckoo: convey more sadness.

2. Mandarin ducks and partridges: meaning lovesickness and love; Feelings of sadness and loneliness.

3. Swallow: It symbolizes current events and personnel metabolism.

4. Fish: a symbol of freedom.

5. Lonely goose: a symbol of loneliness and homesickness.

6. Eagle: It symbolizes rigidity and freedom.

Ancient poetry teaching is an important part of Chinese teaching, and it is also an important content for students to learn traditional culture. China has a civilization history of 5,000 years. In the long history of 5,000 years, our ancestors created a large number of poems, which can be said that China is a kingdom of poetry. Only when teachers teach ancient poems can students grasp the images and feel the artistic beauty of ancient poems; Paying attention to reading the images in ancient poetry is the most basic requirement for learning ancient poetry well.

References:

[1] Chinese curriculum standards for primary schools. People's Republic of China (PRC) * * * and Ministry of Education, 20 12.4.

[2] Liu Qingsen. Images and artistic conception in the teaching of ancient poetry appreciation. Test questions and research. New Curriculum Forum, 20 12.2.

6. Describe a short passage with pictures. Five flavors are the most basic flavors, and they are intertwined to make the tip of the tongue feel.

Here's to the richness of the world. I have tasted a lot of delicious food, and I have tasted a lot.

Taste, but the tip of the tongue always retains that lingering memory-grandpa's cake.

Cake.

Grandpa often tells us about his love affair with shortbread. When my grandfather was young, every time

On holidays, grandpa will take out his janitor's shortbread, which is his colleague.

Comrades must have new year's goods when they come to visit the New Year. Everyone praised the shortbread. then

Grandpa took over this craft, and shortbread was rarely made, only during the Chinese New Year.

If you can eat delicious food, grandma, mom and aunt have also become grandpa's assistants, and the home is oil.

Shortcakes are in full swing. As usual, there are not many shortcakes left, most of them.

It's for friends and relatives of neighbors who come to pay New Year greetings. But grandpa will always be happy, not just

With a sense of accomplishment, grandpa enjoys this rare affection, friendship and neighborhood. When it comes to me and

Brother, shortbread has become a popular staple food snack every day. To grandpa

At home, grandpa often smiles and asks us to take some home to eat. The plate is as round as sugar cheese.

Hemp, duck egg-like oval is salty chopped green onion, each made by grandpa. soft

When you take a bite, the tiny popping sound is accompanied by the stuffing falling into the mouth of layers of crispy particles, which is fragrant and convenient.

Just like fireworks flying into the sky in festivals, there are only a few lights and shadows.

Seconds exist, but the imprint of blooming remains for a long time.

7. Fengle Pavilion spring outing, writing the artistic conception of ancient poetry into a 750-word composition. One day, the sunset gave off a charming afterglow, but Du Fu was very depressed. He heard that the flowers of the Huangsi family were beautiful, so he pushed open the door and decided to go out to enjoy the flowers for fun.

Walking on the path to Huang Si's family, my eyes suddenly lit up. I found that her flowers really deserved their reputation, including pink peach blossoms, purple Phalaenopsis and bright red roses ... they were really as red as fire, as pink as Chardonnay and as yellow as gold. These flowers compete with each other, one is more beautiful than the other, and they are in full bloom. Thousands of flowers hold down the branches and look shaky. At this time, a refreshing river wind blew, and the petals fell like butterflies flying in the air. The beautiful scenery attracted several flowers, who flew and circled in the air, unwilling to leave. Lovely and beautiful orioles also flew by, standing on the treetops, singing happy and beautiful songs.

When Du Fu saw this scene, the sadness in his heart suddenly flew to the outside of the cloud nine and disappeared without a trace. So he started writing this poem:

Looking for flowers by the river alone

Huang Si's maiden is full of flowers,

Thousands of flowers bent the branches.

Butterflies have been dancing,

Charming songbirds sing freely.