8th grade's second volume composition

In study, work and life, everyone has written a composition, and you must be familiar with all kinds of compositions. Composition is a verbal activity in which people express their feelings in written form. I believe many people will find it difficult to write a composition. The following are five compositions of Grade 8 in the next volume, which I hope will help you.

Grade 8 Volume 2 Composition 1 Clouds are gathering and the sky is gloomy. There is no wind at all, which is suffocating.

I sat by the window and stared at the distant sky in a daze. At this moment, the gloomy weather outside is like my melancholy heart. ...

Mom, you know what? I don't know when it started. I feel as if there is a thick wall between you and me, so I can't get close to you. I tried to knock it down, but it was too strong and my strength was too small. I need your help! Now the wall seems to be getting thicker every day.

Mom, when I was very young, you said to me, "You should communicate with your mother often. If you have anything to do, just say it and your mother will solve it for you. " I believe and never hide it from you. But now, not only are you impatient to listen to me, but you also blame me for being distracted and not studying hard. What can I tell you in the future? Now, before I talk to you, what should I say and what should I not say? It takes me a long time to say it in my heart. After a long time, the silk that wanted to vomit but didn't vomit was cocooned in my heart and tightly wrapped around my heart. I started to get scared, and I became smooth.

Mom, another time, the teacher arranged for me to run a tabloid, but the newspaper was botched because of my limited ability. Later, a male student in my class who also runs a newspaper happened to pass by my house and sent my report back. I thought you could understand, but I didn't expect you to let me spend less time with boys and study hard. Those eyes are terrible, which makes me feel a sense of oppression. Mom, I am friends with everyone in my class. In my opinion, I should associate with students of the opposite sex more, because they have many advantages that I don't have. I know you do it for my own good, so as not to distract me. But no matter what I say, you don't believe me, and let a classmate supervise my actions. Dear mom, you are an educator. It is too difficult to educate your daughter.

Mom, if you let go of your doubts, if you don't have that worried expression, we will become friends, right?

It's raining, and it's raining harder and harder, and the world is vast. However, I believe it will be sunny tomorrow.

The eighth grade is on holiday. What should he do? Go back to Laotun and have a look.

I got on the bus and imagined my hometown. When I was a child, it was my paradise. The mountains and forests in the north of Tun, the fields in the east of Tun are endless, and the smoke from several families slowly floats into the sky. What a quiet and peaceful scene.

Halfway through the bus, I was sleepy. I am still like an old chariot in my dream, longing for it, quiet and serene.

Finally arrived, I was startled by the voice of the conductor, jumped up three steps and ran to the car with one step. It was like meeting a familiar friend, but after jumping out of the car, I was shocked. Is this my hometown?

The clear river is full of garbage, and the roads in Tunli are full of cow dung. There are a few wisps of kitchen smoke in the distance, but it is thick black smoke. Why is this? I quickly jumped into the village, found an old man and asked him, "Grandpa, how did this happen here?" Grandpa sighed: "Alas, you are a child of XX family. Last year, several people came to the village head to discuss building a factory here, and the village head also agreed. Soon, the factory was built, but the waste gas and wastewater also came. " It's smoky here. At the same time, they also encouraged the villagers to raise cattle, saying that they could be milked, so the villagers began to raise cattle, and their pockets were bulging, but there was more cow dung. "

I see, it's money, it's money that turns people black. This is my hometown tour. How comfortable it is to swim in sewage, waste gas and waste residue!

In the evening, I got on the bus back, and the happy mood when I came was swept away, leaving only the nostalgia and regret for my dream hometown.

8th grade Volume II Composition 3 Without sunshine, there would be no warm days; Without water, there is no life; Without parents, there would be no us. These are easy to understand, no one will understand, but the only thing missing is gratitude.

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Gratitude is a virtue. After collecting honey from flowers, bees know how to hum their thanks. However, we are not as good as honey. Sometimes, we tend to forget gratitude and often lack a grateful thought and psychology.

There are many people I want to thank. However, the person I want to thank most is my mother, because he suffered a lot at home and saved my life. Because of me, my mother gained a lot of weight. Let me talk about my mother!

My mother is very capable. There is nothing at home but housework, so my mother is a "housewife". My mother goes to bed at the latest every day, because she has many things to do, such as washing clothes and cleaning ... My mother is actually a very beautiful and thin person, because of me, my mother has gained a lot of weight. Because when my mother was pregnant with me, my father gave her bone soup every day and finally gave birth to me. I was not so fat when I was born, but my mother gained weight 10 kg. One more thing, I want to thank my mother because she saved my life. Why did you say that he saved my life? Because when she was pregnant with me, I was the second child, and the first child was my brother. At that time, if I was born, I would be fined a lot of money, so my father wanted to fuck my mother and abort me. First of all, my father is afraid of fines. Second, my father wanted to abort me because he was afraid of having another boy. Because of my mother's repeated requests, my father promised not to abort me. So mom saved my life. I want to thank my mother.

Gratitude can make people grow, and gratitude can make people realize the power of love. Don't forget to thank anyone in the world for their insignificant help and concern. Especially family and friends, without their company, there would be no affection and friendship. Then life will be dark and boring, which is the retribution of those ungrateful people.

Gratitude is essential in life. Without it, life is meaningless, so learning to be grateful is an important and indispensable life criterion.

8th grade Volume II Composition 4 Teaching Objectives

1. On the basis of students' original writing, constantly improve and exercise their basic writing ability to meet the basic writing requirements.

2. Be able to write about people and things you are familiar with, so as to be clear and coherent; Write your true feelings. Write something with personality in your composition. The composition should be original and have distinctive personality characteristics.

3. Focus on training narrative writing, use lyricism and discussion, write more feelings, and stimulate understanding.

4. Use a variety of writing forms freely and flexibly.

Specific measures

1. In the proposition, try to guide students to find composition materials from their own practical activities, and extract expressive topics that can arouse true feelings through discussion and dialogue. The design of the topic should be from shallow to deep, and the action should be in the heart.

2. Pay attention to guide students to feel life, think about life, strengthen the exchange experience between students, learn from each other through the best language expression, so as to understand the true meaning of writing, urge students to write "I speak my mind", and let students pour out their hearts with composition as the carrier.

3. In the revision of the composition, students can read their first draft repeatedly, and more importantly, they can judge and revise the composition with the help of the strength between students. On the basis of the original work, we should modify and polish the text, delete those branches that do not conform to the emotion and theme of the article, and add some sentences or related words that are excessively concerned where necessary, so as to make the sentences of the article more beautiful, clear in thinking and smooth in context, and finally achieve the effect of both quality and beauty.

4. When commenting, students are the main body, and examples are presented in contrast, so that students can feel whether the article meets the requirements of the topic, and then summarize the advantages of a good composition and the modification scheme of a poor composition through discussion and research. This has a stronger guiding significance for students' composition. In this way, teachers will no longer sing the leading role alone, and students' writing ability will also be improved.

Unit 1 Narrative clues

First, the training objectives:

1, continue to learn to write narratives. Carefully observe the people and things around you, while observing, while recording, while thinking, and then select the most representative things or life fragments to show a person's characteristics in one aspect or several aspects. Show one side of this person's life through everything or everything in life. This is to break through the detailed writing mode of primary school composition. ) 2. Students should pay attention to the language characteristics of narrative when writing. 3, to train in narrative and description interspersed with appropriate lyrical and argumentative writing methods, and pay attention to the language transition between writing paragraphs.

Second, the training theme:

Junior: There must be something exciting and exciting in your life. Someone must have cared about you and helped you. These people or events have left you with beautiful memories and treasured them in your heart. Recalling these past events, you will be excited and encouraged again, thus gaining the strength of life. Now, please pick up a pen and write down your cherished memories with the theme of "Missing". Advanced: 1. The sunshine in my life

Writing Description: Sunshine in my life is a figurative topic, and sunshine is the title, which means warmth and light. That person should give me sunshine-like warmth, give me the most precious enlightenment, illuminate my way forward, and guide students to recall the sunshine-like person in their lives, and how he helped and warmed themselves.

2. Save your life (life is the theme of this unit)

Lyric by borrowing things

First, the training objectives:

1. Let students learn to melt their emotions into the narrative and express their emotions through things.

2. Learn to use a variety of expressions, eat some food specifically, write its characteristics, and integrate into your own feelings.

3. Clever use of association and imagination to find the appropriate point of the "emotion" to be expressed by the selected "thing".

Second, the training theme:

Elementary: (in a word)

1. The poplars planted on the Youth Road in our school * * *, what kind of feelings did the poplars place on the members of * * *? Ginkgo trees are also planted on campus. What does this mean?

2. Write about 200 words about the school playground (using various expressions).

Advanced:

1. Read the following materials and write as required.

The twenty-four solar terms in China not only correspond to phenology and seasons accurately, but also have rich names. Let's take a look at several solar terms in spring: "beginning of spring" still carries the residual cold of winter, but the warmer weather brings the breath of spring, which is a turning point and a sign of the alternation of the old and the new; "Stunned" is like a story. A spring thunder awakens Qian Qian's sleeping life, just like a father's booze, and makes stubborn children know how to forge ahead. On the day of "vernal equinox", the sun is just above the equator, meticulously distributing its light to the north and south of the earth, showing a kind of justice. Please write an article with no less than 600 words on the topic of beginning of spring, Jing Ke and Equinox.

In this unusual spring.

Unit 3 Reasonable arrangement of explanation order

(If the writing content of this unit appeared in Unit 3 last semester, it is feasible to respond to the text, but this unit is a unit to reflect on the living environment and let students establish environmental awareness. So the writing in the textbook is not applicable, so let's continue to deepen the writing content of the first two units)

First, the training objectives:

1. Clarify and learn to use narrative writing ideas. (Time sequence, place change, plot change, emotional change ...)

2. Learn to use reasonable structural layout to achieve the purpose of having substance in words and substance in words. (Parallel, progressive, total score, subtitle, diary ...)

Second, the training theme

Primary: 1. disappear

Advanced: Expand the ancient poetry describing the scenery into prose, and pay attention to the use of descriptive techniques.

A number of small landscape essays are interlocking, which are composed of fragments, juxtaposition, progression and subtitle structure to express the theme of loving nature and protecting the environment.

Unit 4 Description and Lyrics in Narration

First, the training objectives:

1. When writing a narrative, the characters should be vivid and vivid, and the description methods such as appearance, manner, movement and language should be used properly. 2. When writing the narrative of scenery and events, we should present the scenery, things, events and feelings to the readers on the basis of careful observation and comprehensive use of various descriptive techniques and lyric means.

3. Lyricism strives to be natural and let nature take its course, so that love comes from things and affection comes from affection.

4. Personalized material selection, delicate description and sincere emotion.

Second, the training theme:

Elementary: 1. Philosophers often say that see the sea in a drop of water and the world in a grain of sand. Indeed, even some trivial things in our daily life, such as the custom of festivals, the habit of eating and dressing, and the architectural diet in their respective hometowns, are closely explored, and almost everything contains profound cultural connotations and valuable resources of Chinese studies. There will be many surprises when we go to the folk to "collect folk customs", pay attention to the folk customs that we usually don't follow, and explore the "knowledge" behind our daily life! Write an article on "Folk Custom".

2. Hometown festivals or "things" in China

Advanced: 1. Stranger people or things around you.

Writing guidance: before writing, students can collect materials, first select the characters described, and then focus on the selection of characters. For example, there are many people with special skills in TV programs: for example, CCTV 3' s "Avenue of Stars" and Oriental TV's talent show have many folk artists, and everyone has a skill.

If you carefully observe the streets, there are also many folk artists: like the grandfather who painted animals with maltose, the aunt who turned your name into a picture, and so on. The cry of selling medicine and sugar ... (Guwen Street)

2. True friends P 160

Unit 5 Learning to write letters

First, the training objectives:

1. Understand the stylistic features of "epistolary composition"

Letters are the most widely used practical writing in life, study and work, and they are also a common communication tool. However, if you want to use it to write a composition, you should not only regard it as a communication tool, but also regard it as an "article".

(1), sincere, easy to express true feelings, infectious. (often used in the second person)

(2) Flexible expression. Narrative, descriptive, lyrical and argumentative essays can be used.

(3), the content is informal, the structure is free, and there is no need for complicated transition.

(4), the object is very wide.

(5) Low language requirements. This is not to say that language can be boring without personality characteristics. )

2. Learn the format of the letter and pay attention to the requirements of the letter

The format of the letter mainly includes five parts: title, body, ending, signature and date.

3. Pay attention to all communication etiquette in speech.

Second, the training theme

Elementary: 1. In the process of growing up, there must be many puzzles that you can't answer, and there must be many troubles that you can't talk about. If you don't want to talk to your relatives and friends face to face, try to open your heart to them and talk to them by letter.

Advanced: 1. If you write a composition on the topic of "cherish" and express it in letters, what can you think?

Please write an epistolary composition on the topic of "choice" or "growth".

3. I face to face (pretend to be an ancient man)

Unit 6 Writing Learn to Write Travel Notes

First, the training objectives:

1. Learn the writing method with wandering as the clue, and be able to change scenery with moving steps and observe at fixed points.

2. Pay due attention to details and learn to choose materials.

3. Highlight the distinctive features of the scenery and skillfully use rhetoric.

4. Explain the knowledge about scenery appropriately.

5. blend in with the scenery.

Second, the training theme:

Mainly:

Everyone should have had the experience of traveling. During the trip, we not only observed the natural scenery, learned about the folk customs, but also had novel feelings, resulting in a lot of thinking and daydreaming. Do your own topics and write travel notes.

Advanced:

Introduce your travel history to your foreign pen pal in the form of letters, introduce him to the beautiful scenery of China, and also introduce the relevant knowledge of your tourist destination: myths and legends, historical stories, etc. , thus enhancing the culture and interest of the article.