Writing scenery at the end of classical Chinese

1. How do you write 1 in classical Chinese? A good landscape writing composition is focused and informative. It often doesn't depend on how many scenes you list in the article, nor does it depend on whether every scene you choose can arouse readers' interest.

However, no matter how many scenes you write, one must be the focus of the article. It can be described in descriptive language, and the characteristics of the scenery can also be outlined by line drawing, which leaves a deep impression on people. There are three mistakes in writing landscape composition. First, write a "running account", just like some travel notes, which seem to write a lot of scenic spots, but each scenic spot is left aside, and one of them is not well selected for specific description; Second, although the scenery written has a background introduction or detailed description, it looks a bit like a dragonfly, and it will go around after touching it; Third, the details of the article are unreasonable. The introduction of the cause at the beginning is too long, but the middle part of the article is not well developed. 300 words have been written in the 600-word article, and the key points have not been written yet.

2. Highlight the specific features or characteristics of the scene. This refers to the characteristics of the scene and the difference between writing this thing and other things. Only in this way can we leave a deep impression on readers, but there is still a premise here, that is, after grasping the characteristics of the scenery, we should make a specific description and not treat it lightly.

In the process of description, we should make full use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification. Accurately and accurately using rhetorical devices is helpful to write the scenery more vividly, truly and touching.

3. Scenery blending, lyrical scenery description, and no matter how beautiful the scenery is, it can't infect the readers and leave them with beautiful psychological enjoyment. Therefore, while writing the scenery, the author should integrate his real feelings, so that readers can not only "see" the beautiful scenery in the article, but also feel the feelings and thoughts that the author wants to express. A single composition of scenery writing for the sake of scenery writing can't be a good article that makes readers emotional, which requires us to naturally integrate our emotions when writing articles and scenery writing, and express our emotions with the help of the description of scenery.

4. In the description of scenery, the activities of people or animals should be written in. If the scenery in a landscape composition is "static", then an excellent landscape composition can not be separated from "movement". The "moving" here includes the activities, frolicking, frolicking, running, foraging and jumping of animals corresponding to the scenery. When a landscape composition combines the activities of people and animals with the description of scenery, therefore, students can appropriately choose the activities of people and animals as a foil when describing scenery, and the article will become more readable.

The article remembers Xiao Han. All along, I think the four seasons are natural, and no one is doing anything; At least outdoors, there is little experience indoors. All you can see is abstract symbols on the calendar.

Therefore, only those who wander outside know the four seasons, at least those who walk outside every day. They don't rush about for other things, don't take shortcuts, don't take cars, calmly and freely walk through prosperity and excitement, and walk through silence and desolation.

When there is no one, where there is no one, I yearn for such a life, even if it is only one day. It was the first solar term of the year, and I took the bus to the end of the route, the edge of the city and the other side of the town.

There is a newly-built residential area, and many houses are empty and not decorated. A house without doors and windows stands against the cold wind, without waiting inside, like a deep cave.

The newly planted turf in the square hasn't really been put together, and it's all frosted. White, a little thick.

The same is true of trees. There are also several grotesque sculptures with a thin layer on them.

That's the edge of town. There is a dam on the river to separate the water surface from the downstream. The water flow on the river surface is very small, and only a few sporadic streams flow downstream through the dam surface.

There are only a few streams on the river bed downstream, sometimes merging and sometimes separating, and hardworking people grow vegetables on them. Maybe it's too early, maybe it's too cold, no one grows vegetables on it, and no one walks on the road.

I swam from downstream to upstream along the river bank, and I was the only one. There is no one on the other side of the river.

The sun shines on the river like scattered gold powder. The buildings on the shore are reflected on the river, the color is lighter, the shape is folded, and they swing in the water like a swing, which is a bit like a cold war.

There is a bridge over the river. When there are no cars or people passing by, you can clearly see it on both sides of the river. Those old houses across the river still stand.

There are traces of rain on the wall, and the street lamp at the bridge head is still on, leaving a golden halo in the ground for a week. Holding the guardrail on the river bank, a coolness passed through the slate to the fingertips.

After another, I don't know how far I have gone.

There are no boats on the river because the water is too small for them to float. It seems that I am the only one in such a big town.

Accustomed to crowded scenes, meeting someone is like entering a new world. The world once belonged to everyone, but now it belongs to me completely.

I walked through the city I owned and forgot where I could go for a while. After a long walk, the water in the river gradually became shallow and bottomed out.

Several streams meander through the low channel of the river bed. Further on is a section of railway. The train came, roared past the bridge deck, and shook directly under the bridge.

Everything was quiet when the train passed by. I saw a man standing on the bridge in the distance. In the morning light, the shadow dragged on for a long time until it reached the riverbed under the bridge. Is that a lonely person looking at the scenery on the railway alone, or is it an inspector walking on the road? In the vague sight, I saw it fade away and disappear on the horizon.

This town is very small, very small. No boundaries, no walls.

I've been there all of a sudden. I'm not sure. I am afraid that the river coming from the other side, like me, will walk out of town from the other side.

The field of vision gradually widened. There is no end in sight, and there are only sporadic houses on the other side.

The sun has risen, and there is a trace of warmth on my body. The cement road on the river bank disappeared and became flat sand and mud. I don't know how far I walked, but I smelled smoke.

Looking ahead, it's a fishing boat. Shallow on the riverbed, it has become a bungalow, from which strange dialect sounds come out.

Before.

2. Middle school students write landscapes in ancient Chinese and comment on "The Story of Yueyang Tower". In the spring of four years in Wenqing Yuan, Teng (a feudal dynasty official was relegated or transferred) kept Baling County.

Next year, the government will be harmonious and waste tools will flourish. Is to rebuild Yueyang Tower, add its old system, and engrave Tang Xian's poems on it.

Write a composition and remember it. Yu Baling wins (good scenery), in Dongting Lake.

Take a distant mountain, swallow the Yangtze River, and make a huge soup (like a mighty water wave), with an endless horizon (edge); Zhao Hui (sunny) is cloudy and full of weather. This is the grand view of Yueyang Tower.

Everything the elder said is ready. However, in Wuxia in the north and Xiaoxiang in the south pole, poets who moved guests will come here more often, so it is not unusual to feel the feelings of things. If it rains (drizzling), the moon will not open (clearing up), the evil wind will howl, and the turbid waves will be empty (rushing to the sky); The sun, moon and stars are hidden, and the mountains are hidden; Business travel is bad and ruined; At dusk (near), tigers roar and apes crow.

When you go to the temple building, you are homesick, sad, sad and sad. If the spring is bright, the scenery (sunshine) is bright, the waves are calm and the sky is bright and blue; Sha Ou Ji Xiang, Jinlian (beautiful fish) swimming; The coast is blue and green.

Or the long smoke is exhausted, the bright moon is thousands of miles away, the light is shining, the static shadow is sinking, and the fishing songs are answered. How happy I am! When you climb the stairs, you will feel relaxed and happy, you will forget the humiliation and leave the wine in the wind, which will make you happy. Hey, honey! What is it to try (once) to seek (explore) the heart of the ancient benevolent, or to do something different? Don't be happy with things, don't be sad with yourself; If you live high in a temple, you will worry about your people; If you stay away from the Jianghu, you will worry about your husband.

It's worrying about going in and going out. But when will you be happy? It must be said that "worry about the world first, and then enjoy the world."

Hey! Micro (no) people, who are we? September 15th, six years. In the spring of the fourth year of Qing Dynasty, Teng was demoted to Yuezhou and became.

In the second year, the government was smooth and the people were happy, and many things that had been abandoned were set up. So the Yueyang Tower was rebuilt, and the original scale was expanded. The poems of celebrities and contemporary people in the Tang Dynasty were also engraved on the upstairs.

Entrust me to write an article about it. I saw the beautiful scenery of Yuezhou, all in Dongting Lake.

It embraces distant mountains and swallows the water of the Yangtze River. Water is boundless. The sun shines in the morning, and the yin condenses at night, and the scene is ever-changing. This is a magnificent sight of Yueyang Tower.

The previous account has been very detailed. In this case, it leads to Wuxia in the north, Xiaoshui and Xiangjiang River in the south. Most of the relegated historians and poets come here to get together and enjoy the natural scenery. Can it be any different emotionally? If the continuous rainy days do not clear up, the gloomy wind will roar and the turbid waves will rush into the white sky; The sun, the moon and the stars have lost their luster, and the mountains have disappeared; Businessmen and passengers failed, the mast fell and the oars broke; It was dark at night, the tiger roared and the ape cried sadly.

At this time, when you board this building, you will feel homesick when you leave the country, worried about the slander of traitors and the ridicule of bad people, full of depression and neglect, and extremely sad and angry. In spring, the weather is sunny and the waves can't afford it. The blue sky and the water color set each other off, and the green is boundless; Groups of Sha Ou sometimes fly and sometimes stop, and beautiful fish sometimes float and sometimes swim; Vanilla on the shore and orchid in Xiaozhou are rich in fragrance and green in color.

Sometimes a large area of smoke completely dissipates, the bright moon shines thousands of miles on the earth, the floating moonlight is like shining golden light, the quiet moon image shows white, and the fishermen sing with each other. How can this happiness be endless! When you board Yueyang Tower, you will have a cheerful attitude and a happy spirit. I forgot all about honor and disgrace, and all kinds of feelings and expressions were extremely pleasant. I used to explore the thoughts and feelings of ancient nobles, which may be different from the two thoughts and feelings mentioned above. Why? They are not happy or sad about the quality of foreign things and their own gains and losses, but they are worried about his people being senior officials in the court; Worried about his king in the remote Jianghu.

This is also worried about becoming an official in the DPRK, resigning and living in seclusion. So, when will you be happy? They will definitely say, "Be sad before the sorrow of the whole world, and be happy after the happiness of the whole world".

Alas! Without this person, who would I be with? Written on September 15th, 2006 in Li Qing (1046), thinking about the source of drinking water, and seeking the root through interpretation. This root is the reason why the author writes.

How did The Story of Yueyang Tower come into being? When teaching this article, the teacher should look for this root with the students. This root is clearly stated in the article: "In the spring of four years, Teng Zijing was ordered to guard Baling County ... and it was written to remember it."

Although Teng died, it made Baling "a harmonious society and prosperous society", which shows that Teng is the pillar of the country. Less than a year after he took office, he made great achievements and rebuilt Yueyang Tower. In ancient times, when people were building pavilions, they often wrote articles describing the process and historical evolution of construction and repair. Teng Amethyst asked his friend Fan Zhongyan to write a note.

Why not invite friends? At this time, Fan Zhongyan was demoted as a magistrate in Dengzhou, which was really awesome.

The difference is that Fan Zhongyan and Teng are very different in life. Teng, who is "optimistic and charming", is a good-tempered, willful and conceited person. It is difficult to listen to other people's opinions. He always resents his unreasonable dismissal and often complains.

It is said that on the day Yueyang Tower was completed, his subordinates came to congratulate him, but he said, "What a success! After drinking it in one gulp, it will be more than a dozen times. " When he should be happy, Teng is full of all kinds of sadness, which shows that he has not yet come out of the official blow.

You can read the full text of Yueyang Tower, but you can't find this feeling of resentment because of being demoted. Why is this? The reason is Fan Zhongyan.

Generally speaking, "if you let the minister drive away the guests, once you are far away, your sad and haggard sighs are all caused by your poems, which are particularly sour, and some people can't send them themselves." Fan Zhongyan, however, can be free and easy when he is hit by setbacks, regardless of things and himself.

As a friend of Teng, Fan Zhongyan always tries to persuade him, but never speaks. Later, Teng wrote to Fan Zhongyan and asked him to write an inscription for Yueyang Tower, so that Fan Zhongyan could speak for his old friend. The article wrote, "Don't be happy with things, don't be happy with things."

3. Unit 6, Volume 2, Grade 8: How to write an essay about scenery and travel?

Some show broad-mindedness, some show complacency, and some show leisure. The scenery recorded is different, and the artistic conception written is different, but they are all lyrical masterpieces, expressing feelings through scenery. We can learn some skills of writing landscapes from them. This paper focuses on Man Jing's Travels as an example for analysis.

First, grasp the characteristics of the scenery and write the scenery (seasonal). When writing about scenery, we should grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write. This sentence is usually heard a lot, but its real scope of application refers to the description of natural scenery. How to grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write, mainly to have a positioning before writing, to find out when you want to write about the natural scenery. Where is the scene? What are the characteristics? Then write around this feature, and naturally grasp the characteristics of the scenery. For example, in the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, the scenery of Man Jing in early spring is described in detail, and the seasonal characteristics of early spring can be well grasped when writing, that is, "it's warm at first, but it's cold" and "everything revives". One of them is "the soil paste is slightly moist", which is really wonderful when you think about it, because it is used in early spring. For another example, in the sentence "Ice skin begins to thaw", the word "ice skin" first refers to the frozen surface, but the author uses the word "ice skin" to describe "ice", which also implies that the ice is not thick. In early spring, it is understandable that the temperature is low at night, but the ice must not be thick. Look at the author's sentence about water, "the waves are clear at first glance, and the scales are layered and the bottom is clear." In early spring, the ice surface melted and water waves began to shine, reappearing the recovery of water. In addition, when the water freezes in winter, all kinds of suspended solids in the water begin to precipitate. As the ice melts in early spring, the water naturally becomes "clear". Looking at the sentence about wicker again, the sentence "it will be comfortable but not comfortable" vividly depicts the state of wicker when it just germinates, which is also a unique scene in early spring and also "shallow". The author uses "shallowness" as a metaphor for wheat seedlings and writes their shapes realistically. The word "inch" also reflects "early spring"

It can be seen that when writing natural scenery, we can better grasp the characteristics of natural scenery and then write. When writing natural scenery, on the one hand, we can consider the seasons, on the other hand, we can also write according to the unique climate characteristics, such as the state of various scenery under "rainy day", "sunshine", "snow" and "wind", and on the other hand, we should pay attention to the order of writing scenery. We need to pay attention to a certain order and write scenes. How to determine the order of writing scenes, we can write according to the observer's observation order, which is simple, in line with the thinking of ordinary people and easier to grasp.

For example, in the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, the first thing the author saw after "going to Man Jing" was, of course, the panorama of the well that the author could see. Therefore, when writing, the author first briefly outlines the whole picture with the words "Gao Liu is sandwiched by dikes, the soil is moist and the sky is vast". The following scenery description is a close-up of the local scenery, which is also inherited. Until the distance, the water in the distance is followed by the "mountain". The author wrote "mountain", but this "mountain" is in the distance after all. Therefore, the author can only describe it as a whole. Even though we were traveling with the author at that time, we naturally looked back after seeing the mountain, so the author wrote "wicker" and "wheat field" around us, and we could naturally see it nearby. These are all natural observation processes. When writing, following the observation logic of ordinary people can make readers read clearly without being messy.

When writing about natural scenery, we must pay attention to the order of writing. When writing, we can first present the scenes we want to write in our minds, and then write them in the order of observation. Another thing to note is that when writing, the distant scenery must be described as a whole, and the nearby scenery can be described in detail, so that it is logical. Third, linking natural scenery with human activities, there are almost no articles about natural scenery, that is, writing scenery for the sake of writing scenery, writing scenery or expressing emotions, or contrasting narratives, and so on.

If writing about scenery is to express feelings, it should be related to the activities of the characters. It is inappropriate to express feelings simply by describing natural scenery. Let's look at two examples first: the second paragraph of Man Jing's Travels, after describing the scenery in early spring in Man Jing in detail, says, "Although tourists are not prosperous, people who are full of spring tea, singers and people in red are always there." Although there are only a few strokes, it depicts a harmonious scene of characters' activities in early spring, which makes people feel the warm and quiet scene of spring.

For example, the description in Zuiweng Pavilion is even more vivid. In the second paragraph, the author gives the sunset in the mountain and the scenery at four o'clock in the mountain, and then describes the scene in the third paragraph. This scene revolves around "Taishou Banquet", depicting four pictures: "Chuhe People Tour", "Taishou Banquet", "All the guests are happy" and "Taishou Drunk", which is conducive to the development of lyricism when describing natural scenery. Of course, sometimes we can see that no one is in the best scenery. For example, Liu Zongyuan's Story of Little Stone Pond has no scenes of people's activities, but it doesn't mean that he didn't mention people when he wrote, such as "Surrounded by bamboo forests, lonely, lonely, cold ...".

4. Ask for 200 words of classical Chinese and write about scenery. The ebb and flow of Zhejiang need not be too abstruse, and the world is magnificent.

I hope I will be very successful on 18. Fang Qi is far away from Haimen, just like a silver line; As soon as we approached, the snow mountain in Yucheng fell from the sky, and the sound was like thunder, which shocked and whipped, swallowing the sky and swallowing the sun, with great power.

The same is true of Yang Chengzhai's poem "Silver in the sea is the country and jade in the river is the waist". Every year, the Zhejiang Pavilion is silent to teach the water army to study, with hundreds of people on both sides of the strait; After that, those who galloped and split into five formations and rode flags, javelins and knives on the water were all on the ground.

Yellow smoke is everywhere, people are invisible, and water is like a mountain. When the smoke subsided, there was no trace, only the "enemy ship" was burned by the fire and died with the waves.

Hundreds of good swimmers in Wuer, all wearing tattoos and holding ten colorful flags, rushed to meet the challenge. Wan Ren, which haunts whale waves, made great strides and the tail of the flag was slightly wet, so as to show off their abilities. More than ten miles up and down the river, the Luoqi is full of pearls and green flowers, and the road is crowded with four horses. Always eat everything, but look at the curtains, although the building is not idle.

Watch the tide.

5. Write the beginning of a warm composition in classical Chinese (3)

Warmth is like an indicator lamp, which lights up a little light for people walking in the dark; Warmth is like an oasis in the desert, giving the hungry people new hope; Warmth is like a fire in the snow, which makes people strengthen their faith and fight against the snow.

The beginning of a warm composition (4)

Affection is a powerful umbrella to shelter you from the wind and rain; Affection is a thick cotton-padded coat to keep you warm; Emotion is a soft bed. When you are tired, you will forget. Affection is a dry towel. When you cry, you wipe away the tears in your heart. Love is a sweet iced tea. When you smile, it makes you sweet from your mouth to your heart.

The beginning of a warm composition (5)

The wind on a hot summer night blows my hair and my restless heart. At this temperature, a drop of crystal sweat is produced.

Summer comes as scheduled, which means that summer vacation has finally come. All this is full of freedom and hope in the eyes of students. Iraqis only go through autumn waters for this day. For me, it's family fun.

End of Warm Composition (1)

If life is a beautiful music, then pain is an indispensable note; If life is a colorful painting, then suffering is a process that must be experienced; If life is a stage for display, then injury is an indispensable way.

The warmth and love of family ties are the most precious in the world, and those who have them will be happy all their lives. Do you?

6. Describe the scene in the classroom in classical Chinese, with 300 words "Ding Ding!" Start class! The students have entered the classroom and found their places to sit down.

Quietly waiting for the arrival of the teacher. The teacher is coming! The teacher began to lecture.

20 minutes at most, (40 minutes for a class. A' super bee' flew into the classroom and all the students screamed with fear.

I said in my usual tone, "What's there to call? Super bees are very common in my home! Next time, I will show you this giant bee. " The' little fighter' seemed to understand my words and flew out of the window at once.

Teacher's comment: You are such a lovely child! Using the "super bee" at home to drive away a "super bee" seems to give the bee feelings and make the bee get cold feet. The language is vivid and clear.

At the beginning of the article, the students are quietly waiting for the arrival of the teacher, accurately describing the atmosphere and state at that time. "A big bee flew into the classroom and the students screamed with fear", which also recorded the students' reaction at that time.

But this article lacks a profound central idea.