Evaluate two couplets in detail

1、

Twenty-four solar terms, dry kunjing show.

Fifty-six wonderful flowers, harmony and spring

Horizontal Identity: Harmony between Man and Nature

Evaluation:

The first part is about nature, and the second part is about personnel. Shanglian said that a year ago, the beauty of Gan Kun competed to show its beauty; The second part is about the unity and harmony of all ethnic groups in the country and celebrating the Spring Festival together. Horizontal criticism relates the nature and personnel of the upper and lower parts.

Rhetorically speaking, it is better to use numbers. It is no problem to compare 56 ethnic groups to exotic flowers. It is better to say "Gankun Jingxiu", which has a wider artistic conception. Horizontal criticism is good in structure, but the feeling of "harmony between man and nature" is not very appropriate.

2、

The party's heart, people's hearts and people's hearts are United as one, and scientific development has mushroomed.

Country, family, grandeur, Universiade and social harmony are increasing day by day.

Horizontal batch: Vientiane update

Evaluation:

This couplet is completely a work that caters to political slogans, and its meaning is the most boring. Couplets are "Scientific Outlook on Development" and couplets are "harmonious society". Horizontal criticism is about reform, and it is more appropriate to use up and down links.

Rhetoric is relatively mature, with the words "heart" and "luck" overlapping, and the antithesis is also very neat, but the language is rather cliche. "Spring Breeze Rising" and "Rising Sun" are the most commonly used.