Landscape and psychological description composition 300 words

1. The paragraph describing the psychology and expression of the scene shall be no less than 300 words. Action: Sang Sang glanced into the house, knowing that Mom had slept on the bamboo bed in the morning and went to the yard.

He was sweating like a pig, but he chose the thickest cotton trousers and put on his father's thick cotton-padded jacket. Suddenly he saw his father's big cotton hat in the big wooden box, smiled at himself, walked over and took it out and put it on his wet head. Sang Sang feels great. He looked around and immediately ran out of the yard and ran to the open space in the middle of the classroom.

At this time, Paper Moon has also entered the campus. But sang sang pretended not to see it, so she fucked a bamboo pole and walked grandly in the open space. When Grandma Qin appeared in the sun, she left a deep impression on Sang Sang that she would never forget even when she grew up: she was tall and well-proportioned, but her back was hunched.

Dressed up, only the little feet as big as zongzi were wearing a pair of black cloth shoes embroidered with pale gold flowers, and their trouser legs were carefully wrapped with blue cloth strips, leaning on a cane, and their silver hair fluttered slightly in the wind.

2. Excerpts from the American text (300-word psychological portrait of scenery) describing spring-describing spring

Jiangnan in spring is beautiful, the wind is soft, the air is fresh and the sun is warm. Wheat seedlings in the field are like the sea, scattered villages are unsinkable boats, criss-crossing winding rivers, willow branches by the river spit out buds, and reeds are green as soon as they come out; The calm river wakes up from the simplicity of winter and is covered with the color of nature.

First of all, the snow on the Chaoyang hillside is melting, slowly revealing the yellow and black land. Last year, snow water moistened the soil and soaked grass plants. The hibernating grass roots covered with snow wake up, forcefully and gradually push away the old grass plants and rotten leaves and struggle to grow up. At the same time, the seeds of plants and trees falling with the wind last autumn were also wrapped in wet soil, rooted in the grass and fought for their lives.

This year's solar terms are naturally a bit late, and butterflies are still very weak; Butterflies are so tall and straight when they are born. It seems that the world is really sweet and comforting. There are only three or four dollars in the sky, which is neither too big nor too stupid. The air is fresh; The calm water in the river slowly reveals the yellow land and the black land and struggles for their lives; When the butterfly was born, it was so tall and straight, with lush green leaves and criss-crossing rivers.

In February and March of spring, daisies seldom cut grass with white eyes, and they are dressed green by the colors of nature, like drizzle falling in the sky for no reason, relaxing their yellow-green eyes; Snow-covered grass roots and hibernation wake up. Spring Description-Spring Description

Jiangnan in spring is very beautiful, which adds a lot of interest to spring. Red, white and yellow flowers soaked last year's grass plants and passed quickly. Butterfly is still weak and happy, like a girl looking forward to the future, also flying from the south. The grass turned golden yellow, the swallows nailed small black spots on the white clouds to play, and the willow branches by the river spit out buds.

At first, the snow on the Chaoyang hillside was melting.

This year's solar terms are naturally a bit late. Vegetation seeds, green grass and snow water falling with the wind last autumn moistened the soil. Such a lovely swallow, the sun has tilted and its roots have been planted in the grass. Those swallows, the wind is very soft, let long shiny traces slip into the Woods and be wrapped in wet soil. In this beautiful picture with beautiful spring scenery, autumn flowers reveal their pale petals, forming a splendid picture.

Nature looks beautiful in spring, so orange and sudden flashes flock like people flock to the market; The wheat seedlings in the field are like a sea, and the villages dotted with them are unsinkable ships. Thousands of soft willows struggle to grow up and gently blow. These marks, like the robe dragged on the ground by the woman who said goodbye to you, gradually pushed away the old grass and rotten leaves stubbornly and forcefully, and the reeds turned green as soon as they came out. There are only three or four white clouds in the sky that are not too big or too heavy. It seems that the world is really sweet and comforting. At the same time, waking up from the simplicity of winter, the sun is warm.

3. The psychological description fragment is about 300 words. Psychological description is to describe the psychological state and ideological activities of characters in a certain environment. Writing well the characters' inner spirit, thoughts and feelings can make readers go deep into the characters' hearts and gain insight into their inner secrets and emotional conflicts, thus successfully shaping their personality characteristics and highlighting the central idea of the article.

The mistakes that students often make in psychological description are either understatement and confusion, or platitudes, which are suspected of "falsification"; Only with accurate grasp and delicate description can we have direct and shocking power.

For example, please describe your psychological activities in about 300 words, and ask for vivid images.

[synthetic case]

The Chinese class began, and the teacher handed out the approved test papers. I was very nervous before I got the test paper. I was afraid that I would fail. After I got the test paper, I was very sad that I failed.

[Brief analysis]

This is a fragment of a student's composition, describing his psychological activities before and after the teacher distributed the examination paper. Although he shouted hysterically "extremely nervous" and "very sad", we were still indifferent. We didn't feel how nervous and sad he was, because what we read between his lines was an abstract overview, not a concrete and sensible psychological description.

So how to make a concrete and sensible psychological description? Please see below.

[Sample composition]

It's cloudy with cold wind blowing from time to time. The wind blows on me, and I can't help shivering. When the Chinese class begins, the teacher will hand out the approved test papers. The classroom was silent, only the sound of "rustling" was heard, "Hua!" My heart thumped, and a classmate accidentally knocked the book to the ground. My deskmate's test paper has been handed out, with a score of 72. Looking at the sad face of my deskmate, I can't help playing drums. I'm so nervous, I'm afraid I'll fail the exam.

The test paper finally fell on my desk. It lay on its back, silent. I kept saying to myself, "God, bless me! I will never listen to a tape recorder, watch TV or play video games again. Alas! It's all my own fault. I always want to play video games. The day before the exam, I secretly watched TV for an hour while my parents were away. Teacher, have mercy. I will listen carefully in class in the future, and don't let me fail! " I lifted the test paper with trembling hands, and a bright red "4" came into view. When my hand shook, the test paper was closed again. I gritted my teeth, put my hand under the test paper and turned it over hard. Bang, I saw my score ──48, poor "48", and I collapsed on the table with a sigh. I seem to see the angry face of the teacher, as if I heard the sad sigh of my parents and the ridicule of others. How sorry and sad I am!

[Brief analysis]

This is a wonderful and vivid psychological description. How can I put it? The reason is that there are various methods of psychological description, and the author skillfully uses several common ones: First, inner monologue. This is the most commonly used and important one. This technique writes out the thoughts of the characters, allows the characters to directly pour out their own feelings, express their emotions, highs and contradictions, hopes and disappointments, and enables readers to reach the inner world of the characters through their appearances. For example, I directly recorded the psychological process of "I" regret and prayer, and the image was true. Students usually add hints such as "thinking" and "contemplation" before "inner monologue", such as "chanting in the heart" in ②. Second, the description of illusion. When people are extremely nervous and excited, sometimes there will be illusory pictures or sounds in front of their eyes or ears, and their contents may be what they are most afraid of or what they are most eager for. By describing these, they can accurately express the inner world of the characters, for example. Before describing hallucinations, we often use some hints, such as: as if we saw, as if we heard, and so on. Third, the scenery sets off. For example, cloudy days and cold winds are used to set off my nervousness. In addition, there is a common technology that does not appear in this paper: dream description. For example, in Wei Wei's My Teacher, I searched for a teacher in my dream, which showed my deep attachment and yearning for the teacher.

This passage gives us three inspirations-

1. Psychological description can use a variety of techniques comprehensively, and can also be combined with the movements, language and expressions of characters. This can more vividly highlight the subtle emotional fluctuations and complex psychological changes of the characters, make the psychological activities of the characters full of three-dimensional sense and layering, and make the writing more swaying.

2. Psychological description should conform to the character. People with different personalities have different psychological activities. Some people are enthusiastic, some are indifferent, some are bold, and some are indecisive. This requires students to observe, to experience, to describe and portray in detail, and not to be stereotyped.

3. Psychological description should meet the needs of article expression and performance center. Students can't describe their own psychology for the sake of psychological description, and they can't leave one psychological activity and another on a whim. They should "emerge as the times require" and be written naturally. Generally speaking, they should use it when the characters are excited, sad or have intense inner conflicts.

4. A short composition describing the scenery to set off the emotions of the characters, with more than 300 words. I remember going back to my hometown a few days ago, and there were several tall and straight poplars in the old house. Under the tree, there are fallen leaves all over the floor, and I can't find a place to stay. It was a cloudy day, with less wind, but Ye Er continued to fall. "Hua, Hua" burst of applause to welcome me back. A burst of applause dropped the leaves. I can't help but feel a little nervous, not because of him, but because of the present situation. I picked up a withered yellow-green leaf and put it in my palm, highlighting the dense veins as if the wrinkles of the old man were full of vicissitudes. At this time, standing on this land where I was born, I was bathed in the harsh sound of fallen leaves, and there was an unspeakable sadness in my heart. I spent my childhood here, my dreams were released from here, and some past events have been going on. As pure as cotton fudge. In the autumn scenery full of yellow leaves, I am jumping around, playing with fallen leaves, as if catching the hope of youth. When the autumn wind is cool, the clothes my mother sewed for me, whether brand-new or refurbished, are so comfortable and fit. When she dressed me, she casually said, "Put on more clothes when it's cold", which warmed dozens of cool autumn dew. Now my old friend is gone.

5. The word "hot" is not used in the description of the combined segment. Through the description of the scenery, the hot weather and people's hearts are expressed. A fireball-like sun hung in the blue sky in July, and the clouds seemed to be melted by the sun and disappeared without a trace. In early summer, all kinds of wild flowers are in full bloom, red, purple, pink and yellow, like bright spots embroidered on green carpets; Swarms of bees are busy among the flowers, sucking the stamens and flying around diligently. There is not a cloud or wind in the air. In the hot sun overhead, all the trees stood there listlessly and lazily. In the hot sun, on both sides of the road, mature grains bent down and bowed their heads in the heat. There are as many grasshoppers as grass leaves, wheat and rye fields, and wheat and rye fields. The vegetation is dejected and despondent, as if dying; Only cicadas keep chirping in the branches; It's really breaking gongs and drums to cheer for the scorching sun! The willow trees in the street look ill, and the leaves are hanging with dust and rolling on the branches, and the branches are still. The road was white, and the vendors were afraid to shout, and the plexiglass signboard at the door of the store seemed to be sunburned.

6. Composition of psychological description of characters, about 300 words. I am a strong person.

I am a very competitive person. If you believe me, please listen to my story.

It was a midsummer night. I went downstairs for a walk and met my former good friend Wu Wenbin. We haven't seen each other for a long time, and we had a good chat as soon as we met. Chatting, he suddenly asked me; "Mao Mao, how many push-ups can you do?" I shook my head and said, "I don't know." Before I finished, he got up on the ground and said, "I can do more than 20 things." You must do more than me. " Soon after he finished speaking, he stood up and said, "One * * * has made 25, so try it." I have no choice but to bite the bullet and do it. You know, I'm not good at sports because I'm too fat. I was on the ground, and I didn't do five things, so I lost. Wu Wenbin saw it and said, "I didn't expect you to make five. I think you are great. " ! "Hearing this, I blush to the neck. If there are cracks in the ground, I'd like to go in, but it's impossible.

When I got home, I lay in bed, tossing and turning, unable to sleep. I thought to myself, he can do 25, why can't I? Am I dumber than him? No, it's impossible! I am by no means more stupid than him, but I practice less than him. Yes, I must work hard to surpass him. So from that day on, I made up my mind to do five push-ups every day. In a day or two, with the increase of days, gradually, gradually, I can do more than 30 at a time. After a period of hard exercise, I can already do more than 40.

A year passed quickly, and on a midsummer night, I saw Wu Wenbin again in the same place. I offered to compete in push-ups. He said yes everywhere. He did it first, or he did 25. After he finished, he looked at me triumphantly and said to me as if he were laughing, can you do so much? Now it's my turn. I think of that night a year ago and the price I paid for my efforts. I can't help feeling refreshed. Suddenly, an unknown force broke out and made 50 in one breath. When I finished, I found that Wu Wenbin was tired. It was a long time before he came to his senses and stupidly asked me, "How can you be so great?" I smiled and replied, "Thank you. If you didn't touch my strong heart, how could I train so hard and surpass you? " "Oh, I see ..." He said with a wry smile.

This is something I want to tell you.

In fact, I am also very competitive in other aspects, which is why I always win.

This is me, a strong person.

Comments:

This composition successfully uses the description of psychological activities. For example, after losing face by doing push-ups for the first time, "Go home, ... overtake him." These descriptions of psychological activities truly and vividly describe the fierce ideological struggle between the little author "going home" and "tossing and turning in bed", and finally decide to "exercise hard and surpass him". It fully embodies the center of the article-"I am a strong person". When the article narrates the rematch one year later, there is such a description of psychological activities. Although there are only two sentences: "I remember … I remember … I remember … I remember … I remember … I remember … I remember.

Although there are not many psychological activities in this paper, they are used properly and vividly highlight the character characteristics of the characters: strong and full of personality.

7. I'm red in the face when writing landscape or psychological descriptions, but I practice less than him. He can make 25, why can't I? Is it because I am more stupid than him that the little author can't help it? I must work hard and surpass him. "

So, after a fierce ideological struggle, one day or two, with the increase of days, gradually, gradually, I can do more than 30 in one breath, and I really and vividly wrote the little author's "Going Home". From that day on, he recovered and asked me stupidly while doing it. "I smiled, a look at Wu Wenbin already look silly. After a long time: "One * * * made 25, you should try." I remember … now it's my turn, because I'm too fat.

I got down on the ground and did less than five. I was lying in bed, and in the same place, I saw Wu Wenbin again. I took the initiative and made 50 in one breath.

When I'm finished. "I can't.

It fully embodies the center of the article-"I am a strong person". When the article describes the second game a year later, there is such a description of psychological activities. Although there are only two sentences, I still have to bite the bullet and do it.

You know, I'm the worst at sports. After a period of hard exercise, I can already do more than 40! I am never more stupid than him, and I can't surpass him ",so I was defeated. Wu Wenbin saw it and said, "I didn't expect you to do five. I think you're great. "I tossed and turned and couldn't sleep.

I thought, when he answered, he stood up and said, and put forward push-ups again. He said yes everywhere.

He did it first, or he did 25. Say that finish, he looked at me triumphantly and said to me like laughing! Hearing this, I finally decided to "exercise hard". I remembered that night a year ago and the price I paid for my efforts. I have no choice. Suddenly, I burst into a nameless force. I really want to go in, but it's impossible.

Go home. That's right.

Chatting, he suddenly asked me; "Mao Mao, how many push-ups can you do? Can you do so much? I met my former good friend Wu Wenbin. We haven't seen each other for a long time. You must have done more than me. "

Not long after I finished, I chatted happily as soon as we met, and an unknown force broke out. Although there are not many psychological activities in this paper, they are used properly, vividly highlighting the character characteristics of the characters: competitive: this composition successfully uses the description of psychological activities to make the characters full of personality? No, it's like showing a movie and saying, "I can do more than 20, so I'm determined to do five push-ups every day." Thanks to you? "I shook my head and said," I don't know.

Comment, "Lying in bed." Before I finished, he fell on the ground and began to do it.

A year passed quickly, still on midsummer night. For example, "go home" after doing push-ups for the first time.

If there is a crack in the ground, it will flash through your mind quickly. If you hadn't touched my strong heart, how could I train so hard to surpass you? ""Oh, I see ... "He said with a wry smile: ... more than him. "

These words describe psychological activities, and you are training hard every day of the year.

8. Composition about language, psychology and scenery description 400 words neighbor's little brother

A family named Wang lives next door to my house. The Wangs have a son named Liang Xiao, and all the friends in the village call him Liangliang.

Liangliang is four years old, about one meter tall, slightly fat, with black hair and big bright eyes. She is a smart, lively and lovely child.

Among many little brothers in the village, I like playing with him best, because he is good at talking and can make me feel proud. I remember once, friends from our village played games together. This is a skipping game. Jumping fast can get everyone's reward: give him all the cards in his hand. Although I didn't win the first place in that game, and I didn't win the cards in the hands of my companions, Liang Liang said to me, "Brother, you are really something. You can jump so high, so much. Although you didn't win the first place, I think people are the best, because the Liang Jun brothers who won the first place are one year older than you, taller than you, but only twice as tall as you. Brother Hu is older than you and without you. " You're amazing! "After listening to his words, I am very happy and very satisfied. My depression that I didn't win the first place just now disappeared without a trace, and my spirit cheered up. In the next competition, although I still didn't surpass Liang Jun Brothers, I always followed closely and maintained the advantage of second place. I think, if there is no bright encouragement, I am afraid I have lost confidence after the first game and have no courage to continue fighting with them.

With him, I feel happy. Through getting along with him, I realize that people should be encouraged to get along with others!

9. Ask for a writer's composition with psychological description and scenery description of about 550 words, and I will answer it.

Work record "

Mother asked her sister to do the dishes, and then. I can ask my mother for a bonus, so I envy her and ask her, "Can I wash the dishes?" Wash the dishes, you give me a bonus. Mother replied, "You are small, so you'd better sweep the floor." "There must be a bonus. I think: in order to buy toys, it is good to sacrifice.

So, I picked it up and swept the floor, insisting on sweeping the floor. However, some feet have a lot of dust, so I just want to sweep them. I'm sweating during my period now. Sit down and have a rest. Seeing that my sister has finished washing, I am collecting my mother's bonus. Mom also said, "You washed well. I'll let you do it later. " Unwilling, I picked up the broom, tried to attack the corner, swept and swept, and finally swept to a place. I continued to sweep other corners, making my face dusty. I bounced back and finally recovered.

I asked my mother for a bonus, and my mother went to check to see if she had cleaned it up. After the acceptance, she said to me, "Well done, keep working hard in the future." Mother took out the money and handed it to my palm. So, mom went out. At first glance, it's too little, but I still have to be happy, because my books have brought me labor, which is natural. Although there is not much money, I know how difficult it is for parents to make money!

I took this sweeping as a job before I understood my parents' painstaking efforts. I think: we should exercise from an early age. I remember this experience deeply.

Guess a riddle about a word or word.

Today, the teacher played an interesting game for us-crossword puzzles.

In a short time, the teacher's first crossword puzzle came out: the top is often in the water, the bottom is often in the sky, the top is early adopters, and the bottom is bright. As soon as the topic comes out, everyone starts to think positively, and some hold their heads in their hands (usually the teacher will say, "Will your head fall off?" ) Some are thinking while writing, while others are discussing with classmates. After a while, Wang Zihao spoke, and "Ka" Wang Zihao affirmed (he doesn't always answer questions! ), but when everyone saw it, they were all blindsided and said together, "Isn't it ..." At this time, the teacher came to guide us. Under the guidance of the teacher, someone finally came to "replace" Wang Zihao. Hey hey, I can't believe it. That person is me-(what a sense of honor! )! As soon as I stood up, I said without hesitation, "The word is Lu." Everyone thinks it is right, and no one opposes it.

After a while, the teacher wrote a second crossword puzzle: look at the horse next to it on the left, look at the horse next to it on the right, look around together and step on Wan Li sand. As soon as the topic comes out. One third of the class raised their hands (much easier than the last question! ) I was among them, but I didn't let me answer, but let Li Guan answer. He stammered, "The word is ..." Everyone waited, and some students raised their hands, "Luo ... camel! No ... a camel! " Li Guan finally finished his words, which made him breathe a sigh of relief. "No, no,no." Chang Li, who likes to butt in and find fault, is "talking" again. Hu Chenyun was stopped by the teacher. She answered slowly, "It's a camel!" " "Students' hands are like small trees that have been cut off. When Hu Chenyun finished speaking, the teachers were as quiet as death, and no one objected (to tell you a little secret: she and I are deskmates, so we are "predestined friends"! As soon as Hu Chenyun sat down, he took a proud look at everyone (so proud! Don't be like her! ) Everyone looked at each other and sighed.