Correcting Chinese mistakes in the sixth grade of primary school

1. Young pioneers play a revolutionary tradition.

2. The summer in Xiaoxing 'anling is innocent and beautiful.

After learning, everyone's general awareness has been improved.

What a sharp contrast between the old and new societies!

We should cultivate our interest and level in writing.

Under the teacher's education, I corrected my learning attitude and methods.

At the beginning of school, we made a plan and made clear the direction of our efforts.

8. Dad told me that I had no money to study when I was a child.

9. My drawer is full of many award certificates.

10. I will graduate soon, so I should study harder.

Answer: 1. Young pioneers carry forward the revolutionary tradition.

Xiaoxing 'anling in summer is really beautiful.

After studying, everyone's consciousness has generally improved.

How sharp the contrast between the old society and the new society is!

We should cultivate our interest in writing and improve our writing level.

Under the teacher's education, I corrected my learning attitude and improved my learning methods.

7. At the beginning of school, we made a plan and defined the purpose of study.

Dad told me that he had no money to study when he was a child.

9. My drawer is full of award certificates.

10. Graduation is coming. We should study harder.

1, this is a happy, happy and joyful class meeting. Revision: delete "happiness, joy"

The teacher suddenly slowed down the progress. Modification: Delete "gradually" or "suddenly"

After this trip, I gave you great inspiration. Revision: Delete "After"

4. Copernicus dares to criticize and doubt the authoritative theory that is unrealistic but has always been considered inviolable. Revision: "Dare to criticize" and "Dare to doubt";

In order to avoid similar accidents in the future, we must improve the safety system as soon as possible.

Modify: delete "avoid" or "no longer"

6. His kind words+and kind face always come to my eyes.

Revision: Add "ringing in my ear" after "words";

7. Improving the quality is the urgent task of Chinese teaching reform.

Revision: change "increase" to "improve"

8. Winning or losing this game is not only related to the reputation of the team, but also to the honor of the school.

Revision: Change "but" to "and"

9. Seeing this exhibition made me feel a lot. Revision: Delete "make"

10, only socialism can save China. Revision: Change "Jiu" to "Cai"

1 1. After the incident, the class teacher and the class committee studied and decided to conduct an education on this issue.

Revision: "This question" was changed to "classmate"

The school announced the list of outstanding young pioneers, and Wang Li of our class was awarded the honorary title of "Excellent Young Pioneers" for three consecutive years. As a result, she was not proud at all. When students praise her, she always says, "I haven't done enough by myself." A: The school announced the list of outstanding young pioneers. Although Wang Li, a student in our class, has been rated as "Excellent Young Pioneers" for three consecutive years, she is not proud at all. When her classmates praised her, she always said that she didn't do enough. There are six sentences in the following paragraph, each of which is wrong. Please correct it in the original text. (6 points) On the night of August 8, 2008, Beijing was brightly lit. At the National Stadium, the opening ceremony of the Olympic Games is being held. I saw a beautiful picture of China through time and space. The picture scroll tells a profound and touching story of China, from which friends from all over the world can appreciate the elegant and refined oriental charm, understand the long-standing culture of China and feel the modern beauty of China. The melodious melody of the theme song "You and Me" haunts everyone's heart. Looking at the burning Olympic flame, who can be excited for peace! Answer: On the night of August 8, 2008, Beijing was brightly lit. The opening ceremony of the Olympic Games is being held in the National Stadium. The audience saw a beautiful picture of China through time and space. The picture scroll tells a profound and touching story of China, from which friends from all over the world can appreciate the elegant and refined oriental charm, understand the long-standing culture of China and feel the modern beauty of China. The melodious melody of the theme song "You and Me" haunts everyone's heart. Looking at the burning Olympic flame, who can not be excited about peace? Third, modify the sentence according to the prompt. There are six mistakes in the following paragraphs, please correct them in the original text. (6 points) Learning the text "Little Match Girl" reminds me of our life. How happy we are compared with the little girl! I must change my learning attitude. No matter what difficulties I encounter in my study, I will try my best to overcome them and strive for progress. Answer: After learning the text "Little Match Girl", I can't help but think of our life. How happy we are compared with that little girl! I must correct my learning attitude. No matter how difficult I encounter in my study, I will try my best to overcome it and strive for progress. There are five sentences in the following paragraph, and each sentence is wrong. Modify the original text. (5 points) In recent months, our city has vigorously carried out the activity of "Creating a Civilized City". After a period of hard work, people's quality has been generally improved. The environment around the city has also changed, the streets are cleaner, the roads are wider and flatter, and there are more trees and flowers. After the superior leaders visited our city, they all gave full affirmation. Today, the face of our city has really changed. A: In recent months, our city has vigorously carried out the activity of "Creating a Civilized City". After a period of hard work, people's consciousness has generally improved. The environment of the city has also changed, the streets are cleaner, the roads are wider and flatter, and there are more trees and flowers. After the superior leaders visited our city, they all gave full affirmation. Now, the face of our city is really brand new. Fifth, modify sick sentences. (7 points) We came to Sandiwu Lake at the foot of Nanshan with bread, biscuits, soda, Jianlibao and drinks. Just swimming in summer, the teacher said, "You should pay attention to safety when swimming." Both Xiaodong and Xiaohua like swimming very much. They have swam 100 meter breaststroke. The students cheered for them and their eyes were focused on them. As a result, he won. Answer: We went to the mountain lake at the foot of Nanshan with bread, biscuits, soda and Jianlibao. Summer is just swimming, and the teacher repeatedly stressed: "Swimming should pay attention to safety." Xiaodong and Xiaohua both like swimming very much. They took part in the 100 meter breaststroke competition. The students cheered for them and their eyes were focused on them. Xiaodong won as a result.