How to use materials and audio-visual means to represent past time and space

(a) The accumulation and use of textbook materials.

From elementary school to junior high school, we have learned dozens of language, politics, history, geography and other textbooks, which should become our composition material "natural granary". 2011 Shaoxing a candidate's composition "smile, to sing the ballad of life", borrowed Gorky's sea oats "" smile "" intention, please enjoy. Smile" intention, please enjoy:

...... What a resolute smile! A pair of sharp eyes on the gray head burns with passionate fire. The black beak breathed indomitability, and suddenly the corners of its mouth seemed to turn up slightly. Maybe it is blown by the sea breeze numb, maybe it is beaten by the waves tired, but I prefer to believe that this is the smile of the sea oats ......

The author of the resourcefulness of the textbook material to expand, Gorky's sea oats flying posture "processing" to the incomparable heroism, and from the anthropomorphism of the sea oats to the sea oats. The author wisely expanded the textbook material to "process" Gorky's flying posture of the sea oats to make it more heroic, and from the anthropomorphized "smile" to abstract "perseverance" as his spiritual pursuit, which is very appropriate.

(ii) Experience the accumulation and use of material.

Personalized experience is a valuable asset, the accumulation of experience rich inventory is a must for the selection of new material.

The use of this unique material on the test are:

1. personalized feelings extracted from the group life. For example, in 2012, Changchun essay question "to stay in the past into the flavor", a candidate from the life of the inventory quickly extracted from the boarding life of the bitter things, interesting things, happy things, played a song from their own experience, can not be "replicated" of the" symphony". The first is a "symphony".

2. carefully selected "things" as a clue, connecting pieces of life, interpretation of the main idea. For example, the 2012 Nantong essay question "so slowly grow up", a candidate carefully selected three items - "one year old clothes," "dance shoes when dancing The first is the "I'm not sure what I'm talking about," and the second is the "I'm not sure what I'm talking about," and the third is the "I'm not sure what I'm talking about.

3. From the life of the refinement of their own heart "love" as a clue, through time and space, connecting the scene. For example, in 2012, a candidate for the Tianjin City essay "to smile once", the article to "sadness" "stay sad" "excited happiness" "Smile forward" as the emotional vein, selected purple flowers, the old class lecture, the cicadas outside the window, smile in the past, the parting gift as emotional attachment, conceptualization of the text. See the fragment:

With June 25 approaching, my junior high school life, in a sense, is coming to an end.

Listening to the old class's final lecture, everyone was silent, as if they all wished to quietly remember what they might have to lose in the next second. Outside the window, the sun was shining brightly, and there was that distinctive summer chorus of cicadas. The large classroom seemed surprisingly quiet when the teacher stopped.

In this unbearable silence, I carefully revisited my memories of my junior year. Every day in the mountain of books in the sea of problems buried head struggle, and occasionally look up with the table look at each other a smile, there is always a warm feeling in the chest; every morning with dark circles under the eyes to greet each other, and sometimes pat each other's shoulders and say "do not be exhausted, the body is the capital of the revolution Oh", face will emerge happy smile! ...... those days as green as summer leaves, now looking back, will rise through the sunlight to see the leaf veins of the kind of excitement, the kind of happiness.

Standing under the tree full of purple flowers, watching the leaves fall, I remembered the passage in the classmate book: "When we go our separate ways one day in the future, we should remember each other. Because that's a memory that belongs to us, uniquely."

......

Smiling back, treasuring the memories; smiling forward, no more sorrow.

(C) The accumulation and use of famous material.

The use of famous material is mainly "abbreviation" (used in argumentative essay examples), "rewriting", "continue writing" and other forms. No matter which form, need to be with the characters in the original "connection", should be up to date, highlighting the flavor of the times. For example, in 2012, Qingdao essay questions to "self-reflection" as the topic of writing, a candidate to take the title "Reflection Hall", about the return of the scriptures after the three disciples of the old problems recur, the Tang Monk to build the "Reflection Hall" to restrain them, which led to the introduction of the "Reflection Hall". The story is about the return of the three disciples after the return of the scriptures, the Tang monk to build a "reflective temple" to restrain them, and then led to interesting and lively story. In the article, "laid off" "fans" "book signing" "national poverty-stricken counties" "belly dancing" "public bidding" "tofu-dreg project" "default on migrant workers' wages" and other new words used aptly

(d) The accumulation and use of celebrity material.

This includes the experience of celebrities, achievements, spirit, speech, poetry, etc., the use of such material to grasp three points:

1. Introduction of ancient material to have a new perspective. 2012 Tongren City essay question for "this is a kind of beauty", a candidate to the "goodbye for beauty" intention, with three subheadings to develop: "Wen Cheng into the tomato - farewell is not sad, is the colorful bridge of peace"; "Goujian left the country - the -The farewell is not sadness, it is the perseverance of the rise"; "Qu Yuan threw himself into the river - the farewell is not sadness, it is touching loyalty". The small author cited historical celebrities although people **** known, but into their own unique thinking, refreshing.

2. Fresh material from contemporary celebrities can be even more fascinating. 2012 Anshun City essay question is to "heart" as the topic of the essay, a candidate to "enjoy the psychological balance" as the topic of the essay, one of the sub-arguments are One of the sub-arguments is that "external balance is determined by internal balance, and the first 'enjoyment' should be internal balance", and the argument introduces the balance beam world champion Liu Xuan's question and answer to a reporter, who said: "There were successes in the past 16 years, but there were more failures. The biggest treasure I got is to learn how to balance the psychology after failure, only psychological balance, can balance on the balance beam." Relevant to the thesis, clever and witty.

3. The introduction of celebrity speech verse to be just right, the "modification" of the verse need to obey the theme of the need to reflect the personality. 2012 Lianyungang City, the essay question for the "road in front of the road or the road", a candidate to choose the argument is: the two Nobel Prizes, Curie, and the road is the road, the road is the road. Two Nobel Prizes Mrs. Curie success as a passing cloud, the gold medal to her young daughter as a toy, she said, "I want to let the child know that all this is not eternal. Such a famous sentence and the argument is highly suitable, persuasive. Another example is the 2012 Liupanshui City essay question for "along the way with you", a candidate will be accompanied by "you" for "spiritual food" - books, "I", "I", "I", "I", "I", "I", "I", "I", "I", "I", "I", "I". -Books, "I" is a "bookworm", the beginning of "'Lazy bastard, get up, it's 8 o'clock! Mom pushed me hard to wake me up. Last night the moon was bright and the stars were sparse, and I was tireless in my reading. I asked the person who pushed me, but he said he was a sloth. Do you know that reading is a lot of fun? I am not a sloth, but a bookworm.'" The author imitates Li Qingzhao's "Like a Dream" with a light and witty tone, and the image of a junior high school student who reads for fun pops up on the paper in the midst of self-mockery.

(E) The accumulation and use of hot material.

Waves of the times splash, and hot spots in society attract attention. The accumulation and use of hot material should do the following:

1. hot material and the topic of the relevance of the high, the entry point to the new. 2012 Zunyi City, the composition of the question for the "reach out my hand", a candidate to focus on the heroes of the pair of "pass" hand, three candidates, the "pass" hand, the "pass" hand, the "pass" hand, the "pass" hand, the "pass" hand, the "pass" hand, the "pass" hand, the "pass" hand. "The three subheadings are "Passing Warmth", "Passing Truth" and "Passing Care". Selected snowstorms, earthquakes and floods in the "reach out my hand" touching examples, although some of the wonderful but not much relevance to the examination of the degree of material dare to "bear the pain", so that the use of hot material closely linked to the topic, but also new ideas.

2. People have my new, the same see the difference, highlighting the personality. Lianyungang City, 2012 essay questions, for example, a candidate in the light of the "success will always stand behind the failure" of this subthesis, light up the new idea of the argument: "Once, the high hopes of the Spanish team in the stadium lost, the players downcast back to the motherland, once the plane will see the As soon as they stepped off the plane, they saw a banner from the enthusiastic fans - 'All this will pass' - which touched them immensely. A few years later, when they returned from abroad, they were still greeted by those enthusiastic fans, only the words on the banner had changed to 'All this will pass'. The wise fans inspired their idols in this way. Yes, everything will pass, whether it's a success or a failure, and when the dust clears, a new beginning awaits us." Worship of soccer stars in junior high school students, can choose "two banners, only change the word" as an argument is rare, which fully reflects the "people have my new" personalized hot material use of the role.

3. Reasonable imagination, change "*** hot" for "personalized hot". On the basis of the real events, to enter the story, the characters, anxious people anxious, people love love, worry about people's worries, pain people's pain, in short, you are the main character in the story. To this end, you can use a variety of means of expression, so that the characters "live" up, emotional "fire" up. This article away from "copy" and "clone", shock and readability is certainly better than others. 2012 Fuzhou, a candidate to migrant children school life as the subject of the essay "love, but also will love", the first quote from the children of migrant workers recited three sentences. show their plight of schooling - "Our campus is so small that it can't fit a saddle horse." "Our classrooms are dark, with only a few watts of light." "Our desks and chairs are old and squeaky." The author accordingly sincerely self-reflected, feeling guilty and heavy, planning to help activities ...... children of migrant workers continue to recite: "But our homework is neat and tidy, and our studies are not bad!" "Others compare me with my parents, I compare me with others tomorrow!" At this point, I was shocked, heart pounding - "material support is love, learning and promoting their spirit is the best love!" The use of such material to make the familiar material personalized, "*** hot" into "event details, the character of the true feelings of" the "personality hot".

4. play strengths, innovative forms, "alternative" ideas are wonderful. 2011 Guangdong Maoming text entitled "2011 spring, I really ____", in many candidates to "happy, Trouble" and other words to make up the question, a candidate ingenuity to fill in the "Za" word, to epistolary composition, the proposed title "a letter to the home of Ma Yun", the article is written to read Ma Yun's "alive and hard, far more important than the death of a naked donor" "do A strong woman inside" and other articles of experience, told the embarrassment of Ma Yun mistaken for a woman, expressed admiration for the spirit of Ma Yun. The small author of the innovative treatment of hot material, won the favor of the marking teacher.