Ask for correction of sick sentences

This sentence is wrong: improper word order.

Pay attention to whether there are "improper word order" and "improper collocation" when there are coordinate verbs in the text.

Example 1: The whole school discussed and listened to President Wang's report on education reform.

Example 2: The students watched and listened to the brave hero's report with reverence.

Analysis: It is illogical to "discuss" and then "listen" in the sentence 1, which belongs to improper word order. It should be changed to "listen and discuss". In the coordinate phrase "look and listen", "listen" can be collocated with "report", but "look" and "listen" can't be collocated, and the sentence is improperly collocated. Delete "Gaze at and".

The words "inherit" and "carry forward" have a sequential order, so we should inherit first and then carry forward.

We should inherit and carry forward the spirit of sincere unity and pioneering spirit of Jiaxing people.

You can't delete "and inheritance" because it greatly changes the meaning of the original sentence.

The principle of correcting sick sentences is "more changes, less changes". Is to be as consistent as possible with the original sentence, with smaller changes.

Supplement: Can't "inheritance" and "spirit" match?

"Inherit and carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng." Right?