A composition We live in the era of "hot water".

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Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye.

but ...

I have been to some places in Jiangsu. If you divide Jiangsu into three parts: southern Jiangsu, central Jiangsu and northern Jiangsu, you will find that from south to north, the green is getting stronger and stronger. In southern Jiangsu, you look on both sides of the carriage, building after building, village after village, development zone after development zone, and what you see are several fields and green. There are many greens in central Jiangsu, but in northern Jiangsu, it is really a green world. There seem to be a lot fewer people here. There are no farmhouses in many places. Cauliflower, barley wave and Italian poplar jump into your field of vision. Green is in pieces, and green is at the top of the sky. The sky and water are also greener and bluer. This is really a green world. The embellishment of golden cauliflower adds a richness, which is called "vibrant and pleasing to the eye". But when it comes to economic development, it goes without saying that it is not directly proportional to the degree of green for the time being.

Zoom in a little more, and I can occasionally see a bamboo house in that high mountain and dense forest. Smoke rises and burns straw branches, and the "carbon emission" is extremely low. People undoubtedly live a "green life", but what about their situation? Narrow my horizon, I live in Xinjiekou area, where there are many tall buildings and green occasionally stands, but it is a famous commercial center in China and even the world, and the great Dr. Sun Yat-sen seems to like it here. Recently, the bronze statue of Dr. Sun Yat-sen returned to Xinjiekou Square. The bronze statue is ignorant and at the mercy of others, but at least it is rarely green and has not desecrated Mr. Zhongshan!

Some people will say, aren't developed countries also green homes? It's true. I haven't been to Europe and America, but I have been to Australia and New Zealand, where the sky is really green. Even better, there are rainbows in the sky on the boundless grass, which is rare here. The ecology there is really great. But all this is not difficult to understand: they are few, and the population density per square kilometer is only a few tenths of ours. If the population density is similar, I'm afraid there won't be so many green spaces, and grasslands will definitely become grain fields and residential areas!

I'm not against green life or "harmony between man and nature", but don't just emphasize green and ignore development, which is the last word. First of all, development sometimes destroys some green, which is inevitable. If green gives in, it will give in a little. Second, green itself requires development. It is necessary to scientifically protect and change green, or improve the quality of green although there is a little less green. Green is not the darling of nature. It is said that Populus davidiana in northern Jiangsu is also an introduced tree species, which is a "development". Third, we must resolutely oppose "pseudo-green". I have indeed seen a straight mountain, full of thick green, but the wind blows and the branches and leaves do not shake. It turns out that green is poured on it. In food and other aspects, we should guard against the false name of "green" and harm others. In a word, scientific development is the first, everything is long-term, and the green issue should be included in the development issue. Some westerners try to force you to reduce the "carbon emissions" of developing countries to what extent, in fact, they are trying to limit your development. Fortunately, we have always been vigilant.

Walking on the expressway in northern Jiangsu, I sometimes think that this road seems to have little traffic, and it is worthwhile to build a high-speed highway on an area. But another thought, "To get rich, build roads first", lose a little green and build roads extending in all directions, just for the sake of great development. Northern Jiangsu has a bright future. Divide Jiangsu into three parts: southern Jiangsu, central Jiangsu and northern Jiangsu. I am not from Su Beiren, nor from southern Jiangsu, but from central Jiangsu. I am impartial. I wish all parts of southern Jiangsu, central Jiangsu and northern Jiangsu.

Score: 70 (full score 100)

This commentary does the opposite, discussing "green life" with the relationship between ecology and development. It has a strategic vision and hits the nail on the head. It is brilliant to "paint" meditation and anxiety with concrete feelings and feelings, and bring people into the author's thinking. In the dilemma between ecology and development, the article is biased towards "development", but strives for "moderation". If you write for college entrance examination, there is no doubt that you are the best.

2. Wang Kuili (Chinese teacher of Jinling Middle School, 1977 college entrance examination, admitted to Yangzhou Normal University)

After 30 years of reform and opening up, almost all the people in the country have benefited. Television, black and white for color; Communicate, write letters and exchange emails; Calling, the mobile phone changed to 3 G, but after 30 years of teaching reform, students benefited little. The schoolbag is still so heavy, even heavier; There are so many papers, even more; The topic is still so difficult, even more difficult. Students still live in "hot water" like their parents when they were students. I can't help asking: When will our children have a green student life?

The so-called "green student life" is a life that conforms to the law of students' physical and mental development, a life that is conducive to students' success, a life that is conducive to students' sustainable development, and, in a sense, a life that is conducive to the sustainable development of our nation. This kind of student life, it should not just shuttle between various remedial classes with parents' unfulfilled dreams since childhood, nor should it just accept the exam-oriented education around the exam, nor should it just do all kinds of papers, and finally decide a lifetime with one paper, because it is difficult to cultivate a new generation of people who are physically and mentally healthy, creative and have Nobel Prize masters. "Green student life" should take into account students' interests and hobbies, students' diversified development needs and students' relaxed growth space. It should be lively, colorful and full of vitality. In a word, it should be "green". Instead of the present situation, teachers and students have been thinking about the entrance examination papers since grade and are fighting for the future papers. Gradually, the edges and corners of the students are gone, the spirit is gone, and the gas field is gone. It is said that students are the future of the nation. Please give them a "green student life"!

People say that the United States and other western countries are advanced and envy their prosperity and development. But few people really study and learn other people's advanced education and teaching ideas. In recent years, although some people with lofty ideals have introduced some new ideas and new education and teaching models, these new things do not seem to be used to it after entering China, and soon they have "China characteristics". A few years ago, we vigorously engaged in "quality education" for a while, but in the end we failed; In recent years, new curriculum standards are being implemented. I really hope that the new curriculum standard will never change its form. I really hope it can really reduce students' heavy academic burden, give children a "green student life", give students a green space for free development, and let them grow up healthily and study happily. Our children are really suffering! Don't you find that some students' glasses are "increasing day by day" because they study too long? Have you found that some students are depressed and autistic because of psychological barriers? Don't you see that some students end their youth early because of too much pressure?

Of course, giving students a green study life is not only a matter for educators, but also a matter for the whole society and the whole country. Our people should understand that not every child can win the future Nobel Prize through hard work, and society needs more than just Nobel Prize winners. Talents should be diverse, and never use a mold to demand and cultivate our ever-changing children.

In a word, as a person who is over 500 years old, I really earnestly hope that our students' lives will be less "gray" and more "green" as soon as possible. I really hope that our education can develop as fast as GDP. I really earnestly hope that our children will have both ordinary soldiers with lush green grass and Einstein-style generous families like towering trees in the future. Great people should be born from great nations.

Score: 67 points

The commentary adds the definition of "green life" to "students" and becomes the thinking of "ecological education", which is a good way to concretize this somewhat vague topic. When it comes to student life, the author starts with the topic of "green". Everything is right, but it doesn't seem to hit the point.

3. Tongzhou Senior High School in Jiangsu Province, Wang Xinmin (1982 took the college entrance examination and was admitted to Nanjing Normal University)

I can't tell what kind of feeling guides me, and I don't know what kind of inspiration I have. As long as I mention "green", I get excited. Green leaves, green tea, green Yuan Ye ... Yes, there are poetic flowers in the green world.

Often, I will never forget the green: I will fall asleep under the window climbing the green vine, sleeping heavily and sweetly; In the banquet full of green, the mouth and stomach become fragrant and clear ... not only that, I always feel that people can't lack green.

Dear students, is your in a good mood in such a special season as Senior Three? Anxiety, irritability, depression, paranoia ... Whenever your expression comes into my sight, the sunshine in my heart will naturally lose its brightness and warmth.

I also hope that the students who are about to enter the third year of high school can take better care of themselves and let their hearts live in green forever.

For senior three, there must be a suitable goal. The goal is a bright lamp, which can light up the confusion of the sea and light up the hope of life. However, the goal of expansion is like the scorching sun, which makes travelers thirsty and the journey difficult. In fact, choosing Tsinghua Peking University is similar to choosing a school and major that suits you. In the process of learning, faced with a mountain of pressure, such as homework, you may be embarrassed, anxious and irritable one after another because you don't copy the materials solidly from Guangxiang Chinese blog. At this time, you can consider: lighten the burden and find a shortcut. Even, you can have a whim: I will go if the mountain doesn't come. Also, are you too concerned about the results of the exam? In fact, if we think that "the end of the flower is withering and the end of the road is despair", we have reason to think that "arrival is not so important and the end is not so beautiful". The important thing is that we can "be contented" because "fishing is not as good as fishing".

Senior three, the teacher's expectations of us must be better than before. Their nagging, even blame, may become our troubles. If we can treat them as apples when we are hungry and cotton-padded clothes when we are cold, then life will blossom poetically, the estrangement and contradiction with teachers will stop, and learning will become pleasant. Philosophers have said that the green hills after the rain are the conscience washed by tears. The college entrance examination sprint, during which the competition is indescribable, tense and even cruel. However, this reality cannot be a proof of damaging the friendship of classmates. We should give more flowers and applause to our opponents. If we are blind, we should learn to light a lamp, not for others, but for ourselves. Harmonious interpersonal relationship, far away from material things and escaping from the world of mortals, calls on us to stick to a quiet heart: roots are silent and branches will not flourish; Their own simplicity can be enriched.

Through these and other necessary efforts, I think I will be able to live in a green spring!

Score: 60 points

Commenting on the green of the soul is naturally the meaning of "green life". The author gives inspirational and chicken soup-like guidance to the life and feelings of senior three students from the lyric point of view, which can be integrated into the true feelings. But without the in-depth discovery of the soul, lyricism seems erratic and irrelevant.

4. Ding Youcun (1993 took the college entrance examination and was admitted to the Chinese Department of Suzhou University)

From today on, be a green person.

This is not an inscription for moaning without illness, nor is it a public service advertisement spliced by the environmental protection department when it is idle. This is an authentic duet of sadness and joy that took place in our community.

The community has not been built for a long time. I still clearly remember every detail of the days when I came here with a sales center brochure in my hand. The words "the aristocratic house in the green center" have been emitting a light that is out of proportion to the area in the brochure. While other property buyers were chattering with their unique shrewdness, I decided to buy one of the communities that promised me to enjoy the green life in the city in the future.

High housing prices make me full of yearning for a green life in the future. In the landscape forest vagina of the community, the sales girl said emotionally and enthusiastically, "Do you see this row of small trees?" They are tree species that we introduced from abroad, and they will make you linger in your future life. "

I hope so. I only know that the saplings have not grown up. On the contrary, in the special heat of the city without any shelter, the saplings disappeared in the silent night, leaving only imperceptible pits in the flower beds on the landscape road. In the past, the overgrown green space has also become the second-phase housing for residential developers. Originally, life could go on like this, and the attractive green color could disappear peacefully, but this calm was broken by the vigorous green change not long ago.

In response to the call of globalization for a low-carbon life, the community sent a "green life proposal" to every owner at the speed that a sow who had never enjoyed the fun of digging a hole in the enclosure ran to the sun. Similarly, I am still moved by the bright Chinese characters on this proposal, "From today on, be a person with a green life!" "The specific steps are as follows: 1. Low-carbon life, limited use of points, each household shall not exceed X degrees, and relevant fees shall be charged per degree 10 yuan. 2. It is recommended to use a battery car or bicycle when traveling, and the car will be charged for entering the community. 3. Garbage should be classified and recycled. If it is not classified, 20 yuan will be fined every time. ...

The prelude of green life in the community was thus opened. This rule is nothing to us good people who let nature take its course. Save it, please. What's more, the first half of these regulations are for our city, our environment and our life. Any complaints?

Therefore, our community has responded to the call of green life and proved a beautiful green life with personal practice according to the provisions of 1234 and 2234. Neighbor Xiao Zhang's work unit is in the south of the city, but here is the north of the city. In order to save money, Xiao Zhang goes out early and returns late by bus. As soon as he sits, he goes around the city once, once back and forth, he goes around the city twice. I'm not completely clear about the concept of garbage classification, and I don't know where to put the garbage that is neither waste paper nor glass. Therefore, if you drive leisurely past the gate of our community every day, you will definitely find a person carrying five or six garbage bags of different colors in his green life.

At this time, Xiao Zhang came back panting. He saw me holding so many bags and asked, "Hey, are you green?"

"Ah, from tomorrow!"

Score: 62 points

The comments are to the point. There are feelings, narratives, lyricism, and an "ironic" ending ... but because of this, the quality of the article is affected.

5. Yang (in 2007, he was admitted to the journalism department of Nanjing Normal University with a perfect composition "Thinking about the sky", and now he is a college student reporter of Yangzi Evening News)

There was a sudden silence at the front desk, and the flute was slowly lifted by the pipa. My heart suddenly shook, and the notes washed my restless heart like running water. Flute, flute, sleeves, water mill cavity, a day's hard work and a lifetime of troubles suddenly don't know where to go. There are really some plays like life, and life is like a play. On the stage, Miss Arrow called her "brother", but I was a little at a loss under the stage. The grass is full of heart, and this fold of "Send to Beijing" is full of sorrow and sorrow. In the sound of gongs and drums, the curtain was pulled and called, and everyone on and off the stage woke up.

This is in Lanyuan-a paradise where people can forget customs. The courtyard has white walls and tiles, and the ancient style still exists. A pomegranate in the southeast corner of the yard is full of burning red flowers and green grass, which is very beautiful. In the rehearsal hall, pythons, recliners and pleats exude ancient fragrance. Sunlight penetrates through the cracks in the clothes and pulls out old light and shadow on the concrete floor. As long as you cross that thick threshold, your life seems to have returned to 600 years ago. Every weekend, the special performance of the passbook drama in Lanyuan became the most lively activity in the ancient capital of the Six Dynasties. People want to find their own spiritual transit point in their busy lives, so Kunqu opera, as the originator of traditional culture, has become the best object of appeal. Lanyuan's performance is a standard unplugged version, and the stage accompaniment is on the right side of the stage, which makes people feel fresh and green. Cars and horses have been noisy for a week, and people are looking for the purest sustenance of their hearts in the flute of Orchid Garden.

It has been three years since I went to the theatre, and it has become my living habit to go to Tiangong on Saturday. A little warmth can be found around the adjacent seats every week: the boss of a private enterprise, busy with work, finally trapped and overcame his elegant heart and fell asleep by leaning back; Ancient literature experts who study China's traditional operas are still banging on the board, keeping pace with Dan Wen on the stage; Foreigners who are curious about China's traditional culture also came to this composition from Guangxiang Forum, holding coke tablets in their hands and flashing big eyes of joy at the subtitles on both sides of the stage. Regardless of race and color, Kunqu opera is their soul mate in life, and they find their own beauty and pleasure in the music of Love Blowing in the Courtyard.

At the curtain call, I met the subtitle translator Liu again. The Irish girl with a long nose and big eyes pushed her way through the crowd, gave up her luxurious life in China and came to Kunming, where she stayed for several years. Every day, I face operas and lyrics that are boring to China people. I translate them into faithful and elegant fluent English. All this makes Qin Kai feel unprecedented challenges and novelty. "I like the traditional culture of China," Qin Kai said in fluent Chinese. "Returning to the traditional way of life makes me feel happier than ever."

I didn't quite understand this sentence of Qin Kai. It was not until one day that I saw Ruth, a veteran Quyou, holding her little grandson across the heavy threshold of "Jiangning Fu Xue" that I suddenly realized that the traditional "unplugged" lifestyle had become a brand-new concept of green life, which was imperceptibly infiltrating into babbling children and gaining young vitality day by day.

The play that night was A Dream of Scared Dreams. The young man's performance on the stage is quite impressive. When the play came out, the busy streets made me feel like a lifetime ago. Mixed among boys and girls, squeezed into the subway station and re-entered a colorful life. Perhaps this is the true meaning of life: colorful intertwined, but the green "unplugged" orchid garden is the most indispensable part.

Score: 70 (full score 100)

It is the "wit" of this article that comments feel the most profound things from their own lives and find the content that can "cut into" the topic. To the point, not to the point, spirit!