Write an essay on the incident between yourself and your parents: the waves of the heart

Author/Shandong Zuoxuan

Life is like a boat drifting in the sea, even if even the smallest wave will stir up waves, in my voyage, there was once so a crystal wave rattling the strings of my heart, playing a piece of music of love.

I was a child of the countryside, living conditions were not rich. In my memory, my father went to work every day before dawn, three-quarters of the year to plow the acres of thin land, to the winter to go out to work. This is not, just after the cotton harvest old man and to go, I grabbed the old man's luggage, go to the station to see him off. Along the way, we do not talk much, quietly, it seems that the whole world has stood still, at this time I really hope that time stops here, I can stay a while more with the old man. I walked in front of, Pops in the back, I look back at him, he smoked a cigarette, spitting a mouth full of fog, his face a little fuzzy, but I can still see that it is a thin, weathered face, he was wrapped in an overcoat, and his thin body is very disproportionate to him, he just lowered his head and walked silently. I thought about a lot of things along the way, I thought about how he is to this family to pay, how to pay me, his calloused and rough hands prove everything, think of these, my tears out of the indisputable.

Unconsciously, we arrived at the station, I watched my old man across the highway, I watched my father from this side, as if we were separated by thousands of mountains and thousands of water, two "go back, it's cold, I'll be back soon'." Father looked at me and said, I turned back and left, I was afraid of my father to see me in tears and sad, but I immediately regretted it, why not more to accompany pops it, I am how much I like the feeling of his wide palms touching me, how much I like the feeling that he is at home, he is at home, I have a dependence on the study of the bitter and tired are not afraid of, because of pops of encouragement, support, my results are far ahead of the game. Waiting for me to realize these, look back, pops has been sitting on the car, ( thesis sample ) I long watched the far away train, can no longer control, tears big big out.

On the way back, my heart can not be calm for a long time, I am full of old dad, because I know that my love for old dad is any event Xi can not change, I silently look forward to: the end of the year and old dad meet!

Reviews

The language is simple. The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm very happy with the way I'm feeling. This is I took the students on Zhu Ziqing's "back" after an exercise, after the text, the students were y moved by the text of the father and son, take this opportunity, I asked them to take up the pen to write down their own and their parents of the matter of questioning to learn the writing style of the text. The young author of this exercise is very good to draw on the writing style of "back": simple language, to feel people. The father in the article hardly speaks, but the image of the father leaves a deep impression on the reader through the description of appearance and action. The article uses psychological description to describe my father's love for me in a delicate and touching way, which also y touches the reader.

(Instructor Dong Li Diagnosis)