Traditional Culture Encyclopedia - Traditional customs - The following passage has several faults, please revise it as required. (4 marks) ①The origin and development of traditional festivals is a gradual, subtle and complete process.
The following passage has several faults, please revise it as required. (4 marks) ①The origin and development of traditional festivals is a gradual, subtle and complete process.
(1) (1) (1) sentence components are missing, should be added after the "perfect" "process" (1 points) (2) (2) (2) sentence sentence sentence order does not make sense, should be supplemented, absorbed _ should be replaced by absorption, supplemented (1 points) (3) (3) (3) (3) sentence repetitive and cumbersome, should be deleted "enjoyable" (1 point) (4) (4) (4) sentence collocation is not appropriate, should be changed from rich cultural heritage to deep cultural heritage 1 point) |
- Previous article:Korean dice game
- Next article:What are the unique folk houses in the world?
- Related articles
- What are the cooking methods of cold dish oil?
- What is the Belarusian specialty?
- The more hypocritical a person is, the more he likes to hang these 3 "mantras" on his lips!
- How many ways does the operating system boot and load? What are their characteristics?
- The Historical Evolution of Hainan Provincial Archives
- Is it right that the discipline of engineering contains three categories of basic engineering emerging engineering cross engineering?
- Which platform is the best for hotel transfer?
- Wedding Idioms Game
- What about the seafood market in Sanya, Hainan?
- Ancient village prose with water rhyme style