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How to write Qujing's composition about Jiulong Waterfall?

One day in the summer vacation, my parents and I went to the Kowloon Waterfall, which is surrounded by mountains and waters and full of feelings.

The warm sunshine is with me. Along the way, the birds sang for me, the breeze kissed my cheek, and I exchanged eyes with the trees. Gradually, we arrived. After buying tickets, we started our trip to Kowloon Waterfall.

I walked into a big mountain and walked along a winding cement mountain road. I saw the rolling mountains and lush flowers and trees around me, and I could smell the fragrance of nature. If you walk in, you will first see a clear stream flowing out of the stone stream.

Further inside, you will see a waterfall flying down a mountain more than 20 meters high. Some of these waterfalls are trickling, some are running down, some are dancing like jade belts, and some are running down like the Milky Way. The sound of the waterfall is deafening, like a gust of wind blowing through a dense forest, and like rolling waves lapping against the rocks on the shore. I stood in front of the waterfall as if I were in a water world.

There are also many tourists standing in front of the waterfall, and some stop to watch; Some take pictures as a souvenir; Others splashed water in the stream under the waterfall and burst into laughter. I couldn't help jumping into the stream and playing. I also asked my father to take a photo as a souvenir.

After playing for a long time, we should go home. I reluctantly waved goodbye to these beautiful waterfalls, bringing back a good mood and good memories.

Writing guidance: how to use good appearance description!

Narrative writing, which focuses on remembering people, focuses on narrating and describing the characters, and on expressing the characters' character by portraying them, so that readers can understand the ideological quality of the characters and have a clear attitude and feelings towards them. How to portray characters? Then we should comprehensively use narrative description, discussion, lyricism and other expressions, combine with each other and use them alternately. (www.t262.com) The following is how to make good use of a commonly used description method-appearance description.

Appearance description is also called portrait description. Generally refers to the description of a character's appearance, clothes, posture and expression. When we meet a stranger, we often pay attention to this person's appearance first, and then infer his thoughts and character from his appearance. Appearance description should proceed from the needs of characters' personality and central idea, grasp the appearance characteristics and age characteristics of characters, and describe them selectively and emphatically. Only by writing accurately and concretely can the characters be vividly portrayed and the author's attitude be clearly expressed. There are two methods of appearance description: static description and dynamic description.

Judging from the manuscripts we received, there are many small authors who describe small animals. The description of the shape of small animals should also be written selectively and emphatically according to the characteristics of small animals themselves and the need to express the central idea.

It should be noted that "stereotype" in appearance description should be prevented. Don't write about the teacher with glasses on the bridge of the nose, write about the girl with watery eyes. Appearance description must grasp the characteristics of the object of description and proceed from the purpose of expressing the central idea.