My hobby is drawing English compositions (more than five sentences).

I like painting very much, and I can express my feelings through a brush. Painting can also cultivate self-cultivation, and you can often go to the suburbs to sketch, experience the changes of the four seasons, and feel the wealth brought by nature.

I like painting, and you can express your feelings with a brush. Painting can also cultivate self-cultivation, and we can often go to the suburbs to paint, experience the changes of the four seasons, and experience the wealth that nature has given us.

Is this ok?