Vine Illustration —— How to explain the illustration in Xiaoshitang story?

Appreciation of illustration works This is a very excellent work. On the whole, the color matching is reasonable, with strong visual impact, but not greasy. Compared with the strong Rayna Sue, green helps to reduce the impact on the eyes. This proves that the author has a good sense of color and control ability. The bracket is decorated with green vines, yellow and green, which echoes the main object above. However, the stent is slightly monotonous and somewhat "distracting". It is suggested to use other painting pigments to make changes to reduce visual impact; In addition, the vine decoration is too fine, so it can be decorated more. The stones and other things below are too scattered, giving people a messy feeling. You can add some content to the main part above, otherwise those branches will appear messy. You can modify them according to your personal needs. I wish you success in explaining the illustrations in the story of Xiaoshitang. The author's bleak behavior sets off his bleak feelings. Many teachers, especially those who have seen the illustrations in the 2004 and 2005 editions, want to know the reasons for the frequent changes of illustrations after the new illustrations appeared in the first volume of Little Stone Pond in the autumn of 2007. I also think that if the story can be known to everyone, it may play a role in attracting jade. This article is specially written for readers. From June 5438 to October 2005 10, the grade preparation group asked me to have a teaching and research class. I chose Liu Zongyuan's "A Story of the Pond", and I finished reading one lesson. To tell the truth, I have taught this article seven or eight times. I can be handy, the content words are clear, the text translation is smooth, and the author's thoughts and feelings are clear, thus completing the teaching task. However, the Chinese curriculum standard says that "we should creatively understand and use teaching materials, actively develop curriculum resources and flexibly use various teaching strategies to guide students to learn to learn in practice." So, how to teach this course well according to the new curriculum standard? Holding the textbook, I pondered it over and over again. There are illustrations in the article, and I want to prepare lessons from here. Looking at the illustrations in the textbook, I was lost in thought: in that picture, nearly four-fifths of the bamboo forests are heading north, with bare stones behind them. No, it doesn't match the text. At this time, my interest came. I made a stick figure according to the content of the text: the center of the picture is a pool, there are fish swimming around in the clear water, and there are bamboo forests around it. People sitting by the pool are bored. I think the meaning of such pictures and words is the same. So, I drew up the structure of this teaching and research course: familiar with the text, "appreciating" illustrations, teachers and students translating together, and collectively creating illustrations. In my opinion, familiarity with textbooks is the foundation, on the one hand, it is the need of Chinese teaching, on the other hand, it is also the premise of the following links; The purpose of "appreciation" is to understand the original picture and seek "standing" in "breaking"; The purpose of translating and sorting out the text is to understand the meaning of the text and create new illustrations collectively, which should integrate the general content of the text. When the teaching and research class enters the second stage, the classroom atmosphere is very active: Teacher: What do you see from this illustration? Health: Mizhu! Teacher: Yes, there is a word in the text called-Health: Bamboo! Teacher: That's right. What's that man doing? Health: Walk! Look at the distance! Teacher: His direction is-health:-to-north-Teacher: Which sentence in the text matches? The classroom suddenly became quiet. Suddenly a student stood up and said) Student:-The text said "Wangchi Southwest", and his direction was wrong; -the text is "sitting on the pool", standing wrong; -The main body of Little Stone Pond should be "pond", not bamboo; The absence of "fish" in the picture is a big defect. "Fish" and "Yi" are homophonic, and writing about fish is a writer's pleasure. People who may paint don't understand the author's mood at that time; The atmosphere of appreciation is relaxed and pleasant, and the classroom is full of criticism of the illustrations in the textbook. "It seems that everyone has a lot of complaints about this illustration. Well, I think we can create a new painting by teaching the content of the text, understanding the main idea of the article. " The classroom soon quieted down and the cheerful students were full of curiosity. Compared with the notes, after the students translated and revised them themselves, I told the writing background, highlighting the author's mood of "happiness with sadness" at that time. Next, according to the meaning of the text, while reading and understanding the text, we create stick figures on the blackboard: "Cutting bamboo to take the road"-dense bamboo forests, traces of cutting bamboo, and corridors where people can leave; "See Younger, water quiet and quiet. The whole stone is the bottom "-a small stone pool, and the murals of the underwater pool show that the water is very clear; Fish "standing still" and "m far away"-draw the fish's (happiness) and silence (meditation); "Fighting against snakes" and "canine teeth are different from each other"-the shore potential where streams flow and rocks meet; "Looking at the southwest of the pool" and "sitting on the pool"-Liu Zongyuan sat by the pool in the south, thinking or longing; "Green trees are lush, twisted and swaying" and "Bamboo trees are surrounded on all sides"-many bamboos and trees are used as the background of figure painting. The landscape painting of this figure on the blackboard is named "freezing cold, quiet and quiet" in the language of the text. When the bell rang, I smiled and said to my classmates, "What a beautiful picture! Let's move it into the textbook together! " "In the warm applause, teachers and classmates are as excited as I am. Teaching and research activities fully affirmed my thinking and innovative spirit in class. Everyone thinks that this is a beneficial attempt to boldly implement the new curriculum reform, and I hope that the sentence "Illustrations in teaching materials should be of quality" put forward in class can be realized. How to improve the stick figure before it can enter the teaching material? I want to understand and appreciate Liu Zongyuan's articles, which is the key to creating illustrations. So, I spent nearly a month looking for information and further studying the content of the text. I locked in Liu Zongyuan's articles "Movement" and "Happiness and Sadness". Based on this, I wrote "Appreciation of Xiaoshitang and Revision of Illustrations of Soviet Education Edition". At this time, my sister Sun went home. She was a reporter from Jiangsu People's Broadcasting Station. She has extensive contacts with painters and painters in Nanjing. I told her that I wanted to find a painter who was good at figure painting to finish it. She happily remembered Mr. Deshun Wang, a famous figure painter who painted Ma Tiantu for Yang Liwei not long ago. At the end of February 2005, she gave him my articles and sketches. On May 25th, 2006, according to my intention, I got Mr. Deshun Wang's painting. On the same day, I sent the Soviet version of Appreciation and Illustration of Xiaoshitang Story and Illustration of Xiaoshitang Story (attached) to Mr. Hong, the editor-in-chief of the textbook. On June 5th, Mr. Hong called in person, highly praised my article and the illustrations sent to me, and told me that "the illustrations have been sent to Jiangsu Education Publishing House and used in the textbooks in the second half of the year". Later, it was reported that since textbooks were already in Fu Zi in the second half of the year, "they must be used next year". At that time, they gave me relevant certificates: "It proved that the article" Appreciation of Xiaoshitang and Revision of Illustrations in Soviet Education Edition "written by Comrade Sun Yuexing was very good, and we decided to use illustrations created according to the meaning of this article. This is to certify that. In June, 2006, Jiangsu Middle School Chinese Textbook Compilation Group (official seal) published my appreciation of Xiaoshitang and the revision of illustrations in Jiangsu Education Edition in the ninth edition of China Loose-leaf Selected Works in 2006. It took nearly two years from finding the problem to solving it perfectly. It is naturally a happy event that an illustration that conforms to the moral of A Story of a Pond has finally entered the middle school Chinese textbook through our efforts. I want to thank Mr. Deshun Wang for realizing my wish, my colleagues for their encouragement, my relatives and friends for their support and my students for their cooperation. I think this brilliant teaching flower embodies our teaching philosophy of new curriculum reform and is the crystallization of our win-win cooperation. She will certainly inspire us to achieve more fruitful results. Attached is the appreciation and illustration revision of Little Stone Pond published by China Loose-leaf Selected Works in the ninth issue in 2006. Appreciation of Story of Little Stone Pond and Correction of Illustrations in Soviet Education Edition Sun Yuexing's Story of Little Stone Pond is a "meditation picture", which is fixed on the edge of a bamboo pond. The author silently watches and observes, and people and fish set each other off. In fact, it is a clear cup of Kuding tea, with the fragrance in the front and the taste in the back. Although Liu Zongyuan is not as sad and resentful as Qu Zi Xing Yin, his loneliness and resentment are in the same strain. His life is bumpy and his career is frustrated. He wants to get rid of it but he can't get rid of it. When writing "Little Stone Pond", he was already a disgraced official, a frustrated scholar and "far away from the rivers and lakes". Although he is also "thinking of you", he is still deposed and lonely. Therefore, travel around the mountains, express leisure, comfort your heart, show elegance, and be comfortable for the time being. This is his landscape complex, which is expressed in the article, but it is a touch of sadness. You see, the inaccessible place "Cutting Bamboo to Take the Road" shows the strong interest of tourists. " Through the bamboo, I can smell the sound of water, like singing "Ring", but I didn't see the sound of pool shadow rubbing first, so I wrote it sweetly, clearly and vividly. "Walk 120 steps to the west", "There are hundreds of fish in the pond", stroll through the small pond and count the fish; For jade, for islands, for rocks ",observe four shapes; Green trees are lush and vines are full of branches ",meditating on the four bodies; The sun shines through and shadows on the stone ",witnessing the vivid shadow of the fish; The small fish in the pond are vivid, or "just stand still", or "M goes and disappears", or "swims and swings". It is also evident that the stream and its shore are "competing for snakes" and "the dog's teeth are different". Here, the author pondered a relatively static plane and outlined it with meticulous brushwork, making it wonderful, free and easy, beautiful and unforgettable. "Surrounded by bamboo forests, there is no one around." The author took a photo of himself in Lintan, alone. There is no sound, no birds chirping, no insects chirping, but the taste of the stream is Ding Dong. Occasionally, the wind comes and the leaves move, which means the fish swim together, adding infinite silence and loneliness. The mountain is still, the pool is still, and people are still. However, is the heart still? On the edge of Xiaoshitang, the author heard the sound of running water for the first time. It sounded like it was ringing, and it was really "music". When I saw the fish in the pond so cute, I thought they were "having fun with the swimmers". But Xiaoshitang, after all, is too quiet and clear. It is like a mirror with subtle insights, which not only arouses the author's leisure, but also arouses the author's coldness and sadness, forming an inextricable cycle. It is extremely difficult to reconcile the author's contradictory mentality of eating, drinking, having fun and never forgetting anything. In fact, when he wrote about the movement of fish, he wrote about the quiet environment; Writing fish music is to set off the poet's melancholy. This is a vivid portrayal of his mood at that time. Liu Zongyuan was persecuted for participating in Wang's political reform and was exiled to Yongzhou, lonely and miserable. He does what he gives and goes far, wandering in the mountains and rivers, just to dispel the resentment and depression in his heart. But the more I want to send him away, the stronger the feeling, so he looks at the scenery with emotion and expresses his feelings through the scenery. A tree, a bamboo, a spring and a stone all seem to have specific personalities. On the contrary, the author's depressed mood is helpful to observe things, and he finds infinite interest in things in silence, thus generating interest in silence. As a result, after remembering the pool of "sadness and cold, sadness and silence", the author finally can't help it: "It's too clear to live long, but remember to walk away", showing a detached desire. The most striking feature of this paper is the meticulous description of the scenery, the combination of motion and static, the timely and implicit expression of emotions, and the need for special attention when reading and appreciating. In view of the above understanding, I drew a sketch on the blackboard with my students, which deepened their understanding of the content of the article. At the same time, I would also like to make the following comments on the illustrations in the first volume of 8th grade published by Soviet Education Edition (4th edition, June 2005): 1. The article is entitled "The Story of Little Stone Pond", and the main body of the illustration should be "Little Stone Pond". In the five sections of the full text, the content of writing about the pool accounts for three sections, so the illustrations should not be large bamboo forests, but landscape paintings centered on the pool. At least hint at the stone beach. 2. "Cutting bamboo to take the road" means that the bamboo forest is dense and there is no way to go. Inverting bamboo can be looming, and it is by no means a smooth road after people in the picture. 3. "Green trees and green vines" and "surrounded by bamboo forests" below should form a scene of Zhong Zhulin alternating with each other and vines, not just tall and straight bamboo roots. There should be broad-leaved trees in the bamboo forest, not just one. They grow around Xiaoshitang, are implicated by vines, and get along very well. Only in this way can they be "covered and staggered". 4. "Looking southwest of the pool, you can see the snake." Write the shape of the southwest stream outside Yuanwangtan. "Dogs have different teeth" means writing about the shore. From the southwest, it is conceivable that the author was in the "first quadrant" at that time. There is "sitting by the pool" below, which can be inferred that the author is meditating, which coincides with his state of mind of "freezing cold, sadness and tranquility". In the illustration, the author stands there. According to the geographical direction, he is heading northeast, facing a bamboo forest! 5. "The whole stone is the bottom, near the shore, and the bottom of the stone rolls out." This sentence means that the pool is a stone and the clear foundation of the pool water. It is enough to show that the pool wall in the painting is rock. "There are hundreds of fish in the pond" is a vivid description of the fish in the pond. Reflected in the painting or the static scenery where the fish stayed, or suddenly disappeared. In short, the illustration of Xiaoshitang should be a landscape painting with Xiaoshitang and bamboo forest as the background and Liu Zongyuan's concentrated thoughts as the center. Based on the above understanding, I invited the famous painter Mr. Deshun Wang to create the illustration of Little Stone Pond. It can be titled "sad cold bones, sad silence." I think the new illustrations can be consistent with the original content, which is helpful for students to understand the content of the text and improve the aesthetic taste of the teaching materials. Attached is an illustration of Mr. Deshun Wang. Can you give me some detailed information about the illustrator eno? Personal Profile: Constellation: Taurus Birthday: April 24th Hobbies: Shopping \ Sleeping \ Listening to Music \ Watching Movies \ Books \ Photography \ Donkey Tour \ Qian Insist: Drawing ambiguous BL cartoons, a struggling hero. Recently: Fighting against the God of Sleep, Stomach Pain and Term Anxiety Blog: eno (He) Status: The first personal diary will be released soon. 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In the summer vacation before that, I went there once at the invitation of my aunt who lived in Duima. In the hot summer, I kept changing trains in a strange city with my traveling bag on my back. Compared with Chigang, where there are only two buses in the town, the traffic route map to Ma is like a maze. He Hewu's Clear Field —— Quotations from He Hewu ★ Interview with Eno. I began to learn to draw a long time ago, and comics were only contacted in junior high school. My favorite style has not changed much. I want to be gentle, thick and delicate, so I have been trying to improve in this direction. He Hewu: Over the past two years, we have been making changes slowly. Before, I always weakened the characters in the picture, hoping that people would see the big atmosphere at first sight, but now more often I want the characters to be independent. He Hewu: I will focus more on the creation of comic stories in the future. 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