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Hebei Province college entrance examination language essay

First from the heavyweight essay

Title: read the following material, according to the requirements to write an essay of not less than 800 words. (60 points)

Because his father always answered the phone while driving on the highway, the family repeatedly persuade should not, female college students Xiao Chen forced to helpless, more out of life safety considerations, through the microblogging private letter to the police to report their own father, the police verified, according to the law of the old Chen was educated and punished, and will be sent to the official microblogging of this report, this matter has won the praises of many netizens, but also triggered some questioning, by the media reports, provoked a wider range and more angles of discussion. What do you think about the above? Please write a letter to Xiao Chen, Lao Chen, or other relevant parties to show your attitude and explain your views.

Requirements synthesize the content and implication of the material, choose a good angle, determine the intention, complete the writing task. The letter should be clearly addressed to the addressee, and the letter should be addressed to "Minghua" as the letter writer, and no personal information should be disclosed.

Master Teacher: Li Qingxia, the first secondary school in Handan City, Hebei Province

Comment on the essay: return to the tradition, advancing with the times

This year's college entrance examination essay question reflects the following characteristics:

(a) content closely linked to the reality

(1) the current state of transportation: China's car ownership has been rising year by year, has become the world's second-largest Ownership of the country, to some extent, China has entered the automobile society; cars in people's lives occupy most of the time, bringing convenience and comfort at the same time, but also brought disastrous consequences, China's car accident mortality rate for more than 10 years in a row to maintain the world's first. There are many reasons for car accidents, but some drivers have a weak sense of security, do not abide by traffic rules is the main culprit of the frequent occurrence of car accidents. The material given in this material is about compliance with traffic regulations.

(2) real events: May 7, Hubei high-speed traffic police official microblogging received a special microblogging report, a female netizen to the police to report their father on the highway driving on the phone. Provincial highway police headquarters after investigation, confirmed that the reported and the informant is indeed a father-daughter relationship, the father admitted to pick up the phone illegal facts. The police were reported to the father of the education process in accordance with the law, the daughter of the reported traffic violations in accordance with the provisions of the award.

(B) the form of return to the traditional

With the continuous development of society, many traditional means of communication such as letters, telegrams have been about to fade out of the people's field of vision, people more use of the network to communicate the electronic means of communication, such as QQ, MSN, EMAIL, text messaging, MMS, podcasting, microblogging, FMS, blogging, posting and so on.

The questioner intends to promote positive social energy, hoping that the whole society can act to protect the dignity of the law.

Therefore, candidates can criticize their fathers for not abiding by the traffic regulations, because the traffic regulations are related to the safety of everyone's life, and need to be observed by everyone seriously, and cannot be taken as a child's play. If every driver does not abide by traffic regulations, then our society can not be a harmonious society, and the Chinese dream is out of reach.

Candidates can analyze the adverse consequences of the father violating traffic rules, talk about the need to abide by traffic rules. For example, obeying traffic rules is a respect for your own life and the lives of others, and a responsibility to yourself and other families.

Of course, the daughter of the material is also the angle of intention. From the daughter's point of view, you can appreciate the daughter's seemingly cruel, but actually warm behavior. The daughter did this is responsible for the father's life, but also responsible for the lives of others.

It can also be deeper thinking, the daughter reported her father is out of the ordinary. In the Analects of Confucius? Zi Lu", Ye Gong language Confucius said: "My party has a straight groveler, his father hustled sheep, and the son testified." Confucius said: "my party's straight different so, the father for the son hidden, the son for the father hidden, straight in which carry on." Confucius criticized his father stole the sheep, the son testified to the practice of promoting "relatives hidden" ethics, "relatives hidden" embodies the affection, embodies the filial piety. Writing can be sure that the daughter's behavior in the respect for the law part, but also can not ignore the traditional ethics of filial piety, to be able to put forward their own understanding of ****** filial piety.

In addition, the proposer should be trying to avoid the Gao Kao eight-legged essay, avoiding the exemplary Gao Kao test-taking argumentative essay that candidates are good at.

The letter is life, study and work in a more extensive use of a kind of application, it is people in the past commonly used a communication tool. Writing must pay attention to the format of the letter. The format of the letter mainly includes address, body, end, signature and date of the five parts. The address should be written from the top of the first line, followed by a colon, do not write after the colon. The body usually begins with a greeting. The most common greetings are "Hello!" "Hello!" Depending on the time of the year, greetings also change, such as "Good New Year!" "Happy Chinese New Year!" Greetings should be written in the next line of the address, two spaces in front, usually a paragraph of its own. Some do not write greetings, but directly into the body of the content. The main part of the body should be clear about the main idea of the letter, so that it is organized and hierarchical. At the end of the letter, you should write words of respect, wishes or encouragement. After the body of the letter, you can write "hereby" in two blank spaces, turn the top of the line to write "salute"; if you do not write "hereby", only "salute ", "well", "health", "peace" and other words, be sure to start a separate line with two spaces, can not be directly embellished written at the end of the text. This year's college entrance examination essay using the epistolary format may cause some writing difficulties for the children after 90.

The epistolary language is also trying to be friendly, using the first person; to be appropriate, the expression should be in line with the identity of the letter writer, to be oral expression.

Test questions content analysis level comments

Master: Shijiazhuang City, the first high school Guo Huiqing

Test question comments: year after year flowers are similar

Language college entrance examination new standard national volume Ⅰ and last year compared to the order of the proposition, structural model, the question type value are basically the same, divided into modern reading, ancient poetry reading, literary text reading, practical text reading, language and text use, writing six major boards. Language and writing, writing six plates, 18 questions, total score of 150 points. The difficulty of the test questions is still mainly of medium difficulty. This familiar and stable form is easy to make candidates to establish confidence, if the usual familiar training in place, today should be under control.

First, the overall characteristics of the test questions

(a) the selection of test questions to focus on the hot issues of life. Idiomatic test questions in the doctor-patient communication materials, sentence questions in the "history of the most stringent" "Food Safety Act" elements, articulation questions in the haze problem, complementary questions in the topic of online shopping, graphic conversion questions in the protection of the water environment, the theme of the composition of the daughter complained about her father's violation of the law, these are hot topics, focus on the topic.

(ii) test questions designed to reflect the core values. Recitation test questions in the choice of Qu Yuan "Li Sao" in the statement, biographical material in the Mr. Zhu Dongrun patriotic dedication, literary reading from the "Twenty-four Histories" in the history of the Song Dynasty, biography of the main Sun Fu positive advice, give up their lives for righteousness, the novel reading in the main character of Malanhua friendly character, these are to grasp the pulse of the times, reflecting the core values.

(c) The test questions emphasize the examination of merit. Ancient poetry appreciation questions using a bright and dark form of comparative appreciation, the choice of Cen Sen's two poems "hair Lintao will go to the North Court to stay goodbye" and "white snow song sends the martial arts judge to return to the capital" (memorization of the title does not provide the original poem) to compare, analyze the different angles of the writing. This examined the literacy, understanding, analysis, increased gradient, the basic skills of the higher requirements.

(d) the difficulty of the test questions increased. Practical text reading along the type of biographical text in the past, the use of autobiographical style, a large number of accounts of the author's academic thinking, academic growth, relative to the previous biography, more abstract, the need to have a strong reading tolerance. For the candidates who usually do not have a certain amount of academic reading and deep reading habits, it is a challenge.

Second, the subtle changes in the test questions

(a) increased general knowledge of ancient culture. The test content mostly involves the ancient imperial examinations, official system, etiquette, etc., reflecting the proposer's emphasis on traditional culture, and the leadership of the students in the cultural fault. Although it is only a 3-point multiple-choice question, it is a subtle way to cultivate students' affinity for traditional culture.

(ii) canceled the ancient reading of the real word meaning comprehension questions. In fact, this test has been implied in the 7th question of ancient translation, only in the expression of the understanding of the sentence meaning of the test, the usual study of real words can not be weakened.

(c) practical text reading question 4 increased the difficulty, this is an evaluation of the inquiry questions, compared to the past, did not directly give the point of view, the candidates need to extract the generalization from the material, and then analyze the point of view of the evaluation, the reading of higher requirements.

Third, post-test reflections and suggestions

First of all, there should be a focus on life. Usually can not just brush the questions, only utilitarian reading, such as memorization of composition material, read chicken soup of the soul type of magazines, should maintain the temperature of life, have the habit of browsing the newspaper, pay attention to current events, in-depth thinking. The nature of the current commentary of this essay requires candidates to have a certain vision, depth, and sensitivity to acute social focus issues, otherwise it will remain only in the simple judgment of right and wrong and rough expression of emotions.

Secondly, we also need to carefully read the textbook, read the book. This biographical literature reading examination questions, many students see the autobiography of the form and academic growth of biographical content on the dizzy, in fact, in the second year of high school biographical literature elective readings, there are more than a dozen of various types of biographies, these are involved. If you can dive into the quiet reading, you will definitely not panic on the verge. In addition, should read the annual syllabus. In March of this year, the syllabus released information on the examination of general knowledge of culture, and sure enough, it was reflected in the test questions. It is expected that the next two years is also this examination pattern, I hope that scholars to lay a solid foundation, focus on reading, pay attention to current affairs, and strive to improve the language literacy