Revision of Ill Sentences in Traditional Culture

This ill sentence can be modified as follows: ①. Just delete the word "yes" from the original sentence, so it will read smoothly. ② Delete the words "from" and "from" in the first half of the original sentence. ③ Replace "rich" with "rich" in the original sentence. Namely: "from …, I … enrich …". Or "China ... enriched ...".