2016 Shanxi college entrance examination language composition how to write

2016 Shanxi college entrance examination language composition of the test form is a cartoon composition, for this type of cartoon composition should be how to start writing and how to find a better angle of intention, the master teacher to do a comprehensive interpretation of the subanalysis.

In the process of writing a comic essay, the beginning must point to the material, like a story fable, you have to analyze how to get your thesis, and then analyze the thesis is what you put forward. We can try to list the subargument, this subargument is not the same as the previous often listed, it is closer to the discursive subargument, we put forward what, why, how to do from several levels. The first is what? What is reflected in this cartoon is the way of education reward and punishment system, how to reward and how to punish, when to reward and when to punish. And the picture can be seen two different children, the achievement gap is very big, which involves the problem of progress and regression. The second is why there is such a system of rewards and punishments, is the meritocracy of achievement, our education nowadays is more and more focused on achievement, we often say, you only need to improve one point to get rid of 10,000 people, in order to get into a better school, most people are more and more focused on achievement. In this regard, there is a problem of progress and regression, and there is also a problem of social education that unilaterally pursues the rate of advancement, but also to think about what kind of talents can be cultivated by education nowadays. From this perspective, we can discuss whether our society should focus on quality education or utilitarian achievement education. Thirdly, what should be done? This part of the story still lies in family education. Family education should be diversified, not purely reward and punishment, can not say that one point of progress will give you 100 yuan pocket money, if regression will not have pocket money, this way can not play a very good role. In the past two days, I saw a very hot video about a little girl whose dream started with bean sprouts. Her mother was a vegetable seller, and one day she kept staring at the bean sprouts in deep thought, so her mother asked her what she was looking at. The child said she didn't understand why the bean sprouts next door were so hot and why so many people came to buy them. So the child's mom replied that it was because only the family next door sold them. The little girl said, can we grow them ourselves and sell them? The mom said you can try, then the little girl and her mom tried to grow a few pots of bean sprouts together. The result was a quick failure, and the bean sprouts all died. The little girl was very frustrated, her mother encouraged her to say, it's okay to try again, and then they looked up the information and found that the bean sprouts should be planted in the shade. So they tried a second time and failed. At this time, her mother encouraged her again, saying, "Let's try again. Afterwards, through the relentless pursuit of exploration, they finally grew very tasty bean sprouts in their own way, and the girl's dream sprouted from this, inspiring her to continue to forge ahead in life. The same applies to our home education. The first is diversity, and the second is the right way of guidance. We should all know the story of the milk bottle. A child accidentally dropped the bottle on the floor, and instead of scolding him, his mother taught him over and over again how to hold the bottle. Reward and punishment is of course necessary, but should be some auxiliary means, how to reward how to punish should also go to discretion, at the same time should go to guide.

We can look back at the 2007 college entrance exam essay, which was also a cartoon essay, in which a child stepped on a watermelon rind and fell. This reflects issues about education as well. First of all, if we look at it from the perspectives of family, school and society, it is the same principle as the story we are telling. It is normal for a child to meet a hurdle on the road of life, but parents cannot let go. Parents should encourage their children to stand up strongly so that they won't fall down next time, which is the right direction. In addition, our intention can also be from the child's point of view, the first point: children from the process of growing up should exercise a tenacious quality, it does not matter if you fall down, learn a lesson and then go strong, so as to adapt to the competition in society. The content of the article can relate to the quality of courage and tenacity, is a positive energy, this positive energy is also the traditional culture we said at the beginning to promote. The second point is not to complain after the fall, do not complain after the failure, do not always say that it is someone else's fault, you should analyze what you should do next time, so that you can successfully walk on the destination you to reach. The third point is from the perspective of both sides, this point is very suitable for this year's cartoon question, children are prone to fall, why do children step on watermelon rinds and fall? The family's indulgence makes the child will fall accidentally. In the past, there was a cartoon question, elementary school, secondary school, university is three birdcages, out of the cage on the ground, we often say that children are the hope of the future of the motherland, the college entrance examination is the whole society and the whole country are concerned about the big event. The whole society for secondary school students and children's care, so that children do not have more exercise opportunities, out of the school gate will fall. 2010 also examined a cartoon composition, this should have an impression, the examination of the cartoon is four cats a fish, a cat went out to catch mice, the other cats said that there is a fish to eat and also went to catch mice. This is the same can be analyzed from a few different levels, they have been placed in front of the fish, the fourth cat is not because there is no fish to catch mice, but there is a fish to catch mice, which is the idea of peace and security. The fish in front of you is a right you can enjoy, but at the same time you should think about what duties and obligations you should fulfill as a cat. We should have a strong sense of role, we should not forget our roles and duties, even if there is a very big temptation in front of me, I should always think about what the duties to fulfill and what the responsibilities to do should be, this is the second idea. The third level is the correct understanding of traditional values. Traditional values must be taken very seriously, and this is another point I would like to make. We must pay attention to the details of the cartoon content, including what the subject does in it, including comments, such as the cartoon with the sentence "What era is it? The cartoon mentions an era, so we can think about whether the socialist core values or traditional values are not applicable in a different era. No, we often say that we should "take the best and discard the dross" of traditional culture, and socialist core values are not outdated, such as the spirit of Lei Feng. Although society is progressing and culture is becoming more and more developed, traditional culture is also our spiritual wealth, and this is the detail of the cartoon questions that we should pay attention to. According to the cartoon questions in the past few years, in the final analysis, it reflects the current hotspots of the society as well as the core values, which can't be thrown away.

So far, I have analyzed this year's essay and how the cartoon essay should be answered, but for everyone, see the cartoon mind is confused, especially usually only focus on the teacher talked about the problem type of learning. In fact, it is not different, it is still an argumentative essay, the cartoon question we are not the first time to see, we may say that in 2010 I have not been in high school, the cartoon question in addition to the composition in where else have I seen? Language use questions. One of the caricature questions, there are three types, one is a logo, one is a picture, one is a caricature, the teacher every year also talk about this problem, specific caricature questions and what are the characteristics of the caricature? What are the characteristics of the caricature question? How should we analyze the caricature question? First of all, we have to make the content of the picture clear, and then reveal the moral of the cartoon. Before revealing the moral, let's talk about the characteristics of cartoons. The most important characteristics of caricature are exaggeration, rendering, irony, and highlighting. The typical nature of the cartoon essay question is to make a big difference in a small way and to highlight it by contrasting and reinforcing it, which is the same as the language application and our fables and stories category, so we should not panic at the sight of the cartoon question. Lastly, remind you of one thing, the preparation of the essay must bear in mind to follow the social hotspots, promote the positive energy of society.