What do you think of Wen (Beautiful Jinci)?

It reflects the author's love and sincere praise for the traditional culture of the motherland. The first part (1 paragraph): briefly summarizes the specific characteristics of Jinci beauty. At the beginning of the sentence "The beauty of Jinci is in the mountains, in the trees and in the water ……", the rhetorical device of parallelism is adopted, which not only strengthens the tone and makes it catchy to read, but also reflects a certain observation order, indicating that the author's observation of Jinci is carried out in the order from high to low, thus leaving a deep impression on readers. The second part (paragraphs 2-5): The author describes and describes the beauty of mountains, trees and water in Jinci, the essays in the garden and the poems of celebrities in a juxtaposed way. The second natural section describes the mountain of Jinci, where the mountain is "majestic" as a "barrier" and "long" as an "outstretched arm", which visualizes the characteristics of the mountain. The word "Yong" not only accurately expresses the geographical relationship with Jinci, which is surrounded by mountains, but also skillfully uses anthropomorphic techniques to make people feel the "care" of mountains for Jinci. The scenery in the mountains is pleasant in four seasons, from which the author captures different colors in spring and autumn. "The mountains are covered with yellow flowers in spring, and the paths are fragrant"-the gorgeous scenery of bloom and bloom; "Qiu Lai is sparsely forested, and the sky is high and the clouds are light"-Qiu Jingtu, with sparse and graceful vegetation and light weather, finally expressed the feeling of mountaineering with "relaxed and happy". The third natural section describes the trees in Jinci, which are characterized by "ancient vigor" and "strange shape". The author explained the characteristics of the tree in the order of first division and then general, and the last sentence has been written about the feelings of Jinci in the shadow of the ancient tomb. Taking "Bai Zhou" and "Tang Huai" as examples, this paper illustrates the characteristics of "ancient and vigorous" trees; Taking "left-handed cypress" as an example, this paper explains the "grotesque" characteristics of trees. For example, with description as the skeleton, combined with detailed and accurate description, the characteristics of trees are shown in this paper. In the description, the author used accurate words, such as: "The Sabina vulgaris with straight trunk and wrinkled bark is lying on the stone steps with several green branches on the top." The word "Cai" vividly shows the "ancient spirit" of the tree and accurately shows the beauty of "Bai Zhou"; Another example is: "The left-handed cypress in front of Notre Dame is towering into the sky, and the texture on its bark is twisted to the left, round and round, like smoke hovering underground, and like a rope hanging from the sky." The word "twist" highlights the left twist of the texture of "left twist cypress", which is more powerful than the word "turn". The word "turn" means rough, rotating in one direction, highlighting its characteristics of high and left twist, echoing "twist" and "rope" The fourth paragraph describes the water in Jinci Temple. The water here is rich, clear, quiet and soft. The whole paragraph is written around the sentence "The water here is rich, clear, quiet and soft". When writing the characteristics of "more water", I not only wrote many categories, but also used several metaphors to write the different postures of water neatly and beautifully; When writing about the characteristics of "still" water, the contrast method of "Yin Gong Shan is more secluded" is adopted, and the silence of Jinci water is highlighted by writing the voice of "Ding Dong Ding Dong". When describing the softness of water, the author skillfully uses anthropomorphic rhetoric, and uses accurate verbs such as "pull", "spread", "hang", "close", "weave", "wear" and "circle" to vividly show the posture of aquatic plants in quiet and soft water, which is very picturesque. The fifth paragraph describes the garden sketches and celebrity inscriptions of Jinci Temple. This passage mainly adopts the method of illustration, enumerating the examples of stone carving little monk and stone carving big tiger, and explaining the ingenious characteristics of the garden sketch. The description of celebrity poems with beautiful sentences and exquisite calligraphy seems to be a brief summary, which embodies the characteristics of meticulous and decent writing.