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Please write a composition with lyrics.
One of the magical effects: use it in the initial transfer.
acclaim
"100-it is not easy to say I love you." I always thought so. Today, I got the highest score in my class in the chemistry exam. I couldn't help cheering, as if I had won a highest honor. I like this feeling. I have an impulse. I suddenly have a strange desire to hear applause from others. Just like bitter coffee, there is sweetness in bitterness and it tastes the most beautiful.
At the beginning of the above composition: "100-it's not easy to say I love you" I have always thought so. This sentence is unique, seemingly surprising, delicate, tortuous, full of flavor and full of bite. It not only laid the contradictory and eager emotional tone of the full text, but also hinted at the context below. Once you find this clever opening sentence in your writing, you can easily go downstream. Pop songs have played an important role in refining the above opening sentences.
If pop songs make the author of Applause make a good opening sentence, then the stirring lyrics in Zheng Jun's Back to Lhasa, the next paragraph of Under the Light, let the author find a unique turning sentence and embed it in the turning point, which makes the article suddenly turn out waves of surprises from the beginning.
Dengxia
It's like this every night: after dinner, without waiting for a rest, I come to the familiar lamp, holding the inseparable textbook, and start updating the test paper that day until late at night. ...
The day ends in exhaustion.
Tonight, as usual, I'm sitting in front of a desk full of books, and I'm on my way …
"Back to Lhasa, back to Potala ..." This good song sung by Zheng Jun came from a neighbor's house. The beautiful melody brings people into a dreamlike fairyland, as if they were in heaven.
The second magical effect: sublimation used at the end.
Why do pop songs move us easily? One of the reasons is that pop songs express more ordinary and true feelings of ordinary people. Isn't it? You and I are both mortal, born in the world, and have been bored recently. Everything is too soft ... This ordinary and real life experience is condensed and refined, with life penetration and spiritual radiation effect. If you can hum a few words at the end of the narrative to make it the finishing touch, you can not only sublimate the theme and conception, but also overcome the weakness of lyric discussion in the narrative and obtain a natural and decent reading effect.
home
Home is not only a place to eat and sleep, but also a workshop for family happiness. Here, there are children's smiling faces and parents' warm faces ... However, in the days when I stay at home, I am always on tenterhooks, afraid of being imprisoned in a dangerous operating room again.
Sometimes, I really want to ask the cold star in the sky: Have you ever cared about the joys and sorrows of the world? In the dead of Cabano, our life is not longer than the water star, but we spend half our time running and working, and a quarter of our time arguing. Is there enough time left for us to be silent, hesitant and wait and see?
Every time I think about this, I really want to shout at those two once so kind and warm faces: "I have something to say!" ……"
Sitting by the window, looking at the little tree outside the window, what does it need? It's water, sunshine, air ... Yes, home is the direction where my tears return. I hope it is no longer a dangerous operating room! However, I have been enduring, enduring.
Finally, on a sunny afternoon, my introverted depression was finally released-"Dad, Mom, I want to talk to you ..."
I remember the whole afternoon, the hearts of the three of us were beating and burning, and I couldn't help singing Tayu Lo's "Home":
"Every old poem.
Write it in front of the glass window after the rain
Every lonely song
Sing an unintentional promise for you
Give me a warm family.
And a burning heart
Let me out the back.
Have a feeling of going home. ...
At the end of the above article, Tayu Lo's "Home" sung by "I" just told the main idea of the full text, without any affectation, and achieved excellent sound effects. Of course, this "ending" effect depends not only on the lyrics, but also on the harmony between the lyrics and the full text. You can't sing pop songs for the sake of singing pop songs.
In addition, writing an article that has finally achieved something after some efforts, often quoting the lyrics in "True Hero", "How can I see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain", can also achieve good results.
The third use: used in the clue chain.
The three usages mentioned above are just the borrowing and adaptation of the local content language, and there is another ingenious method, that is, borrowing the whole song as the embryonic form of thought and using it to string together relevant life materials, so that pop songs can become the interlocking links in the full-text clue chain and become the unique language connecting the key points in the text, so that the whole story can be unfolded with the accompaniment of pop music. Please see:
The taste of growing up
"I was really young at that time/I cried/I quarreled/Oh, mom-don't think that's not true ..."
This is a campus ballad in Taiwan Province Province, and it is also a song in my heart. When I was growing up young, ...
When I was a child, I didn't know how many nights I held my mother's hand and clamored for the stars in the sky. Mom always smiles and says, "Silly child, mom can't get it!" " ""why? "There is still a hint of stubborn pleading in the voice of the immature child." You will understand when you grow up! ""grown up? "-what a magical word it was for me at that time!" I want to grow up. "These four words are deeply rooted in my heart. Although at that time I would only point to the stars and say, "Light! Lights! "Although naive, I will only squat on the ground and bark like a neighbor's dog; Although I will chase a clumsy duck for no reason.
Unconsciously, I bid farewell to primary school and entered middle school. It's already Grade Three in a blink of an eye.
On the same starry night, I sat under the lamp to review the lessons I learned during the day. "Take a break and have a drink." At some point, there is a bowl of steaming milk next to it. "Mom, how to do this problem?" I put the book in front of my mother, who read it for a while and calculated it over and over again in the draft book. Finally, she closed the book and said to me, "I can't do it." "What?" I was so surprised that I almost threw up half the milk I drank. Before I asked my mother questions, she never failed. Look at my surprise. My mother said, "When you grow up, you learn more and more. My mother really can't catch up with you! " "
Perhaps this is growth. Unconsciously, I really grew up, spending less and less time with my family, and gradually formed a withdrawn character, longing for freedom and no longer attaching to the warmth of home. However, on this night, "mom really can't catch up with you!" " "One sentence made my eyes sour: home, mom, the place I always wanted to stay away from, and now, it is the place where my tears go.
"Oh, mom-don't think that's not true/I don't know how/when to leave this life ..."
I sang this song repeatedly in my mind, looked at the faint cold star in the sky, thought about my mother's distressing words, and realized the meaning of home for the first time, only then did I understand that the so-called "wandering around the world" was just "young and frivolous"
It was my mother who awakened my silent sleep, lit up my dim light and told me what growth is.
With the artistic conception of a Taiwan Province campus ballad lyrics, the above materials are developed, the plot is arranged, and the language is organized, so that the lyrics are intermittent at the beginning, the end and the climax, and their heavy feelings about life are sung. Learn wonderful languages.
Many lyrics are vivid poems in themselves. When you listen and sing with ecstasy, I think you will never forget to appreciate and learn the lyrics. For example, vest can only be back to back, not heart to heart, and in hot girl, you can understand and use the meaning of "spicy" in sentences such as "grown up, married, went out", "not afraid of spicy", "sweating, crying, getting angry, singing and spicy". How to make our language more vivid, the language of pop songs will certainly give us a lot of inspiration.
Of course, grammatical mistakes such as "passing by your road", "I was hit by youth", "a restless heart" and "a hot-blooded man is brighter than the sun" will certainly attract our attention and vigilance.
Second, help you complete a wonderful idea.
The choice, conception and structure of lyrics will inspire our conception. For example, "China Wa" selected materials such as drinking Yellow River water, eating shallots mixed with tofu, wearing shoes with a thousand layers of soles and writing square characters to express patriotism, the application of clever association in sugar-coated haws, and the role of exaggeration in shaping men's image in self-improvement. However, "Happy Today" just repeatedly growled that "we ordinary people are really happy today", and there was no specific and vivid narrative and description, which led to emptiness. The decadent and negative theme of "Why not play the world" in Game World should arouse our vigilance.
Music itself also brings us many surprises: music emphasizes melody, rhythm, beat, speed and strength, and the development of novel plot also emphasizes relaxation. Isn't the emotional expression of prose less important than the melody of songs? Isn't the language rhythm of discussion and lyricism as high and low as songs? The way of singing, that is, the way of writing, is closely related in the depths of the "soul". Because of this, the article you want to write can sometimes be conceived according to some characteristics of one or several songs, either passionate, soothing, ups and downs, or simply serenaded. ......
Third, beautiful songs dress up beautiful articles
1, so that your article has a "good eye"
The title is the eye of the article and the window of the soul. The article is expected only if the title is good. Lyrics with strong lyrics, if they can become "bright eyes", can often win by surprise. For example, writing a memorable article can be titled "Looking Back", and writing an article about joining the WTO and applying for the Olympic Games can be titled "Infatuation is not a crime". Aren't other topics, such as "In the field of hope", "Men should strive for self-improvement", "Who am I", "Don't be cynical", "Ambition in the chest" and "Lighting the stars", also good topics? This kind of title, warm and high-pitched, infatuated, subtle and graceful, lively and fresh, full of flavor and appeal of the times, can arouse readers' endless association, deep voice and strong feelings, and will produce unique effects in that style. Isn't the text "Why are flowers so red" an explanatory text?
Quotations can be borrowed from the original sentence or changed appropriately according to the needs of the article.
2, lyrics into the text-my love is naked.
This is an ancient tradition. The lyrics are exquisite, easy to understand or full of philosophy, and the vivid and infectious effects produced by clever use in composition have made many students have a special liking for this. The most common usage is:
(1), a good start. Or arouse the curiosity of readers, or lay the emotional tone of the whole article, or hint at the context of the whole article. With such a clever opening sentence, the following writing is "Happiness Express". For example, when applying for the Olympic Games for the second time, a classmate wrote, "Look back again, suddenly like a dream, look back again, and your heart will remain the same." Then I recalled the process of bidding for the Olympic Games and expressed China people's desire and pursuit for the Olympic Games, which was very impressive. However, this kind of beginning needs to be refined after it is handy.
(2) Clever transition. Clever transition can give people the feeling that the future is bright. Finding a unique transition sentence and embedding it in the transition can make the article turn out dull and pleasant. Some students write environmental protection articles, first writing about the serious pollution of the surrounding environment, and then using the lyrics "Qingxi Qingshan, beautiful nature is a paradise for mankind. I love nature, la la la ... "The transition to the description of the ideal home has played such an effect.
(3) Make a twinkling star at the end of the article. If you can hum one or a few words at the end of the article, it will make the finishing point, sublimate the theme, and have a three-day effect, you will definitely overcome the emptiness at the end and get a natural and appropriate effect. Like Gu, he wrote his own understanding of life in senior three with the title "I love you in my own way". Finally, he wrote: "Outside the window, there are stars. I hope that the stars can illuminate my future and illuminate our future. " The use of lyrics in Starry Lights gives people a sense of intimacy.
However, it should be noted that don't get carried away, and how much you quote must obey the needs of the article. As for whether to stop suddenly after singing or to combine rap, it depends on the needs of writing.
(4) As a clue to "light up the future"
Since Trivial Memories, a senior high school text, is guided by two lines of Lu Xun's poem "Look at a thousand fingers coldly, bow down and be a willing ox", and for the entrustment of Premier Zhou, it is a clue, so can pop songs. For example, you can use a lyric to run through the whole text. In the composition, "Is it snowing there?" The classmate asked, "Does it snow there?" Then I wrote that I thought of my friends in the snow and recalled my past contacts. Every paragraph begins with this sentence, and my concern and yearning for my friends jump from the page and have a very touching effect. Of course, you can also borrow the whole song, spread it around, string together related materials, and let the whole story unfold with the accompaniment of popular songs. You can also expand it, and use a plot related to the content or image of the song to run through it, which will become a brand-new idea and sometimes play an extraordinary role.
Fourth, "love me more"-a by-product that can't be ignored.
Excellent pop songs are the product of noble emotions, full of beautiful, touching, positive, lofty and inspiring realistic emotions, with profound ideological undercurrents and touching people's hearts. They are rare good textbooks for moral education. For example, Dedication of Love conveys that as long as there is love, warmth will be transmitted to every corner of the global village, and with love, life can be colorful. To tell the truth expresses the noble feelings of selfless dedication to protect the country and the country at the expense of the ego. "True Hero" expresses the noble philosophy of "how to see the rainbow without experiencing wind and rain". The use of excellent pop songs can shock people's hearts, express students' feelings, make students feel and purify their hearts, enlighten students' self-examination consciousness, and open up new ways for students to cultivate aesthetic morality. In the mirror of excellent songs, students will inevitably enter the role, absorb the spiritual nutrition, constantly examine themselves, adjust themselves, strive to improve their sense of responsibility, willpower and enterprising spirit, and shape a newer and more perfect "me". For example, students reflect on their children's filial piety and love expressed in their home letters and often visit their homes: "How many of us always have our parents in mind and can know and remember their birthdays or special anniversaries? How many people can send their parents a blessing and care during the festival? The ancient regret of' raising Anemarrhena asphodeloides' should not be continued in our generation. " After singing "Sample Red", the students solemnly swore that "a thousand dollars can't buy a sunset, for my tomorrow is not a dream, to bid farewell to yesterday and cherish youth. Let the full emotions, under the traction of rational thinking, live every minute, chase with heart, fly high, cross all boundaries, and write down your own tomorrow. "
Some lyrics have become famous aphorisms and are widely known. For example, what's the pain in the storm (sailor), polishing life with both hands (streetcar of life), and three points are destiny takes a hand, and seven points depend on hard work (love will win).
Students realize from "only hard work can win" that they should be good at grasping the opportunity of "three-point destiny" and strive to create opportunities for development; Opportunities don't wait. If you fight, you win. If you don't fight, you lose. Students learned from going home: it feels good to go home, where there is deep affection, tenderness and warm care. Home is not only the habitat of human natural body, but also the spiritual home and spiritual home of human beings.
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