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The opening of the most taboo is a pen to give people the feeling of off-topic, it bluntly tell the reading teacher the author did not examine the subject matter, essay scoring will be greatly discounted. Please see the beginning of the 2004 Guangdong college entrance examination several essays.

Example 1 "Reminded by language and communication": "Watching flowers blossom and clouds roll in and out. The bright sunshine of early spring reveals the breath of summer; the lush green dress of summer indicates the harvest of autumn; the fruitfulness of golden autumn indicates the depression of winter. The cycle of the four seasons, autumn and winter, the natural world of all things each interpretation of the wonderful. If not through the baptism of winter, how can we expect the hope of early spring? Our human society is also like the natural world, without the language connection, without the **** the same way of life, how can the world into a whole, build bridges of communication?" This begins with a poor analogy, and the previous part of the analogy doesn't build on the similarities very well. Why? Language and communication is the relationship between the premise and the result, whereas "green clothes" and "harvest", "fruit" and "depression" where there is such a relationship? "Where does such a relationship exist? Especially "if not through the baptism of winter, how can we expect the hope of early spring" is a rhetorical question is not close to the topic.

Example 2, "Interaction of the Mind": "Big trees never sneer at the weakness of the grass, but the grass, though weak, adds to the green of the grassland; peonies never sneer at the simplicity of the wildflowers, and the wildflowers, though simplicity, bring the earth infinite vitality. The reason why the tree and the grass, the peony and the wildflower can harmonize **** place, because they have **** the same language between them, with each other's communication, with the heart interaction." Again, this opening is far-fetched in leaning toward the topic without finding similarities.

Example 3, "Language and Communication": "Language is a blade of grass, communication is a green shade; language is a white cloud, communication is a cloud; language is a flower, communication is a sea of flowers." This beginning treats "language" and "communication" as an individual and a whole, again failing to understand the connection between the two.

These three examples are all examples of metaphorical approaches to the topic in order to enhance the writing style, which is the usual way of writing for many candidates. If candidates do not have an accurate grasp of the topic's meaning and go off on a tangent as soon as they start writing, this can seriously affect their scores. The following example illustrates the role of language in a more accurate and visual way.

Example 4, "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, communicating between this shore and the other shore; language is a waterfall, communicating between a stream and a deep pool; language is a rainbow, communicating between the sky and the earth. Communication can only be successful if language is accurately expressed. If the language is wrong, it may cause unforeseeable consequences. So how can language be accurately expressed to facilitate successful communication?"

So, the opening paragraph is written well, the core problem is still in the review; review of the subject breaks the subject, first seek accuracy, and then seek image. The following are many ways to introduce the opening paragraph.

1, quotes and quotations

①What is the love of the world, straight to teach people to live and die together. Yuan Haoqian was indeed good at asking questions. This question of his can be called a question for the ages. How many years, how many people wandering in this problem, and how many people in the pay a huge price to make the final answer of life. But the words of each family are as different as each person's face.

Xi Shi said, "Love is a tool. ......" ("Ask what is love in the world")

②In a medieval church, a holy man began his speech, "I am a holy man because I have seen through money, and what is mine is everyone's. " The years have gone by and the fingers have flicked. In a prison at the time of the inter-century, a thief begins his life's monologue, "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and what's mine for everyone is mine."

(The Saint and the Thief)

③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere, and for our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery." Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I would like to say, "Answers are universally available, and for our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective." Many times, we are confused by the problem of the unanswered questions or wandering in the choice of multiple solutions to the intersection, how to go will become the heart of the mystery, often indecisive, left and right chaotic leaning, at this point, there is a need to change the angle of the consideration, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Spin this kaleidoscope")

2, clever use of letter format

①Respected grandfather Confucius:

Hello! I am one of your ordinary children and grandchildren, thousands of years after the courage to write to bother you, not only in order to send you reverent greetings, but also with a few difficult questions eagerly awaiting your guidance. (A Letter to Confucius)

②An abominable standard answer:

Seeing you, I am really filled with righteous indignation. So, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to denounce you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear the hat of "standard". You should know that countless tragedies have occurred because of the word "standard". Here are your three major sins: ...... ("A Letter to the Standard Answer")

3, borrowed chapter and verse novel writing

①"The world will be divided for a long time, and will be divided for a long time. " The time when the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu, and Wu were in power no longer exists, and the great river is going east, and the waves have poured out the heroes of the past. The heir of Shu, Ah Dou, has also become "too happy to think of Shu", and the world has become the world of "Sima's". One hundred single eight good men are all gathered here, and all of them are quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liangshan Po recently to select the tiger hero. This honorary title on the evaluation will be great, who evaluated on the second chair can sit on the Liangshan Po. So caused all the good men gathered here, arguing. (Who is a tiger hero)

4, clever use of rhetoric

With rhetorical devices at the beginning of the easy to write the author's feelings of the heart, triggering readers to appreciate the interest of reading. Such as the beginning of the 2002 "spiritual choice" wrote: "If you choose the wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky; if you choose the fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; if you choose the four-legged, you will savor the reckless green forest. Instead, my choice is a cage of one." With a prose sentence to start, the sentence is neat, the language force is resounding, before and after the formation of contrast, both the point of the question and set up the suspense, urging people to enjoy reading. In addition, the 2001 college entrance examination excellent composition "integrity a forever green card" article begins with: "integrity such as the first ray of sunshine in the spring, desirable; such as a piece of sweet watermelon in the summer, in the mouth, sweet in the heart; such as the autumn wind from afar to send a piece of flaming red maple leaves, causing infinite attachment; such as the winter snowflakes, for the wheat field covered with layers of thick quilts. " The beginning of the use of simile plus prose, shape the value and significance of honesty, expresses the desire for honesty.

5, lyrical method.

That is, at the beginning of the article directly confide in their true feelings, to point out the main idea of the article. Commonly used lyrical method is assumed lyrical, contrasting lyrical and baking lyrical three. For example, the 2001 college entrance examination masterpiece "Fishing up the integrity of the backpack" begins with "If life is a Mercedes-Benz train, then integrity is an indispensable wheel; if life is a big boat under sail, then integrity is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you to go forward forever." The author uses simile and comparison to illustrate the importance of honesty from the contrast setting. Another example is the beginning of the 2002 college entrance examination's excellent essay "The Footnote of Choice", which reads: "What is it that swiftly crosses the heart, leaving behind a moment of splendor? What is it, quietly watering the heart, cultivating sweet memories? What is it that gently touches the heart and brings eternal beauty? What is it that makes your heart and my heart and his heart, together play that magnificent music? One by one is that a shocking choice, is that once again difficult and beautiful choice, is that a song singing their own choice of songs ......" opening with four prose question, triggering people's deep thoughts, expressing the value and significance of choice of life, and thus expresses the author's feelings.

6, open door method.

Because this kind of beginning is straightforward, can go straight to the topic, all of a sudden into the scene of writing and narrating, or all of a sudden to catch the essence of the argument, so it is applicable to a variety of styles. Such as the 2002 college entrance examination excellent essay "choice of Chinese soul" a beginning "look at the history of the past, looking for the soul of the unrepentant choice", the following will be divided into subheadings: 1, the hero's choice. 2, the king's choice. 3, the choice of the scientist. Such a beginning will be three words directly into the following. Another example is the 2002 college entrance examination excellent composition "wisdom and thought a my choice" the beginning of the article wrote: "after completing secondary school, I received three university admissions, I have to make a kind of sacred choice." The author is straightforward and concise, using a general statement to bring out the following, making a general introduction for the following how he chose between the "University of Wealth", the "University of Power" and the "University of Wisdom". The main introduction.

7, descriptive method.

The descriptive method, that is, with the help of some kind of rhetoric or some kind of descriptive techniques, through the description of the scenery, rendering the atmosphere, atmosphere, for the following characters or things to do the beginning of a good foil padding. This method is particularly effective for narrative, prose and argumentative essays. For example, the 2002 college entrance examination excellent essay "Zhaojun's Choice" begins with the following: "The deep fence, the bright-eyed palace maidens, the silent pink butterflies, and the lazy combing are like the wheels of the palace, which slowly rolled over in Zhaojun's heart." The beginning of the article used four partial formal phrases, neat form, elegant wording, describing the character traits of the modifiers, image accurately reveals the characteristics of the character, for the following Zhaojun's wise choice of mind for the rendering and accentuation, so that the description of the beginning and the events of the text have a good reflection. Another example is the 1997 national essay, someone in the article entitled "white clouds, water droplets" wrote: "blue sky floating a white cloud, white cloud is a small water droplets, who let the white cloud high up? It is those little drops of water, you hold me, I hold you, *** with the creation of that freedom and drift." The article opens with a metaphor, anthropomorphism set against each other, the question brought up, the passage is extremely poetic, for the following metaphor of our society is a white cloud, each member is a molecule in the white cloud Zhangben, revealing that we should be *** with the creation of a better environment.

8, take up the topic method.

That is, the beginning of the article along the topic material and the topic of the ideas provided by the reasonable imagination and extension. This undertaking can be continued from the end of the topic in the background language, but also from the raw material to intercept a little continuation. For example, the 2001 college entrance examination excellent composition "honesty visit" begins with: "Good boredom ah, 'honesty' has been very troublesome, then from time to time to send out a sigh of relief, why should I abandon me? Why did you abandon me? Are the times different and I am useless with them? No, I'm going to find a good friend, let them comment on it!" Afterwards, the article compiled the story of "honesty" visiting "money", revealing the existence of a large number of money transactions in real life, power and sex transactions, even the civilization of the pure cultural purity of the land also appeared in the "money transaction". The story of "Money" reveals that in real life there are a lot of money transactions, power and sex transactions. The clever design of the beginning makes a scientific and thorough introduction for the following story.

9, character appearance method.

In the writing of the narrative article, in order to appeal to the reader, can sometimes use close-up lenses, so that the character of the self-appearance, in order to receive the unseen line to see their first, to attract the reader's attention to the purpose. Such as the 2001 gaokao masterpiece "can not abandon me - integrity of self-description" at the beginning wrote: "in the next name sincere name letter, the word does not deceive. Accompanied by the universe and born, relying on the hearts and minds of the people and the survival of the upper can be traced back to ancient times, the lower can shine today, far can help the state, close to the pro-friends and friends." The beginning of the article, the introduction of the family name, birth background and unique personality, to bring the distance between the author and the reader, to express the heart of the Dao Bai, the main theme of the article.

10, clever use of fables

①Yu Gong's family has lived here for generations, the doorway of Wang Yu, Taihang two mountains blocking the way, the days are difficult ah! It seems to be isolated from the rest of the world, and what is new in the city has become old news here, so this kind of life really needs to be changed. Yugong thought to himself, "I have to think of a way to move the Taihang and Wangya mountains. ("New Yugong and Zhicao story")

②Magpie posted a large advertisement: "To meet the needs of the times, our school will implement all-round quality education, nothing to learn, nothing to teach, package your child to become omnipotent generalist, invincible in the competition. Tuition, 3,000 yuan per semester; cultivation fee, 2,000 yuan; sponsorship fee, 15,000 yuan." ("All-powerful School")

11, clever use of the title to reveal the main idea

①No tree's greatness, but you can have the grass green; no peony's delicacy, but you can have the little wild chrysanthemum's spontaneity ...... life, can not be brilliant, but must be great!

Title

Butterfly was once a beautiful and good dancing girl. Her head of shoulder-length hair, her slender dance, had brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers, she had been praised by others as China's future Duncan ...... However, everything is over, the God of Fate forever pressed her into a wheelchair. Life is dark, silent, "white swan" into no one cares about the ugly duckling. How many times she dreamed that she put on the crystal shoes and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the cold and indifferent autumn wind. （

②If you lose your money, you lose only a small part of it; if you lose your health, you lose only a small part of it; if you lose your integrity, you are almost penniless.

Title

What is "integrity", honesty, trustworthiness is also. Looking at history, the word "honesty" has soaked up the blood and tears of many people. ("Who is praising the emperor's new clothes")

12, clever use of problem-solving form

Once there was a friend, ingenious to give me such a question: in the following beauty, which is your favorite?

A. A pure white feather, in the glittering golden sunshine, leisurely floating down.

B．A petal of falling red, floating back and forth in a deep, clear pool of water.

C．A shooting star, in the blue sky, passed by in a flash.

D．A drop of crystal clear dew, at the tip of a green blade of grass, slips quietly.

After reading this question, I was dumbfounded by the thousands of changes in nature, the sun rises and sets, the ebb and flow of the tides, and how many beautiful sights are thumping and relaxing. ...... ("Infinite Possibilities Infinite Beauty")

13, clever use of celebrities for the quiz

①Some people ask: What is happiness? The answer is colorful.

Nietzsche thought, "The man who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, fleshworms, and stones all at once, and yet not be disgusted, such a man is the happiest of all." The Stoics, on the other hand, believed, "To have infinite wealth and prowess, and to be able to deal with it without being frightened, that is true happiness." ("The Answers Are Colorful")

② Archimedes said, "Give me a fulcrum and I can pry the earth up!"

I say, "Give me a fulcrum, and I can brace my soul!" (Give the soul a fulcrum)

14, clever use of poetry to show poetry

①Turning over the brilliant galaxy of Tang and Song poems, countless when counted on the parting poems, Wang Bo's magnificent song: nothing in the divergent paths, the children **** stained towel. Liu Yong is the voice of sadness: where to wake up tonight? The wind and the moon on the willow bank. Jiang Yan but a thousand sails in a nutshell: the sadness, but goodbye. There are also people beating their chests: whip which bear to hurry! Today, there is Wang Guozhen murmured: life is a hundred years, how to go back and forth. No matter where I am, I only pray for water like a boat. And then came Ximurong's gentle words of caution: if the parting can evoke the details of our negligence caused by getting together, is it really bad to part? Such a variety of sentiments is truly beautiful. Culminating insights from different times and different lives will give you unexpected rewards. ("All the elephants of life stick to themselves")

②What is beauty? I know that beauty is the first dawn rising on the horizon, beauty is the maple leaves blazing hotter than fire in the fall, beauty is the dandilion cranes sprinting on the sandy beach at dusk, and beauty is the plumed deer galloping on the prairie. ...... Baumgarten agreed with me and added: "Beauty is sensual perception, and the study of aesthetics means the study of the science of sense perception." But Kant glared at me angrily and said, "One-sided, beauty is a pure form of subjective human feeling that has nothing to do with the thing itself. I advise you to read my Critique of Judgment." I was vain enough to study his work on the aesthetics of emotion carefully and meticulously. I was gloating over my metaphysics when Hegel poured cold water on me, "No, beauty should be an externalization of human nature." Then he talked smugly about his theory of aesthetics. Just when I was puzzled, Marx whispered next to me, "Don't listen to him, he is upside down, right and wrong, you must not fall into the mud pit of idealism. Beauty should actually be the unity of human nature and free form." What is beauty? I decided to leave the uncertain Europe and go to the ancient civilization of the East to find the answer to the question of beauty. ("What is beauty")

③When the vast expanse of the sky is dyed black, the new moon rises in the infinite canopy full of stars, hanging by the rail I can not help but be full of thoughts, I asked the moon in the sky: what is loneliness? Once upon a time, there is Li Bai "raise a cup to invite the moon, the shadow into three people", perhaps, loneliness is the moon in the sky, the wind is like water, when all the music is silent, the feeling of hanging on to each other! Once upon a time, there was Li Houzhu lamented "no words alone on the west tower, the moon is like a hook, lonely wutong deep courtyard locks the autumn", perhaps, loneliness is exactly the deep palace compound, the country is worried about family sadness, people are also worried about the entanglement of love! Once upon a time, there is Chen Zi'ang lamented "before not seen, after not seen, think of the world's long, the only pathos and yet snot", perhaps, loneliness is still grass, the end of the world is still the same, things are not the same as the empty state of mind it! So, I asked the moon, the Chang'e Palace of the Chang'e told me that loneliness is "mica screen candle shadow deep, the Yangtze River is falling dawn stars" of the "blue sea, blue sky, night and day". What exactly is loneliness? I can't answer. （

4What is it that comes silently and leaves no trace, but stirs up all the colors to dance lightly?

What is it that goes without a trace and comes without a word, but leaves behind a season of singing?

What is it that comes gently and goes quietly, leaving behind a golden color in the season of harvest?

What is it that comes and goes quietly, spinning white dreams for the silent earth?

The philosopher smiled at the blue sky, "It is time."

Children hold kites and clap their hands, "It is the wind."

The wanderer says, "It's nothing, just a dream." (The Happiness of Having Answers)

15, clever use of listening notes

Listening time: September 15, 2000

Listening purpose: to second-grade students as a model to study and explore "honesty as a human being", to "honest children" as the content, to educate the child "Honest Behavior".

Listening content: ......? ("Listening Record")

The following focuses on how to enter the topic of high school argumentative prose.

In recent years, the college entrance examination essay questions have been in the form of topic essays. Topic composition has a large openness, for candidates to show talent to provide a very free writing space, every year the college entrance examination has emerged a lot of excellent composition, in a variety of styles of excellent composition in the most colorful to belong to the expository essay. Argumentative prose can contain rich content, easy to express sincere feelings, express profound ideas, showing a deeper cultural heritage, it is most likely to gain the favor of the marking teacher. But to write a good argumentative essay is not an easy task, many candidates in the writing of this kind of article is the most common problem is slow to the topic. Slow to the subject of course is not off-topic, but often make the whole article does not seem to buckle tight, the center is not prominent enough, so the natural composition is not easy to get high marks. The following around the topic of "feelings of affinity and cognition of things", selected 2003 National College Entrance Examination excellent essay in a few of the more typical argumentative essays in the beginning of the essay, briefly introduced a few fast into the subject of the method.

1, by the novel image of the metaphor into the title, directly deducted

"Reason and emotion are two footprints in human life, human beings in the cognition of things on the road to every growth is related to their reason and emotion." (江苏考生《天平和七弦琴》)

比比理智和情感是是人类生活中的两只脚印，首句入题，就形象点出了情感与理智的内在关系-情感与理智具有重要的影响对认知。 It is refreshing to see such a beginning, which enters the topic quickly and sparkles with the color of discernment.

2, by the vivid and apt anthropomorphism into the title, stimulate the imagination

"In the eyes of the butterfly, the flower is an angel, because the flower to give her life nectar;

In the eyes of the flower, the bee is a dear friend, because the bee to give her the continuation of life.

In the eyes of the butterfly, however, the bee is nothing but a fool who buries his head in his hands, and in the eyes of the bee, the butterfly is nothing but a prodigal son who plays with the flowers." (Hubei Candidate "Learning to be a spectator of history")

The beginning of the article endows butterflies, bees, and flowers with human temperament; even things will evaluate and perceive things with an emotional eye, not to mention emotionally rich people. Through vivid and apt anthropomorphism, the inner meaning of the topic is skillfully pointed out, which not only evokes people's association with beautiful things, but also reflects the author's wisdom.

3, by the wonderful profound question into the question, enlightenment

"People have seven feelings, have their own preferences and aversion to the feelings, however, when this good and bad feelings mixed into the knowledge of the truth, and what will be the impact?" (Shandong candidates "do not judge by good and evil")

Together with the pen on the tightly linked to the emotions and cognition, with an assumption that will lead the reader's thinking to the essence of the question of the pondering, the article's intention seems to be very profound. Such a way of entering the question brings the rhetorical role of questioning into full play, concise, yet weighty.

4, by the beautiful prose into the question, the first voice

"You will love the snow-covered north and the south of the coconut sea breeze disdain? You will be addicted to Jiangnan's small bridges and water, green tile and white walls and deny the northwest 'desert, the Yangtze River, the sun sets round' of the magnificence of it? Would you mind if Lin Daiyu 'makes a fuss' and not read the classic 'Dream of Red Mansions'? Would you love pop music and be bored with the 'dull and boring' classical music? --Ancient Greek philosophers once said that man is an emotional animal. Therefore, in the face of the world, emotional affinities, likes and dislikes often affect the view of people and things. I believe that there is a balance in everyone's heart, a standard of their own, used to measure everything around them." (Hubei candidates "the balance in the heart")

Elegant language, harmonious syllables, rich image is not enough to touch your emotions? Is it not enough for you to realize in the taste of beauty "the original perception of beauty, the view of people and things, are subject to the influence of the balance in the heart"?

5, by the lyrical argument into the subject, into the feelings of reason

"Often a loved one's life as a meteor falling, we mourn in the merciless death; often a friend in the fight to the death with the disease, we cursed the rampant rampage of the disease; often our own interests have been violated, we face up to the social tumors! ......"（江苏考生《放下感情的叶片》）

Isn't this kind of language easy to evoke your ****ing? Such a beginning is both full of deep emotion and reflects the color of reason. Words that are so into the heart of the matter lead us to touch the essence of such a thing - the blades of emotion that often obscure the gaze of our reason.

6, by the famous aphorisms into the title, highlighting the underlying

"People have feelings, as the old saying goes, 'people are not grass and trees, who can have no feelings'. Therefore, in the cognition of things will be unconsciously attached to a strong personal feelings. So there is a 'lover's eyes out of Xi Shi' lingering, 'feeling the flowers splash tears' of grief." (Shandong candidate "how a" love "word")

The article began with the word "love", embedded in three sentences of three famous sentences about emotion, showing the candidate's more solid writing skills. The bottom line is, frankly speaking, accumulation, when you walk on the examination room, you should have accumulated a lot of quotations and aphorisms, and what you have accumulated is not just for that famous sentence fill in the blank question worth only 4 points, right?

7, by the contrasting techniques into the question, indicating the position

"Sometimes, feelings are a fickle medicine, melted in the lover's glass, bitter can be tasted out of the sweetness and moisture; sometimes, feelings are a double-edged sword, held in the hands of the enemy, even if gently swung down to feel bruised." (Zhejiang candidate "true love is valuable

The price of reason is higher")

Emotions are not only a "fickle medicine" that can turn bitterness into sweetness, but also a "double-edged sword" that can bring about exhausting wounds. The exquisite metaphor reveals the duality of emotions, constitutes a clever contrast, and points out the center of the article in a very graphic way: true feelings are precious, and reason is more expensive.

8, from the hypothetical scenario into the title, buried ambush

"If you are in a hurry, but when you come to the intersection was told that the front can not pass. If this person is someone you know, what would you do? If the person is a stranger, what would you do?" (Jiangxi candidates "do not talk to strangers")

Yes, if we encountered this scenario, what should we do? Is it from the perspective of emotional affinity, trusting more to those we know and less to those we don't, or is it the other way around? What should we do in other similar situations? Naturally, we follow the author's train of thought to find out what the author's predetermined answer is.

9, by commenting on current events into the question, tracking the essence

"APEC let the world waved "Tang suit fever". Looking at the people of different colors and nationalities wearing the same Tang suit, I can't help but cry out, I love the Tang suit! Once, such traditional clothing let the country reject, monotonous and boring, not as light and comfortable as foreign clothes, people complained, people blame, wearing such clothes and even make them ashamed, I can not help but ask: a piece of clothing, there are so many faults? (Hubei candidates "I love Tang")

Directly to the APEC meeting caused by the "Tang hot" into the question, linked to the Tang before and after the different emotional attitudes, leading to the essence of the inquiry - clothes naturally do not have the right or wrong, the fault is people's The wrong clothes are people's emotions and perceptions. If you can use current affairs materials to tighten the topic of the topic, through the tasting of current events to track the essence of the beginning of your essay is not also able to bring a few points of freshness, flashing a few wisps of intellectual light?

Afterword: In fact, a composition to stand out in the college entrance examination, just pay attention to write a good beginning of the skills is not enough. From the above examples, we can see that these exquisite beginning is not just a simple set of some of the topic of the skills to show the novelty, but a combination of several or more skills, and, from the beginning of the excellent examination essay, we can feel is the ability of these candidates to master the language and good language literacy, which is the fundamental reason for them to get a high score. Therefore, I hope that students in the preparation process, not only to consciously learn from the success of others, but also to enrich their own knowledge accumulation.