Evaluating Elementary School Students' Essay Rubrics

1．You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture a meaningful moment; you are a student with great potential.

2. The language of the essay is very fluent, and it also writes about your teacher's feelings. You are your teacher's confidant, and I hope we **** cut up with each other and pick up a fragrant bouquet in the hundred gardens of literature.

3. Your handwriting is neat and beautiful, and your teacher wants to learn from you. If the article is more original, it will certainly be mirrored with the writing. I'm not sure what I think, but I think it's a good idea.

4. It's great! Your article reproduces the simplicity of the Northeastern people, making the reader feel refreshed. The language is fluent to the extreme, and the use of generalizations is particularly skillful. Your penmanship is conquering and infectious. Make an effort and create another brilliant!

5. Your article is like a slowly flowing stream, clean and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, with a personal style. May you continue to pick up the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!

6. The fact that a young man with little experience of the world is walking into a complex society is in itself a kind of wisdom. The article's language is plain and soft, the description is very casual, seems to lead the reader to walk in the wilderness of the mind. The downside is that the argument is slightly lacking in edge. You know, the essence of the argument can play the role of the finishing touch, will make your essay more profound. Keep practicing, and you'll be even better!

7. This article is beautifully written, fresh, philosophical. The article wrote "I" walk on the beach, the sea not only gives "I" the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused "I" meditation and association, it can be said that the sea gives me space to swim, "I" for the sea, "I" for the sea, "I" for the sea, "I" for the sea, "I" for the sea, "I" for the sea, "I" for the sea. "I injected life into the sea, so that the sea has become a noble personality strength of the "people". After reading this article gives people a sense of beauty, thought-provoking.

8. In addition to the class is the class, school life seems to be dull and boring, but this article is good from the ordinary to find the extraordinary, and write a lot of fun: nervous morning, fighting at noon, fatigue in the evening, each time to select a very interesting life to color the lens. The fresh and lively language vividly demonstrates the students' positive mental outlook.

9. This article is both ideological and artistic are very high, after reading it makes people long to recall. The idea is ingenious, the use of contrasting techniques to deepen the theme; the plot is also quite ingenious, the whole story is not only unexpected, but also in the sense of reason. The language is simple and unadorned, and the author's love and hatred are contained in the narrative, which allows the reader to experience and think y.

10, the text of the introduction of the father is comprehensive: from the outside to the inside, from work to life; the introduction of the father and has a focus: focus on writing the father's feelings. The characterization is full, real and rich in the flavor of life. Be proud of such a father, try harder and don't let him down!

11. You are able to snow associated with the pursuit of life, from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your style of writing, who says "plain water" is not the best drink?

12. The whole text of a few quotes from the proverbial apt to nostalgia as a clue. This is a reflection of your ideology.

13. Your essay is very creative - the idea is done in the form of a mathematical proof problem. There is a strong literary color throughout!

14. As a reflection, your essay is quick-witted and willful. The richness of life experience and the delicacy of thoughts and feelings that flow between the lines surprised my teacher. I hope you will continue to work hard and form a landscape of your own in your future writing!

15. You are a very opinionated and not lack of true knowledge of the students, I agree with your point of view, but if the arrangement of the line of writing in the structure of a more compact, that is the icing on the cake.

16. This article chooses a new angle, so that your thoughts can be free to roam here, this is your greatest success. The teacher would like to remind you that through the diverse world affairs, there are always some guidelines for us to grasp when dealing with the world, so that your thoughts are more profound, you will be able to receive a "drop of water to see the world" effect.

17. The handwriting is beautiful, clear and neat structure, can not help but give a person a refreshing feeling, which the teacher should really learn from you. Just let us promote each other in the future language learning, okay?

18, writing as a person, your article and your person as simple, open-minded. Your essay writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term honing. I hope you in the future learning process, heart feel and savor life, write a more touching good article.

19. I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed very winding and long, but as long as you work hard and persistently move forward, the laurels of success will belong to you.

20. The article can be a pleasure. You can't take writing as a burden to yourself, but you should record your own journey with a positive mindset and delicate strokes.

21. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, have the courage to face failure is even more valuable. I believe that gold, there will always be a time to shine. I hope you adjust your mindset as soon as possible, you will find the sky more blue.