Teachers' evaluation of students' compositions.

Appropriate and wonderful comments can stimulate students' enthusiasm for writing, while mediocre or wrong comments will destroy the spirit and co

Teachers' evaluation of students' compositions.

Appropriate and wonderful comments can stimulate students' enthusiasm for writing, while mediocre or wrong comments will destroy the spirit and confidence of primary school students. The following is what I arranged for you, I hope it will help you!

Careful selection

1. In your pen, the scenery of xx in winter is described in detail and the language is fluent. The use of metaphor personification in this paper adds vividness and interest to the composition. If we can put the description of characters' activities in such a landscape, the composition will be more colorful!

2. In your pen, the scenery of xx is so beautiful and moving, and the activities are so colorful. I love you too, beautiful xx.

3. The author observes … carefully, describes it delicately, and the language is vivid and novel.

4. The full-text language is concise and the structure is natural ... The article has a rigorous structure and echoes from beginning to end.

5. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although the length is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.

6. A series of verbs that express the actions of the characters are used accurately and well.

7. The application of first-person writing gives … great advantages and plays a good role in characterization and performance center. It is friendly and natural to read, with clear thinking and lively rhythm.

8. The process of things is written in a concrete, clear and coherent way. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description to fully express the author's feelings.

9. The article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, just like the ending of a clear spring, and plays the role of making the finishing touch.

10. The article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.

1 1. Make things clear, use verbs correctly, use metaphors appropriately, and make vivid suggestions. You can get education from them after reading.

12. Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.

13. With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing style, this paper expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind.

14. There are three main advantages: it can closely follow the requirements of the topic, completely write the process of ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

15. The beginning is simple and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is realistic, which reflects the author's good language control ability.

16. The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.

17. Fresh, lively, cheerful, clear, and childlike innocence between the lines make the article full of vitality.

18. The article presents …

19. The article is concise and the language is plain and simple.

20. The ending is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple, profound and intriguing.

Classic

1. Switch with feeling and end with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.

2. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

3. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.

4. Focus on expressing emotions at the end, give consideration to the beginning and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.

5. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.

6. The article ends with ….

7. At the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, which is the finishing touch, short and powerful.

8. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are poor.

9. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.

10. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable finishing touch at the end highlights the theme of the article.

1 1. With a complete * * *, describes the ...

12. Key points, appropriate details and specific contents.

13. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.

14. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.

15. Tell us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is unforgettable.

Selected specimen collection

1. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, natural and coherent connection and prominent center.

2. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.

3. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.

This article is lyrical when it is narrated.

5. Make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor and personification.

6. The little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.

7. The use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.

8. The article is elegant, smooth and clear, especially the characters' language is humorous.

9. The imagination of the article is reasonable.

10. Through vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.

1 1. The article has clear clues and prominent themes, which are closely focused.

12. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and the description of the environment sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.

13. The beginning is very concise.

14. The article is novel at the beginning, which has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have an impression on the characters as soon as they meet.

15. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.