How to Write Scenery in Narration

Narrative Writing Scenery, Wonderful Words —— How to Write Scenery in Narrative Writing

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Although the composition in the examination room is generally not limited to style, most of them still write narratives and argumentative papers. It is not easy to get high marks in argumentative writing, because many students choose narrative writing because they need reasoning ability and strict logical reasoning ability. And narrative, mainly writing narrative. In the process of writing, many students just narrate for the sake of narration and forget to write about the scenery, which is a brilliant stroke. In fact, scenery description should be one of the basic writing skills of middle school students. If we can write the scene properly in the event narrative, we can not only truly reproduce the natural scenery, but also relax the narrative rhythm and enrich the connotation of the article. You can also use the description of the scenery to create an atmosphere, promote the development of the plot, contrast the emotions of the characters, enhance the artistic appeal of the article, and even play a role in suggesting the main idea and deepening the theme. Scenery description can be written at the beginning or at the end of the article.

★ First, write the scenery at the beginning

Qiao Jiri, a poet in the Yuan Dynasty, said: "There are also laws for writing Yuefu, and so are the words' crested, streaked and leopard's tail'. A good beginning is fascinating and fascinating, and it is called "Phoenix Head". The use of scenery description at the beginning of the article can give people a deep impression. Generally speaking, the role is to explain the environment of the characters and pave the way for the following; Or describe the environment and lay the emotional tone; Or explain the background of the story, the cause of the story, etc. The content of scenery description can be weather, natural scenery, building facilities, dynamic and static scenery, distant view and close view, poor view, big view and small view.

Of course, we should pay attention to three aspects when using scenery description at the beginning: first, don't write too many endless scenery words, which will make the head look small and the article asymmetrical, so we need to select and cut "scenery" purposefully; Second, there are natural scenery and human scenery, real scenery and virtual scenery, moving scenery and static scenery, as well as happy scenery and sad scenery (from the specific scenery itself, there are levels, angles, colors, sounds and States of the scenery, etc.). ). Give priority to the main scene, write more main scenes and less auxiliary scenes. Third, the description of the scenery must be unified with the personality characteristics of the people or things described, which can play a role in contrast.

"All landscape words are sentimental words", whether they are fresh and beautiful or gloomy and cold, are all aimed at rendering a specific sadness. Starting with the description of the scenery, it seems unintentional, but in fact it is affectionate, which sets the emotional tone for the full text. For example, "Quiet, the mountains are green, the water is green, the trees and grass are green ..." The vivid and delicate description of the scenery has begun, which can make readers immersive. ...

Another example is Sun Li's Lotus Lake: "When the moon rises, the yard is cool and clean. The broken reed eyebrows moisten during the day, just to make a seat. " Everyone is familiar with it. Bloody War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, which embodies the national shame and sadness, is so picturesque in the master's pen. There is no nervous preparation here. In a picturesque landscape, children in Baiyangdian are doing their best to build their own beautiful homes. The description of this environment aroused readers' love for the motherland and hatred for foreign invaders. Another example is the beginning of Nobel Prize in Literature winner Yasunari Kawabata's Snow Country: "Go through a long tunnel to the county boundary, and it is the Snow Country. The night sky is white ... "It lays a beautiful artistic conception for the novel.

★ Second, write the scenery in the article

Writing scenery in the middle of the article can render a specific atmosphere, set off the interest and mood of the characters and express their psychology. For example, Gorky's "Mother" wrote: "Cold and dry air tightly surrounds her body and reaches her throat, making her nose itch and making her unable to breathe for a while." It not only wrote the season of mother's action, but also set off a tense atmosphere, which played a role in shaping the image of a revolutionary mother who was fearless in times of crisis.

Writing scenery in the middle of the article can also express the character. For example, Mr. Lu Xun's Blessing describes Master Lu's study like this: "When I returned to Uncle Lu's study, the corrugated cardboard was already white, and the room was brightly reflected. It is clear that the big' Shou' hanging on the wall was inscribed by Chen Tuan's bodhi old zu; One side of the couplet has fallen off, loosely rolled on the long table, and the other side is still there ... "It can be seen that Master Lu Si is the guardian of consciously safeguarding the feudal system and feudal ethics. He respected Neo-Confucianism and Confucius and Mencius. He is lazy, selfish, hypocritical and heartless, and is an important figure in Xianglinsao's tragedy.

Writing a scene in the middle of the article can also push the plot forward. For example, in Blessing, the description of Master Lu's family's blessings, but Master Lu's order of "Never mind, Sister Xianglin" dashed all her struggling hopes, and the description of the specific scenery of blessing promoted the development of the plot.

The author can also express emotions through the scenery to achieve the purpose of blending scenes. For example, Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond describes a bleak and hazy moonlight picture of the lotus pond, which actually entrusts Mr. Zhu's special feelings in a specific period: by expressing a fantastic and detached emotion in Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, he wrote a Peach Blossom Spring for intellectuals.

Write a scene at the end

Amin poet Xie Zhen said: "A sentence starts with a sentence, and it sounds like firecrackers, and it sounds like firecrackers." Every sentence is like a bell, and the sound is more than enough. "It can be seen that the requirements of the ancients for poetry collections are: to be as concise and powerful as' leopard tail', to be as intriguing as' bell', and to have endless words and meanings.

Writing a scene at the end of the article, that is, ending with a scene, can also receive endless artistic effects, leaving readers with endless imagination. For example, Wang Changling's "Joining the Army" says: "Pipa dances with new sounds, and always leaves old feelings behind. I can't stop listening to chaos, and the high autumn moon shines on the Great Wall. " The first three sentences of this poem are all lyrical about music. At the end, the poet uses a pen to settle his feelings and scenery. It seems that after the scene of buying wine and drinking music in the army, the vast scene of the Great Wall suddenly appeared for a month, with a magnificent and sad realm. The scene away from lovers sublimates poetry. Gui Youguang's "Ji Xiang Xuanzhi" ends: "There is a loquat tree in the court, which was planted in the year when my wife died, and now it is slim." Mr. Wu Xiaoru explained it this way: "What impressed the author was the loquat tree in front of the court. It was planted by my favorite person a year before his death. Now this tree is as elegant as a cover. How can people feel inferior when they see things and think about people! The beauty of the article is that the author didn't get to the bottom of a cavity of bitterness and complaints, but just put away the endless pen, as Su Shi described, the echo of "lingering around the beam, endless" rippled in people's ears. This not only makes the article far-reaching, but also makes it easier to strike a chord with readers, which can't help but cause readers to lament ... "("Examples of Intensive Reading of China Ancient Literature ")

Of course, when we describe the scenery, it is impossible to "video" the scenery purely naturally. We should integrate our emotions, use our emotional colors to make scenery, and achieve scene blending, scene blending, and scene blending. Only in this way can the written picture be more flexible, better express the center of the article, increase the appeal of the article and better impress readers. For example, Yu Dafu's Autumn in the Old Capital closely follows "purity, quietness and sadness" and depicts several pictures such as "the early morning in the autumn courtyard, the falling flowers in Qiu Shu, the lingering sound of Qiu Chan, the cool gossip in autumn, and the victory over the sun and the autumn fruit", and puts the natural "objective color" into the painting with emotion; Acute; The autumn color of the old capital is perfectly integrated with the writer's inner "subjective color" and (personal emotion): autumn attachment and autumn loneliness.

Appreciation of excellent works

Hold a warm hand.

Peng cheng

The whole world is white. The snow on the ground is surprisingly thick. If you step on it, you will sink in. A vast expanse of whiteness filled the field of vision. The sudden heavy snow didn't seem to stop all afternoon. At night, the cold wind is also involved, wreaking havoc with snowflakes flying all over the sky, which is even more rampant.

"This damn weather!" I complained, dragging my frozen feet and trudging home step by step. The cold snow fluttered and fell on the face flushed with cold. "There will be heating when you get home." As he gathered all his strength, he cursed the weather and moved his feet, which were so numb that he could hardly walk.

Maybe nine times out of ten, when I got home, I knew the key was missing. My parents were on a business trip, so I leaned on the stairs and felt a little collapsed. It was getting dark, and snowflakes poured into the corridor unscrupulously. I want to cry without tears. Who made me so careless? By the light of a street lamp, I can vaguely see the two characters "Unlock:" written on the advertising column in the corridor. I immediately picked up my mobile phone and got through the phone, just like grasping at straws and waiting for the arrival of the savior.

I waited a long time, but I didn't see anyone. "Are you coming? Who cares about this 10 yuan in such a cold day? " I'm a little desperate. I am shivering with cold in this corridor where the evil wind is howling. After a while, a figure appeared in the distance: hunchbacked, wearing a faded cotton-padded coat. A scrawny hand was holding an old wooden box. The word "unlock" is faintly reflected on the wooden box full of snowflakes.

I greeted him immediately, as if I were meeting my family. I explained my parents' business trip and asked him to open the lock. Who knows hearing this, he frowned and suddenly turned and left with a wooden box. I can't help being shocked. It took me a while to come to my senses and shouted at his distant figure, "What professional ethics?" Are you afraid I won't pay? I just sat in the hallway and froze all night without asking you! "In addition to yelling, I am upset. Standing there, my brain went blank.

"Girl, your family is on a business trip. I'll go back and get the tools and give you a key. " Looking up, it turned out to be the uncle who unlocked the lock! In the flying snow, I took another look at him: his hair was covered with snowflakes, some of which had melted into snow water, and water droplets slowly dripped down his cheeks. The wrinkles on his face reflect the vicissitudes of time, his kind face and rickety back, but it also highlights his affability. ...

Suddenly, a brand-new key appeared in front of me and pulled back my thoughts. When the old man put the warm key in my red hand, he smiled kindly and asked with concern, "Little girl, are you cold?"

I smiled and replied, "it's not cold, it's warm!" " "

The cold wind is getting colder and the snow is falling, but I feel particularly warm, given by a stranger. No matter when and where, no matter the cold and hot summer, if everyone can pass on the warm baton, every corner of the world will be full of warmth, and the world will be a dead palace!

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The article twists and turns, twists and turns, using the way of wanting to rise first and restraining, praising the good quality of the elderly. The detailed description of the article is also ubiquitous and successful, and details can be seen in almost every paragraph. The author is good at creating the atmosphere, writing the scenery at the beginning, rendering the special environment of "snow", connecting the old man with me, and writing the scenery at the end to sublimate the theme of the article. (He Wei)