Compulsory one "15, Jiangnan Winter Scenery" text.

Winter Scenery in the South of the Yangtze River People who spend the winter in the north always know the taste of cooking tea around the stove, or eating mutton, peeling peanuts and drinking for nothing. However, people with stoves, warm kang and other equipment, no matter how deep the snow is outside or whether the wind is thundering, live in the house for two or three months, but it is the most severe period of seclusion in a foreign land in a year; Needless to say, even children who like activities will always love them, because there are some fruits such as radishes and palms in the middle, and there are lively festivals such as New Year's Eve and Lantern Festival on the first day of the first month.

But in Jiangnan, it is different; After the solstice in winter, the leaves in the north and south of the river will not be stripped. Cold wind-northwest wind-sometimes blows, and it is not too cold for a day or two at most. The gray clouds were swept away, the fallen leaves filled the streets, and the morning cream was as white as powder on the face of a woman in black. As soon as the sun is on the roof, birds chirp again, and water vapor is released from the soil. Old people and children can sit and chat in the gap in front of the door and camp outside. Isn't the winter scenery in Jiangnan lovely?

I grew up in Jiangnan, and I was deeply impressed by the winter in Jiangnan when I was a child. Although I gradually entered middle age and fell in love with late autumn, thinking that autumn is the favorite season for readers and writers, I always feel that the winter scenery in the south of the Yangtze River is a special mood, which can match the summer nights in the north. To put it more modestly, it is an obvious emotional appeal.

I have also been to Fujian and Guangdong, where I spent the winter, which was extremely warm and warm. Sometimes, at the end of the lunar calendar, I may have to take out my gauze shirt. Walking through the hedges of savages, you can see many miscellaneous autumn flowers! After a shower and thunder, the weather cooled down; At most, I have to put on a jacket. Between Fujian and Guangdong, fur coats and cotton-padded jackets are absolutely unnecessary. This extreme southern climate is not what I call the winter scenery in the south of the Yangtze River, but Changchun in the south, which is an extension of spring or autumn.

Jiangnan has rich and humid geology, which can contain hot air and support plants; Therefore, in the Yangtze River area, reed flowers can be unbeaten until the winter solstice, and sometimes they can survive for more than three months. Like sapium sebiferum on both sides of Qiantang River, the red leaves are backward, and the branches are hung with white buds. What else? The cluster photographed by the camera can confuse the authenticity of plum blossoms. The grass is ochre at most, and the roots are always green. Not only do wildfires never completely consume them, but cold winds can't blow them down. If you are willing to walk alone in the winter suburbs on a sunny afternoon, you will not only feel the cold when you are young, but also feel an inexplicable hidden anger under the blue sky; ? When winter comes, spring will always come soon? The poet's famous sentences are the easiest to understand only in Shan Ye in the south of the Yangtze River.

Speaking of walking in the cold suburbs, it is really a special favor for Jiangnan residents in winter; People who grew up in the northern ice and snow have no chance to enjoy this kind of happiness all their lives. I don't know how the winter in Germany compares with the winter in Jiangsu and Zhejiang, but judging from the fact that many writers like to use the word Spaziergang as their creative theme, it seems that it is about southern Germany, and the changes of the four seasons are always not much different from those in Jiangnan. For example, the local poet Luo Zaige (Peter Rossege, 1843? 19 18), he used this? Take a walk? There are many articles on this topic, but most of them can be applied in the mountainous areas of Jiangsu, Zhejiang and China.

The rivers and ports in the south of the Yangtze River are connected, the land is close to the sea, and there are many lakes and swamps, so sometimes the air contains moisture. There will be some light rain from time to time in winter. The scene of winter rain in this cold village is an indescribable leisurely realm. Think about it, after the autumn harvest, three or five families gathered in a small village by the river, with the door facing the long bridge and the window facing the mound in the distance, with many leafy trees in the middle; On this picture of the winter countryside, a layer of white rain as fine as powder is sprinkled with a light background. Do you feel free enough? If you want more scenery, you can park a boat with a sunshade in front of the door, add a few noisy drinkers to the hut, add red and yellow when it is dark, and draw a circle on the window of the hut to indicate a halo. When people reach this state, they will naturally be free and easy, and eventually they will lose everything and stop asking for it. We should always remember what the poets in the Tang Dynasty did. Are the trees on the river raining at dusk? A quatrain When the poet came here, he was even polite to the greenwood peddler. What is the charm of the winter scenery in Jiangnan?

When it comes to rain, it is inevitable to think of snow: with dusk, snow is coming. How about a glass of wine? Nature is the snow scene at sunset in Jiangnan. ? Wei Xuejiu Village Hansha Meiying Road? On a beautiful winter night, three friends meet to flirt with the wine girl. ? Dogs bark in Chai Men village, but the night snow returns to people? The snowy night in the south of the Yangtze River is even more silent. ? On a tree in front of Zita Law, a branch opened last night? The next morning, the children in the village who like making snow as much as dogs came to report the scenery in the village. Not all the poets' poems are written in Jiangnan, and not all the poets who wrote these poems are from Jiangnan. But it is straightforward to forge these poems to describe the snow scene in Jiangnan, which is much better than my prose written with this stupid pen.

In a few years, there may be a winter without rain or snow in Jiangnan, and it will be a little colder in Chun Xue at the end of the lunar calendar or the beginning of February in spring. Last year's winter (1934) was like this. I'm afraid this winter will be different. According to the solar terms, the days that are too cold will end in February of 1936, and it will last for seven or eight days at most. Winter like this is called dry winter in rural areas, which may be better for wheat harvest, but the population will be damaged; After a long drought, diphtheria, influenza and other diseases are naturally easy to get up, but those who want to enjoy the winter scenery in Jiangnan will only be happier this winter, because there are more sunny days, and there are naturally more opportunities to stroll in the suburbs. The Japanese call it hiking, and the Germans call it Spaziergang madman. This is the most popular winter.

The weather outside the window is as clear as late autumn; In Gao Shuang, Wan Li, you can't sit quietly in your room because of the sunshine. Empty talk is not as good as practice. I don't want to write such boring articles any more. I'd better pick up my cane, put down my pen and paper and go for a walk on the lake!

Mr. Yu Dafu's Appreciating the Winter Scenery in the South of the Yangtze River is a rare and beautiful article, but it also has its own shallow opinions in teaching, which need to be corrected by the local experts.

Let's look at the first sentence. Needless to say, even children who like activities always like to eat, because there are some snacks such as carrots, ducks and pears, as well as lively festivals such as the Lantern Festival on the first day of the first lunar month. Radish? Does it count? Fruit? What about in the room? We can understand it as yes or no, which leads to ambiguity. Besides? Fruit snack food? How to understand it? The range of idle food is obviously larger than that of fruit. Should it be eliminated? Fruit? It takes three words to get through. See this sentence again? Festival? Is it suitable? It's obvious? New Year's Eve? The first day of the first month? Lantern Festival? It refers to a specific festival rather than a festival. What does a festival mean? Needless to say, even children who like activities always love them, because there are some radishes, ducks and pears, as well as lively festivals such as New Year's Eve, the first day of the first month and the Lantern Festival.

Let's look at the second sentence. The grass is ochre at most, and the roots are always green. Not only have wildfires never completely burned them, but strong winds can't blow them down. In terms of severity, wildfire is obviously stronger than cold wind, so we should talk about cold wind before wildfire. Strong winds can't blow them down, and wildfires worse than strong winds can't burn them out. So this sentence becomes: the grass is ochre at most, and the roots are always green. Not only the strong wind can't blow down, but even the wildfire can't burn out.

Let's look at the third sentence If you are willing to go for a walk in the suburbs in winter on a sunny afternoon, you will not only feel the cold of old age, but also feel an inexplicable hidden anger under the blue sky; ? When winter comes, spring will always come soon? Only in Shan Ye in the south of the Yangtze River can we easily understand the poet's famous sentences. The first half of the sentence is smooth, but it is always awkward to read. That's because the order of some words doesn't match our sense of language and needs to be changed. It is not appropriate to have a related word in the second half of the sentence, and a word needs to be added. In this way, this sentence becomes like this: if you are willing to go for a walk alone in the winter suburbs on a sunny afternoon, you will not only feel the chill of 20 years old, but also feel an inexplicable anger hidden there under the blue sky; ? When winter comes, spring will always come soon? Only in Shan Ye in the south of the Yangtze River can we easily understand the poet's famous sentences.

Let's look at the fourth sentence. Speaking of walking in the cold suburbs, it is really a special favor for Jiangnan residents in winter. Don't add the second comma of this sentence, because it is obviously a sentence and should not be said alone. And then what? By who? The words used are a bit redundant and should be removed. Speaking of walking in the cold suburbs, it is really a boon to Jiangnan residents in winter.

The fifth sentence. ? Wei Xuejiu Village Hansha Meiying Road? On a beautiful winter night, three friends meet to flirt with the wine girl. In this sentence, do the three friends on a frozen night refer to Xue Yuemei or something else? This is ambiguous. Three friends on a winter night here should refer to Xue Yuemei, not others. In order to clear up the ambiguity, just put? what's up Change this word to? This? Words will do. This sentence becomes like this: Wei Xuejiu Village Hansha Meiying Road? And then Xue Yuemei, three friends on a winter night, met to flirt with the wine girl.

The sixth sentence. In a few years, there may be a winter without rain or snow in the south of the Yangtze River, and then it will be very cold at the end of the lunar calendar or the beginning of February in spring, and then it will be very cold in Chun Xue. This sentence doesn't accord with our sense of language, and it always feels awkward. When the author writes an article. Going is something in the future, so we should add "will" before the next word to indicate something in the future. In a few years, there may be a winter without rain or snow in the south of the Yangtze River, and it will be cold at the end of the lunar calendar or early February in spring, and it will rain a little in Chun Xue.

The seventh sentence. It's sunny in Gao Shuang, Wan Li, and you can't sit still in your room. In this sentence? Manufacturing? This word is obviously redundant, because temptation itself is the actor, so why use the word "manufacturing"? After the revision, the sentence becomes like this: It's sunny and sunny in Gao Shuang, so you can't sit quietly in the room.

The last sentence. Empty talk is not as good as practice. I don't want to write this boring article anymore. I'd better pick up my cane, put down my pen and paper and go for a walk on the lake. The third clause should be that I don't want to write any more, which is our habit. The next two clauses should be to put down the pen and paper first, and then pick up the crutches. This is our habitual action.

Mr. Duff has studied in Japan for many years, so his works are obviously deeply influenced by Japanese culture. There are too many words in the whole article, which is obviously a Japanese speaking habit. Readers can look for the words in the article, and they are all full, and the places that should not be used are also used, so I won't repeat them one by one. I hope my generous family will correct me after talking so much nonsense. I also use this article to express my respect and love for Mr. Yu Dafu.