Begonia Society 339

Begonia Club Leading Cup Poetry Competition

Competition Works of Begonia Society No.339

Title: On February 2nd, the dragon looked up.

Genre: choose one of five methods, six methods, seven methods and exclusive methods.

Moderator: Jianwu lay man

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Rain brings fragrance.

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Do not ask questions.

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Chang' an laoren

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Nanfengchuang

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Go home after the war

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Nalan Huiruo

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(Xia Qun Yue Bi)

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-Singing without confusion

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_ Pearl River Beach

1. To the point, and the description of the traditional atmosphere is also very delicate. From "Spring Thunder" to "Writing", from "Pray for Heaven to Prepare Seeds" to "Gaicaoluo", and then to the conclusion sentence of Fuxi, "Wan Gu Liu", the author's skill is reflected in structure and writing.

2. The instrument is neat and rigorous.

The only problem is that there are too many objects and images. Although the tail couplet captures the artistic conception, it is a bit stiff to turn the pen, and the space for one combination is a little less, and the pen is dull. Comments on this small day

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Black herring blowing waves

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Shu Yan

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Sima Ting Yun

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Poets and disciples

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luck

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—— Peng Zhenguang

1, the first sentence explains the place and time.

The scenery of solar terms.

Turn out the sentences on the landscape to improve the artistic conception.

Conclude the sentence with the ancient meaning, serve the present and make a perfect ending according to the current situation.

2. The whole poem is opposite. Pay attention to words and use allusions appropriately. The work of a master. Julia review

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He' nan Jinghe yi

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Miss each other

1. The whole poem is fresh and has a deep feeling of smelling the breath of spring.

2. The antithesis is neat and smooth, with both sights and images, and the words and rhymes are very artistic. And cleverly mentioned Haitang!

3. It is certainly better to express feelings and the like, but as a pure landscape poem, it is also a masterpiece. Comments on this small day

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Note: two couplet intertextuality, nine couplet is difficult to exist,

Mazu is a sculpture on Mother River.

Mu Mu Yus

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Xiao jiandong

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