I still () Semi-proposition essay 600 words, urgent need ！！！！！

(a) I still for Shu indulgence sad song

"Rolling Yangtze River eastward, the waves of the heroes, right and wrong turn the head empty - ..... The world's most important things are all in the past and present." This powerful words ring in the ears again, and the picture of the Three Kingdoms period with constant wars and consecutive years of conquests comes to mind again. (Comments: quote the lyrics at the beginning of the song, quickly cut to the chase.)

I remember when I first read the "Romance of the Three Kingdoms", read Guan Yu defeated Mecheng, defeated and captured, brutally killed, I shed tears. Re-read the "Romance of the Three Kingdoms", when I saw Zhuge Liang Xian died in Wuzhangyuan, I was in tears. Covering the volume of contemplation, perhaps their own young and sentimental, perhaps suppression of Cao Zun Liu feelings oriented, so that I can not help but favor Shu, y lamented for Shu.

Think of that Liu, Guan, Zhang, since the Peach Orchard, since the Three Jieyi, their liver and guts together glory and shame and ****, to uphold justice, fight against evil, rebel against the Yellow Turbans ...... in the shadow of swords and swords, drums and horns in the fight, the battle of most of his life, and finally set up the state of Shu. But the good times don't last long, the firm state of Shu is only two short years. Righteous Guan Yu was killed in the loss, urgent brother revenge Zhang Fei killed, Liu Huangshi Baidi entrusted to the orphan, revitalize the great cause of the Han dynasty did not become, a unification of the hegemony of the country has not yet been completed, they have hastened to leave with regrets, and become familiar in people's hearts and minds of the tragic hero. The three brothers died one after another, resulting in the power of the state of Shu greatly weakened, so that the operation of a strong army of Shu's dream eventually became a bubble.

And then look at the mastermind Zhuge Liang, his life is a tragedy. The first master of the crane to the west, Shu millions of people only Zhuge Liang, he is not unaware of Liu Zen is unable to support the monarch, he will not be unaware of the Liu's world of the number of gas, but the three principles of the restraints of the five rules so that as a subject he can only try to do his best to do the loyalty and chastity of the section. He knew that he was powerless, knew that he could not save the day, but he still did it without hesitation. In the Table of Expedition, he hoped to use his heir to arouse the ambition to pacify the world, but Liu Adou, who was unable to help himself, did not see the beautiful mountains and rivers, but songs and dances in his eyes. He took all the responsibilities on his shoulders, and in spite of the difficulties, he exhausted his wisdom, bowed down and exhausted himself. He set out on the road of no return. Seven years of the Northern Expedition, but has not stepped into the Central Plains half a step, drinking horse Yellow River, but ultimately just a dream. From the Three Guan Yu, burning Red Cliff, seven captured Meng to the scheme of Sima, in vain to increase the posterity of a long sigh! However, who has seen his brow locked feather fan shaking helplessly, who heard him look away from the cold clouds of Shu Road that heartbreaking sigh? In the five zhangyuan maple satirical autumn wind blowing down the withered leaves at the time, he took the ambition of the unfolding of the regret gone, with the guilt of the knowledge of the first master gone, Wolong one day soul to return to their hometowns, the great Shu Jiangshan crumbled.

"Gathering and dispersing are all destiny, the clutch is always related to the feelings, bear the life before the matter, why fear behind the comment ......" Looking at the history of the Shu, recalling those familiar faces, sentimental tears slipped and fell.

The wheel of history crushed through the yellowed history books, I still for Shu several times indulge in sad song. (Comment: according to the beginning, again the title.)

Reasons for full marks:

But look at the title of the magnetic force generated by the readers may be glued to the eyeballs at once, a young man dared to evaluate the familiar masterpieces, I do not feel for the boldness of the author of the young and marveled at. It is difficult to comment on the masterpiece, but the author of a unique way to find the right angle, selected a few characters, their own deep thinking about the characters of the Three Kingdoms into the composition, melting feelings between the lines, with simple language to summarize their lives, so that the article is a natural, fluent and natural. In addition, this article cleverly used a lot of prose, couplets, so that the article atmosphere, but also added to the article of the book and cultural heritage. The article also cleverly borrowed "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" the beginning and the end of the song, so that the article sound and emotion, brilliant, can write such a level of articles, it can be seen that the author has a high degree of literary cultivation.

(ii) I will still stretch my arms

Noble is the epitaph of the noble, mean is the pass of the mean!

One by one, the title note

On the last Sunday before the midterm exam, I sat in front of the computer browsing for information about the Wenchuan earthquake, because my language teacher said it was a hot topic for the midterm exam. In order to cram a little more into my brain, I sacrificed my nap time and fought hard against sleepiness.

Suddenly, there was a message from a stranger in my QQ.

"Who are you?" I asked curiously." I am Tan Qianqiu."

"Mr. Tan?" I froze, thinking I was in a dream, "Didn't you die in the earthquake to protect your students?"

"Yes, I'm talking to you in heaven right now."

"There's QQ. chatting in heaven?" I stared in surprise.

"Yeah, except for the ugly stuff, everything on earth is in heaven!" Ms. Tan sent a smiley face.

"Really? Then now I am having a question for you."

"When you saved those four kids, did you think about being famous?"

"No, it would be too unworthy to gamble your life for fame." "Then what were you thinking about at the time?"

"I just wanted to save a few more kids, that's my duty as a teacher."

"People often show instinct in times of danger, when the building collapsed in a moment, why did not you hold your head, or take the road?"

"For me, shielding my children is my instinct."

"By the way, there was a teacher, known as 'Fan Run Run', who was the first to run to the playground at the first speed when the earthquake struck, and said: 'I have no obligation to risk my life to save my students.' It also says, 'Putting others before yourself and sacrifice is a choice, but not a virtue! ' What do you think about that?"

"Society has its own judgment. But I think our society is better off when one makes it an obligation to put others before oneself and sacrifice."

"If you chose again would you run out first like he did?" "No, I would still spread my arms to protect my students."

"So ......" I was about to ask again when the power suddenly snapped out. I froze and rubbed my eyes, was that a dream? Or there is a person posing as Mr. Tan? There is no way to know, but his words I clearly remember "I will still spread arms to protect my students."

I think it is because we still have such a spirit in the face of great disasters, so the people in the disaster area can still rebuild their beautiful homes, our people still stand up the backbone of our nation, our country is still thriving.

Reasons for full marks:

The vast majority of candidates see "I still ......" this title, are writing about how they still, but the author of this article is a unique way to fictionalize their own conversation with the earthquake sacrifice of Mr. Tan Qianqiu, and borrowed the words of Mr. Tan as the title of the article, let a person bright. In this article, he writes that he chats with Mr. Tan in heaven through QQ, which is absurd, but because of the padding before and after, it seems reasonable and reasonable one by one, all of which is nothing more than the author's thinking about the realization of the two phenomena in the earthquake. The lyricism at the end implicitly indicates the attitude of the author, deepens the theme, and inspires the reader.

(3) I am still on earth

I am a gift left in Pandora's box, the only comfort in all human misfortunes.

One by one inscription

At 14:28 on May 12, 2008, in Wenchuan, Sichuan Province, the earthquake, the devil, exerted its lustful power to turn the beautiful land of heaven into hell. So in an instant, houses collapsed, mountains slid, rivers broke, pain, sadness, crying, despair, death rose from the ruins. The devil laughed and said to me "O Hope, flee far away, there is no place for you here."

"No, mankind will never abandon me."

"Don't you be delusional. Humanity has been taken over by great suffering, where is there room for you? You look for it, and if you can't find it, get lost."

"Okay, if I can't find it, I'll go, if I do, you get lost." "It's a deal. You go find it."

'I set a bet with the devil and started looking.'

Ah, who is that old man? It turned out to be Premier Wen, who rushed to the disaster area in less than three hours after the quake and led the government and the public to do a good job of earthquake relief. He was not afraid of fatigue and continuously fought at the front line of the earthquake relief work. The suffering of the victims made the old man look old. Ah, I found it, I am in Premier Wen's compassionate white hair.

The PLA soldiers are here. You see them marching through the mountains, risking their lives to parachute into the "isolated islands", and searching for people under the rubble in the aftershocks. I've found it, and I'm in their blood and sweat.

More than ten hours after the earthquake, a three-year-old boy named Lang Zheng, whose face was covered with blood, was rescued. Just as the armed police uncles were about to move him to a safe place, little Lang Zheng raised his right hand, which could still move, with difficulty, and saluted weakly but standardly. Ah, I found it, I am in Lang Zheng grateful little hand.

After the earthquake, compatriots on both sides of the Taiwan Strait opened their wallets, donated blood, and extended a helping hand. Ah, I found it, I was in the attention of the whole country.

Ah, I am still on earth, so what is there to fear? We will surely defeat the devil, and our future is still bright!

Full marks for the following reasons:

The outstanding highlights of this article are as follows:

First, the form is novel. The opening of the title, pointing out the meaning of hope for mankind, deepening the theme; the main text cleverly use the fairy tale form, to "hope" to find evidence still on earth as a clue to the organization of the whole article, and many times with the "ah, I found it, I'm in the ...... sentence, according to the title of the article, the form is lively and rigorous.

Second, the theme is profound. This article wrote a few typical fragments after the earthquake, from different sides of the earthquake relief shown in the spirit of unity. Because of this spirit, the disaster area still has hope after the earthquake. The ending is lyrical and gives great encouragement.

(4) I still choose to go forward

Holding a pole of bamboo hedge, in the babbling brook, both sides of the colorful peach blossoms drifted into pink snow.

Forgetting myself, I climbed the mountain at the end of the water, crawled into the small cave, and came to this heaven on earth.

The sun shone through the blue sky, shining on this rich land, the clear lake charmingly surrounded the village, and the shadows of the green mountains swirled in the water waves. There are also tall mulberry trees and verdant bamboos protecting the neat houses. The figure of a dog jumping happily tickles the corners of a child's smiling mouth.

I stood dumbfounded, looking at this village enveloped in happiness and peace, and even submerged in tears. The first thing that you need to do is to get a good deal of money from the company.

All of this in front of me is soothing my soul. The people of Taoyuan kindly invited me to stay, stay, there is only tranquility, affluence, this is the paradise on earth.

The life of a few days makes me fascinated, but I still decided to leave. As the morning sun dyed the sky red, I stepped into the boat and gently nodded down the bamboo hedge. The splashing waves of the creek seemed like a soft sigh, and the peach blossoms that stained my clothes wanted to retain my departing figure.

I know that my world is not paradise, but here, I will forget about happiness, the pursuit and dreams.

Peach Blossom Garden is not the need for dreams and visions, thousands of years of calm refused to the world's chaos and noise, sweet idyllic breath will anesthetize people's minds.

Perhaps it is a blessing to be small and uncontested, but without the impetus of a dream, civilization will be forever stagnant.

I know, I stay in this paradise, then lost the dream, lost the value of existence; I also know that my world there are many shortcomings, many ugly, and I'm not a call to respond to the heroes, can not make their own world cleansing dirty. But I still choose to go forward, no matter how the future, brilliant or dull, I still go forward. My dream, flowing with a splash of color, I want to use my modest power to make my world less ugly and more beautiful.

Full marks reason:

This article from Tao Yuanming's "Peach Blossom Garden" evolution. Why did the Wuling people who stumbled into the Peach Blossom Garden leave this human asking wonderland? The original text does not explain, but the small author according to their own understanding of life gives the answer, so that the article seems novel but not frivolous, profound but not dull. The article uses the first person, delicate portrayal of the character's intense ideological struggle, which expresses their own understanding of life: the world's happiness will make them lose their dreams, lose the value of life; the real life, although there are deficiencies in their own ability is limited, but as long as you do your best to make "the world less ugly, more beautiful". As a junior high school graduate, the society can have such a clear understanding, really admirable. The depth of thought is undoubtedly the biggest highlight of this article.

(E) I still miss that person, that tree, that old house

Another year of spring came, the brilliant peach blossom both clamor that tree, but also dyed red in my memory of that person and that old house. Today, the old house is still there, but the man who traveled through it, Grandpa, has long since left with the fragrance of the flowers. (A close-up beginning puts the reader into character right away.)

Grandpa is seventy years older than me. Whenever my father and I go home to see grandpa, he always sits serenely in a chair, sipping tea, puffing on a tobacco pouch, and squinting his eyes in the sun. Grandpa said that he loved to watch the sun rise in the east, and that the rising sun was as warm and kind as Chairman Mao. I heard my father say that my grandfather joined the army at a very young age and lived in the army for many years, so he had a deep affection for Chairman Mao. In my memory, Grandpa often put me in his arms, rambling said "look, the sun is our Chairman Mao, without him, we can not live such a good day ......

Playing my memory, Grandpa was in the smoky black old house living, the old-fashioned doors and windows on the paint has long been mottled. Dad repeatedly asked to rebuild the old house, grandpa refused, said "people old like this live a lifetime of the old house, the old house is comfortable to live in it!" Yes, accompanied by the rooster's majestic crowing, a few cows and goats screaming, the small farmhouse rising smoke, intertwined with the old house of this peaceful, quiet "idyllic" morning. In my memory, whenever there is a little bit of delicious food, grandpa always put it in my bowl and said, "Girl, you eat more!" Whenever this time, I would always look at my grandfather with a crooked head, while eating quickly and without ceremony, not realizing that I had to be humble to the old man. The first thing I'd like to say is that I don't know what to do, but I don't know how to return the favor, and I'm just squandering my grandfather's love, which has long since been added to my time frame.

The peach tree in front of the door of the old house, thick and strong. The rough lines above the trunk are like the deep and shallow wrinkles on the forehead of the grandfather. The tree is very much loved by the grandfather, because it will bear a lot of very sweet peaches, and the grandfather likes to pick fresh peaches from the tree and hand them to the girl to eat. Looking at the girl's mouth full of honey-like peach juice, grandpa's eyes were full of smiles, at that moment, as if he was the happiest person in the world. However, in that water carrying cold picks adorned with that tree season, Grandpa went away, dying, he only left a sentence "look after the peach tree, so that my girl have fresh peach to eat ......"

Light years passed by in a flash, I've been and Grandpa goodbye for many years. Whenever I come to my grandfather's grave, I just want to say:Grandpa, I still love you! I still miss the tree and the old house!

Reasons for full marks:

The author chose to write about what touched him the most in his memory: his relatives in the countryside, the peach tree and the old house, which is touching to read. The author is very heart to remember with love, the words imply a "love" word, there is the grandfather's love for himself, but also his own love and nostalgia for his grandfather. The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do this, but I'm sure I'm going to be able to do it.

The language of the article is simple and delicate, read like a spring breeze. The article does not have gorgeous rhetoric, but also timely use of rhetoric, such as "the rough lines above the branches, like a great grandfather wrinkles on the forehead deep and shallow," simply to write the image of the grandfather alive. The words are so simple and beautiful that you can smell the unique simplicity and beauty of the countryside that emanates from the words.

(F) I am still a righteous and loving person

From the past to the present, what has changed is the vicissitudes of the world, but what has remained unchanged is my persistent pursuit.

A coincidental encounter, God gave me three chances of life. So, there are three times I traveled through time and space to experience rebirth.

The first time, I do a legendary god a Prometheus ......

Shortly thereafter, in the eerie underground palace, my soul was wandering, turning a corner of the palace, Satan was sneering at me "Humph! Prometheus, I have always respected you, but you have brought fire to the earth!"

"Yes, and because of that I was punished by Zeus! But I insist that I was right, because I brought light and warmth to the earth, and mankind will remember me! I love heaven, but I love mankind more!"

"But you were tortured by Zeus! Wretch! Even I am ashamed of you!" Satan's voice echoed through hell.

"What are you? You are nothing but a demon defeated by Zeus! The wise God of all gods will understand me!"

"You're such a stubborn one, I'm going to put you back in the oven! Burn your crazy heart of love!" A fire surrounded me in Satan's exasperated, hoarse roar, but I was confident that my heart would grow clearer." If I were to return to earth, I would still have a heart of love!"

The second time, in a thousand years later, I did a shock to the dynasty and the countryside of the clean official one Hai Rui ......

Suddenly one day, I was buried in the inspection of the case file, the book boy stumbled in, panicked and shouted "Hai big man, not good, your folders annoyed the emperor, want to take you out of jail it! You quickly think of an idea!"

"There is no harm, I ask for the people, correct the emperor's mistakes, I ask the heart Yuan Gui is to jail and have no fear!"

"Mr. Hai, you are a small official with a small name, and the nobles of the dynasty have never advised you.

"I'm not sure if you're a good person, but I'm a good person," he said.

"I regard the people as my bread and butter, and I am willing to plead for the people! I am favored by the emperor, but I must think of the people even more! Watching corrupt officials all fall in front of me like cutting wheat, looking at their cursed gaze, listening to the people's heartfelt cries, I ask myself, to stand up to heaven and earth conscience."

Finally, I died in the people's peace and happiness, the soul once again came to that gloomy place." Hai Rui! How dare you go against my wishes and take the liberty of the people! Then use ice to make you yield!" "If there is a rebirth, I still have a benevolent heart!"

For the third time, I am doing my white angel ......

Look, after experiencing the baptism of life and death, ice and fire test, those for more people's happiness and busy figure, there is me ......

I firmly believe that one

Dark clouds cover the sun, can not cover the glory of tomorrow;

Winter swept over the earth, can not block the lively dawn.

The dark clouds cannot cover the sun.

Therefore, no matter what I have experienced, I still do a righteous and loving me.

Reasons for full marks:

The most impressive impression of the article to the marking teacher is the bold and bizarre idea, the article describes "I" three times through the time and space of the experience rebirth, from Prometheus, Hai Rui to the white angel, no matter what is on earth, heaven or hell, "I" that the heart of the righteousness of the heart of the love will not happen the slightest change. When the candidates get rid of the limitations of real life, the eyes to the imagination space, it is a sign that the writing will be a superior masterpiece.

The title of the article, "I'm still a righteous and loving me", is a powerful and wise statement. The whole text of a large part of the conversation, personalized language to show the character of different characters, Satan's sinister, the kindness of the boy, "I" persistence jumped off the page.

(7) I am still obsessed with that side of the sky

Always like to look up at the star-studded dome of the sky, through that side of the sky, as if I vaguely see thousands of years ago, the ancestors are singing the old song of hard work, and in the nostalgia of those who formed a clear in kind in front of the eye ......

I am still fascinated by my grandfather's writing. Ever since I was a baby, I have always loved to read my grandfather's calligraphy, which is so square and strong. One by one, the square characters were like a piece of boat, carrying my childhood dreams and swimming in the mythological stories such as "En'e Runs to the Moon" and "Cowherd and Weaving Maiden". I do not know from when, I have been unable to restrain like the square character, it seems to be the most magical magic wand, no matter how impatient you are, appreciate the pages of the square character, unknowingly will help you filter out the dust in the bottom of the heart. The square structure seems to be always reminding me to be honorable and open-minded.

I am still enamored of my grandmother's lasagna. The shoes that she made were beautiful and comfortable, and they didn't stink. I'm not sure what I'm talking about, but I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do it, and I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do it, and I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do it. When I was a little older, even though I had fashionable shoes bought for me by my mother, and even though I received strange looks from strangers from time to time, and even though some of my classmates privately thought I was old-fashioned, I still loved to wear my grandmother's natty shoes. The shoes, each carefully sewn stitches, are all sent to the grandmother of my feet down to the world's mandate.

I'm still obsessed with my mom's corn porridge. I'm still in love with my mom's corn porridge, surrounded by bread and milk. In my eyes, the golden yellow emitting hot corn mush, sweet and delicious, is the world's irreplaceable food. According to my mother, when I was small, the family was not rich, can not afford to buy powdered milk and cookies mom, can only use a small fire stewed corn mush to feed me not yet full-grown teeth, and I every time with a small boy grasping the bowl, open mouth greedily sucking the "golden liquid". Corn porridge fed me and taught me not to forget my hometown wherever I go.

All the things, as if a bright star, dotted the distant sky.

Reasons for full marks:

People appreciate thoughtful, insightful and tasteful works, and examiners are no exception. The content is profound in order to leave room for reflection and new enlightenment. Candidates can be from the bottom of a thousand layers, square letters, corn paste three angles of the line, this examination essay written out of the feelings, written out of the meaning of the candidates can be from these physical objects to the realization of our nation's down-to-earth, upright spirit, is even more unusual.

After reading the whole text, I feel that the ideas and writing as smooth as a river, the text is simple and stove, "Linlin total things, as if a star of a bright dish, dotted with that distant sky", how expressive language, making the article set Ran eye-catching.