Excellent style. Say a few more words. Excellent what?

"Excellent style" and improper collocation of words; Reason: "Excellence" is generally only used for "achievement"; "Excellence" is usually only used for things, such as "achievements, styles, traditions, varieties" and so on; "Excellence" can be used for both people and things.

Therefore, behind "Excellence", there can only be "achievements" and "achievements". I don't know what you're trying to say.