Excellent composition evaluation

Excellent composition evaluation (7 articles)

No matter in school or in society, everyone will often come into contact with composition. Writing a composition can exercise our habit of being alone, calm our mind and think about our future direction. Have no clue when writing a composition? The following is my excellent composition evaluation. Welcome to reading. I hope you will like it.

Excellent composition evaluation 1 (1)

At dusk, I stepped into the field alone, and the cool breeze mixed with some June worries passed me by. Who didn't stay except time?

There are still some rosy clouds hovering in the sky, and the footsteps are still not integrated into the hodgepodge of early summer. I, with a heart that has never left March, lost on the road?

Footprints lead me to the requiem field of poetry. Originally, I just wanted to recite a little poem gently, but I was scared by three or two whispering grasses. They are talking about happiness; They are looking forward to the revelry with dew after midnight. What about me? What is my heart expecting?

In the field, the smell of newly turned soil is everywhere, faint and with a little coolness, which makes me feel helpless; Look up, in the twilight, in the ups and downs of the field, in the black land that raised one side of the people, what kind of life will you give birth to?

Home, by the way, there should be a shadow of home behind me, but from my eyes, it is so vague. Only the heart lamp, even in the wind and rain, should not be extinguished?

Walking in the fading, what should I do, put my soul?

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At dusk, I stepped into the field alone, and the cool wind mixed with some June sadness passed by me. Those who have never stopped for anyone should be called time.

There are still some rosy clouds in the sky that have not been hidden, and the footsteps have not finally merged into the symphony of early summer. I, with the heart of May, look for the way to go.

Footprints guided me out of the paradise lost in words. I just want to recite a short word gently, but I was silenced by a dozen whispering grasses. They are talking about happiness; They look forward to a hug with dew after midnight. What about me? My heart should also have its own habitat.

In the field, the smell of newly turned soil is everywhere, faint and with a little coolness, which makes me feel an indescribable laziness; Looking up, in the twilight, in the ups and downs of the field, in the black land that raised one side of the people, you will give birth to colorful life again.

Home, by the way, there must be a shadow of home behind me, but I feel it is deeply imprinted in my heart and has not turned around. That heart lamp can't be put out even in the wind and rain.

Walking in the dark, I am eager to do so and put my soul.

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At dusk, I stepped into the field alone, and the cool breeze mixed with some June joy passed by me. People who have never stayed for anyone have only time!

The sky is still hovering on some rosy clouds, and the pace has not yet integrated into the chorus of early summer. I, with my heart walking in June, am surging on the golden road full of hope!

Footprints lead me into the Happy Valley of Dreams. I just want to smile forever, but I am willing to stop for the grass that sings happily everywhere. They are full of ideals; They look forward to a kiss with dew after midnight. What about me? My heart will have its own habitat!

In the field, the smell of newly turned soil is everywhere, faint and with a little coolness, which makes me feel indescribable; Looking up, in the twilight, in the ups and downs of the fields, in the black land, a person has been raised, and you will eventually become a colorful flower of life!

Home, by the way, I still have the warmth of home in my heart, caressing the feelings of June warmly, and never metaphorically in my dreams. That heart lamp, even in the wind and rain, finally does not go out!

Walking in the fading, I will, like this, take my soul!

The teacher's comments on this composition are novel in form, adopting the method of chanting three sighs and repeating ancient poems, and skillfully expressing the true feelings inside. First of all, the article is very poetic. It uses the common repetition of chapters and sentences in poetry to render and arrange one's emotions, from the confusion of "how to how" to the pursuit of "longing for this" and then to the determination of "will be like this", and also finds one's soul destination. Secondly, the language is very poetic, and some vivid images are selected to convey delicate emotions euphemistically. Cai Xia, Grass and Mud not only have beautiful images that have disappeared, but also symbolic images that inspire philosophical thinking, and even more moral objects that carry the soul in full bloom in flower of life, which makes people feel like a surging river of poetry.

Excellent composition evaluation 2 No.65438 +0, inspiring.

Teachers can use the tone of discussion to urge students to understand and accept teachers' opinions and suggestions. For example, "The example of Zhang Haidi cited in the article seems to be unable to effectively prove the central point. Can you change a more suitable example? " "This article is the highest level in your writing. It would be more perfect if you could write a paragraph at the end and sublimate the main idea. I believe you will write well, right? " With the growth of age, middle school students' sense of independence is gradually enhanced, and they expect teachers to establish equal and harmonious teacher-student relations with them. If teachers are always condescending, they will be rebellious; If teachers participate in it equally and put forward their own opinions, students can get an impulse to think and have a desire to re-create.

Second, emotional.

We often find that what students care most about is the teacher's comments, not the guidance of skills and skills and the evaluation of advantages and disadvantages, but they try their best to spy out the teacher's attitude towards themselves from between the lines of comments: enthusiasm or indifference; Support or reject? Everyone gets a different peep and their mood fluctuates accordingly, so the teacher's comments should be full of affection.

Once students get encouragement and hope from comments, they will immediately get excited, cheer up and actively devote themselves to writing.

Comments are usually written in red ink, but when you think about it, teachers should have worked hard to write them. The more comments teachers put in, the more glorious they tend to be, and the more students gain.

Third, pertinence.

If the composition evaluation is comprehensive, it will make students accomplish nothing. Teachers should pay attention to the main aspects of students' writing, such as position, thoughts and feelings, conception angle and structural language. , so as to point out the direction for students, let students distinguish between good and bad, and attract enough attention. Comments should focus on the embodiment of the writing intention of the article. Every exercise assigned by the teacher has a purpose, either to train the ability of organizational structure or to train the ability of imagination and description. When correcting, we should pay attention to the established writing intention as the focus of comments, so as to be targeted.

Fourth, literariness

A good review should be literary in color, vivid in language, and intriguing in meaning, so that students can read and understand with appreciation. If the teacher's comments are always dry, it is not qualified to accuse the students of "the language is not vivid", nor is it qualified to ask the students to show interest and enthusiasm in the topics that need to be written. Writing is a serious matter, and comments should be more serious. The so-called lead by example should be reflected here. Since teachers require students' language to be vivid, vivid and literary, they should set an example for students in their comments.

Fifth, appreciate

Comments should fall on the word "reward". Reward them for their new materials, their profound thoughts, their unique insights, their ingenious ideas and their serious attitude? Let students feel the success and happiness of writing. Teachers in composition evaluation should not look on coldly and be objective and rigid.

The evaluation and appraisal are mainly based on rectification, but we should try our best to explore the success of students' work, from words to paragraphs, and write down red comments, such as "This article has profound ideas, showing the author's profound observation of life", "Ingenious conception, being good at drawing nutrition from the article for reference, extension and play" and "using this word to convey the spirit, as far as possible". Of course, this kind of appreciative praise cannot be exaggerated. Sometimes, the better the article, the higher the requirements, which can encourage the author without narcissism.

Sixth, humor

The ancients said, "If you don't teach people, people won't be happy to learn." The same is true of comments. Students will not like to read boring and rigid comments, which will not play a guiding role. A profound and humorous comment, even if it is a criticism, students will be happy to accept it, and it can also achieve the effect of "thinking after laughing". Sweetlov said: "Humor is the most important first assistant for educators." Humor is the embodiment of wisdom and the salt in life. Why can't you put some comments?

What about "salt"? However, we should also pay attention to moderation in using humorous comments, because some humor itself contains irony, which will dampen students' self-esteem if not grasped well.

Excellent composition evaluation 3 1) The author successfully created the image of a contemporary excellent soldier mainly by setting suspense and profile description. This kind of writing is worth learning. Rigorous structure. Seeing the truth in simplicity is a remarkable feature of this language.

2) The title is good. The "empty box" gives people a sense of mystery and has a strong suspense effect. At the same time, as can be seen from the title, this article is also very novel. The idea is also very clever. Using flashback technique, I pulled out memories of the past from the box in front of me, and there was remorse between the lines, which also reflected my mother's good intentions in educating me.

3) The details are appropriate. At the beginning of this article, directly get to the point; The middle part grasps the characteristics of Yali pear, and describes its flowers and fruits respectively, with flowers briefly described and fruits detailed; The ending is concise and closely related to the theme. Vivid language and delicate description. The author described the shape, color and taste of Yali pear in detail, among which the words "pudgy", "Huang Chengcheng" and "My Sweetie" were used properly.

4) I understand your emotional pain. Thankfully, you are a strong child, a sensible child, because you have written such a touching masterpiece. I'm glad to have a student like you. As long as you grasp today, your future will be beautiful and happy.

5) What a beautiful autumn you wrote! From your composition, the teacher saw the high blue sky, golden rice fields, flying geese in the south and falling yellow leaves, all of which made me feel the beauty and magic of autumn. How I want to say to autumn: autumn! Turning decay into magical autumn, how beautiful your students' compositions are!

6) When the teacher opens your composition book, you can always hear a burst of crying. It turned out to be punctuation, because you paid too little attention to it. Think about it, the teacher despises your composition just as you despise punctuation. Don't you cry?

7) Your composition can describe the autumn fields in detail, which shows that you are an observant child. But what a beautiful season autumn is. Autumn is a harvest season, and autumn is a colorful season. The teacher really hopes to feel that beautiful and poetic autumn in your article!

8) Through psychological description and action description, the author truly and meticulously shows his nervousness and fear.

9) Tailor-made. The pen and ink are concentrated and meticulous. The language is concise and general. Positive theme, concise beginning and powerful ending. In addition, suspense is well used to make the plot twists and turns attractive. Typical materials.

10) Wu Regret, a theorist of modern opera in China, once said: "Everyone has his own scenery, which volatilizes on himself, and his joys and sorrows have a master, and his crying has a root. Zhang San's crown is beyond Li's reach. " Therefore, when writing a composition, you must pay attention to what characters you write and what characters you must turn yourself into. We must appreciate, ponder and enter the role from the identity, gender, age and personality of that role, and we must never use our student accent to set others' words. Horace, an ancient Roman poet, said, "You have to laugh before others can laugh. Similarly, you have to cry yourself to cause a crying reaction in other people's faces. " When writing a composition, please think carefully and let the characters enter the role.

1 1) The title of this composition is well-conceived, and the content is true and concrete, especially the description of the characters is successful. Whether it's a description of feelings,

12) the psychological description or action description conforms to the age characteristics of the characters and the specific situation at that time. In addition, the first few environmental descriptions are not idle, but pave the way for the development of the plot. Pointing out the theme at the end is a warning to young readers.

13) This article is about true feelings. Very full, very specific, in addition, the use of narrative and lyrical writing, can arouse the reader's * * * sound, has a tear-jerking effect.

In the world, the earth is just a drop in the ocean. Only when you always have awe of heaven and earth can you find your place in this world and stand between heaven and earth.

There is a saying in Laozi's Tao Te Ching: "The number of great Yan is fifty, and the avenue is only forty-nine." I once thought to myself, if the avenue is perfect, what is this great swallow? Now, recalling the doubts at that time again, I can't help but feel a little better: in this world, only by sticking to the awe of heaven and earth can we stand in it; Among them, Dayan, or the "heaven" outside the avenue.

For thousands of years, human beings have developed from the era of eating and drinking blood to the top of the food chain. However, it seems that mankind is still not satisfied and is still trying to conquer heaven and earth. The feudal emperor, represented by Qin Ershi, was lawless even though he was called the "son of heaven", thinking that imperial power was heaven power. Regard life as dirt and regard yourself as the most sacred. * atrocities, against the sky. When a person is fearless, even an emperor, who can stand between heaven and earth for a long time?

Because we are in the sky, we should be afraid. The "fear" here is not timidity and fear in the traditional sense, but a heart of awe for everything in the world.

Once upon a time, human beings often regarded themselves as the spirit of all things, thinking that "man can conquer nature" and always wanted to transform nature and break the law. At the beginning of liberation, the slogan "Dare to make the world look brand-new" spread all over the country, moving mountains and filling seas, smelting steel, surpassing Britain and catching up with the United States ... It is not uncommon to violate the laws of nature and society, but it is a deformed development of the country's economic and social form.

I am not a complete materialist, but I am not a theist either. I don't believe in the existence of God who rules mankind, and I recognize Lao Tzu's natural way of "Heaven and earth are heartless, and everything is a grass dog". Some people say: "the wisdom of nature is the sea, so the wisdom of human beings is just a drop in the ocean." Although this drop also reflects the sea, it is not the sea after all. " Therefore, human beings can't try to replace the sea with water drops, but can only integrate this water drop into the natural sea and coexist with the world.

Nowadays, people seem to have lost respect for heaven and earth instead of learning from history. People who master high technology are trapped by endless greed, chopping and cutting, digging and building indiscriminately, and mass production in pursuit of gdp, regardless of its harm to the environment and destruction to the world. Therefore, we breathe pm2.5 and drink drinking water that exceeds the standard ... this is the punishment of heaven and earth.

If you think you are fearless, that is the most terrible. Living in the vast universe, we are like a dust floating in this world. Only with awe and awe of heaven and earth can we realize something on the road and stand on the world. Those who claim to be fearless, do you know what a great swallow is?

Comments:

Accurate positioning, clear definition and conclusive conclusion.

The author of this paper does not dwell on the ambiguity of "fear", but clearly defines "fear" as "awe" and "awe of heaven and earth" This is a topic of great times and timeliness, pointing to the "madness" prevailing in the current society.

Writing should be consistent with the topic. It should conform to both the proposition and the author's own theme. When talking about the relationship between ancient and modern people and heaven and earth, we grasp the essential problems of people's "stupidity" and "greed", enumerate people's actions and sins, and prove the necessity of "fear" from the opposite side. The topic is compact and the theme is prominent.

The most commendable thing is that the author can turn his usual study and reading into the highlight of his writing. The classic theory "The Number of Great Yan" originated from the Book of Changes and the Tao Te Ching is indeed a good material to arouse "awe of heaven and earth". Although the following example is a little simple, the author does not forget to use the sentence "Do you know what is one of the big swallows?" at the end of the article. This is also highlighted by "deduction".

Excellent composition evaluation 5 1. The description of the case is vivid, and the words and deeds of specific characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and reasonable.

2. It is a good composition to embody meaningful philosophy through reasonable imagination, to write fluently and concisely, and to give full play to imagination.

3. Many excellent sentences in the full text add some literary interest to the article.

This article may not be particularly attractive in plot, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the characters well, and on the other hand, the language is vivid and full of life breath, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.

5. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

6. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?

7. This paper chooses a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

8. Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.

9. The words are eloquent. I think the article is a reflection of your thoughts. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.

10. The language is clear. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.

Caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. From the article "Accident", we can see that your heart is not only full of innocence and books, schools, but also endless worries about society. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.

12. The language is decent and romantic, and the context is smooth, showing the image of a bookworm's bosom friend and the affection between "me" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.

13. We usually seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life, which can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the fields and forests, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter.

14. Miscellaneous articles can be detailed and focused.

15. This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.

16 ... Pragmatism contains simple and profound philosophy, which is refreshing and exciting.

17. This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can feel the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.

18. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which was touching.

19. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "Climbing a mountain is full of emotion and watching the sea is full of meaning". You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.

20. Exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom, and steady and steady writing is the direction of your future writing efforts.

Excellent composition evaluation 6 1. When you give your "masterpiece"-a beautiful painting to the teacher for appreciation, the teacher is really proud of you. Your mother must be as excited as the teacher! It took you a lot of effort to create this painting, didn't it? I tell you, studying is like painting. As long as we are willing to work hard, we will gain more. "

2. "You compare the' long rope' in tug-of-war to' children who can't make up their minds', which is so apt! Although the competition failed, your composition was a success! It would be better if the end of the composition turned my disappointment into several short revelations!

You are such a sentimental child! How good you are at understanding the feelings in life. Although you are a little timid about writing, you have grasped the true meaning of writing-I am writing about my feelings. As long as you write your true feelings, the teacher must like you very much.

You are a smart and sensitive child. You once had a happy family. You loved your family, but when something unpleasant happened in your family, didn't you love it? Call your family harmony and happiness with your intelligence and your love!

How beautiful autumn you write! From your composition, the teacher saw the high blue sky, golden rice fields, flying geese in the south and falling yellow leaves, all of which made me feel the beauty and magic of autumn. How I want to say to autumn: autumn! Turning decay into magical autumn, how beautiful your students' compositions are!

6. When the teacher opens your composition book, you can always hear a burst of crying. It turned out to be punctuation, because you paid too little attention to it. Think about it, the teacher despises your composition just as you despise punctuation. Don't you cry?

7. Your composition can describe the autumn fields in detail, which shows that you are an observant child. But what a beautiful season autumn is. Autumn is a harvest season, and autumn is a colorful season. The teacher really hopes to feel that beautiful and poetic autumn in your article!

8. The author used psychological description and action description techniques to truly and meticulously show his nervous and fearful psychology at that time.

9. Cut properly. The pen and ink are concentrated and meticulous. The language is concise and general. The theme is positive, the beginning is concise, the end is powerful, and suspense is used well to make the plot twists and turns attractive. Excellent comments on typical students' compositions.

10. Wu Regret, a theorist of modern opera in China, once said: "Everyone has his own scenery and volatilizes on himself. Sorrow and joy have their own roots, and Zhang San's crown is beyond Li's reach. " Therefore, when writing a composition, we must pay attention to what character we are writing, what kind of character we want to turn ourselves into, how to get into the role from the identity, gender, age and personality of that character, and we must not use our student accent to set others' words. Horace, an ancient Roman poet, said, "You have to laugh before others can laugh. Similarly, you have to cry yourself to cause a crying reaction in other people's faces. " Please think carefully when writing a composition, and let the characters enter the role.

1 1. The title of this composition is well established and the content is true and specific. In particular, the description of characters, whether sensory description, psychological description or action description, is in line with the age characteristics of characters and the specific situation at that time. In addition, the first few environmental descriptions are not idle, but pave the way for the development of the plot. Pointing out the theme at the end is a warning to young readers.

12. This paper is about true feelings. Very full and specific, in addition, the use of narrative and lyrical writing can arouse readers' feelings and make people cry.

13 ... this ... fresh and lively, cheerful and clear, and the childlike innocence that beats between the lines makes the article have vitality.

14. The article presents …

15. The article is concise and the language is plain and simple.

Excellent composition evaluation 7 1. The music is beautiful, so is the language of this article. Poetic language and fantastic imagination, how beautiful!

2. The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related. Examples of actions are touching at the beginning and have real feelings.

Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, and it is interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is clear and meaningful.

This composition is novel in material, wonderful in conception and lively in language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.

5. According to the sequence of events, the article describes the events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.

6. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.

7. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.

8. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.

9. Can reasonably imagine, embody meaningful philosophy, write fluently and concisely, and give full play to imagination. This is a good composition.

10, the full text has many wonderful sentences, which adds some literary interest to the article.

1 1, this article may not be particularly attractive in the plot, but it is still a successful work. First of all, it depicts the image of the role well. Second, the language is vivid and rich, and the atmosphere of life is strong, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.

12, the full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

13, Juanxiu's handwriting is so clear and neat that it can't help but give people a refreshing feeling, which the teacher should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?

14, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world through various things, there are always some laws that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

15. Your article is as simple and open-minded as you are. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term training. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles in the future study process.

16, Wen Neng Yan Sheng I think this article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.

Wen neng yi Qing 17. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.

18, caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. Through the article "Accident", we can see that your heart is not only full of innocence and books, schools, but also full of concern for society. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.

19, the language is appropriate and romantic, and the fluent context shows the image of the confidant "bookworm" and the emotional distinction between "I" and "confidant" is smart and elegant.

20. We seem to have heard a lot about the topic of fragility of life, which can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the field, walk in the forest, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter.

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