The Lyric Ending of Flying a Kite

I looked at the white clouds and saw swallows hovering in the wind, as if my heart were flying together in the blue sky. At that time, I put all my troubles behind me. Childhood kite line, please fly slowly and let me fly freely. ...

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I looked at the white clouds and saw swallows hovering in the wind, as if my heart were flying together in the blue sky. At that time, I put all my troubles behind me. Blue sky and white clouds, all accompanied by kites, rippled with the wind. ...

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