How to write wonderful fighting scenes in online novels? [Network Writing Skills]

I have read many new books, and there are indeed many people who can't write about fighting.

I have written fairy tales before, and I have written a lot over the years, so I still have some experience in writing about fighting.

Fighting is usually used when the plot advances to a key position to push or detonate a cool point.

So how do you write fight? In short, we should pay attention to the following five points.

First: the sense of picture.

Second: a sense of shock.

Third: the momentum of tricks.

Fourth: personality feedback.

Fifth: Causality.

These five points are the most critical places to describe a fight, and the most important ones are the fourth and fifth points.

Because these two points are the final result of a fight.

Many people mistakenly think that a good fight scene is a gorgeous trick and a gorgeous scene.

Actually wrong, all wet.

Why?

Because whether it is a sense of picture, a sense of attack, or a sense of momentum, these are all for the final result.

This has caused many people to be anticlimactic, putting all their energy on the description of the tricks, but lacking the feedback from the characters and the final result.

The final effect is that much thunder and little rain, which was originally a vivid description, has become a procrastinating nonsense.

Writing a fight requires a relative plot. Write a battle here:

Zhi Ding clapped his hands suddenly, and a mysterious spell appeared in his mouth.

As soon as this mantra came out, it instantly turned into countless golden characters.

Before the chief could respond, a golden statue appeared behind Zhi Ding.

The statue is six feet high, covered in gold, glaring, with a pestle in his left hand and a whip in his right.

One foot on the ground, one foot held high, the body slightly shaking, a terrible coercion directly enveloped the scope of Fiona Fang hundreds of feet.

Bang bang bang bang bang bang! All the trees within a hundred feet instantly exploded and turned to dust.

"Gu Chan heart sutra! This is the law! " Mu Yan's face was ugly to the extreme, and he was surprised: "He actually practiced Wang Mingfa."

"Kui, let's go!" Seeing this, he turned and ran without hesitation.

Wei Xiao knew it was bad, and just wanted to escape, but it was too late.

"Want to go?" Ding snorted, lifted his right hand, and pressed it down slightly!

Ming Wang opened his mouth and sprayed it, and a real fire rose into the air and became a fire dragon.

Mu Yan, which has escaped hundreds of meters away, instantly became a burning man. This is the fire of ignorance, which can burn people's body and soul.

Before he could scream, the dragon had reached his head and its claws fell from the sky.

Boom! His body exploded in an instant, and his flesh became mud.

Flesh and blood are also directly turned into fly ash in the burning of industrial fires.

As the fire dragon killed Mu Yan, the Ming king stepped out step by step, and the demon whip in his hand fell with a bang.

Around the coercion, completely disappear at this moment, even between this moment on the head of the leader.

Wei Xiao, who was about to escape, felt a terrible pressure falling from the sky, and he knew that he could not escape.

"no!" He only had time to call out this word, and the invisible coercion instantly condensed into a void handprint, which was photographed mercilessly.

At this moment, the whole world seemed to be still. When the explosion appeared, the void handprint had disappeared!

Boom! The sky was dusty, and there was a huge pit where Kui was, but his people had completely disappeared!

You see, that's about it. Fighting should pay attention to the sense of picture and blow, and the most important thing is to have the feedback and results of the opponent.

Otherwise, you are busy playing. Without feedback and results, everything is a natural egg.

The key is the fruit, not the process, but to add color to the result.

Therefore, an effective struggle must have results.