Which of the two compositions of senior one students is better? ! Urgent! ! ! ! !

Inscription refers to writing concise sentences or quoting famous aphorisms under the title of the article and before the text, and dividing them into paragraphs independently, which serves as an important explanation of the content of the article or reveals its main idea and plays a guiding role in the full text. But it is not easy to use it properly, not as ornament or decoration, because it must have a certain cultural accumulation and must be refined and screened.

I. Quotation

Quoting famous sayings, aphorisms, proverbs or ready-made poems as inscriptions not only makes the article profound and meaningful, but also makes readers

From it, I feel the author's rich cultural background and good language literacy.

A classmate quoted a poem from Ai Qing's I Love this Land as an inscription in his composition My Beautiful Homesickness:

Why do I often cry?

Because I love this land deeply. ...

Taking this as an inscription, it expresses the author's strong yearning for his hometown and makes readers feel the author's emotional tension before reading the text.

Second, the replacement type

Explain the writing purpose or writing background of the article with the help of inscriptions, so that readers can quickly enter the role.

A student wrote an inscription on the composition Mother River:

I want to give this document to my dear mother,

Dedicated to all loving mothers in the world.

The inscription laid the emotional tone for the full text, sincerely expressed the love and gratitude to the mother, and touched the readers.

Third, explain

With the help of inscriptions, this paper makes a concrete interpretation of the connotation of the article title, so that readers can have a clearer and more accurate grasp of its connotation.

For example, in 2000, a candidate in Shaanxi wrote "Colorful Happiness" with the inscription:

Life is like a flower, colorful;

Life is like a song, beautiful;

Life is like wine, mellow;

Life is like a poem, with profound artistic conception;

Life is like a dream, colorful.

This inscription is beautiful, and the author uses metaphors to explain the diversity of happiness, which shows the author's rich emotions and solid language skills.

Fourth, the finishing touch.

Use inscriptions to reveal the main idea of the article, point to the topic and write directionally, so that readers can have a clear appreciation of the thoughts and feelings carried by the article.

For example, in 2003, Jilin examinee wrote "Blood is thicker than water, reason is greater than emotion", and its inscription is:

Like clouds, it often rains, like holes, it often rains.

Emotion is directly related to cognition, which often affects the judgment of things. What is the relationship between emotion and cognition?

With the help of the inscription, the author gave a vivid and appropriate description, which not only clarified the scope of the full-text writing, but also skillfully clarified the main idea of the article.

Five, hanging type

Use inscriptions to create suspense atmosphere, attract readers and arouse reading interest.

For example, in 2002, a candidate in Hubei wrote "Five Regretful Choices" with the inscription:

Why is the fate of a rural female teacher so bumpy? Can she withstand a series of blows? If she makes another choice, what will her fate be?

The author set up three suspense in the inscription to stimulate readers' thinking and make them eager to read the article.

There are many forms of composition inscriptions, far more than the above forms. Carefully designed inscriptions in the composition can make the article icing on the cake.

The definition of happiness, cherish everything you have, you will find that happiness is too simple for you to believe.

Listening more and talking less is the most basic quality of maturity.

Moving like the wind, not moving like a mountain, moving and not moving are strength.

Lies are always ahead, but the truth is running a marathon.

A patient can be brave, and a quiet person can do a hundred actions.

Alone, it is difficult to achieve great things. The more altruistic you are, the more selfish you are.

Nature, time and patience are all good doctors.

Listen to wisdom more, and you will regret it if you say too much.

I fall asleep and feel the beauty of life. I wake up and feel the responsibility of life.

When a person forgets the gains and losses, he has actually gained something.

The glory of life lies not in never giving up, but in being able to rise again and again.

Fear makes you successful. Life is like this, as long as you persevere and step by step, you will definitely get a reward one day.

There is no insurmountable natural barrier in life. As long as you keep going step by step, the other side of happiness is ahead.

Never underestimate the power of silence. Sometimes, great energy comes from silent accumulation.

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The art of wisdom is the art of knowing clearly what to ignore.

Many times, we lack sufficient knowledge and understanding of our own abilities, and often hope to rely on outside help. Before a person lies down, he always lies down with confidence. Therefore, to overcome difficulties is to overcome yourself first.

Many times, the power that can make us surpass the limit is not fame and fortune, or even our own life, but surging in our veins again and again, overflowing our inner love!

The principle of being a man is to leave more space for each other, for others and for yourself.

Please pick up this drop of water. (slogan of caring for the environment and saving water resources)

Real men come from hell.

The body is the garden of spiritual life, and the will is the gardener of this garden. Will can not only make the body barren, but also make it fertile through hard work.

There are generally two kinds of promises, one is like green tea and the other is like beer. When you pour half a cup, the foam is already churning.

Carry forward traditional culture, inspire national spirit, improve social atmosphere and purify individual mind.

Facing the busy life, I find myself always expecting and waiting, but it is difficult to have the passion and courage to take the initiative to fight for something.

Please have a young heart, a mature mind, and a pair of ears that can listen to others' kind reminders.

Only in the most embarrassing times can people give full play to their potential.

Youth means infinite vitality, and passion means never giving up.

Success is a process of constantly surpassing and breaking through oneself, and it is also a process of being kind and tolerant to oneself.

Everyone has his own acre of land. Forever watch may only harvest the corn of life. If you jump out of this acre of land, you may become a beggar, but you have a better chance to find gold in the distance.

The cotai strip leading to the sky has been rolled out, and it is my own business to go or not. I have never admitted that I am weak. So I resolutely walked forward.

Remember what should be remembered and forget what should be forgotten. Change what can be changed and accept what cannot be changed.

Everything can be washed away except tears, and that is time. The longer the time, the weaker the conflict, just like tea that is constantly diluted.

Complaining is the greatest sacrifice that God can get from human beings, and it is also the most sincere part of human prayer.

If the enemy makes you angry, it means that you are not sure to win him.

If a friend makes you angry, you still care about his friendship.

Maybe some people are hateful and some people are mean. And when I put myself in his imagination, I realized that he was more pitiful than me. So please forgive all the people you have met, good and bad.

Happiness should be accompanied by sadness, and after the rain, it will be fine. If rain remains after rain and sorrow remains after sorrow, please let us face this parting frankly. Smile to find an impossible you!

Everyone has potential, but it is easy to be covered up by habit, blurred by time and consumed by inertia.

Life is only a few decades, don't leave any regrets for yourself, laugh happily. Cry if you want, and love when you should. There is no point in suppressing yourself.

When fantasy and reality face each other, it is always very painful. Either you are knocked down by pain or you step on it.

Our life is really hard. First, we must bear all kinds of external pressures, and more importantly, we must face our own inner confusion. In the struggle, if someone gives you an understanding look, you will feel the warmth of life. Maybe just a brief glance is enough to make me excited.

I don't think about whether I can succeed or not. Since I have chosen a distant place, I only care about bitterness and difficulty. I don't think about whether there will be cold wind and rain behind me. Since the goal is the horizon, what is left to the world is only the back.

Regret is an emotion that enervates the spirit. Regret is a bigger loss than loss and a bigger mistake than mistake. So don't regret it later.

At sunrise, the East China Sea sets in the West Mountain, and there is also a day of sadness and joy; People are comfortable when they are not entangled in things.

My happiness is a small matter.

Anything, as long as you are willing, can always become simple.

The more you want to possess, the more vulnerable you become.

The wings of birds vibrate in the air. This is a loud and cold voice, full of fear. A series of uncertain destinations.

The wound is a shame given by others and an illusion of persistence.

We can be disappointed, but we must not be blind.

Happiness is always full of defects.

Have what you like, don't be afraid of the result.

Some people are easily erased by time. Like dust.

It will pass, it will pass. Our pain, our sadness, our guilt.

Anything can be replaced. Love, past events, memories, disappointment, time … can all be replaced. But you can't help yourself.

If ever there was happiness. Happiness is just a momentary fragment, a short segment.

If life is compared to a tree, then life is ultimately a carved piece of wood, and the only gratifying thing is that it has grown from green leaves.

A person needs skills and wisdom, but the most indispensable thing is principles and beliefs.

Educating a girl means educating a family, a nation and a country.

It is true that society is driven by outstanding men, but the world is resisted by these mediocre men.

There are high scores and low scores on campus, but not outside the school gate, which always disrupts and reorganizes everything inside the school gate.

Sometimes, we will be "grateful" for the small favors given by others, but "turn a blind eye" to the kindness of our loved ones for a lifetime.

Learn to look up to authority and you will become dignified, that is, noble; Learn to respect the law and you will live with peace of mind, that is, freedom.

People who only know how hard they work are bound to be broken; Only soft people will eventually be cowards; Only by combining rigidity with softness can we become the final winner!

In this world, the first thing you can really trust is yourself-your efforts and sweat in the struggle towards a bright goal!

No matter in which industry, the fundamental factor that determines whether a person is a master is not technology. When the technology reaches a certain level, everyone is the same. What can distinguish the difference is the human heart-love, self-confidence and responsibility.

Tell yourself once a day, "I'm really fine!"

Anger is punishing yourself for what others have done wrong.

Life without friends is like life without sunshine.

You can get the whole world with love or lose the whole world with hate.

True love should go beyond the length of life, the width of soul and the depth of soul.

As long as you have confidence, people will never be defeated.

Hope for the best, strive for the best result and prepare for the worst.

A good life should be full of expectations, surprises and gratitude.

As long as people don't lose their way, they won't lose themselves

What matters in life is not where you stand, but the direction you face.

Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent effort.

Only by sharing can happiness be doubled.

You must respect yourself before others will respect you.

If you are willing to admit your mistake, you have corrected half of it.

If you want to have a perfect friendship, you may never find a friend.

Think of yourself as a fool, ask if you don't understand, and learn more.

Fear of failure, fear of giving up, you will never succeed.

You can't control the weather, but you can change your mood.

Living aimlessly is like sailing to the sea without a compass.

Play your role and do what you should do.

Be kind to others when you are proud, because you will need them when you are depressed.

"Feeling High School" is a clear spring in my heart, which can't stop flowing and can't stop vomiting. It flows forever and ever, nourishing everything in my life.

"Erase the boundaries in the heart": "The boundaries on the surface can be erased by hand; The boundaries in my heart can only be smoothed by heart. "

"Thank Father" "When I was a child, my father was a harbor; When I was a child, my father was an idol; In middle age, my father is a period of time; My father is a history book at the end of the year. "

In the revelation of Echo: "He who loves others will always love others;": Those who respect others will always respect others. "

The Book of Silence "The book is like a father, and the father is like a book. Naive, I have always wanted to use my tender hands to make a more incisive interpretation of this heavy book for my father's love. Until I read it to the end, I saw the words' father loves silence' on the last page of the book ... "

"Experience Nature" "Wonderful nature, she hides her beauty from time to time; The key to discovering her beauty lies in our experience of her. "

"My Dream" "The northwest I loved in my early years grew up in a desolate desert. When I was a child, I struggled and crawled in the desert, and my dream was tragic ... "

"Collecting Sunshine" "No mountain can keep the promise of eternal youth, and no river can flow eternal youth. The sun in my heart is not great and hot, but ordinary and warm, just like the sunshine that we love around us. "

"True water has no fragrance". "When dealing with people, be sincere. Sincerity means insipid ..."

"autobiography of encouragement" "encouragement is to learn the paddle that breaks the waves in the sea; Encouragement is a crutch of interdependence in life; Always give you infinite strength in the stormy waves and always enhance your confidence in the trough! "

Relying on heaven, earth and ancestors is not a hero. Zheng Banqiao's last words have been ringing in my ears. The ancients can also know that everything depends on themselves. What about us?

"Water Sacrifice" "Water, water, you gave birth to everything, but it was destroyed by everything. Whose sorrow is your withering and whose disaster is your roaring? "

"Colorful Happiness" Life is like a flower, colorful; Life is like a song, beautiful; Life is like wine, mellow; Life is like a poem, with profound artistic conception; Life is like a dream, colorful.

"Feeling Middle School" At that time, there was a clear spring in my heart, which was endless, endless and flowing, watering every grass and tree in my life journey.

Chasing me is not necessarily living happily, but I must be chasing the happiness of life.

The softest and most fragile thing is humanity, and the heaviest and strongest thing is humanity.

The fall of human nature often begins with disregard for justice, and the dignity of society often shrinks due to the abuse of power.

Always believe that the world is not just a desert of the soul, an ice kiln of feelings, and all kinds of feelings from the best to the truest have built the most beautiful scenery.

Personality is style, like every unique leaf, showing the edge of survival and beauty.

Life is sometimes like a rain, which looks beautiful, but more often, you have to endure cold and humidity.

The meaning of life is not in beautiful words, not in empty pursuit, but in seeking one's own survival and helping others to survive.

A person's life is like four seasons, spring planting, summer harvest, autumn harvest and winter storage.

Life is picturesque, you can be vigorous without extravagant colors, but you can't lack aesthetic artistic conception.

Some people only care about material things and ignore the soul; Some people despise matter in order to emphasize the mind; Only people with broad vision know the importance of balance between mind and matter.

This is a colorful river, slowly flowing in the endless desert, changing colors. I am barefoot by the river, and my favorite color is in a transparent glass bottle.

Life is the root, underground; Life is water, in the lake; Life is a mountain, in strength; Life is a flower, when it blooms.

Let's hold the passion of life tightly around you again and let you curl up in my heart. Open the neon of the mind, let's stick to our hearts and pulse once.

When the rainy season comes, many memories of life are turned into faded scenery by rain, and all casual memories become the most romantic ideas. After waking up from my dream in the morning, I reluctantly plunged into another kind of wandering. ...

Everyone is faced with life choices, and we must decide what is important. ...

I am rich because I am wise.

Open the curtains, there is only one color of sunshine.

Don't be fooled by the noise of the world.

Just think about what I'm going to do today and what I'm going to do tomorrow, and then try to finish it ... The joy of success will gradually moisten our lives.

Wake up your ears and then listen to the world. I believe there must be a voice that belongs to success.

If you treat the ups and downs as a condiment, you will feel that the ups and downs of life are also tasteful.

There is only one road to the truly great realm of mankind-the road of suffering.

Suffering is a stepping stone to genius, the wealth of the able and the abyss of the weak.

If you only regard suffering as suffering, it is really just suffering. However, if you combine it with the most vast land in your spiritual world, it will become a valuable nutrition, which will make you feel particularly sweet and beautiful like a phoenix nirvana in suffering.

Only the width can accommodate people, and the thickness can carry things.

An unquestionable philosophy, an unforgettable proposition, a symbol with rich connotations, there is no century superman who is not for fame and fortune, only a wise man who treats fame and fortune well.

I am the sun. As long as I am the sun, the morning will surely come.

In fact, you already have the best life mentor, and that is yourself.

Color the mood, our life will be colorful, and we will really grasp ourselves.

The difference between an optimist and a pessimist is subtle: the optimist sees a doughnut, while the pessimist sees a small hole in the middle of the doughnut.

I want to decorate today with a smile and light up the night with a song.

If you want to change the world, change yourself first.

God will open a window for you after closing all the doors for you.

As long as I have a pair of faithful eyes to cry with me, it is worthwhile to suffer for my life. Even in the cold winter, I saw the splendor of spring.

Nothing can accompany you for a lifetime, except mood.

Just like sunflower pursues the sun, people always pursue the sublime and perfection, and life is a process of constantly carving themselves in suffering.

What is taken from here in winter will be returned to you in various forms in spring.

Many people have been looking for the "gems" that God has given them, but when the "gems" have been found in their own hands, they have been easily abandoned by themselves.

A color, a moment of life. Persistent pursuit of eternity, lost all the way, lost all the way, disappointed all the way, still dreaming, dreaming. ...

Open the window of your heart, open your keen eyes, and don't let everything go with the wind.

Don't forget, how deep love is, how long it is. As long as there is tomorrow, there will be endless hope.

Cross the door of confusion and come to me through the road of years. Although dreams will fade, hopes will be disillusioned, and the fruits of the integration of years will rot, but the choice without regrets will last forever in your life voyage.

Not everyone wants to build a crystal church, but everyone can design their own dreams. Everyone can open a blank sheet of paper and write down 10 or even 100 ways to realize their dreams.

Warmth is everywhere, warming oneself and others. Just like: give someone a rose, the hand has a lingering fragrance.

The beauty of candles is the beauty of swan songs. It uses the pain of self-immolation to turn itself into light and heat, illuminating others.

I may not live happily, but I must be chasing the happiness of life.

Yesterday, as a symbol of eternity, everything became a footprint, big or small, deep or shallow, straight or curved, and all became distant.

Remember yesterday to grasp today, and also to grasp tomorrow.

To give up what you should do is to lose. But I always don't

Give up easily, the sun rises every day.

Time and patience can turn mulberry leaves into beautiful and colorful brocade. All success is born of patience and loneliness.

Our only wealth is that we have a lifetime.

No simple world is a hell on earth.

Human ancestors had no doors; Only when people have defense can they have doors.

The wings of flowers only know how to fly when they are dead, and the soil without love and hate can germinate and bloom again.

Gu Cheng said: I want to draw clumsy free and tearless eyes on white paper. ,

The night gave me black eyes, but I used them to look for light.