I want to write an Oriental fantasy novel, but the fighting scenes always mix people together and the environment is exaggerated.

Fantasy XianXia, without fighting scenes. How to describe the scene in a three-dimensional way and make the reader look immersive? We should focus on shaping the sense of picture and three-dimensional sense. It's just empty talk. Everyone can't understand anything. Take the following passage as an example.

The first way: describe!

"TaBaYun corners of the mouth with a cold smile, slightly a mocking Laojiu looked at the door.

For this door of Laojiu, he really hates it to the extreme. This man is so ungrateful that he wants to play Fan Xiao's mind. You know, Fan Xiao hasn't married Tuoba Liuyun, but she is pregnant with Tuoba Liuyun's child.

Tuoba Liuyun was never a strong man, but he never allowed others to get their hands on his own territory.

TaBaYun suddenly crazy drink, everyone around him was shocked by his roar. The momentum spread everywhere, the space cracked, and the wind roared and roared!

Then, out of the knife!

Above the combat knives, the flames are vigorous. With a wave of his hand, the flame rolled and swept away outside, Laojiu.

The powerful flame, like a flood discharge, tore open the door of Laojiu's body, and the flame licked it angrily, emitting an anxious smell. The door of pain Laojiu screamed and kept rolling on the ground.

TaBaYun is like a volcano, which has accumulated for thousands of years. Once it erupts, the destroyer Conan! "

Written in an essay, it made everyone laugh.

Comments: A short paragraph, two roles, three parts, a woman who has never appeared before. The most hateful place is to get your hands on your own woman. It can be replaced in a few words. In addition, the words are straightforward and fast-paced, which well shapes the three-dimensional sense.

In fact, this is the most standard white template. I have written hundreds of words about how to pull hatred, how to pave the way for an outbreak, how to suppress it, and then erupt more readily.

A large area of space cracked and the wind roared.

"Here, the environment is described in twos and threes, and the momentum of the protagonist is rendered."

Then, out of the knife!

Above the combat knives, the flames are vigorous.

"The following is a description of the present situation to enhance the sense of substitution."

The mighty flame is like a flood discharge and a volcano. Once it breaks out, Conan the destroyer!

"Briefly describe the moves and use metaphors to make them three-dimensional, giving people an immersive feeling."

PS: Don't laugh at such a high level.

In my opinion, there are two ways to shape the three-dimensional sense of the picture. One is description and metaphor.

For example, "Tuoba Yun blasted out with one punch, and the sky instantly formed a huge fist shadow, just like casting gold."

This is the simplest description, and many authors are proficient in it, such as Chen Dong and Ji Shen. They can always make people's blood boil in a few words and hit people directly with words as straightforward as destroying decay.

I have nothing to teach you about this, I can only give you a suggestion.

The more gorgeous the words are, the more shocked the readers will be.

Destroy rotten cast gold, cover the sky and the sun, destroy the soul and the Tao, and separate yin and yang.

Words like this can actually be created by yourself, whether it is in the dictionary or not, as long as the reader can understand it.

There is a simple example, a battle description:

Example 1: Tuoba Liuyun punched, the wind roared, and the fist with a big sandbag slammed into Liu Er's face. Liu Er vomited blood and his figure quickly retreated.

Example 2: Tuoba Liuyun's single fist condensed great momentum, and the golden light covered the sky, forming a real dragon like gold casting, rushing to Liu Er. The sky is flashing, and it seems that the surrounding space is affected by this momentum. The golden dragon shadow destroyed Liu Er's body, directly blew him to ashes, and his soul disappeared.

Which of these two paragraphs excites readers more? Is it easier to have a sense of substitution? Why can the same punch and the opponent's rout have such different effects? Must be the second paragraph.

Describe it with some exaggerated words. Need to consider rationality? No, at this time, you just need to consider how to make readers feel better!

Looking at the dry description, the reader can't afford any interest at all, even if the opponent is the protagonist's father-killing enemy! But we might as well change the description and add some exaggerated vocabulary descriptions. We just need to shock the readers. In this way, while creating a three-dimensional picture sense, it can also easily arouse the whole body blood of readers.

In doing so, we will succeed.

What's so important about the fantasy XianXia? Is it reasonable? No, the important thing is imagination. In the face of fighting description, we may be able to let go of some hands and feet to make readers feel excited and eager when describing you.

This is the importance of the sense of picture and three-dimensional sense in fantasy fighting.

That's why movie tickets in 3D are more expensive than those in 2D, because 3D is more stereoscopic and real, isn't it?

I can teach you the method, but the accumulation of vocabulary can't be completed overnight. This requires reading more and reading more. Here, I recommend Chen Dong and JJ's books, which are very atmospheric.

However, at this point, everyone has to ask. After talking for a long time, it turned out to be for us to accumulate vocabulary! What's the use? Isn't there a simple and quick way?

Of course not. Since today is the opening ceremony of Sajia, Sajia will naturally dedicate everything it knows to you. There is also a way to describe the three-dimensional sense and the sense of the picture, which is different from the way of description.

If description is the foundation, then this method is tantamount to a shortcut, that is, the golden finger!

This is the importance of structure! Simply put, it is paving the way.

The second way: pave the way!

There is a routine for this bedding. You can even change the names of the characters in the routine and use them in your own book. Very simple and convenient. As long as you listen attentively and understand attentively, I believe that in time, everyone will learn how to shape fighting by going up a storey still higher.

The first example:

The opponent made an appointment with the protagonist and the protagonist agreed to fight. Everyone is looking forward to this battle.

The protagonist practiced martial arts before the war, walked around idly, heard some satire, was furious, and was determined to perform well.

Write about the weather, how bad the weather is, how depressing the atmosphere is, and write about the scenery to create an atmosphere.

The game began and the relatives and friends of the enemy began to cheer. The enemy appeared in the most awesome way and respectfully greeted the elders he knew. The elders were surprised when their eyes lit up.

Then the protagonist appeared flat and was booed. No one speaks highly of the protagonist except his friends. You can even describe betting here to make the scene more popular. Some people give odds to the protagonist and the enemy, and some friends of the protagonist don't believe in the strength of the protagonist and give it to the enemy.

Two big men watch the war and gamble with each other. The stakes are high and the atmosphere is completely pushed to a climax!

At the same time, the whole arena was completely boiling.

As for the process of fighting, how do you feel? Anyway, the previous preparations have been completed!

The protagonist won, and all the audience froze. The big names who didn't like the protagonist gasped.

Because of the existence of bets, some people earn a lot of money, while others lose their wives and soldiers.

The big shot who played the leading role won, and he spoke highly of the leading role. The loser bears a grudge against the protagonist.

What's the sense of this picture?

Although dog blood, but practical!

After the end, because the lost big man is not reconciled, a new story can begin here. Why not?

This is the simplest and most direct bedding and routine. You may despise these dog blood, but you can't deny that it is the most substitutive and the best way to create pictures. Even if your writing is not so good, as long as you can describe it in place, even if your vocabulary is insufficient, it can arouse readers' interest.

The second example:

Everyone knows that the protagonist is extremely powerful. The opponent is strong and is a small BOSS.

No one is optimistic about the protagonist, and this opponent will find the protagonist to vent. The audience came to see how the protagonist lost.

At first, the enemy rushed up and thought about people for a second. His actions are superior at first sight, and the audience thinks it is a bit bullying. It is estimated that one round of fighting will be over.

But the protagonist is not anxious or angry, calm and calm. It is common for an opponent to rush to the front and make a sudden move. The opponent was unprepared and was caught by the second one.

The audience were stupid, thinking that they were wrong, and they were all stunned by this incredible move.

The protagonist leaves quickly. However, the war spread rapidly. This move is infinitely deified, and countless boxers have to imitate it, but this is only the most common straight fist!

After listening to the battle, some experts were curious and wanted to know the identity of the protagonist. And the origin of this achievement method.

In fact, this is just the most common straight fist! Actions that even ordinary people can make!

There are some places in fantasy that are similar to online games.

Although there is no me in the Jianghu, there is still my legend!

Is this kind of picture strong? Is this article cool?

These are just two simple routines to enhance the sense of substitution and three-dimensional sense of the picture. It can be regarded as the "golden finger", which can make up for the lack of vocabulary. Even if you don't have a vocabulary, as long as you have enough preparation, you can still achieve the expected results.

Of course, if you can combine the two, JJ flying will be even cooler! If you can use these skillfully, you will become a god. Is it far?

I don't need to say more about the importance of the three-dimensional sense of fighting and the sense of picture. Anyone who has read Chen Dong and JJ's books knows that their descriptions are gripping and magnificent. If you can do these two things, they can, and so can you!

Maybe what I said is very plain, and some people don't like it, but if you think it is helpful to you, I hope you will think about it and weigh what I said.

I wish you all * * * common progress and become gods in the future!

Thank you!