Comments on traditional festivals in grade three

The evaluation of traditional festivals in Grade Three is as follows:

(1) Get to the point and tell me the happiest Spring Festival. Focus on fireworks. The fireworks in your pen are varied and lifelike, as if they were alive. Then it describes the thrill and joy of setting off firecrackers in detail, and the end is straightforward, pointing out the theme. It's really good!

(2) The order of the article is particularly clear and organized. First, the custom is derived from "pouring blessings", and then the scene of the Spring Festival Evening and fireworks is written. Your article is very smooth, rich in many details, and you can feel your love for festivals! Poetry is introduced at the beginning, and the custom of Spring Festival is pointed out. Mainly write the scene of having a reunion dinner and getting lucky money. The expression description makes your "little greedy cat" come alive, and the dialogue between family members is interesting and the scene is warm and harmonious. Finally, the reunion is linked with the lost soldiers and angels in white, and the realm is far-reaching.

(3) The language is very friendly, and the creation of pictures is particularly vivid and interesting. The dialogue between relatives makes people feel deep affection. You also noticed the changes in Vientiane during the Spring Festival. This is a very infectious article with sincere feelings. The language of the article is vivid and humorous, describing the festive atmosphere very vividly and interestingly, and describing the process of jiaozi Bao in detail. The details are appropriate and the overall situation is good.

(4) From a unique perspective, I wrote what I saw and felt during the traditional festival Dragon Boat Festival. The language is fresh and lively, natural and fluent, and the expression is rich and vivid. The whole article is full of childlike interest. The sentences connected between paragraphs are natural and in one go, which is an excellent work! At the end, the full moon reunion reminds me of my grandparents in my hometown, divergent thinking and sincere feelings.