Elementary school fourth grade composition 400 words: tour Songyang Dushan

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The title of this essay is: Tour Songyang Doshan. On February 6 I went to Songyang with my grandfather and grandmother to visit friends and relatives. As soon as we arrived in Songyang, we saw a small independent mountain shaped like a giant frog squatting on the banks of Songyin Stream, which is Dushan, the symbol of Songyang's ancient county. In the afternoon of the second day, I started to climb Doshan with my three sisters, my grandpa, my grandma and my mom in order to explore Doshan. Although the path was winding and the rocks were steep, I climbed up to the top of Doksan Mountain, which is 272 meters high, with a great effort and a lot of sweat. My grandparents and mom praised me. Doksan is full of cliffs, rocks, and trees. At the top of Doksan, there is a TV tower, and we took pictures of it. At the top of Dushan, the whole Songyang County was under our eyes, and it was a real feast for our eyes! I was reluctant to leave Dushan, but the impression of Dushan remained in my mind forever. Master's Comment: In this essay, the author describes the experience of traveling to Dosan. The little author has excellent language talent, the composition accurately used "a drum", "sweating", "a horse first" and other idioms, "craggy sky, strange stones through the clouds, green trees" and so on. Green trees," and other sophisticated language is to show the author's language skills. The composition is clearly organized, the language is accurate and concise, the content is focused, and the paragraphs are connected naturally. The shortcoming is that there is only an overview of the process of traveling, but no specific description. (Scholastic China Special Teacher: Ms. Luo Danna)2009-2-12 14:35:00