How to write the second grade of Mid-Autumn Festival?

How to write the second grade of Mid-Autumn Festival as follows:

Fan Wenyi:

Mid-Autumn Festival today is August 15, and it is also one of the traditional festivals in China. In the evening, my family enjoyed the moon together. My mother brought me a big plate of moon cakes. My mother asked me to share them. I gave them to my grandfather, my father and my mother, and finally gave them to me. We enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes. Mom is still telling stories. I like Mid-Autumn Festival!

Fan Wener:

On the evening of Mid-Autumn Festival, I went to enjoy the moon with my parents and grandparents. When I arrived at Beimenshan Park, I found a clean lawn. Grandpa took a clean blanket and spread it. Looking at the bright moon and Kongming lanterns all over the sky, just after eating a few moon cakes, my father suggested going to find a classmate nearby: Zhang Haojun.

There, I saw Zhang Haojun. Then Zhang Haojun and I took a roller coaster in the park and enjoyed the moon while riding. What a different kind of scenery. After parting with Zhang Haojun, I hurried to find my mother, but I couldn't find it on the original lawn. It turned out that they waited for me for a long time and moved to the bench. On the bench, we tasted the new taste of moon cakes and lamented that moon cakes are getting better and better and life is getting better and better!

Fan Wensan:

In the morning, my old uncle took me for a ride in the car he bought yesterday. In the morning, I wore beautiful new clothes and rode my three-wheeled scooter to brush the streets. On the way, I thought to myself, why is everyone looking at me? I asked my mother, and her mother said: Because others envy you. Oh, I see.

In the afternoon, my mother took my cousin and me to the museum to play. We play bumper cars, go-karts and trampolines. I also ate moon cakes and pears. I don't usually eat pears. What a pity! Pears are really delicious today. You don't know pears are so delicious until you taste them, so you have to taste everything to know whether they are good or bad.

In the evening, my father and I set off firecrackers. After dinner, we played with our neighbor's brother and had a good time. My father personally made this torch for me. How happy Mid-Autumn Festival is! Our family is round and round, really happy!