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Secondary examination essay skills - clever use of highlights to get a high score

Secondary examination essay in the language paper accounted for "half of the river mountain", its importance is obvious. But the composition is always difficult to be satisfactory, often dragged back the language performance. To write a good examination essay, indeed involves the ability of candidates in various aspects, such as the ability to examine the topic of intention, the ability to choose materials and ideas, the ability to layout, the ability to language expression, etc., and the formation of these capabilities, a reading accumulation for the "storage", two rely on the long-term practice to create "hard work! The formation of these abilities relies on the accumulation of reading to "store energy", and on long-term practice to create "hard work". From this point of view, the writing of the "ice" is not "one day of cold". If you can pay attention to some of the writing strategy before the exam, show its "highlights", it will achieve "quick results", receive "results".

Highlights of a: clever use of novel topics

Often said: "the good half of the text", "people rely on the clothes, the text rely on the topic loaded". Visible title of the importance. A good title will let the assessor's eyes for a bright, good feeling. A variety of techniques, including the use of rhetorical methods is a trick. Some people say: "rhetoric is the magic water of the essay", the title is the same, rhetoric will make the title colorful. Such as: "Stew good art" porridge "," to the good is miscellaneous "," Begonia still? Green, fat, red and thin? Zhouzhuang, a touch of green", "beware of the double-edged sword", "honesty" drift", "I smell the sunshine", etc. are used in a variety of rhetorical devices.

Highlight two: strange use of the article title

The title is to highlight and reveal the main theme of the article, the emotional sentence, the value of concise and implicit. Or quote, or innovation. Good inscription will show the "strange effect" of the work. Such as "good table" inscription: "the true meaning of life, others can not teach you, but only in the process of survival of their own taste (Jing Jing Inoue)". The Revelation of "Echo" is titled: "If you love people, people will always love you; if you respect people, people will always respect you (Mencius)". The inscription of "Colorful Happiness": "Life is like a flower, beautiful and red; life is like a song, beautiful and melodious; life is like a wine, fragrant and mellow; life is like a poem, far-reaching; life is like a dream, splendid and colorful". The inscription of "Sense of High School": "That is a clear spring in the depths of the soul, flowing endlessly, spitting out, has been running to forever and ever, to water every blade of grass and every piece of wood in my life's journey ......".

Highlight 3: make good use of the whole sentence at the beginning

The Qing Dynasty Li Yu said: "at the beginning of the opening of the volume, when the strange sentence to catch the eye, so that one of them to see and be surprised, do not dare to abandon." Article generally want to "open the door to the mountain", "the beginning of the meaning". The best way to do this is to use prose and questioning. Or quote classic poems, or use subtle and meaningful statements. For example, the beginning of Time, Time: "Whenever I pass by the customs, listening to the sound of the magnificent bell, I feel the solemnity of time; whenever I hear the school bell, when my front foot has just stepped through the door, I feel the urgency of time; whenever I wander in a daze, I look up sharply, only to find that time has flown by." The beginning of "Miscellany is a Miracle of Life": "Have you ever seen the faded Universal Architecture Complex of the vicissitudes of life? Have you ever enjoyed the tightly clustered spring flowers of Yangmingshan? Have you ever listened to the jazz drums? Have you ever tasted the fragrant flower tea in the Green Vine Pavilion? If you suddenly erase the miscellaneous body, then life will become how single, how terrible ah! I say, miscellaneous, is a kind of miracle of life". The beginning of "Writing with the Heart": "As the old saying goes, 'When you climb a mountain, your feelings are full of mountains, and when you look at the sea, your thoughts are overflowing into the sea.' The same goes for writing. If you want to write a marvelous masterpiece, you have to go all out and do it with your heart". The author of Knowing People, Knowing Yourself writes: "People tend to underestimate themselves when they look up, and underestimate others when they look down; they tend to be self-absorbed when they are pleased, and they tend to be self-abased when they are displeased. These understandings of people and themselves are obviously wrong. People should know themselves as well as others; they should not be arrogant, nor should they despise others. There is a saying: 'Those who know others are good, and those who know themselves are wise'.".

Highlight 4: more use of the center of the sentence

Secondary examination essay marking time is tight, the task is big, the marking teacher is not likely to be as meticulous as the usual correction of essays, repeatedly look at the often "ten lines at a time", grasp the point of view, look for the main points, looking for the highlights. The "center sentence" is to show the candidate's main point, reflecting the main points of the article, showing the best form of essay highlights. Otherwise, the marking teacher in a particular short period of time to find the main point of your article, if you are obviously at a disadvantage. Therefore, in general, the structure of the "thesis" part of the essay is either parallel, progressive, or positive and negative. It is best to start each paragraph with a central sentence so that it is "clear at a glance" and the hierarchy is clear. Some candidates also used subheadings instead of a central sentence. For example, the author of "Miscellaneous, is also a kind of beauty" discusses three aspects: Miscellaneous, means change; Miscellaneous, means progress; Miscellaneous, is also a kind of beauty. The same is on the "miscellaneous", another candidate in how to become a "miscellaneous", also from three perspectives: to "miscellaneous", we must have the courage and broad-mindedness of the sea; to "Miscellaneous", we must have through the ancient and modern vision; to "miscellaneous", we must have thinking, selection, refinement, development. Another candidate talked about three areas: culture and academics are inseparable from "miscellaneous", social development is inseparable from "miscellaneous", and the natural world is also inseparable from "miscellaneous".

Highlight 5: The use of famous poems and verses

To make an essay literate and culturally rich, one of the effective ways is to make it appropriate. One of the effective ways is to borrow and use the appropriate poetic quotations, "bring" for my use. These quotations, concise and concise, profound, to one for ten, can evoke the reader's associations and thinking.

such as "what is happiness" in the text there is such a paragraph: "Happiness is the 'close seams, fear of late return' of attachment, is 'a grain of corn in the spring, the fall harvest ten thousand seeds' harvest; happiness is the 'but wishing for a long time', 'but wishing for a long time', 'but wishing for a long time', 'but wishing for a long time', 'but wishing for a long time'. 'wishing for a long time, thousands of miles of *** Chan Juan' wishes, is 'often remember the stream pavilion at sunset, intoxicated do not know the way back' memories; happiness is 'the belt gradually widen the end do not regret, for the I consume people emaciated ' pursuit." These sentences not only interpreted the meaning of happiness, but also demonstrated the breadth of the candidate's reading, making the essay poetic and literate. When quoting famous lines from ancient poems, some of them were not "explicitly quoted" but "implicitly quoted", i.e. skillfully used. Such as "thoughts are a landscape" wrote: "thoughts so that the poet saint sighed hometown moonlight, thoughts so that female poets thin than the yellow flowers, thoughts so that the granddaddy of the bold school of dreaming to return to their hometown to look at each other without words tears thousand lines, thoughts so that the poet of the Euphemist school of wine wake up the wind of the moon on the banks of the Yangliu, thoughts so that the Mr. Moqiqi every festive season to go into the 'all inserted Cornus officinalis less than a man! 's state of mind, longing makes the border poet old and long-lost looking at his homeland, longing makes the patriotic lyricist Iron Horse Ice River into the dream to come ......".

Highlight 6: lively use of vivid materials

In the thesis statement, in order to achieve "justified, layer by layer", there must be sufficient theoretical and factual arguments. Candidates should note that the narrative rather simple than complicated. Old material can be "to the old renovation", can be "new bottles of old wine", can change the angle. Such as a candidate in the "choice of eternity", such a discussion of eternity: "Standing on the shores of history tracing the history of a ditch: Chu Daifu sinking Zeshan, nine deaths; Wei Wu Di raised his whip to the east, the heart of the strong; Tao Yuanming leisurely south of the mountain, drinking wine and picking chrysanthemums ...... they chose eternity! ---- Even if the flattery and slander to blind the hearing, but also do not follow the flow of its wave, this is the choice of persistence; even if the horse leather wrapped body soul returned to Guanxi, but also to raise the voice of the border to sweep all the wolves, this is the choice of the magnificent; even if the life of the bitter hard to satiate the end of the day, but also want to be happy, plowing Longmu, this is the choice of elegance! ......"

Highlight 7: Interpolation of neat sentences

In the narrative reasoning lyric, interspersed with some neat sentences, will make the narrative concise, reasoning, emotionally charged, strong momentum, thus enhancing the expressive power of the article. Especially in the beginning, end and focus of the article, will give the teacher a deep impression. Such as "face the sea" in: "There is a sound, is the waves beat the reef singing passion; There is a blue, is the sea and sky a color of the spread of serenity; There is a sentiment, is the face of the sea stirred up the 'heart waves beat the shore'. Facing the sea is like facing a song, a painting, a book." Another example is a paragraph in "Choice": "Choose with your mind, give a green shade; choose with your will, hold up a clear sky. The worship of life and the pursuit of faith require us to choose eternity. In the rolling flood, the warrior chooses his own departure but gives others a rebirth; in the vast desert, the warrior chooses his own hard work but gives others happiness" and so on.

Highlight 8: the wonderful use of the word ending

Li Yu once said: "the end of the occasion, when the charming words to the soul, so that the pen to stay, if it is difficult to sudden parting". The so-called "charming language", that is, rich in literary grace, profound language. Literary endings, intriguing, will make the teacher love to release. Such as "listen, that is the victory song in the waves; see, that is the beauty of human nature scroll. Soar, that is the whole universe of scrolls. Facing the sea, listen, appreciate and savor ......". Another example is "Raise the sail of life, let the sound of the waves be the accompaniment, pull the cable as the strings, scoop up the strong wind as the horn, play a piece of music that transcends space and time, among the reefs, in the gusty winds, I open my arms, and embrace the fraternity with the boiling heart that flows with my blood ----- tightly! --- a lifetime of no regrets" and so on.

Semi-proposition essay writing guide and examples

[Title]Read the following text, according to the requirements of the composition.

Dashan, I want to say to you: "I worship your greatness and composure; the college entrance exam, I want to say to you: it's not easy to get close to you; Lu Xun, I want to say to you: can you not let AQ die ......

On many personnel, we may have our own unique views Now, please choose an object and express my unique view on the chosen object.

Please write an essay on the topic "--------, I want to tell you".

Requirements: ①Must complete the title; ②Must use the first person; ③Word count is about 800 words; ④Healthy content.

[Review guidance and ideas]

The key to completing the semi-propositional essay is to fill in the question, as long as the question is filled out, written with other propositional essays are not different. The key to completing a half-proposition essay is to fill in the blanks, and as long as you fill in the blanks, there is no difference between the other proposition essays and the other ones.

First of all, the choice of material should be familiar. Everyone has their own favorite things, all their favorite things, often experienced a process of obsession, so they like things are often very familiar with, and often have a very deep feelings and thinking, we should be good at the test with their own familiar things docking, so that surely can be introduced to the test essay to write a realm of their own at ease. Secondly, the choice of style should be to avoid the familiar, choose their own good style, to avoid the shortcomings.

This question is suitable for candidates to seize the feelings, thinking about the deepest people or things to express their thoughts, surely everyone has something to say, the key is to write "their own unique views". In writing, you can first write their own feelings about someone, something or something or joy or anger or sadness or happiness, and then write the causes and reasons for such feelings, in-depth analysis of its meaning or harm, and finally targeted to put forward their own ideas.

[Example of an essay]

Kobe, I want to say to you

You are in the top of ten thousand people, you can do nothing, if the NBA is a jianghu, then on the martial arts, you are invincible, but I would like to say to you is that the martial arts is not the whole of the jianghu.

When you are on the court like nobody's business, tearing through the opponent's defense, time and again with accurate shooting and vigorously dunking to destroy the opponent's confidence, have you ever thought of, alone in the Dragon Pond can not reflect the highest realm of basketball, only to unite all the teammates together to make progress, your team will be truly invincible. You may not know, Chinese martial arts novels, a warrior called Qiao Feng, on martial arts, the world's superb; on chivalry, no one in the world than, Qiao Feng unity rate of his beggar brothers, born into death, resisting the enemy and defending the country, so, Qiao Feng will become a great man, passed on as a martial arts story. Kobe, because you are my very favorite ball player, that's why I want to be straight with you, you are not yet a good captain.

People often take you and Michael O Jordan comparisons, but you and Jordan compared to his greater place is, on the field is not for their own data, but in order to let the team win, in order to make their teammates better, the Bulls six consecutive championship period, Jordan is simply out of the god, look at the whole league, how many people comparable? But he did not sing a one-man show, he let Pippen become an all-around forward, let Rodman consecutively take the title of rebound king ...... Kobe, you should make the team better, if you can complete this step, its significance will override your single game scored 81 points of the feat.

Kobe, you should be humble. Maybe you don't think so -- a genius is a genius, I'm so good at martial arts that no one can beat me, I don't need to learn from others. Yes, I admit, even if you do not ask those old-timers to teach you can also be alone in the world, but your team, just rely on one's own strength does not show thin? Basketball emperor Chamberlain had a single game put down 100 points, but he has been studying other people's excellent playing style, constantly to teammates to ask for advice. What about you? There's a Chinese saying, "Humility leads to progress." Humility only allows you to make progress, it only allows you to realize the power of the team, it only allows your team to be truly strong...

Kobe, you should also check yourself, even though you've never been ticketed by a police officer for driving under the influence of alcohol, but from last year's "Eagle County Incident," we can see that in terms of character development, you're not the only one who's been in trouble.

Kobe, you should also check yourself, even though you've never gotten a ticket for drinking and driving, as evidenced by last year's "Eagle County" incident, and you should also check yourself and your behavior, so that you can be more mature and charismatic.

Perhaps my words, you can not hear, but I hope you can understand: martial arts is not the whole of the jianghu.

Review

Selected material to do to avoid raw on familiar, the author chose his favorite NBA star Kobe as the object, narrated, feeling, criticized the Kobe although the ball skills extraordinary, omnipotent, but there is a personal heroism, not enough humility, misbehavior and other aspects of the shortcomings of the Kobe cautioned Kobe, "martial arts is not all of the jianghu! "and use" chivalrous "Qiao Feng," "Flying Man" Jordan and "Basketball Emperor" Chamberlain as a positive role model to persuade, contrasting. The reasoning, unique point of view, fit the topic, the language, a long, a breath of fresh air.

[Example essay]

Qu Yuan, I want to say to you

When the face full of sadness because of your "faith and see doubt, loyalty and was slandered" sighs, I read you; when the head of the crown cut clouds of your song "I will be up and down and seek" I read you; when the description of the haggard you murmured "the world is turbid and I only clear" when you threw himself into the river, I read you.

Qu Yuan, I want to say to you, your loyalty to the emperor and patriotism thought behavior is certainly admirable, but let me y regret - blind loyalty to the emperor is a kind of stupid loyalty.

I have never been able to understand what can make a subject so loyal to his monarch. Is it that the monarch has the virtues of a high mountain, that the monarch has the talents of the heaven and earth, or that the monarch has the benevolence of loving the people like a son? It seems that King Huai of Chu does not possess any of these. Then, why did you not find another way out when you were repeatedly misunderstood, alienated and banished, and still cling to King Huai of Chu? Qu Yuan, I don't know what kind of reward you got in return for your worldly loyalty. Foolish obsession is a kind of tie, bound your heart in a barren cold desert, highly damaged; blind loyalty to the king is a kind of stupid loyalty, forced you to the roaring Miluo River, buried in the belly of a fish.

Qu Yuan, I want to say to you, even if it is patriotic, a person should choose the right way.

I often wonder what I should do if I accidentally walk into a dead end. I might choose to turn back and find another pathway. You, on the other hand, chose to slam into the thick wall in front of you, hoping to knock out a light. I respect your perseverance, but, in the era of "fishy and imperial, Fang shall not be thin; yin and yang change position, the time is not right," how can you be so persistent to realize their lofty ambitions? One should choose the right way, why hang oneself on a tree? Qu Yuan, your character and your talent are obvious to all, you should be born to benefit the people, not just to make King Huai of Chu's face a smile.

Qu Yuan, I want to say to you, life is the most precious.

When you threw yourself into the river at Huai Sha, my heart twitched. You chose to die, a magnificent yet humble way. I marveled that you dared to sacrifice your life to pay tribute to your loyalty to King Huai, and lamented that although you gave your life, you could not save Chu from extinction. There are many more missions one can accomplish if one has a precious life. Life should not be put away just like this; you should let your life radiate a brilliant luster, not just confine yourself to your allegiance to King Huai.

Qu Yuan, I want to say to you, because of the above reasons, your choice makes me y regret. Woohoo!

Comments

The patriotic poet Qu Yuan, who is admired by the whole world as a complementary topic and an object of confidences, is recognized for his patriotic thoughts and deeds, but at the same time, he focuses on his own views on his "foolish loyalty", which is against the traditional mainstream viewpoints, unique and novel, and is suitable for the purpose of the topic. The article is structured in the form of a generalized structure, with three levels in the middle part of the main body at a glance. The use of metaphors, analogies, call-outs and other rhetorical devices, the language has a literary style.

[Example 3]

Hai Rui, I want to say to you

Hai Rui, I don't know if I can call you by your name like this as a yellow-haired girl, so please forgive me for my rudeness and impudence. You are a famous official in the history of our country, you are just and upright, dare to do for the people, and especially for the people to praise is that you dare to criticize the supreme emperor, courage and loyalty is admirable, you are the history of the fear of the powerful and noble model.

But I would like to say to you in all sincerity that it is not advisable to give direct advice.

You should be clear that it is precisely because of your defiance of the powerful and the rich and your courageous approach to direct advice that you have been repeatedly demoted, floating in the sea of bureaucracy, and can only save the people from the fire in the small area under your jurisdiction, and therefore, even if your talent and strategy can benefit the whole country, you can only pour out your full blood in that small area. Therefore, I do not think that being outspoken is the best way to give advice. Imagine, if you can change the way, so that the good medicine for the king's illness is wrapped in "sugar coating" and sweetened in the mouth, moving with emotion and reasoning, I believe the effect will be better. Isn't it? You every admonition are fierce words, sharp, but even if your every word is loyal, are good medicine, the emperor and listen to it? It is only wishful thinking and the king's anger. People love to listen to flattery, hate criticism, not to mention the high and mighty emperor. The wise emperor advocates "wide open the way, readily accept good advice", but throughout the ages, the wise emperor and how many? And how many of the advice was adopted and implemented? How many wise emperors have been accepted and implemented? Even a sage ruler was confused for a while, not to mention a mediocre one? The fact that you were imprisoned for several months for your vehement attack on the emperor's misuse of the Jiaozhai is the best proof of this.

Maybe you will say that Wei Zheng's direct criticisms were not utilized by Emperor Li Shimin of the Tang Dynasty? But you should also know, Li Shimin was Wei Zheng many times face to face after accusations of its faults, annoyed, but also a few times to banish this straight advice of loyal ministers, thanks to the Empress of the Changsun timely dissuasion, he realized the correctness of the advice, Wei Zheng was able to become the mirror of his future. I dare to tell you that direct advice often fails to get the desired effect, but instead creates misunderstanding, resentment and even hostility.

I think you must know Zou Ji, right? He knew that "the king's blindness is very great", but he did not choose to give his advice directly, but rather, he was tactful and politely remonstrated with the king by drawing analogies to the small things that had happened to him, and the result was a very good one.

In summary, Hai Rui, I would like to say to you that it is not desirable to give direct advice. If you were given another life, would you still choose to give direct advice?

[Commentary] The author focuses on one point, Hai Rui, a famous Qing official, to discuss and express his feelings, and fully recognizes his integrity, loyalty and courage at the same time, pointing out that although his spirit is commendable, but the way is not desirable, we should let the good medicine is sweet to the mouth, and pay attention to the strategy of admonition, which can be said to be a distinctive and unique insights, in line with the meaning of the topic. The author talked with the ancients, the tone of humility, earnest words, the use of aphorisms, examples, positive and negative comparisons and other methods of reasoning, flexible methods, reasoning thoroughly.

Keeping close to the requirements of the target

--Directional class material composition writing guide

Test question delivery

Read the following text, according to the requirements of the composition.

Nowadays, many people in society have a problem, that is, they always want to find a "best" profession, learn a "best" study, and then design a "best" way of learning. The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm not going to be able to do that, but I'd like to be able to do that, and I'd like to be able to do that.

In fact, this idea is too simple, in the end what is the best, who can define it? Please address this issue, contact the actual, self-selected angle, make up your own topic, write an essay, no less than 800 words.

Test question analysis

This is a directional type of material composition, its biggest advantage is to prevent lodging, so that the composition of a serious stereotyped thinking to lose the battle. This type of questions in front of the material is often listed as a bad phenomenon or wrong ideas, followed by the prompt will raise a question. It is said that it is "directed", because the question requires "this problem" to write, "this problem" is the composition of the direction of the idea, for example, in this question, "this problem", "this problem", "this problem", "this problem", "this problem", "this problem", "this problem", "this problem", "this problem", "this problem". In this question, for example, "the question" refers to "what is the best". General thesis can be from the "what" "why" and "how" three aspects to expand the idea, with this level of restriction, "why " "how" almost can not work, can only write "what", that is, "what is the best", only this is in line with the meaning of the question.

The actual battle, met the following kinds of intention, please judge its right and wrong:

①Struggle the best;

②The effort on the line;

③"There is no best, only better"

3 Learning is never-ending, never-ending, we can't be satisfied with the so-called "best", "the best", "the best", "the best", "the best", "the best", "the best", "the best", "the best", "the best". "the best", the pursuit of endless.

4 have a vision, using the right method, and persistently put into action to achieve the "best".

5 Suitable for their own is the best, because there is no absolute standard of whether the "best", different from person to person, different from time to time, different from thing to thing.

6 The most secure is the best.

The above six kinds of ideas, ① did not buckle the title of the material provided, did not address the wrong idea, that is, "many people in society" there is "a fault", if "struggle is the best If "hard work is the best" is also accurate, then almost all the relevant positive words can be, such as "strong best", "hard work is the best", "kindness is the best", "honesty is the best", "integrity is the best". "honesty is the best"...... ② "hard work is fine" is not to the point, lack of clarity, "line" is The word "work" means "can", not "best". Even if you replace "line" with "best", you still can't, for the same reason as in the previous article. (4) What is said in (4) is "what is the best way to do it", which is outside the direction of the question. The answer to the question "What is the best thing to do?" from a negative point of view and from a positive point of view, respectively, and in response to the wrong ideas listed in the question, are accurate ideas that take into account the requirements of the material and the orientation.

[Example essay]

Personality is the best

It is the pine, there is a jagged backbone; it is the bud, is the delicate style; it is the grass, it will have the spirit of unyielding.

Personality is the best. The pursuit of the so-called "best", do not respect their own personalities, always want to find a "best" professional, learn a "best" learning, and then design a The "best" way to learn, not only the "best" effect is not necessarily available, but also the loss of self.

The plum blossom does not compete with the flowers in the spring, the pursuit of their own personality, so there is a "dark fragrance floating in the moon dusk" charm; willow does not adore the uprightness of the pines, the pursuit of their own personality, so there is a "10,000 hanging down the green silk tapestry" of the graceful; the maple leaves do not envy the green trees, the pursuit of their own personality; the maple leaves do not envy the green trees of the verdant, the pursuit of their own personality. The maple leaves do not envy the green tree's verdant, the pursuit of their own personality, so there is a "frost leaves red than the February flowers" of the splendor.

Personality is to show your true self.

There is no absolute definition of the best, no one can define it. Therefore, you are you, do not in pursuit of the so-called "best" and live in the shadow of others; light up your personality, live out your colors, personality of life is the best life.

Why is "Supergirl" so popular? Why can Li Yuchun make so many fans crazy about him? Why is "Medallion" more and more popular? The root of this is because they have their own distinctive personality, they can fully display their own personality, to create their own unique brand.

Personality is the true pursuit of self.

When Li Yong first became the host of "Lucky 52", he was worried that he was not as handsome as other entertainment program hosts, so he stammered and stammered and suffered a complete failure. When he returned home, he was downcast and sad, but his wife, Ha Wen, smiled and said to him, "No matter what, I just hope you can stick to your own personality, always, always, I believe you will be the best." It was really a word that woke up the dreamer, and Li Yong was like a lost lamb that had found its home. The next day he walked onto the stage with a renewed spirit, warmly and sincerely with the guests to talk, so that his keen ability to respond and witty and humorous style of language is fully presented, distinctive personality in the conversation flashed, so that the "Lucky 52" program was a hit.

Personality is to stick to your own style.

"Go your own way and let others talk." When you do something good but you are sneered at by others, will you still stick to it? When your personality, which you consider unique and charming, is seen as heresy by others, will you still stick to it? There is such a joke: grandpa with his grandson to take a donkey out of the door, passers-by ridiculed them to have a donkey not to ride; grandpa rode on the donkey, passers-by accused grandpa of disregarding his grandson; grandpa panicked and rolled off the donkey to help his grandson to the donkey, passers-by criticized his grandson for being ungrateful; grandpa and his grandson rode together on a donkey, passers-by condemned the grandparents and the grandson for their cruelty; the last thing is that the grandparents and the grandson had no choice but to lift the donkey and go.

In fact, they love how to ride how to ride, no matter how other people evaluate, do the most real self is the right choice. Only by being your own master, dominating your own life, adhering to your own style, and mastering your own destiny can you arrive at the other side of the shore of success.

Like a pine, like a flower bud, like a stream, show your unique personality, show yourself, pursue yourself, stick to yourself! It's best to have personality.

Live Critique

What exactly is the best? In response to the wrong view in the material, the author elaborates the point of view that "individuality is the best", and appropriately breaks down the central thesis into three specific aspects, namely, revealing oneself authentically, pursuing oneself authentically, and adhering to one's own style, which is a clear point of view and is in line with the meaning of the topic; the author cites a number of poems, quotations, and real-life living materials, and the arguments are informative. The author cites a number of poems, quotes and real-life vivid materials, which are informative and well-argued.

The author is good at using the rhetorical devices of metaphor and prose, and his language is fluent and brilliant, his structure is complete and clear, and his opinions are novel and distinctive.

[Example 2]

There is no best

Is there a best flower? Tao Qian to chrysanthemum as a best friend, Danyi to lotus as the favorite, but Lin Bu to plum for the red face.

Is there a best woman? Baoyu is in love with the weak and delicate Daiyu, Jia mother favors the dignified and virtuous Baochai, Jiao Da like is healthy and strong village girl.

Is there a best courtyard? The king of the Central Plains is proud of the yellow tile and red wall of the Imperial City, Jiangnan literati to the winding paths of the garden is good, but the hermit of the deep forest to the willow shade of the wood door of the thatched cottage for the beauty.

No ruler can be recognized by all people **** the same. People have their own aspirations, people have their own strengths and weaknesses, what suits you is the best, in the sky that suits you, we can spread our wings to the maximum, fly to the highest heights.

Mark Twain was a famous writer before he became a famous author. Twain became a well-known writer before he aspired to be a businessman, like the successful businessmen at that time, "waist as much money", but he has twice failed, high debt. In the end, he realized that his talent lies in literary creation, and that business is only for others.

Everyone has their own best sky, all have different strengths and weaknesses. Imagine if you let Yu play basketball and let Kobe engage in literary creation, the result can be imagined.

Some people in society are looking for the "best" profession, learning a "best" literature, looking for the "best" way of learning, which will only result in blind obedience and blind action. This will only lead to blind obedience and blind action, wasting time and getting little result. Gorky, the great writer, had an active mind in the early hours of the morning, and his ideas flowed, but does writing in the early hours of the morning work for most people? Is writing in the wee hours of the morning suitable for most people? How many people are there in the world and in the long history? The best of all worlds is the one where you have to be a good person and you have to be a good person to be a good person.

There is no such thing as the best, only the better, and there is no limit to our pursuit of "the best".

No absolute pure gold, only a greater percentage of gold-containing mixtures; there is no pure silicon, scientists have been trying to purify decades is still in vain. Nevertheless, mankind has made them ever more pure.

The human brain is the most urgent need to develop the human blank, it can store a lot of information, ordinary people all their lives only used its storage function of 2%, the use of the most Einstein also only used 15%, as Newton said, human face the ocean of knowledge, often for the picking up of the beach on the more polished pebbles and complacency. The road ahead of mankind is long and far, as a member of society, the only way to find "better", not satisfied with the so-called "best".

There is no such thing as the best. Everyone has a different vision and a different talent, and the one that suits you is the best!

No best, a long way to go, we will go up and down and seek!

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The opening three natural paragraphs of the article from the three aspects of self-questioning, vividly and imaginatively illustrate that there is no absolute best in the world, suitable for their own is the best of the truth; and then use Mark Twain's initial career in the pursuit of the so-called "best", the best of the best, the best of the best. Twain's initial career pursuit of the so-called best and failed examples, arguing the argument; and then with the hypothetical argumentation method, so that Kirby and Yu Qiuyu role dislocation, pointing out that Gorky's creative peak time most people can not be imitated, in order to further argue the central thesis, the above is the first layer. The second layer quotes natural science, physiological science two materials, arguing that there is no best, only better, our pursuit of the "best" has no limit to the point of view. The last two natural paragraphs is the third layer, from two aspects of the summary of the whole text.

Looking at the whole text, the intention is accurate, full of content, complete structure, clear hierarchy, variety of methods, flexible sentences, good use of prose, analogy and other rhetorical devices, the language is fluent.