Write a composition about folk customs, 600 to 700 words.

Folk customs in my hometown

The sound of firecrackers marks the end of the year,

The spring breeze brings warmth to people.

Thousands of households are as bright as the sun.

Always replace old talismans with new ones.

Describes the festive scene of our people celebrating the Spring Festival. The sound of firecrackers is a symbol of saying goodbye to the old and welcoming the new, and an expression of festive mood. Business family. Setting off firecrackers has another meaning: they set off firecrackers on New Year's Eve to make a lot of money in the new year. However, according to old customs, you should be the first to honor the God of Wealth, and the last to set off firecrackers. Legend has it that if you want to make a fortune, the firecrackers should sound until the end to be considered sincere.

My hometown, Zhejiang, like many places across the country, has the same customs during the Chinese New Year. For example:

Staying up late

Chinese people have the habit of staying up late on New Year’s Eve, which is commonly known as “staying up late”. Staying up all year long starts with the New Year's Eve dinner. This New Year's Eve dinner should be eaten slowly, starting from the time when the lanterns are turned on. Some people have to eat until late at night. According to Zong Mao's "Jingchu Years' Records", the custom of eating New Year's Eve dinner has existed at least in the Southern and Northern Dynasties. The custom of keeping the year old includes not only a feeling of nostalgia for the passing years, but also a good hope for the coming New Year.

Eating New Year’s Eve dinner

While the children are playing and setting off firecrackers, it is also the busiest time for housewives in the kitchen. The New Year dishes have been prepared a few days ago, and The New Year's Eve dinner is always cooked by the chef on New Year's Eve. In the north, dumplings for the New Year's Day are also made on the 30th night. At this time, every chopping board was busy chopping meat and chopping vegetables. At this time, the sound of chopping boards came from every house, the sound of firecrackers came from the streets and alleys, the "crackling" sound of abacus and the mellow sound of accounting reports came from the small shops, mixed with the laughter everywhere, one after another. , filled with ears, intertwined into a cheerful New Year's Eve movement

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In addition to these, there are some different folk customs in my hometown. Let me give you one of them.

Zhaotian silkworms

Also known as "Field-burning silkworms" and "Field-burning wealth", it is a folk custom of praying for good luck in the Jiangnan area. On the twenty-fifth day of the twelfth lunar month, long poles tied with torches are erected in the fields to use the flames to divine the new year. If the flames are strong, they will herald a good harvest in the coming year.

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This narrative-based article describes the folk customs of “my” hometown during the Spring Festival and the grand celebration of the Spring Festival. Festive scene. Customs such as staying up late on New Year's Eve, eating New Year's Eve dinner, and lighting silkworms in the fields were introduced in detail. The theme is clear, the structure is rigorous, and the appeal is strong.

Folk customs

In ancient times, there was a great patriotic poet named Qu Yuan. He was expelled by the emperor because of the instigation of traitors. But he still loves his country. Finally he threw himself into the river. Later, in order to commemorate Qu Yuan, people had today's Dragon Boat Festival.

The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in my country. But as the years go by, the festive character of many places has ceased to exist. However, there are still strong folk customs in southern Fujian.

In the morning, everyone will cut wormwood. The cut mugwort was hung in front of the door and behind the house. The whole street is a vast expanse of green, as if there are thousands of green silk scarves flying in the wind. This mugwort means to repel mosquitoes and insects, and to ward off disasters and evil spirits.

The folk custom of using mugwort to ward off evil spirits has been passed down to this day, and the time at twelve o'clock is even more unforgettable.

Twelve noon. Every household carries a basin and goes to the river to fetch water. Rinse your feet or face with crystal clear water to wash away the bad luck on your body. Afterwards, people would gather by the river to kneel down and worship. Not only do they kneel down and worship, there are also many offerings on the tribute platform, including chicken, duck, fish, fine wine, fruits and vegetables, etc. Of course, the most important thing is zongzi. Finally, 6 of the palms were thrown into the river to feed the fish and shrimps. (So ??that Qu Yuan's body can continue to rest at the bottom of the sea) The sacrifice is completed. The remaining tributes can be taken home and eaten by oneself in order to gain some blessing and bring good luck.

In the afternoon, another climax of the Dragon Boat Festival arrived - lotus picking. Led by a drunken man dressed in a disgraceful manner, he carried a carved wooden dragon head. The dragon head is carved lifelike, with piercing eyes and a sacred and inviolable majesty. Behind them were the gongs and drums team, flower girls, etc. This procession will enter every house with flags and whisks. The host should treat the guests as a courtesy and give them some candies and biscuits. The team was more than ten meters long and consisted of hundreds of people. The sound of firecrackers continued and the sound of gongs and drums resounded through the sky. The momentum is really extraordinary!

On the Dragon Boat Festival, the happiest thing for children is to get a gift - a sachet. Its colors are mostly red, yellow and purple, with some beautiful patterns embroidered on the surface. According to the adults, there are many good things in the sachet. It means good luck and good wishes, and carries the elders’ best wishes for their children.

The Dragon Boat Festival in southern Fujian is always so unique and unforgettable!

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This article narrates the author’s experience of “celebrating the Dragon Boat Festival”. It uses action description, language description and other techniques, and the language is vivid and vivid. For example, "The whole street is a vast expanse of green, as if there are thousands of green silk scarves flying in the wind", which is full of life and can arouse readers' interest in reading.

Folk Customs

Looking forward, looking forward, finally, the annual bonfire party has arrived.

In the evening, after our family had eaten the Lantern Festival, we couldn’t wait to come to the entrance of the alley. At this time, all the men, women, and children in the alley gathered here, talking and laughing. Suddenly someone shouted: "Let's start warming up the fire." So people rushed home to grab firewood, and after a while they brought a lot of firewood. I lit the fire, and people shouted in unison: "The bonfire party has begun!" The adults gathered together and said excitedly: "Finally looking forward to the bonfire party, this year has passed so fast!" Grandma also said kindly: " Yes, life is getting better these days, and the flavor of the New Year is getting stronger." He said with a smile: The new countryside of New China is better! My family got a new TV and a tractor this year. Another person rushed to say: "My family also got new electrical appliances...

Our children gathered together, laughing and playing, I said: "This year I bought some small fireworks for little girls to play with, what about you? Xiaoyu said: "Me too, my mother also gave me New Year's money. Now she earns more money and is generous with her money." He kept talking, and I quickly interrupted him and said, "Let's start setting off the fireworks. "I lit a "Gypsophila" and then used the light to write down my wishes for this year in "Star Language". He closed his eyes again and prayed for the realization of this wish, and his friends unanimously wrote down their wishes. According to the custom of our hometown, we should run away together, so people took out all kinds of cannons, and colorful graphics suddenly appeared in the sky. We were intoxicated in this beautiful moment.

Brothers and sisters also gathered together and talked about their dreams and plans for the new year. Finally, there was the performance, and we all came to the lottery table to draw prizes. "yeah"! This year it’s me performing. I shouted involuntarily. I said in a loud voice: "I will perform a Latin dance Cha Cha Cha for everyone." Although there was no music, I danced to the rhythm with the applause of the audience.

With a burst of singing and laughter, the bonfire party ended, and with laughter, we entered the new year again. We will also greet and face every day with a smile.

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The young author not only has clear ideas, but is also a master of using language. The article uses metaphorical rhetoric in many places, which is specific and vivid, such as "Colorful graphics suddenly appeared in the sky, and we were intoxicated by this beautiful moment", etc., which all add color to the article.

Folk customs

Qiandongnan Miao and Dong Autonomous Prefecture, a place with beautiful mountains and rivers and simple folk customs, is a fascinating place. Home to nearly a quarter of the country's Miao population and nearly half of the Dong population, China's largest Miao village - Xijiang Qianhu Miao Village and the largest Dong village - Zhaoxing Qianhu Dong Village are both located here.

Walking into southeastern Guizhou is like entering a green world. In the Leigong Mountain Nature Reserve and Jianhe Hundred Miles of Broad-leaf Forest deep in Miaoling Mountains, there are few human traces of nature. The virgin forest is vast and vast, with rare birds and animals roaming freely. The mountains and rivers are beautiful, the birds are singing, the flowers are fragrant, and the air is fresh.

There are Wuyang River, Qingshui River, and Duliu River in southeastern Guizhou; there are also Long'ao River, Gaoguo River, Shanmu River, Yedong River, Bazhou River, etc. There are more than 2,900 large and small rivers in the whole state. All streams and rivers are crystal clear, and there are one national-level and six provincial-level scenic spots here.

When you come to Qiandongnan, you will feel that this is not just a transfer of space, but a step back in time. The rich national historical and cultural accumulation means that the hair styles of the Tang Dynasty, the costumes of the Song Dynasty, the Ming and Qing Dynasties are still preserved here. The Miao, Dong and other ethnic minorities living here have created a splendid traditional national culture in their long-term work and life. They built villages according to the mountains and lived in groups. Every village and village was covered with green bamboos and shady trees. When visiting the village, the enthusiastic Miao and Dong people have the etiquette of blocking roads and doors with wine. When the most distinguished guest arrives, there are as many as twelve bottles of wine. Miao and Dong girls in costumes welcomed the guests with fragrant rice wine and moving songs, and enjoyed each other's company. The free and easy-going young man played the reed pipe to welcome the guests into the village.

Southeastern Guizhou is the center of ethnic customs tourism on the east line of Guizhou. It is known as the "Hometown of Hundreds of Festivals". There are hundreds of traditional ethnic festivals, which are colorful and colorful, just like a living museum of ethnic customs.

Southeastern Guizhou is the "hometown of Lusheng" and "the ocean of singing and dancing". Lusheng and singing and dancing complement each other and have become a world-famous national characteristic. Songs, exciting and intense bullfighting scenes, the unique Miao stilted houses, and the Miao silver jewelry, cross-stitch, embroidery, batik, etc., which are considered to be the national craftsmanship, all shine with the light of oriental culture.

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This article is a narrative of folk customs. The author takes us to appreciate “the Qiandongnan Miao and Dong Autonomous Prefecture, a place with beautiful mountains and rivers and simple folk customs. A beautiful place, a fascinating place.” The language is fluent, close to life, and authentic.

Folk customs

The sound of firecrackers marks the end of the year,

The spring breeze brings warmth to people.

Thousands of households are as bright as the sun.

Always replace old talismans with new ones.

Describes the festive scene of our people celebrating the Spring Festival. The sound of firecrackers is a symbol of saying goodbye to the old and welcoming the new, and an expression of festive mood. Business family. Setting off firecrackers has another meaning: they set off firecrackers on New Year's Eve to make a lot of money in the new year. However, according to old customs, you should be the first to honor the God of Wealth, and the last to set off firecrackers.

Legend has it that if you want to make a fortune, the firecrackers should sound until the end to be considered sincere.

My hometown, Zhejiang, like many places across the country, has the same customs during the Chinese New Year. For example:

Staying up late

Chinese people have the habit of staying up late on New Year’s Eve, which is commonly known as “staying up late”. Staying up all year long starts with the New Year's Eve dinner. This New Year's Eve dinner should be eaten slowly, starting from the time when the lanterns are turned on. Some people have to eat until late at night. According to Zong Mao's "Jingchu Years' Records", the custom of eating New Year's Eve dinner has existed at least in the Southern and Northern Dynasties. The custom of keeping the year old includes not only a feeling of nostalgia for the passing years, but also a good hope for the coming New Year.

Eating New Year’s Eve dinner

While the children are playing and setting off firecrackers, it is also the busiest time for housewives in the kitchen. The New Year dishes have been prepared a few days ago, and The New Year's Eve dinner is always cooked by the chef on New Year's Eve. In the north, dumplings for the New Year's Day are also made on the 30th night. At this time, every chopping board was busy chopping meat and chopping vegetables. At this time, the sound of chopping boards came from every house, the sound of firecrackers came from the streets and alleys, the "crackling" sound of abacus and the mellow sound of accounting reports came from the small shops, mixed with the laughter everywhere, one after another. , filled with ears, intertwined into a cheerful New Year's Eve movement

...

In addition to these, there are some different folk customs in my hometown. Let me give you one of them.

Zhaotian silkworms

Also known as "Field-burning silkworms" and "Field-burning wealth", it is a folk custom of praying for good luck in the Jiangnan area. On the twenty-fifth day of the twelfth lunar month, long poles tied with torches are erected in the fields to use the flames to divine the new year. If the flames are strong, they will herald a good harvest in the coming year.

zw.Liuxue86.com teacher’s comment:

This is a composition about folk customs. The author describes the festive scene of our country’s people celebrating the grand Spring Festival. The language of the article is beautiful, good at using metaphors and rhetorical techniques, and the images are vivid. The ending expresses emotions and expresses love for folk customs.

Folk customs

If you have seen Huangshan, which is "Don't look at the mountains when you return from the Five Mountains, and don't look at the mountains when you return from Huangshan"; you have seen the majestic Great Wall; You have visited the Forbidden City with a long history; you have seen the West Lake with heavy makeup; you have seen the strange and beautiful landscapes of Guilin... Then you come to Jiangxi to browse. Since you come to Jiangxi, you should go to Lushan to browse around to make your trip worthwhile.

When the sun rises in the east, Lushan Mountain is like a girl who has just woken up, shrouded in morning mist. When you go up the mountain at this time, you will definitely have a feeling of being in a fairyland, soaring in the clouds and mist. Lushan Mountain in the morning mist is like a fairyland on earth, with a mirage like a mirage. I remember Su Shi wrote this in "Ti Xilinbi": "Looking at it from the side, it looks like a ridge or a peak, with different heights from near to far. I don't know the true face of Mount Lu, just because I am in this mountain." The clouds and mists in Mount Lu are famous throughout the country for their rapid changes. Look, the streamers that were just dancing fairies have now turned into the Milky Way in the Nine Heavens. For a moment it turns into a huge sky; for a moment it turns into a galloping horse; for a moment it turns into a paradise of jade trees and pink jade...

Jiangxi also has many specialties. Such as: Lushan Yunwu Tea, Jingdezhen Ceramics, Huichang Big Fruit Kumquat, Yushan Ribbed Inkstone, etc. Lushan Yunwu Tea is a high-end product that is very popular and in short supply in the international tea market. "Fortunately, after drinking Lushan Yunwu Tea, I can better understand the true face of Lushan Mountain." This poem-like praise is enough to illustrate its status and value. Huangshan has "four unique features", while Lushan Yunwu tea has "six unique features": thick cords, many green leaves, bright soup color, tender and even leaves, long-lasting fragrance, mellow and sweet taste. There is also Nagouzannao tea, which is one of Jiangxi’s rare and famous teas. The characteristics of this tea are very different from other teas. Its leaves are tender and even, with a hint of green in the blue. The surface is covered with a layer of soft and tender pekoe. There are five to seven tea leaves. The tea is clear and slightly golden. The tea tastes cool, mellow and mellow. It is sweet and refreshing, and the sweet taste in the mouth lasts for a long time.

Jiangxi has fascinating and fascinating tourist destinations; it has distinctive and unique folk customs; it has fascinating and touching folklore; and it also has unique and memorable flavors. Endless folk snacks. seeing is believing. Come here and experience it for yourself. If you don’t come, you will regret it for the rest of your life, but if you come, you will never forget it!

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This short article describes the folk customs of Jiangxi. The author uses personification to vividly describe Jiangxi's beauty, richness, and ease. The author uses metaphors and personification many times in the article to make the article vivid and express the author's love.

Folk customs

On the vast prairie, the impact is The voice of a Mongolian man. This is the annual Naadam Conference of the Mongolian people.

"Nadamu" is Mongolian, and "Mu" is the transliteration of Mongolian, which means "entertainment and games" to express the joy of harvest. It is a traditional form of sports activity loved by the Mongolian people. It starts on the fourth day of June every year. "Nadam" has a long history. According to the "Genghis Khan Stone Inscriptions" engraved on the stone cliff, Naadam originated in the early days of the establishment of the Mongolian Khanate. As early as 1206 AD, when Genghis Khan was elected as the Mongolian Khan, in order to review his troops, he held the ceremony from July to August every year. During the period, the "Daquli Ledai" was held to bring together the leaders of various tribes to express unity and friendship and to pray for a good harvest. At first only a certain competition of archery, horse racing or wrestling was held.

By the Yuan and Ming dynasties, archery and wrestling competitions were combined and became a fixed form. Later, the Mongolians also referred to these three sports as Naadam.

Wrestling is a particularly favorite sport of the Mongolian people, and it is also an indispensable competition event on Naadam. In Mongolian, wrestling is called "Bokbayildehu" and the wrestler is called "Bokqing". Wrestlers must wear wrestling uniforms "Zhaodege". The most eye-catching thing is that the central part of the wrestler's leather waistcoat is decorated with exquisite patterns in the shape of dragons, birds, flower vines, and monsters, giving people a simple and solemn feeling.

Archery is one of the earliest activities in Naadam. Before more than 800 AD, the Mongols were divided into many different tribes, and their economic life could be roughly divided into two types: nomadic economy and hunting economy. After Genghis Khan unified Mongolia, although the tribes with a hunting economy gradually turned to a nomadic economy, the skills of bow and arrow accumulated over the years during the hunting period were retained to prevent foreign invasion and wild beasts from attacking the herds. The rules of the archery competition are three rounds of nine arrows, and the top three will be determined by the number of arrows that hit the target.

The Naadam Conference is usually held for 7 to 9 days, and Mongolian men, women and children are immersed in joy.

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This explanatory article uses “the folk customs of the Mongolian people” as the object of explanation and explains “wrestling”. The author uses a logical sequence to explain, and the order is reasonable. He introduces that "the Naadam Conference is generally held for 7 to 9 days, and Mongolian men, women, and children are immersed in joy."

Guangzhou Style

In 2010, Guangzhou will hold a grand sports meeting. That's our pride, our pride. This will be our glorious mission and our obligation as Guangzhou people, so we must welcome this grand event. We need to make Guangzhou more beautiful and let more people see our lovely city. We can do many small things for our Guangzhou, and these small things can make Guangzhou more beautiful.

1. Protecting the environment starts with me. People's first impression is the sanitary environment in Guangzhou, so we need to protect and clean the environment. It requires us not to litter, not to spit everywhere, and not to damage public facilities. Also don’t post “psoriasis” everywhere. We should also protect the trees on the roadside. Their lives are fragile, but they are important. Without them, our air wouldn't be as fresh and clean.

2. It is to protect Guangzhou’s culture, which witnesses our development and civilization. Moreover, Guangzhou has a long cultural history, but it is far away from us because we have no awareness of protection. For example, the culture that needs to be protected includes our famous Xiguan House and Chen Clan Ancestral Hall and other historical "museums".

3. It is the quality of each of us. We must work hard to show the hospitality of our Guangzhou people to outsiders and make them feel like they are at home. When we see people in need of our help, we should also be eager to help them. We should not use our status as hosts to bully them because they are foreigners. We should also greet foreign guests in the name of hosts and fulfill our friendship as hosts. Smile is the most beautiful flower at any time, so we should smile to others, which will leave a good impression and sunshine on others.

4. Behind the Asian Games, there is a need for supporters, who are selfless devotees. They contribute silently to the Asian Games without asking for anything in return. In their hearts, they are doing what they have done for their city. There is no need for anything in return, they deserve our learning from their qualities, and Guangzhou will be even more beautiful.

Let us look forward to this grand event and to making Guangzhou more beautiful and beautiful.

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In this essay, the author lists “there are many small things we can do for Guangzhou, and these small things can make Guangzhou more beautiful.” It shows the pride and pride of the Chinese people. The article has a clear focus, typical material selection, concrete narrative, vivid language, and simple and natural style.

Guangzhou Style

Guangzhou is my hometown. In recent years, it has undergone earth-shaking changes - the streets have become green, the buildings have become beautiful, the Pearl River has become clearer, and the Baiyun Mountains have become more beautiful. , the sky is blue...

The traffic in Guangzhou is no longer what it used to be. Motorcycles are like crucian carp crossing the river, buses are like turtles crawling, and the Guangzhou Bridge is jammed during rush hours. Become history. The city government has spent a huge amount of money on improvements in this area, resulting in the construction of modern bridges on both sides of the Pearl River: Jiefang Bridge, Jiangwan Bridge, Baihedong Bridge, and Yasha Bridge, which have played an important role in alleviating the pressure across the river.

The municipal government also built an inner ring road. After the completion of the inner ring road, it is equivalent to providing a two-way six-lane expressway in the air. In addition to diversion of trucks at night, the inner ring road also creates space for buses on the ground. The speed of buses on some main roads has been increased to varying degrees. In this way, the vehicle speed in Guangzhou city center has increased from an average of 16 kilometers per hour four years ago to more than 30 kilometers per hour. The so-called "roads and finances" have made transportation more convenient, and citizens' incomes have also increased accordingly.

According to statistics, in 1997, Guangzhou's per capita real household income was 10,496 yuan and its expenditure was 8,768 yuan. In 2001, its real per capita income increased to 14,696 yuan and its expenditure was 11,467 yuan. Both indicators ranked among the top ten cities in the country. head.

At the same time, the income composition of Guangzhou residents has become more diversified. Although wage income is still the main source of residents' income, its proportion has begun to decline steadily, from 70.6% to 69.6%, which has decreased in five years. One percentage point; and the growth rate is much lower than non-wage income. In 2001, per capita non-wage income increased by 12.7% over the previous year, which was 10.4 percentage points higher than the rate of wage income.

As incomes increase, people begin to consider housing issues. According to statistics, 80% of Guangzhou families own free real estate, and the per capita living area increased from 11.55 square meters in 1999 to 13.87 square meters in 2002, ranking among the top in the country.

Ah, the "dirty and messy" Guangzhou in the past has turned into green mountains, clear water, blue sky, green space, and a flower city... I hope Guangzhou will have a better future!

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The author uses a grand style to comprehensively show the civilization and history of this ancient city of Guangzhou to readers. The author has been in Guangzhou for a long time, and his observations are particularly careful. What is more valuable is that the author does not stop at describing a single scene, but looks back on the present and the past, showing the increasingly prosperous situation of the motherland.

Folk customs

The Dai people in China are a nation with a long cultural tradition and a population of nearly one million. Mainly scattered in Yunnan Xishuangbanna Dai Autonomous Prefecture, Western Dai and Jingpo Autonomous Prefecture and Gengma Menglian and other autonomous counties.

The Water Splashing Festival is the most important festival of the Dai people. It is held every year in April of the lunar calendar and usually lasts for three to four days. There is still a myth circulating among the Dai people: In ancient times, there was a devil in the Dai area. He did many evil things and people hated him, but nothing could be done to deal with the devil. Later, the seven girls discovered the devil's fatal weakness, and only the devil's hair can kill them. One night, the girls bravely killed the devil. But as soon as the devil's head hit the ground, a fire broke out. At this point, the girls immediately took turns holding their heads. Change it once a year, when there is a replacement. People poured water on the girl holding her head to wash away the blood and fatigue on her body. Later, the most important festival of the Dai people - Water Splashing Festival was formed. On "Mai Day" which is the first day of the festival. People collect flowers and green leaves early in the morning to offer offerings to Buddhist temples, but they come here to "bathe the Buddha" in clear water - to wash away the dust of the Buddha statues. After the "bathing" is completed, the collective splashing of water begins. A group of young men and women poured out of the streets and alleys with water, splashing it on everyone they met. "When water flowers bloom, the Dai family is prosperous." "If you get wet, you will be happy for life." The auspicious, happy, and healthy water flowers bloom in the sky. Dragon boat rowing is one of the most exciting programs of the Water Splashing Festival, and is often held on the "Maipaya Wanma" (third day) of the Water Splashing Festival. On that day, people dressed in festive costumes gathered on the banks of the Lancang and Ruili rivers to watch the dragon boat races. There are various dragon boats moored on the river, with dozens of strong athletes on board. When the order is sounded, the dragon boats fly forward like arrows off the string. There are gongs, drums, trumpets and cheers everywhere, and the festive atmosphere reaches its climax here. "Putting High" is another program of Songkran Festival. Gaosheng is a homemade firework made by the Dai people. The bottom of a bamboo pole is filled with gunpowder and other ingredients, placed on a high tower made of bamboo, and wired on the street. It is often set off at night. Brilliant fireworks are released in the sky, like flowers and brocades, dazzling and wonderful. The Water Splashing Festival is the crystallization of the traditional culture of the Dai people and is a joyful and happy festival.

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The author of the article introduced the Water Splashing Festival of the Dai people, introduced the content of the Water Splashing Festival, and expressed the author’s love for the Water Splashing Festival. . The narrative of the article is complete, the content is substantial, and the language is fluent. The shortcoming is that the structure is incomplete and the paragraphs are not clearly divided.