Uncle's composition

Writing ideas: write down the time and place of the character (uncle) clearly at the beginning, write down the uncle's appearance in the portrait description, and then introduce the uncle's inner character, behavior and way of doing things in chronological order or the development of the story, with detailed description. Finally, write down your feelings. The following are three essays by Uncle for your reference.

Uncle composition 1

Early in the morning, I was awakened by an emergency call. It's my mother. She asked me if I wanted to play. I "well" and hung up the phone.

Get dressed and wait at the door, and the phone rings again. My mother asked me to wait for my uncle at the gate of Xinhua Bookstore.

"Uncle?" I shouted in surprise. In my impression, I don't know when a wall appeared between my uncle and me. It is so thick that we are not familiar with it.

Seeing my uncle's car coming from a distance, I hesitated in front of me. I understand this. After all, I haven't seen you for a year, and I have grown taller.

After getting on the bus, I sat in the back row, put my headphones in my ears and looked out of the window. There is only the sound of cars in the air. Finally, my uncle's words broke the silence. He asked me about my study and performance at school, and I just gave a cursory answer. My uncle was still nagging, so I turned up the earphone.

Actually, I didn't bother my uncle too much. My uncle used to give me money to encourage me every time I got good grades, but I haven't seen that reward since junior high school. Every time I play mobile phone computer, he will keep nagging me. My mother told me that my uncle loved to play more than I did at that time, and he didn't study hard until high school, but because he worked too late, he went to the military school-to be a soldier. He doesn't want me to work as hard as he does. I didn't care about this statement at that time, but I thought it was very interesting.

During the Chinese New Year, relatives and friends all come to our home. My uncle gave me money to buy wine. I forgot to return the rest of the money to him after buying it. I walked into the room. After a while, I heard my father calling me. After I went out, my uncle asked about the money. I just remembered that the money has not been paid back. As soon as I took it out and put it on the table, my uncle said that I had quality problems. I was angry in an instant, but he was an elder. I didn't say anything, so I dumped her. I didn't come back until evening, and my mother scolded me for it. Maybe that's when my uncle and I became estranged.

Until the senior high school entrance examination, I didn't go to high school and had to repeat it. My uncle sent money to my mother without saying anything, telling her to look after me this time and let me study hard. My resentment against him was reduced. Although I don't hate him now, I just feel bored and don't want to talk to him.

Unconsciously, the bus arrived. He sent my mother and me to our destination and drove back by himself. I opened the car door to get down, but he stopped me and gave me 200 yuan to study hard. When I received the money, I found that many of my uncle's hair had turned white and there were many wrinkles on his face. I don't know why, until my uncle's car left, I couldn't say "goodbye, uncle"

My uncle, a person who annoys me and admires me.

"Goodbye, uncle!" I didn't tell myself until his car disappeared.

Dashu composition 2

"Breathing", that's my uncle's breathing. He helped his grandmother to bed with his thick hands. This scene reappeared in my mind. Perhaps, when I went back to my hometown last winter vacation, I saw the most scenes, that is, my uncle was busy several times.

My uncle waits on my grandmother who can't move every day and never complains. My mother and I went back to our hometown to take care of grandma, but he was always worried. He always leaves his busy things behind and comes to grandma's house. First, he smiled and said to his mother, "Sister, I'll do it." Then go to grandma's bed. At that time, I felt that my uncle's smile was inexplicable.

During my return to my hometown, I found that every day he would take grandma from the bed to the sofa. It is too difficult for him to pick up grandma. After all, grandma is still fat, but he doesn't look so strong. His footsteps moved slowly, his lips were closed, he was on his back, he held his breath hard, his face was red, and his blood vessels seemed to burst. His pain can be found in his expression, which makes me look as if my heart was cut twice by a knife, but he worked hard, and I found a sense of firmness and security in his eyes. Finally, grandma was carefully moved to the sofa by him. To my surprise, while he was panting, he gave a teasing smile to his grandmother who was almost demented, as if he didn't feel bored and tired at all. He smiled and said, "Mom, you should get out of bed and exercise to lose weight every day, right?" At this time, even grandma, who seldom laughs after dementia, was amused. I just found out that my uncle's smile is so beautiful.

One day, grandma had a sudden cerebral hemorrhage and was taken to the hospital. My mother and aunt are almost crying with anxiety. I felt uneasy, too, and sat on the stool with my head down. The moment I suddenly looked up, I saw my uncle, who was just as busy as a bee, smiling and comforting my mother. His smile made me feel much safer and less anxious. In fact, I know very well that my uncle is the most anxious at this time, but he has controlled his emotions and helped others calm down. His smile looks so beautiful at this moment.

Grandma was fine and was discharged soon, but during her stay in hospital, I noticed a lot of uncles. He worked too hard, and his grandmother dragged him down too much. He is still young, so he chooses not to go to work, take care of her mother, work hard and don't accept money from relatives ... he is really a dutiful son.

In those days, his smile has taken root in my heart, lingering, that smile is so beautiful, it contains too much, not just his love for grandma.

He is respectable. He has done too much for his grandmother. Grandma is not only his relative, but also my relative. She used to be meticulous to me, meticulous. I think when I grow up, I will definitely take over the responsibility of serving my grandmother from him!

Dashu composition 3

I have an uncle, a great uncle. In my opinion, my uncle is a very innovative agricultural scientist, so I sincerely admire him. He naturally became an example in my study and always led me forward.

I haven't seen my uncle for a long time recently. In order to find time to visit my uncle, satisfy my little wish, and let me see my great example again, I went to my uncle's house by car on May Day. Before that, I had a hard time persuading my nagging mother to let me go to my uncle's house alone. At first, my mother did not allow me to go. She always looks worried that I will make any mistakes on this trip. Finally, I tried my best to get my mother to agree to this request. So it's not easy to visit my uncle's house, so I especially cherish this opportunity to meet my uncle. Although I got along well with my uncle since childhood, our relationship is also very close, and we are first-class acquaintances. However, every time I meet my uncle, there will always be a sense of inexplicable tension, and this time is no exception. So I pay great attention to meeting my uncle. It looks more formal than usual, and I'm afraid something will go wrong in front of my uncle. Therefore, it is a very grand and important moment in my life to be with such an uncle who is passionate about science.

On May Day, before dawn, I got up early and packed my simple luggage. Then, accompanied by my mother, I came to the station and got on the bus to my uncle's house. Along the way, I was very nervous. I was very excited and particularly uneasy at the thought of meeting my uncle. After driving for more than an hour, I finally came to my uncle's house. When I got off the bus, I saw a familiar figure. My aunt came all the way to see me. My mother called my aunt last night and told her that I would come today, so my aunt waited for me at the station in advance. After I said hello to my aunt, we went back to her house together. But after returning to my aunt's house, I felt a little surprised and didn't see my uncle, which made me feel a little confused. So I asked my aunt and said to her, "Aunt, why haven't you seen my uncle?" As soon as my words fell, my aunt said to me slightly angrily, "you uncle!" Now he is a busy man, busy in the dark all day. If you want to see him, you'll have to wait until evening. I think he may be experimenting with his precious crops in the field now. " After hearing my aunt's words, I understood why my aunt was a little angry when she answered my question. It turns out that my uncle is keen on his scientific career all day, thus alienating his aunt. No wonder menstruation said my uncle with some emotion. At this time, a photo hanging on the wall attracted me deeply. I was surprised when I looked up at the photo carefully. The people with my uncle in this photo are the pillars of our country, and they are all big shots! I saw in the photo that my uncle was wearing a bright suit and a bow tie in front of his throat, standing in high spirits, revealing his rare smile.

My uncle is a child born in the countryside, so he has such a strong interest in studying crops. After finishing college, my uncle decided decisively to give up his high-paying job in the city and choose to go back to his hometown to study crops, which also made his family feel particularly puzzled by his decision. Over the years, my uncle has been sticking to this hard post. Through his careful research and day and night efforts, the crops he cultivated benefited farmers greatly and greatly increased their income. He also unconsciously became an agricultural hero in the eyes of the people.

When I saw my uncle's trophy and flag brocade, I felt a great sense of honor. How great my uncle was, I especially thought of farmers. With his own efforts, he benefited many farmers. This noble quality is really worth learning! Suddenly, in my heart, I had a strong admiration for my uncle.