Food review

As the saying goes, food is the most important thing for people. Food stimulates people's taste, so how to write a comment about food? The following are the comments I collected about food, I hope they will help you!

Food review 1

1. Briefly explain the time, place and result?

2. The language is concise, standardized and attractive at the beginning.

3.？ With what? At first, it was more innovative. Explains the cause and effect.

4. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Key description? Make a deep impression on people.

5. I used a scene metaphor at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.

6. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.

7. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.

8. Ask questions at the beginning to attract readers.

9. Cut to the chase at the beginning, making people clear at a glance.

10. Point to the beginning and use attractive words.

1 1. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article;

12.？ Briefly describe the wonderful place; Link local work with overall work.

13. briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph;

14. The situation description causes suspense;

15. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.

16. Briefly describe the cause and effect and pave the way.

17. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part.

18.will. Change to? More appropriate,

19. Naturally, the connecting link between the preceding and the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching.

20. Describe the scenery in the narrative, measure people and compare them with each other.

Food review 2

1. This part refers to the examples in the text. The language is too flat, so it can be modified appropriately to make it more vivid.

2. Write vividly by using rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification? The beauty of. This part can also be written. See the big from the small, performance?

3. The use of figurative sentences is accurate. Add ancient poetry to associate, full of charm.

4.？ And then what? In sharp contrast, stand out from the crowd

It is impressive that primary school students can have such an experience.

6. Is that right? This metaphor is well used.

7. Use multiple senses and describe it very carefully.

The angry language of children is very interesting.

9. Add character behavior to make the picture vivid.

10. This paragraph is redundant, so it is better to delete it to make the article more concise.

1 1. Use wonderful imagination and subtle metaphors.

12. personification and metaphor full of childlike interest make the article shine.

13. Delicate psychological description, good use of figurative sentences,

14. The use of parallelism names adds a lot of color to the article.

15.？ Tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.

16. The ending is implicit and points out the theme.

17. The ending is a bit sudden and exaggerated.

18. Metaphorical image, appropriate and wonderful ending can be described as the finishing touch.

19. The ending doesn't seem to be over yet, so it should be coordinated with the beginning. Careful observation and vivid description.

20. The ending echoes the topic, points out the center and naturally expresses the love for the mother.

Comment 3 on food composition

1. Introduce the customs of Yongfeng in chronological order.

2. Can reflect vivid scenes through concrete examples.

3. The details are appropriate, and the festive atmosphere is written.

4. Accurate writing and vivid description reflect the traditional excitement and people.

5. Reflect the author's infinite happiness

6. While describing traditional customs, you can write your own unique feelings.

7. Inappropriate details, comprehensive, running account, no focus.

8. Some customs are not specified.

9. I didn't write about my unique feelings.

10. The language is dull and not vivid enough.