Methods of modifying sick sentences

In our narrative, sometimes there are sentences that are not fluent in words or ugly, and others often don't understand them after listening or reading them. This is called a sick sentence.

Second, common sick sentences are as follows:

1, the sentence is incomplete.

We must observe the habit of discipline.

We must form the habit of observing discipline.

2. Improper collocation of words.

For example, we should adhere to the glorious tradition of revolution.

Reform: We should inherit the glorious tradition of the revolution.

3. It means repetition.

I couldn't help laughing.

I can't help laughing.

4. The word order is wrong.

For example, we must seriously correct and carefully check the mistakes in our homework. We must carefully check and seriously correct the mistakes in our homework.

5. Inconsistent.

It was windy all last night.

A gust of wind blew last night. It blew all night yesterday.

6. The meaning of this sentence is ambiguous or wrong.

For example, no one can deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun.

No one will deny that the earth moves around the sun.

7, illogical.

For example, the shelves of shops are full of grapes, fruits and pears.