Three under the traditional festival rubric short

Traditional festivals in the second half of the three brief comments are as follows:

1, the Spring Festival: This article is a narrative narrative. The process of events described in detail and specific, although the content is more but seems to be organized and orderly, reflecting the author's clear thinking and the ability to plan and layout. The material is novel, the idea is marvelous, and the language is vivid and lively. Between the lines, it reveals a fresh breath of life and children's interest.

2. Spring Festival: The author of this article has a novel and unique idea, from "outside the window", "outside the mountains", "overseas" to "outside the heart". "from the window", "beyond the mountains", "overseas" to "outside the heart", layer by layer, from small to large, from personal reunion to the unity of the national territory. The end of the text quoted "But they swept away, is my flesh, you still keep my inner soul!" A song lyrics, more prominent in our eagerness for the unification of the motherland urgent mood.

3, Dragon Boat Festival: This is a narrative article, the author with the mouth of his father, introduced us to the Dragon Boat Festival, and the author's determination: to be like Qu Yuan, to be a patriotic person. The language of the article is smooth and fluent, if you can listen to the psychological activities of the father after the introduction, a good description, it will be better.

4. Duanwu Festival: Unlike many people who glorify and praise Qu Yuan, the author has his own unique ideas. The author thinks that Qu Yuan is cowardly and his sacrifice is not worth it, which is a unique idea and a novel conception, and it can arouse the readers' interest in reading. The language of the article's thesis is well reasoned and literary.

5, Dragon Boat Festival: the small author out of the classroom, pay attention to life, with a unique perspective to write their own feelings in the traditional festival of Dragon Boat Festival. Its language is fresh, lively, smooth, wrapping dumplings action and character dialog description is rich in children's interest. Read the whole article, a lovely image of children jumped on the paper.

6, Dragon Boat Festival: This is a narrative essay, the author recounted the Dragon Boat Festival dumplings. The beginning of the article directly point out the "package rice dumplings", open the door, leading to the following narrative. The author describes the process of making rice dumplings in great detail. The author also quotes a poem by Du Fu, which adds color to the article.

7, Qingming Festival: This is a description of the Qingming Festival article, reading your article makes the teacher especially touched, touched by the father's nostalgia for grandma, touched by your understanding. The article is full of nostalgia for grandma. The whole language is fluent and natural, more vivid, is a good exercise.

8, Qingming Festival: This is a narrative article, the author used a combination of narrative and lyrical method, expressing the author of the revolutionary predecessors, heroes of the worship and admiration. The language of the article is kind and natural, and the sentences are full of the author's feelings of remembrance of the heroes.