A composition with almost the same details determines success or failure, probably no matter how the topic changes.

Beauty shines in the details.

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She turned around, smiled gently, and turned away again.

A small detail, like a butterfly's transparent and delicate wings gently flapping my eyes. The corner of her eyes bent downward was full of the light that was about to flow out, and I remembered that expression for a moment.

It was a gentle and restrained look, reminiscent of the slightly wet wind in the south of the Yangtze River, the mottled dream in the morning, and a bowl of millet porridge with lotus leaf fragrance. Not fancy, not publicity, sweet eyes, let people write it down. Yes, details, a casual expression, an imperceptible look, and people who know how to appreciate them will become treasures when dug up.

I closed my eyes, and my eyes flooded again at that moment, accompanied by lingering wind and meticulous carving. All gentle, moist and beautiful intentions are laid out with this detail. It is "three feet of rain with green willows and one flute with cherry red"; It is "flowers wither, red apricots are small, swallows fly, and green water people go around"; It's "the rain hits the windowsill wet" ... the blue wall is like the thin outline of a pencil. The freshly dyed wax cloth hung in the air and made a heavy sound. The copper hoop cinnabar barrel pours water like a waterfall, and the strong tea sprinkled with chrysanthemums emits overlapping water vapor. All this flowed in her eyes at that moment, quietly, and stopped the carefree air with time and space. Is it Jiangnan? Is it tap water? Gentle? Is it meticulous? There is no need to answer more and no one will answer.

Such details are white flowers blooming in lush green leaves, emitting gentle fragrance, and he is only waiting to be picked by a willing heart.

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The CD spins and rustles, just like a green bug flapping its wings. Music immediately flowed out, turned into smoke and spread everywhere. This is dvorak's scherzo in G major. Too many people say that it is as beautiful as the main theme of silk. Now I close my eyes, give ear slightly and breathe slowly ... A small detail, like tiny and clear dust in the sunshine through the skylight in the afternoon, brushed my ears and touched me warmly and gently.

This is a short triplet after the first theme. They performed with fluent violin timbre, with happy and fresh smiles, dancing in the sun like the blonde hair of an Irish girl. I wonder what kind of mood dvorak felt when he wrote this string of imperceptible notes. It must be a touch of love, as if the sun is shining, the clouds are clear and the transparent wind is blowing on the mint-colored grass. Only you know the happiness in your heart. Yes, the details, I seem to see dvorak's knowing smile, and people with a heart have noticed the excavation, which is just a tacit but unexpected pleasure.

I think of some colorful bubbles rising slowly, a delicate flower blooming in lingering air, a sky touched by birds, a lingering wind, a group of swimming fish … all these are brought by the series of triplets.

Such details are the silver scraps falling from the center of the church ceiling with the light, which are small but shining, and they are only waiting for you.

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Women's cheongsam has a variety of customs, which outline the graceful lines of women. It is a landscape that women walk step by step.

But I caught such a detail: the small slit on the skirt of cheongsam. This design, whether intentional or not, whether anyone pays attention to it or not, has really become a pearl in the crown of cheongsam.

In the twenties and thirties, an open and closed border, women wearing cheongsam was everyone's first memory of that era, and cheongsam became the symbol of that era. This is a bridge, connecting the formality and rigidity of standard-bearer clothing and the unknown open era in the future. The women in the boudoir came out, cautious, shy and hesitant, like a cordate telosma, opening alone at night. The separation of cheongsam just reflects this ambiguous feeling in details. Women are walking, and the smooth skin on their calves is hidden from time to time, which is another kind of amorous feelings that they want to talk about and rest, but they do not lose Shenhua's introverted solemnity.

All the women in Zhang Ailing's novels are wearing cheongsam. They run between war and peace, between joy and sorrow, and between stories of every year.

Such a detail is a tear on a cloud, and he is waiting for your gentle care and sigh.

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Details are the flash of the subway, the smooth and clear sound of rain, the sound of birds flapping their wings, and the expression of eyebrows in strangers' eyes. ...

It requires people to touch, appreciate and feel with meticulous and patient attitude. I was very moved and serious when I chewed it carefully, so I wrote it down, wrote it down, treasured it and commented on it alone.

Then, you will find that the real beauty is to shine in the details.

Comments:

After reading three fragments and three details carefully, she found that the clever and exquisite expression and beautiful language style were highly consistent with the object described by the author and the atmosphere that the author wanted to construct, which should be an ideal "aestheticism" of the author.

Details, after all, are details. The key is "fineness" and whether the elements are "dynamic" or "dynamic". But if you want to "touch" yourself and others, you have to rely on the power of description.

The little author did a great job. (Yan Huayin)

The second article

Did you get a look at him?

Did you hear that?

Maybe you are so bored that you do "head-on" exercise with your toes and stones, and you are absent-minded and don't pay attention at all. Maybe you are crafting a beautiful lie, a successful prologue, and then cleverly avoiding asking your parents how you did in the exam when they opened the door. Maybe you are listening to the vulgar jokes about your future husband's garlic nose on your mobile phone. Or you have a heavy new year's goods in one hand and a lot of couplets in the other. What a mess is blocking the sight of both sides. Or did you just glance at it contemptuously, then speed up your steps and roll your nose like a cannon? ...

At this time, the wind blew and snowflakes began to fall. I noticed this pause, and if I didn't shout, I let it sink into the long streets and hurried people.

Approached, finally see clearly, but still a little fuzzy. Come closer, I can finally hear you. It's just a little desolate in the shouting. Not far ahead, a broken flatbed truck stood on the left, next to a thin farmer who was nearly sixty years old, and a wisp of smoke came out of his mouth from time to time. When you get closer, some things will be clear. There is a khaki dog lying under the stone pier of the flatbed. The dog wagged its tail and swept away some bloody bubbles, just like loach in dry land. No, there is also a ball-like child in the car, with a red face and a beige tiger hat-a gray hat that is common in thrift stores. Chinese characters of vegetables are neatly placed on the car board.

"Green vegetables, fresh vegetables."

The snow has begun to grow, and large pieces of velvet flowers hit the ground in clusters, making a crunching sound. The child slipped out of the car and wriggled in front of the old farmer. The old farmer put out the cigarette butts in his hand and threw them away. He kept rubbing his red face with his hand, and his mouth wriggled a few times, as if he had said something to comfort the doll. The child is still not coaxed. Two white hands grabbed the old farmer's dark green army trousers with almost no oil stains and kept shaking, shaking, shaking.

The snow is getting heavier and heavier, and there are no pedestrians on the road. Straight white fog appeared at the smoke crossing of several low-rise tile houses, which was soft.

Finally, the old farmer couldn't stand the entanglement, so he took out a black plastic pistol from his pocket and gave it to the doll. I seem to vaguely see the smiling face of the child like a lotus flower. The shouts rang again, and there was despair in the turbidity. The leaves of vegetables are frozen and rolled up like a curled-up green elf. The old farmer wiped off a layer of Bo Xue on the vegetables by hand, made a leisurely gesture, then carried the child to the car and let out a short cry at the dog curled up under the wheel, as if calling it time to go home.

Snow quietly put away its wings and landed quietly on the ground, roof and treetops.

The gray-black world ranges from light blue to light blue to angelic pure white. Shouting is still the same, just a mute. The whole world is gradually becoming quiet and serene.

The flatbed is drifting away, and occasionally there is a gunshot or two, because tonight is the last night of the year's New Year's Eve. The child naively pointed to the things in the car. The little yellow dog was not in front of the car for a while, and he showed his short body like a loach for a while. ...

It's still snowing, and it's raining heavily.

Did you get a look at him?

Did you hear that?

Comments:

When I first read this composition, I was deeply shocked. This benefits from two points: first, the young author's selection of materials, aiming at life and the other side of life, can also be called the bottom article, which is cold but not sensational and impressive; Second, the author's meticulous description runs through, and the details and sketches constitute the scene, which can almost be said to bring the detail description to the extreme.

In the face of more and more so-called "new concept" compositions and "innovative compositions", it is a pleasure and an unexpected excitement to suddenly see such compositions after reading so many articles that are more and more bizarre or "juvenile mature" and most of them groan without illness. Although slightly dignified, although not very sunny, but it is the value of this article.

Paying attention to life and people on earth should be an article, especially the life of an article. (Yan) according to

Examples of "Details" Guidance in Topic Composition

Composition topic:

There are often some details in life that we ignore, and some things fall short because of one detail; In life, we are often moved by some details, which makes us feel the love and warmth of this world. What are the details in your life that you will never forget? Have you ever been sad about some details? Have you ever been moved by some details? What do you want to say most in the face of details?

Please write an article on the topic of "details". Requirements: ① Self-made topic ② The style is not limited, about 3,800 words.

Writing instruction:

Details are tiny parts of the whole, or links that are easily overlooked in the system. In a sense, life is made up of details, and we often pay a heavy price for not paying attention to certain details, such as misspelling a word or miscalculating a number. We are often moved by some details, such as a warm word and a subtle move. Behind the details is life, emotion and career. "Taishan does not refuse fine soil, so it can become high; Rivers and seas do not choose trickle, so they can be deep. " It's about the importance of detail.

The success or failure of topic composition, thought is the most important level. Some candidates think that the topic composition is enough as long as it stays on the topic. In fact, topic composition needs profound thinking just like other compositions. If you want to have profound ideas, you must understand the connotation of the topic, put the topic in the context of reading, life and society, do some serious thinking, and then find an ideal angle to write.

There is a thought-provoking example in Wang Zhongqiu's book "Details Decide Success or Failure". Shanghai Metro 1 Line was designed by Germans, and Line 2 was designed by ourselves. Shanghai is located in East China, and the terrain is only a little higher than the sea level on average. In summer, rain often traps some buildings. German designers noticed this detail, so each outdoor exit of subway 1 line was designed with three steps. To enter the subway entrance, you must step on three steps and then get down to the subway station. These three simple steps can prevent rainwater from flowing backwards in rainy days, thus reducing the flood control pressure of the subway. In fact, the flood control facilities of line 1 have almost never been used; Because of the lack of these steps, Metro Line 2 was flooded in rainy days, which caused huge economic losses. We often think that Germans are a bit rigid in doing things, but it is under the rigorous and meticulous work attitude and habits that they pay attention to details.

Our traditional thinking has always believed that details are not important, and "those who achieve great things are not constrained" was once a word we were proud of. Some people say that in China, there are many people who want to do big things, but few people are willing to do small things; We don't lack great strategists, what we lack is excellent executors; There is no shortage of various management rules and regulations. What is lacking is to implement the rules and regulations to the letter. These words deserve our deep thought. We must change the habit of being impetuous, dabbling, and not asking for a very good understanding, and advocate paying attention to details and doing small things with details. ...

In terms of content, you can write trivial things, ordinary but lasting touching details, and you can also write stories about great people who pay attention to details. We can also write about the consequences of ignoring details in a market economy, or the success of paying attention to details. Throughout the world, everything about details can be transferred to the pen. But remember, these details must be meaningful, interesting and closely related to social life. Never write details for the sake of writing details.

In writing, it can be written as prose, narrative, argumentative and novel. However, when assembling materials, we should highlight the details, either by selecting several life segments to highlight one or several details, or by taking a certain detail as a clue to conceive; If you write an argumentative essay, you must have a clear point of view, grasp the details of a certain aspect and make a reasonable argument.

In short, no matter what form it takes, it is necessary to focus on the topic properly, expound the deep connotation of "details" and show a positive value orientation.

[Example 1]

It is often only the details that move people.

Xia Jingjing, Class 3, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province

The details are the mother's inquiry after school, the father's saying that he should go to bed early after finishing his homework, the teacher's eyes when he finished the question, and the detailed notes handed over by his friend after he got sick. Although the details are small, they are timeless.

We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre. Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series.

Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament. Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves.

Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course that they have walked through each other and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back.

We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better. "In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details. Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover.

[Brief comments on examples]

This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points. The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun. The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless.

[Example 2]

Anatomical details

Hu Wenwen, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province.

Once, when a meteor crossed the starry sky, I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story. But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life.

The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success. Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm.

Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Flowers are getting more and more charming", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "I miss my dear ones more every festive season", friendship is planted and blossomed in the details, and love is nurtured in the details. ...

Accumulate small details in your study and pay attention to small details in your work, and your life will be more substantial and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope. One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life!

[Brief comments on examples]

Details are not refined, and we can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life. The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power.

[Example 3]

Details-the source of beauty and eternity

3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province

People say, short as morning dew, fleeting when the sun clears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day. The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power.

We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self as an eternal existence in the historical chain? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny. Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people.

There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity. But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no exquisite syllogism, only thousands of seemingly ordinary calculations, reasoning and proofs. Every calculation, reasoning or proof itself is tiny, but it is these tiny details that have contributed to a breakthrough and leap in the history of human science. You can't succeed without details, and you can't get eternity without details.

Some people say that details are only a fragment in the evolution of things, which is true. But even so, who can deny the meaning of the details? Can a thing or thing give people a sense of beauty without any details that make it up?

Chernyshevski famously said: Beauty is life. In other words, beauty is made up of bits and pieces in life, and details are the source of beauty. "The moonlight shines in the pine forest, and the crystal stone shines in the stream. Bamboo whispers that the laundry girl returns, and the lotus leaves bend in front of the fishing boat. Every sentence in Wang Wei's poems is just a general description of the scenery, no matter which one is not a famous sentence. But a few words together form the realm of painting in poetry, where poetry and Zen blend and scenes are intertwined.

It was Cao Xueqin's painstaking management and meticulous carving that made the immortal Dream of Red Mansions. How can the images of Jia Baoyu and Sister Lin be so deeply rooted in people's hearts without his originality and countless details to express the personalities of the characters?

Details are the source of beauty, which makes every tree and stone shine; Details are the saints of time, making fleeting things eternal. Friends, let's seize every detail of life and let life show its due glory!

[Brief comments on examples]

Life is short, everything is a moment, and there is a warning from the beginning. Where can I find a tree to freeze eternity? The author found the tree of details. Beauty is life, and details are the source of beauty. In this way, the author's writing will have a good support, and then he will explain it, and everything will be logical. The full-text language is sophisticated, beautiful and concise.