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-- of the New Year's Eve and the first day of the Lunar New Year

Waving to the past, waving to the future, saluting the future.

The 30th day of the Lunar New Year

2010.2.13 Saturday Cloudy to ?

The last day is one that I will cherish, clinging to it like a child opening his eyes for the first time. I had just gotten out of the warm comforter when I was dropped off at my grandpa's house by my dad. It seems he was in more of a hurry than mom would be at her mother's house. On New Year's Eve, it was a great time for me to show off my big appetite, so of course I had to go and say goodbye to those poor little things that were about to fall into my belly. However, the grandmother refused to me in a thousand miles away, but also mysteriously said to me: "all secret, later there will be a lot of guests to come yo!" There are a lot of people to come, then I have to play a little bit of fun first, the crowd is not fun. What should I do first? As I was thinking, the doorbell rang. My sister rushed in. "Is she the 'mystery guest' Grandma was talking about? I don't think so!" In the midst of her surprise, my sister was already enthusiastically greeting the guests with "Happy New Year!" "Good day! Come in and sit down." "Qiaoqiao, come and see which one is here!" I fixed my eyes, oh, it was the guests from Chengdu.

When they came, me, grandpa, grandma, dad, etc. had to go down a generation, so I had to call the kids who were about my size cousins. (But I was quite happy to get a red packet! Shhhh!) Although it is uncle, but the late computer does not have to me inferior. My two cousins, found my grandfather's home computer, with the speed of lightning to open the computer to play the game, and I only in the side of the watch!

Didn't play for long, I heard my grandmother shout, "Dinner's ready! Come on!!!"

I thought it was dumplings or something, but then I saw, what? Hot pot! I walked towards Grandma and looked at her with a surprised expression, pointing my finger at the hot pot.

Grandma said, "This year's Chinese New Year is going to be different, and Chinese New Year is all about being happy and prosperous! Don't think I'm cheap, it's cheap, but it's absolutely delicious!"

After dinner, my sister, like a magician, took out a big bag of fireworks (that is, in the hands of the children to play, very safe!). A couple of my cousins and I discussed coming up with a different way to play. The best part was that we built something like a woodpile, lit one first, then just slowly burned it to the top and it started sparking, haha, it was beautiful!

Bye 2009, cheers 2010 ！！！！！！

The first day of the year is not the same as the first day of the year

The first day of the year, of course, we have to play well. But last night, I waited until 12 o'clock to hear the bell, so I didn't get up until 11 o'clock. I'm sure we'll be able to get through a lot of the day. And today we have to accompany the guests from Chengdu to Huangjiao Ya. So we accelerated our progress.

When I got there, I accompanied my 3 cousins and 6 or 7 other people to climb the mountain. Before they warmed up they got excited out of nowhere and said they wanted me to lead the way to see that temple. But the tricky thing is still ahead, I do not know the way. Native-born locals actually do not know the way, not let people laugh off the teeth, said the first day of the year to get a good luck is also due. I can't help it, I just have to agree to it, it's not like I'm going to get lost.

Possibly my usual accumulation of good, I left turn right turn, hey, but also to the! I can not help but dance. I had happily taken on the task of buying a ticket. Walked in. Do not know, a look shocked. It was really crowded, no bragging rights at all! To my head is not tall, crowded in the crowd, you can only see people's clothes. We walked together, afraid of getting lost. We walked up a flight of steps, saw a small temple inside, I thought: in the end what is the God, there are so many people to worship him. It turned out to be the God of Wealth. Although I don't really believe in it, I may have made a wish: may I have a lot of money in the new year.

We wanted to go further up, and heard the people coming down say, "So many people! It's a one-way street!" Still, we were discouraged.

We exited the temple and made our way back. It was a relief at last. We had long been terrified by that crowded scene, and we no longer cared about the bounty of the food, we opened our mouths and ate. I couldn't stop raving about the chef's handiwork.

There is no such thing as an endless banquet, it was time for us to leave, and Grandpa drove the guests from Chengdu to the fork in the road in Wulong to say goodbye to them! And promised that next summer vacation, we will also go to Chengdu to play.

Bye! Bye!

I was still immersed in the memories of these two happy days, just then, Grandma said, "Well, yesterday Wang Qiao students did not do their homework, today you have to make up for yo!"

"Ah! Don't ah!" I fainted.

2010 here I come!

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