GAL Review - SWAN SONG

This work has a folk Chinese version, you can experience on your own to prevent spoilers.

This review should have been done a month earlier, when I was supposed to be writing another big article. *I've been working on this for a while now, but I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do it! Recently, the localization groups seem to be slightly weak, and there's not much noise except for a certain house, so I'll talk about that next time.

Script: ?

The story of the "Lianya Setoguchi"

The story of the "Lianya Setoguchi" is a story of the writer, the "model" of the "good", and now forced to change his pen name and become a novelist, it is really a great loss of the butter world, if you are interested in, you may want to play with the other Chinese multimedia novel, "Darkness of the Ministry of the House".

Searching for swan song, you can find a lot of literary reviews, and it's true that this one is a bit of a curveball, but the descriptions and narratives aren't obscure, so it's just as enjoyable to read as it is for the old folks. Putting aside the script, the BGM of this work is concise and to the point, the realistic and delicate drawing, the performance effect is complete and at the same time reasonably allocates the space of the content, which is a number of advantages, also has a plus point. (The end of the amenity, I tried my best).

Butter world has always had the tradition of splitting the role, a GAL always have to put together a what black long straight snow sister, double pony tail yellow hair loli, impudent ghosts of childhood friends ....... The summary of the various secondary yuan moe point package, indeed more likely to poke the otaku people's moe point, more absorbing. But at the same time it would stretch the story horizontally and make the script waver between fleshing out the characters and depicting the backbone of the story. There are a few ways to solve this:

1. **** the same line with a small amount of description, into the personal line will be the non-main selection of the character Shen Zhen. The traditional GALGAME formula, aesthetic fatigue not to mention, SAVE improperly have to brush every time *** through the line, very annoying. And the role of the severity of the sense of serious, through a line do not know what, all through and tasteless, padding part of the consumption is too much.

2. Break up the main story and assign it to the appropriate characters. The way that everyone has a job to do is more common in anime and manga: 2-4 times a short story, while putting some of the main clues.GAL in the "G-string demon king", "the wheel of the country", "stone door" is this kind of formula. The above examples are used properly, but if the writing is a little poor, the disadvantages are obvious, the script drags, the male (+ female) is like in a relay race, if the plot and the character coupling is not enough, it is inevitable to read the raw pull together.

3. Multi-week description, multi-week is AVG's trump card, and even said to be different from the text of the novel, anime, movie, the tool. The characterization part is split up and inserted in weekly installments, which will not disrupt the narrative and deepen the characters. It's used in most GALs, but it's too expensive to write in full (and most of those that do become "masterpieces"), and it's seen in a lot of reincarnation stories....

I've mentioned 3 solutions, but they're more like descriptive techniques, i.e. techniques first, problem solving second, so don't put the cart before the horse.

So how does SWAN SONG deal with this? No splitting. Everything prioritizes storytelling, and GALs are considered AVGs, so the core of a novel is storytelling, asshole! So you'll see: the stupid girl who doesn't have a few lines in the whole story but manages to hang on to the female number one in the synopsis, the female number two who seems to be quite crucial but doesn't do much in the end, the female number three who is the only one close to the secondary characters but doesn't have a good event ...... Female characters are a must for a GAL, but they're fine as long as they serve the story.

The post-apocalyptic theme , which is actually not uncommon in GALs, is unknown due to mostly low quality. Usually as the graft of the strange Hsence, or some of the by-products of the world view of the brain, read the light and weak, few good works. (Can a certain Bei Ado's feces-swallowing story be considered a good one?) This novel captures the essence of the post-apocalyptic world. Desolation? Cruelty", the opening murder of women, in the dying of the consignment and remorse, can be said to be drilling, "death is a better liberation", to the Division is good, or malicious? Short dialogue, very playful.

Since we chose to write realistically, the character decisions and personality changes are naturally more noticeable. Let's start with the spade-worm moncler. From the introverted, sullen man who goes from being a self-made man to a ruthless character who is on his own, even commanding the masses. Although I harbor a grudge against his transformation, I at least admire it. (You on you may not be OK) It's just a pity that in extreme circumstances, blindly relying on the more primitive violence & possessiveness.

Feathered into a spade, iron armor protection, teeth protruding horrifying. Perhaps still a larva inside, but the weapon swung down, and then it is difficult to undo. "I did not do wrong, just lost." Lost to who? I see, is defeated to the conscience of the rotten account.

Division & Yuzuka , face good with evil, and the heart to the good, in the blizzard cold in the disabled live, because of the disabled live and struggle, in the struggle of the epiphany ...... Especially the Division's inner description, throughout the whole article, the front with the standard GAL hero's reticence and mute, to the end of the ignition of blood, or quite wonderful.

And a question ......

あろえ ,what is the point of the existence of this character? When writing a review for SWAN SONG, you absolutely can't get around this; textually, it doesn't really hurt to smoke her out (not a critical node, less H). Is she there to echo back and forth, to illuminate the center? Is she worthy of the swan's characteristics?

In my humble opinion, the crappy account is trying to convey this message

Wrote more again ......

This is the first time I've written about a swan, and I'm sure it's a good thing I didn't make it into a so-called "in-depth analysis" of the dismemberment article.

The other one will be added next time, mainly to talk about the worldview + ip.

Wrap up.