Common Memory Quality Check Composition (2)

As the saying goes, every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world. And I think that the rise and fall of a city, honor and disgrace, also needs the responsibility of every citizen. If the city is a towering tree, then the citizens are the leaves on the branches. As a part of the tree, we can only let the memories pass from generation to generation, so that the wind and rain can't pass through.

* * * The same memories, as the name implies, are those that should not be forgotten and need to be guarded by generation after generation. Not only those traditional cultures are dying out, but also those who have gone through hardships or disappeared in the long river of history.

A city without memory can't stand the wind and rain, and people without memory are doomed to mediocrity. This is the reason why the school offers a history class: let the memory pass on in the wind and rain. It is true that the past is like smoke, and people should look forward; But as mayor Wu said, high-rise buildings should also be available, and cultural heritage should not be lost. The ancients also left a cry of learning from history and knowing the rise and fall. And history, is it not the same memory hidden in a city? Judging from this. * * * The same memory is the root and soul of a city. Excuse me, can a tree that has lost its roots and a person that has lost its soul stand in the wind and rain?

Indeed, for contemporary people, some memories have gone away, but this does not mean that the inheritance of memories can be cut off. Only when the people of a city remember the past history can it be a vibrant city. Nanjing, once the glorious ancient capital of the Six Dynasties, was soaked with blood under the atrocities of the Japanese invaders. Don't, nanjing people and even China people, can forget the tragic memories of this period of people just because the past is like smoke? Of course not! Obviously, such wounds will not fade with time. Every year on the public holiday, people will pay homage to the tomb of the martyrs. Even without blood-soaked soil, these memories will not be forgotten. Therefore, the inheritance of memory cannot be stopped.

With the development of the times, there is no need to transfer memories in such a difficult way. The municipal government can awaken the memory of * * * in the hearts of citizens through public welfare activities and other related activities. And citizens, we should actively understand the past of history. Ancient city walls, former residences of celebrities and every corner of the city may reveal the flavor of the times. * * * Tongmai is also a towering tree. Buried in the soil is the other side of the city, and what grows on the tree is ours. Only by understanding, inheriting and protecting these precious memories can the cultural heritage of the city have a long history and the city stand tall in the wind and rain.

Of course, understanding * * * by memory does not mean that it is conservative and incomplete. On the contrary, only by integrating the imprint of this era into memory can it be carried forward. Not long ago, Trump, who rehearsed Huangmei Opera in a university, took office, causing quite a stir. This is a reconstruction of the memory of Farewell My Concubine, which is wonderful for those movie fans who are tired of watching Farewell My Concubine. On the other hand, the inheritance and accumulation of thousands of years cannot be broken overnight. Generally speaking, it still needs the efforts of the government and the painstaking accomplishments of relevant personnel.

Five thousand years of turmoil in China, our memory of * * * has been branded in our hearts. Wind and rain can't break our inheritance, but if we blindly pursue high-rise buildings and forget the cultural heritage, the brand in our hearts will disappear. Therefore, as citizens, we should work together to make the city better.

Comments:

The provincial examination of this composition topic tests students' experience of life. Its appearance not only embodies the requirements of Chinese students' core literacy development, but also meets the needs of students' healthy physical and mental development during their growth.

The choice of materials is reflected in family, school and society, from near to far, from shallow to deep, which provides a broad space for students to choose writing.

The article "Wind and rain can't decompose memory" is the third choice of material.

From the examination of the test questions, candidates can accurately understand the requirements of the test questions in a tight and limited time, directly analyze the root and soul of urban development, point out that the inheritance of the same clan cultural heritage is the root and soul of the city, and list the Nanjing Massacre when Japanese militarism invaded China, which aroused the enthusiasm of Nanjing citizens to resist aggression and love the motherland, branded Nanjing with a deep urban imprint and formed Nanjing's unique characteristics.

Learners also try to explore how to inherit the city's "* * * with the same memory": holding related activities, not sticking to the rules, which shows its wisdom.

However, the examination room is short, the writing is in a hurry, the excavation of the root and soul of the city is not deep enough, and the way of inheritance is superficial, which is understandable.

5. Don't let the culture drain away

Mayor Wu said: "Memory is the root and soul of a city. We need high-rise buildings and we need cultural heritage. " * * * The same memory is our common understanding and our common goal. Among the high-rise buildings and cultural heritage, Mayor Wu's pursuit of cultural heritage represents the common goal of all citizens. In the competition between science and technology and tradition, we should embrace tradition and prevent the loss of culture.

Culture is a person's spiritual wealth. A person without spiritual wealth is like a plant without water and vitality; A person without spiritual wealth is like a squeezed ant, without fighting spirit; A man without spiritual wealth is like a drop of water in the river, with nothing to do all his life. Without culture, a person has no moral bottom line, let alone cultural temperament. Cultural heritage is like the foundation of a house. Only when the foundation is solid, the house is built firmly and the cultural background is rich can people stand on it and grow up healthily.

Culture is the foundation of a city's development. Ji Bolun once said, "We have gone so far that we forget why we started." Urban development needs innovation and high technology, but we can't forget our initial heart and our culture. Some people think: "Embracing traditional culture means being stubborn and conservative, so standing still." Judging from the "closed door" policy of the Qing Dynasty, this is indeed a sign of lack of progress, but if we do not firmly grasp the traditional culture, we will face the situation that intellectual property rights and cultural property rights will be violated and patents will be applied for first. Therefore, preserving cultural heritage is fundamental and developing cities is the goal. We should take the essence of traditional culture, discard its dross, and grasp the excellent traditional culture, which is the foundation of the city's prosperity and development.

Culture is the face of a country going abroad. China is in the stage of development, and is moving towards a great rejuvenation. We should go abroad and rely on excellent cultural heritage as our spiritual outlook. We should not only grasp the cultural heritage, but also actively export it to the outside world, so that China culture can spread to all parts of the world. However, traditional festivals are pre-registered, traditional customs are lost, and intellectual property rights and cultural property rights are frequently violated, which makes us realize that we should actively take up legal weapons to safeguard rights and defend the intangible cultural heritage of the country.

Xu Hong said, "Don't forget why you started just because you walked too far." We have been on the road of development, but its cultural foundation has been lost, so keep our initial heart, so as to achieve your ultimate goal. We should also agree with Mayor Wu's speech on high-tech development and technological innovation. We need high-rise buildings, but we need cultural heritage more.

Comments:

The title "Don't let the culture drain" is a direct appeal, concise and to the point, and has a warning effect. The first paragraph expounds the significance of * * * having a memory in a city: * * having a memory is our common understanding and pursuit goal, and puts forward the central argument-don't let culture drain. The second paragraph, after the above, demonstrates the importance of culture, and uses three metaphors and parallelism to write why we should attach importance to culture, which is thought-provoking. Concession hypothesis reasoning, clarify the harm, and thoroughly explain the importance of cultural heritage. The third paragraph takes into account what he said, embodies the speculative nature and makes the argument more rigorous. Urban development needs innovation and high technology, but we can't lose cultural heritage, so we need to grasp excellent traditional culture. The fourth paragraph is from point to surface, with a wide field of vision. We should not only grasp the cultural heritage, but also actively export the culture to the outside world, so that China culture can spread all over the world. Then it talks about the lack of realistic traditional culture and puts forward specific solutions. The last paragraph closed the whole article and sublimated the theme. The full text is clear-cut, concise in language, citing famous sayings to demonstrate views, especially having one's own opinions and broad in vision.

6, nourishing the heart and morality, peach and plum spring breeze

The memory of teachers and students is not a pile of exercises, not a dry sermon, but a series of thrilling words-spiritual home, spiritual highland. You are a teacher and I am a student. You use a candle to burn thousands of sparks. Cultivate my heart, cultivate my morality, cultivate peaches and plums, and cultivate teachers and students' memories.

Teacher, so preach and teach. Teachers show beauty and give people hope. Teacher Shen said, "I want to be a modest, caring and self-disciplined gardener." For students, teachers are not only gardeners who repair their minds, but also lighthouses that enlighten the spiritual world. In the past, Xu Teli, a teacher in Mao Zedong, severed his finger and wrote in blood: "Please severed his finger to see me off at the founding congress", which was patriotic and famous throughout the country; Master Liang Shuming led the students to sit in a ball in the morning and think about life. Teachers are trained by students and students are rewarded by teachers. The two achieve each other and create precious memories together.

The shaping of teachers and students not only refers to the enlightenment of the mind, but also has the significance of moral cultivation. Like memory, this kind of * * * points to the essence of education. There is a saying in The Doctrine of the Mean: "To be neutral, the status of Heaven is not good, and everything is nurtured." Education is to let people find the right position, just like the word "golden mean", not greedy for lofty goals, not lazy to humble, just find their own balance. Teachers don't want to have high IQ and excellent ability, but a warm heart to help students "find their own position" and let students truly become themselves. Tao Xingzhi, an educator, said, "Equality on the foothold and freedom on the front." Only in this way can we realize two-way self-knowledge, two-way self-achievement and two-way memory.

Teacher Shen's words ignited the collective desire of many of our students for non-utilitarian education. Under the pressure of examination, how many people can say "spiritual home" when it comes to "shared memory" between teachers and students! This home is the beauty of "apricot blossoms play the flute until dawn", and the truth that "fragrant grass is not a fire, lotus dew is a pearl", which is carefully taught in class and carefully taught outside class. Han Yu once said: "His desire for quick success and instant benefit is not a snobbish temptation." In today's society, impetuous material desires are everywhere. Perhaps only in the classroom can we become real practical people, leave the "animal farm" and avoid the "beautiful new world" to be our own "grocer". Here, teachers cultivate us, and we repay them. Only through the care of teachers can we "live in peace".

We are not Socrates and Plato, Plato and Aristotle, Aristotle and Alexander the Great. We are just ordinary teachers and students, but our * * * memory is unusual and precious. We cultivate our thoughts and virtues through teachers, who like our spring breeze.

A glass of wine with peach, plum and spring breeze will nourish Xiu De for a hundred years. To realize the Chinese dream of strengthening the country and enriching the people, the memory of teachers and students' spiritual home is the starting point of the dream and the key to building it!

Comments:

This time, there are fewer articles about teachers and students, and fewer good articles. Luo Peiyue's article "Yangxin, Xiu De, Peach and Plum Spring Breeze" is a rare good article about teachers and students. There are two points in the article that are very commendable. First, the article is profound. This paper discusses the essence of education from the relationship between teachers and students, and the ultimate goal of education from the disadvantages of today's education, and makes a good explanation by quoting the golden mean: education is to let everyone find their own position and get full development there. Second, it has a wide range of knowledge and is properly quoted. The articles written by Xu Teli and Liang Shuming show that teachers should have passion and grow up with students. Quoting the Doctrine of the Mean and Tao Xingzhi, talking about the essence of education and so on is very philosophical and profound.