Du Mu Qingming rewrites composition guidance

1. Rewrite Tomb-Sweeping Day written by Du Mu into a short essay of 300 to 500 words. On that day in Tomb-Sweeping Day, every family was busy going home to worship their ancestors, and God was particularly sad. "Tears" kept falling, and it was drizzling everywhere, adding a melancholy atmosphere to this sad festival. The pedestrians on the road were all sad and in a hurry, almost losing their souls. At this time, Du Mu. Remembering that everyone else rushed home to worship his ancestors, he was in a foreign land, separated from his relatives, unable to reunite, and could not let go for a while. Walking, Du Mu wants to find a pub to drink some wine to drown his sorrows. At this time, a shepherd boy riding on the back of an ox came not far away and asked, "Little friend, do you know where there is a hotel?" The shepherd boy pointed to the distance and said, "There is a pub in Xinghua Village." The poet Du Mu looked up and saw a beautiful village in the distance, full of apricot flowers. Du Mu was full of poetry when he was drunk in the hotel. He asked Xiao Er to bring a pen and paper to write Tomb-Sweeping Day. During the Qingming Festival, there are many rains and few pedestrians on the road.

2. Du Mu's Qingming is adapted into a story. Du Mu's Qingming is adapted into a story;

It always rains when Tomb-Sweeping Day comes. Under the erosion of rain, the willows became a little green, the wickers were graceful and danced yangko under the spring breeze. Most areas of the earth are green. What a beautiful spring!

Old buffalo, grazing cowboys by the lake, enjoys the beauty of youth. At this time, a scholar staggered over, wearing a white coat and a "too white" hat, stroking a beard that was not too long. It may be Tomb-Sweeping Day! He was lost in thought, perhaps to miss the dead. Walking in a sparse crowd, he stands out. At this moment, the scholar came over, bowed respectfully to the cowherd and said, "Excuse me, little brother, where is a restaurant nearby?" The cowboy put down the piccolo and thought, maybe he is drowning his sorrows in wine and can't wait to find a hotel! So he rode on the back of the cow and pointed to nearby Xinghua Village, a well-known village that specializes in producing good wine. The scholar listened and thanked him. After that, I showed a long-lost smile and went to that mysterious place-"Xinghua Village!"

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This famous poem by Du Mu has also been rewritten into various genres, and it is also very interesting to recite.

Some were rewritten into six-character poems: It rains in Tomb-Sweeping Day, and people on the road want to die. Asked where the restaurant is, the shepherd boy refers to Xinghua Village.

Some of them have been rewritten into five-character poems: it rains in the Qingming Festival, and pedestrians want to break their souls. where is the restaurant？ It refers to Xinghua Village.

There is also a rewritten four-character poem: Qingming rainy, pedestrians are dead. where is the restaurant？ It refers to Xinghua Village.

Some have been rewritten as three-character poems: Qingming rain, people break their souls. Xinghua village he hotel

There is another way to rewrite it into a word:

0 1, it rains in succession during the Qingming Festival, and pedestrians are on the road, trying to break their souls. Excuse me, where is the restaurant? There is a shepherd boy, pointing to Xinghua Village.

02. During the Qingming Festival, there are many rains, and pedestrians are on the road, trying to break their souls. Excuse me, restaurant: where is the shepherd boy? Point to Xinghua village.

More is rewritten as prose:

0 1, it rains in succession during the Qingming Festival. Pedestrians on the road want to die: "Excuse me, where is the restaurant?" "Yes!" The shepherd boy pointed: "Xinghua Village!" .

02. During Tomb-Sweeping Day, there was a lot of rain. On the road, pedestrians want to break their souls. Excuse me, the restaurant: "Where is the shepherd boy?" Point to Xinghua village.

There are even rewritten short scripts:

"It rains in succession during the Qingming Festival, on the road"

Pedestrian: (trying to kill the soul) Excuse me, where is the restaurant?

Shepherd boy: (pointing) Xinghua Village!

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1957 Yangcheng evening news published a play entitled "The Shortest Play in the World", which was also modified by Du Mu's poem Qingming:

"Time: Tomb-Sweeping Day. Location: On the road. Characters and Plot: Pedestrians are dying. Where is the restaurant? The shepherd boy pointed to Xinghua Village. "

Some people read it as a "short play": "During the Qingming Festival (sometimes), it rains one after another (in the background), and pedestrians are dying on the road (at the place). Where is the dialogue in the restaurant?" Shepherd's Point (action), Xinghua Village (prospect). "

Another arrangement is:

It rains in succession during the Qingming Festival.

On the way.

Pedestrian: Excuse me, where is the restaurant?

Shepherd boy: [pointing] Xinghua Village.

Change a poem into a screenplay;

[Tomb-Sweeping Day]

[Rain after rain]

[On the road]

[Pedestrian] (trying to break the soul) "Excuse me, where is the restaurant?"

[Shepherd Boy] (pointing to the distance): "Xinghua Village!"

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One-act short play

Tomb-Sweeping Day (rainy day)

(On the road)

Pedestrian: "Excuse me, where is the restaurant?"

Shepherd boy (pointing): "Xinghua Village!"

Time-Tomb-Sweeping Day

Scene-(After the rain clears)

Location-(on the road)

People-pedestrians, shepherds,

Expression-(I want to break my soul)

Action-(pointing)

Line-"Excuse me, where is the restaurant?" "Xinghua village!"

3. How to write Du Mu's poem Qingming is to translate this article into one. Today is Tomb-Sweeping Day, and many people will recite Du Mu's famous poem Tomb-Sweeping Day. I can't help but think of the homework that our Chinese teacher once asked us to do when we were young. Now that I think about it, I have the same charm, that is, rereading the poem Tomb-Sweeping Day.

I remember that at that time, everyone changed the poems into various and interesting ones. Now the classic works changed at that time are published as follows for everyone's appreciation: Du Mu's Qingming Original: During the Qingming Festival, pedestrians on the rainy road want to break their souls and ask the restaurant where there is a shepherd boy who refers to Xinghua Village. It's a three-character poem: On the rainy road in Tomb-Sweeping Day, people want to break their souls and ask where there is a shepherd boy pointing to Xinghua Village in the restaurant and changing it into a five-character poem (it is said that Ji Xiaolan changed it like this, omitting the subject): In the rainy season, pedestrians want to break their souls, where is there a shepherd boy?

Excuse me, where is the restaurant? There is a shepherd pointing to Xinghua Village. It was changed into a beautiful and meaningful essay: it rained in succession during the Qingming Festival.

On the road, pedestrians want to break their souls. Excuse me, restaurant: where is the shepherd boy? Point to Xinghua village.

Change the scene of a movie script: [Tomb-Sweeping Day] [Continuous drizzle] [On the road] Pedestrian: (I want to kill my soul) Excuse me, where is the restaurant? Shepherd boy: (pointing) Xinghua Village! Now, China has pear-shaped poems. I might as well hit the Enter key and the pear-shaped poem Qingming once again, which will make everyone laugh: Qingming rains, people are on the road one after another, people want to break, and the soul asks: restaurant! Where is the shepherd boy? Yao Zhi: Xinghua Village ~ ~ ~! (Note: ~ ~ ~ means stuttering).

4. Du Mu's "Qingming Festival" was rewritten into an essay "Qingming Eight Hundred"

Dynasty: Tang Dynasty

Author: Du Mu

Original text:

A drizzling rain falls like tears on the Mourning Day; The mourner's heart is going to break on his way.

Ask local people where to buy wine? The shepherd boy just laughed and didn't answer Xingshan Village.

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On this day, it rained in Mao Mao, Tomb-Sweeping Day, and people who traveled on the road were as confused and desolate as if they had lost their souls. Asked the shepherd boy where there was a restaurant, he pointed to Xinghua Village in the distance. Note (1) Qingming: one of the 24 solar terms, around April 5 in the solar calendar. On the day of the old custom, there were activities such as sweeping graves, hiking and inserting willows. In the palace, this day is the swing festival. Put swings in the Palace of Kunning and the harem, and make swings for concubines. (2) more descriptions. ⑶ Want to break the soul: describe deep sadness, as if the soul wants to be with it ▼

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This day is Tomb-Sweeping Day. The poet Xiao Du happened to get caught in the rain during his trip. Qingming Festival, although it is a season of colorful flowers and bright spring, is also a period when the climate is prone to change, and it often catches up with "noisy weather". As early as the Liang Dynasty, it was recorded that during the Cold Food Festival in Tomb-Sweeping Day two days ago, "strong winds and continuous rain" often occurred. If it rains on Qingming Day, there is also a special name called "pouring rain on fire". The poet Du Mu met such a day. Poets use ▼

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This poem was first recorded in the Splendid Flower Valley in the early years of Southern Song Dynasty, and later appeared in Selected Poems of Thousand Scholars in Tang and Song Dynasties, Poems of Thousand Scholars by Xie Fangde in Ming Dynasty and Poems of Imperial Selection in Tang Dynasty by Kangxi in Qing Dynasty. "Jiangnan Tongzhi" contains: Du Mu once went to Xinghua Village to drink when he was the secretariat of Chizhou, which is what the poem refers to. There are attractions such as Duhu Lake and Southeast Lake nearby. ▼

5. Rewrite Qingming written by Du Mu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, into a short essay describing holiday customs. Who are you? I will take the exam tomorrow. It's Chai Sang's fault.

Traditional festivals in Tomb-Sweeping Day, Tomb-Sweeping Day and China are traditional festivals in China. It started in the Zhou Dynasty and has a history of more than 2,500 years. Tomb-Sweeping Day was a very important solar term from the beginning. As soon as Qingming arrives, the temperature rises, which is a good time for spring ploughing and sowing. Therefore, there are agricultural proverbs such as "planting melons and beans before and after Qingming" and "planting trees is not as good as Qingming". Later, with the approaching of Qingming and cold food, cold food is a day when people forbid fire to sweep graves. Gradually, cold food and Qingming become one. Therefore, Tomb-Sweeping Day is also an important festival for ancestor worship and a day for ancestor worship and grave sweeping. According to the old custom, when sweeping graves, people should bring food, wine, fruit, paper money and other items to the cemetery, offer food to the graves of their loved ones, then burn the paper money, cultivate new soil for the graves, break some green branches and insert them in front of the graves, then kowtow and worship, and finally go home after eating and drinking. The poem "Qingming Festival" by Du Mu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, said: "There are many rains during the Qingming Festival, and pedestrians on the road want to die. May I ask where there is a restaurant? The shepherd boy pointed to Xinghua Village. " It's about the special atmosphere in Tomb-Sweeping Day. Tomb-Sweeping Day is also called Youth Day. The fifth day of April in the solar calendar every year is the season of bright spring and lush vegetation, and it is also a good time for people to have a spring outing. Therefore, the ancients had the custom of going for an outing in Qingming, and carried out a series of custom sports activities such as playing polo, swinging, cuju and inserting willows. According to legend, this is because Tomb-Sweeping Day wants to ban cold food and fire. In order to prevent the harm of cold food and cold meal to people, we all take part in some sports activities to exercise. Therefore, this festival not only has the sadness of worshipping ancestors and sweeping graves, but also has the joy of hiking. This is a unique festival.

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6. Rewrite the composition of Qingming Festival. Rewrite Qingming Festival "sasha vujacic! Shashasha! " It is raining again.

Rain, as light as cow hair, as fine as silk thread, and dust as fog, falls from the sky. The rain fell gently on the branches, and the buds on the branches drilled their lovely little heads, opened their beautiful little eyes and looked at everything around them curiously.

The rain fell quietly on the grass, and the grass stubbornly pulled open the soil pressed on it, trying to break free. It stretched, yawned and began to greedily suck the dew of spring.

A pile of grass here, a pile of grass there, covered the earth with a layer of green clothes. There are colorful flowers in the grass, including yellow rape, red roses, purple bougainvillea and white tulips, which are competing to open and compete for beauty.

A few swallows buzzed in the air, as if to say, "Spring is coming! Spring is so beautiful! " But such a beautiful scenery in the rain can't attract the attention of pedestrians coming and going on the road. They come and go in a hurry, and they are all preoccupied

Some pedestrians are carrying brooms and offering sacrifices to sweep graves, thinking of their dead relatives and feeling very sad; Some leave their homes and go out to make a living, with uncertain future and depressed mood; Some people walk on the road of visiting relatives and friends, their future is uncertain, and they are more upset. The gloomy sky overhead made their mood heavier in the light rain.

Among the pedestrians, a scholar-like person is particularly eye-catching. He is Du Mu. He is thin, white-skinned, wearing a hat and carrying a bag.

Mutu's gaunt face and frown formed the word "Sichuan". He shook his head and sighed as he walked. He has been on the road for several days, and this kind of "bad weather" is overcast and rainy everywhere, which makes him depressed.

At this moment, his stomach growled with hunger and his throat seemed to smoke with thirst. How much he wants to find a place to rest, eat a hot meal, fill his stomach, drink some old wine, quench his thirst, warm himself up, and then have a good sleep.

However, this man is a stranger. Where can he find a restaurant? Suddenly, there was a clear and melodious flute in the distance.

That voice is so crisp and sweet. Du Mu's spirit can't help it.

He looked up and looked around, only to see a scalper coming head on, with a shepherd boy sitting on his back. He is about eleven or twelve years old, with a red face and bright big eyes. He is somewhat clever, cute and naughty.

Mutu believes that there are villages where there are shepherds, and restaurants where there are villages. By the way, shall I ask him? Thinking of this, he stepped forward and asked politely, "Little brother, is there a restaurant here?" When the shepherd boy saw him, he nodded, smiled, grimaced at him and pointed in the direction behind him with a flute, meaning: Go ahead and there will be a restaurant. Mutu understood that he quickly thanked the shepherd boy, cheered up and stepped forward.

Sure enough, not long after, a village was looming in the rain and fog. Both sides of the road are covered with apricot flowers, and several wine scorpions are dancing in the wind, as if waving to him ... Du Mu is excited, and inspiration comes with it. A seven-word quatrain blurts out: it rains in the Qingming Festival, and pedestrians on the road want to die. Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The shepherd boy pointed to Xinghua Village.